MaNan FF - I WILL MAKE YOU MINE U/P CHP 20 20/02 page73 - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago



Awesome awesome sweet story. ..

Read all parts in a go...

You penned very beautifully. .

Looking forward to seeing more soon.

Thanks for sharing this awesome story.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
Part was awsm
Jealous manik is so cute
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
MANAN EK DUSRI KI SAMENA AYEGA TOE SABSA PHELA JEALOUS MANIK BLAST HOGA...AUR PATA NAHI KYA HOGA...
MUKBIT TOE SWEET KUCH PLAN KIYA HOGA...BUT JEALOUS MANIK KI JEALOUSY SAB BIGAR DEGA...
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm promo
Alya will pakka get convinced by nandu
Eager to know whether mukbir's plan will work or not
Update next part soon...
Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting promo..waiting for the next chapter please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice promo
Waiting for the next part
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
of'couse alya maan jayengi...
awesome promo...

kya plan kiya hai mukhbi nne..and manik ne kya liya nandu ke liye...

pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello lovelies <3...I am here again and with time with the update...but I am still very disappointed with the response I am getting...silent readers please show some mercy and bless me with your love...

I wrote for my lovely readers who always boasted me and made me feel better by commenting constantly...so this is for YOU babies...loads of love and hugs...

And a special thanks to mylifeplf for helping me in uploading pics...thank you baby...

Keep smiling <3

Chapter 9 (B)

Location - shopping mall

As the girls were still shopping or should say following Aliya like friendship sick puppy and glaring Nandu frequently and getting the same apologetic pout from her the day was coming to end and Muqti realised that they should leave mall now as it will be late for the plan if they didn't left now...

Mu - umm...guys...I think its quite late...we should leave now...Aliya...baby please baki ki shopping bad mai kare... L


Aliya looked at Muqti as she was some alien and Nandu and Navya were blessing her under their breath for saving them but least they knew that something else is cooking in her head...

A - but Muqti..abi to kuch bhi nahi lia...


And the trio looked her in disbelief and the loads of bags they are carrying...Muqti was losing her calmness and sensing that Nandu said...


N - Aliya...you know this mall doesn't have anything best left for you...as you see almost the whole mall is empty...the season is changing as so the type of clothes and other related things so and tomorrow is Thursday and new arrivals will be available on Friday and you engagement is on Sunday so we have sufficient time...what's say? I don't think you would like to buy OLD stuffs...

She stressed the word old and yeas...it worked again and Aliya's face was worth watching...she looked horrified on listening old stuff and just as a student nods after teacher has stopped explaining she nodded her head and all sighed in relief...but a grin was plastered on Muqti's face as she was laughing at the scene which will soon going to happen and the victim herself helped her... ;) bechari Nandu... :p

On the other hand Manik too had done his work...he hadn't plan a dream date or like that stuff...he doesn't have any experience in these stuffs and neither he wanted such things to happen too soon..its just he have a soft corner for her...a little more from being just friends...he just want to know her some more...he have seen loneliness in her eyes but why does she have that? Why she let him kiss her on her knuckles that day when Harshad kissed her suddenly and the time when he kissed her on her cheek? Arghhh...this girl have the power to make you crazy Manik...he thought and then was walking out the mall only to be stopped by a glimpse of something very beautiful as beautiful as her smile and as pure as their budding relation he thought...he just barged inside the shop with his usual arrogant attitude and buy what he wanted to...and just walked out smiling to himself and drove to his house...

The girls too were at Aliya's place by now...and now it was time for the plan to be in action and suddenly Muqti said...

Mu - Ummm...guyss...Let's just check out the stuffs we had bought and try them on...


She tried her luck and NavNi looked at her astonished but Aliya was all ready to do so...it is her passion after all...before NavNi could reply Aliya excitedly bobbed her head and said..

A- Yes guys...let's do it...it will be fun...c'mon lazybones...get up...


