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Posted: 9 years ago
sad update dear, hate maans family and geets sister😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
maans family vanishd in thin air...seems like maan nothing hv to do wid geet...poor geet
feeling bad 4 her..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update..Maan has always shown his concern and care for Geet..it is her turn now...till now she thought herself not a match for him and was refusing to accept his feelings under the mask of ignorance, but the fear of losing him has pushed her to express her own feelings..
and now Maan has decided to go away, reason could be both his own health or because Geet was a silent partner in the lie and false accusation made by Kiara while hiding the truth from him
...if it was ignorance before, this was disrespect to his feelings and friendship...he spent few months in guilt ashamed of himself and would have continued to do so had not the truth been out...instead she could have trusted him to share her worries to find out a way.

would there be separation after this, but if it comes, it will make Geet realize all these things. As rightly asked by her mother what he is for her is what she has to find it out..
but guess it will not be for long time, Maan is more of forgiving nature when it comes to Geet..and he too will realize her state of mind and reason behind her behavior...

Kiara needs a reality check from her mother..



Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter



Runner up is-
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thanks for the appreciation..😳
it feels really good when writer likes the comments ⭐️
also since I have already received this once for the previous part, wanted to suggest/request you to not consider my comment on next few parts for this...😊

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
why maan brother hate geet so much
superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Section C

Part 1

After 6 Months

Maa ne Geet ko apne parents ke ghar bhej dia tha rehne, as Kiara aur Geet mein jhagde roz badd rahe the aur Kiara Geet ko roz blame karti aur baatein sunati.

Geet ki tabiyat bhi kharaab hoti jaa rahi thi, she was like a fading flower.

Maa ne socha ki zara environment chane hoga to Geet ko acha lagega, as Geet ka nana nani ek chotte se beautiful se hill station mein rehte the