With that she dragged all of them to her room only to be surprised by the dcor which was done in their absence and she was like awww...and then her eyes roamed on her bed and what she saw was enough to go all aww and fall in love with her love...


it was planned by Dhruv and Cabir...as when Cabir texted Muqti for asking about Aliya's mood she told him about the shopping and when he told the same about Dhruv and his face lit up as 1000 watt bulb and he suggested to decorate her room and also to put a gift and a sorry note for her and they just rushed to her house where servants greeted them as they knew all of them and they went straight to her room and started their task of Mission Manao Aliya...


and Tada...her room is all decked up with sweet little things which she liked...chocolates, ribbons, flowers, candles, gifts just like a barbie...



Something like this...I didn't got what I wanted...and this is first time I am updating with pic...

The gift placed on the bed...

And all the girls didn't thought twice that this was done by Dhruv only and all were like awww...Dhruv is so cute...and then they saw Aliya's reaction and thanked god and Dhruv of course for doing such cute stuffs to make her happy and what they saw next was Aliya twirling around the room like a kid does...

A - Oh my god...I am just loving it...this is sooo cute and lovely...Dhruv I love you so much..thank you...

She was blabbering sweet nothing for Dhruv without realisation that Dhruv is not there and others were grinning ear to ear and Muqti broke her trance clearing her throat and said...

Mu - Aliya...mujhe to laga tu Dhruv se bahut naraz hai...

Na - (hiding her smile) ha Aliya...ese uske jhanse mai mat aao...vo tumhe manane ke lie ese har bar nahi kar sakta...

Aliya was on verge of crying again but before she could started Nandini guessed that and said sternly to her both best friends..

N - okay guys...enough of her leg pulling...don't make her cry on her special date...

MuqVya nodded and said in unison holding their ears - SORRY

And Aliya smiled and that calls for a group hug...and then again Muqti said breaking the hug...

Mu - okay...bahut drama ho gaya aaj ke lie...now start getting ready...bichara humara lover boy wait kar raha hoga...

Aliya blushed and trio laughed at her condition...

LOCATION - Vedant house

The boys were done with the preparation and now were chilling a bit as they were really tired after planning such date for love birds and now as they knew that girls know about the date the next phase of EVIL Twin's plan started and that was time for some fun...

Cabir dragged Manik with him in a corner after sending Dhruv to freshen up as the time was near and said...

C - bro...need help man...ek problem ho gai hai...and Manik gave him a What the hell look...

M - kya hua? Kaha toofan aya?

he was irritated as he has his plans for tonight at Malhotra Mansion but little did he knew that Evil twins too had something fro him and these two will add up and the results will be all different :p

C - v..vooo...vvooo

Cabir stammered a bit as he too was thinking how to say lie to him...

M - bol na ab..kya hua? Anything serious?

C - haa...(suddenly hit his mind) bahut serious hai...tujhe abhi ke abhi Malhotra Mansion matlab apne ghar jana hoga...

M - kis khushi mai?

C - vo vaha par matlab terrace par Dhruv ka important gift reh gaya...mujhe abhi yaad aya.,.and us gift ke bina ye surprise is incomplete... (he said in hell serious tone but laughing inside)

M - (smirking as he too wanted to go from there but faking anger and worry) oh god Cabir...tujhse kuch thik se nahi hota naa...

And Cabir gave him obvious look and only get dead glare from Manik and said

C - ab ja naa bhai...and tu mat aaiyo..send driver with the parcel...

As he knew there is nothing for Dhruv but for him only...he was smiling inside on imagining the expression on Manik's face after watching the surprise...

The rest will be updated in next update...I tried to write in one go but it was not going good as I am not fine physically and mentally too...and for this I need to calm my inner self as writing can't be done in pressure...it comes out as flow...hope you all understand...and this is the update in this week...I will try to update asap..in this week only...till then enjoy the update and keep guessing what Manik had bought for Nandu and what are his plans and how will Nandu react...

Please do like and comment...it motivates me to write for you people...

Edited by sweetheart2110 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipee may iam firsy to comment
Hey dear nice update
And all planning for suprise
And how nandu wil be reacted
May be a candle light dinner on terrace
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Waiting for next part
Or should I say
Waiting for manan's first date

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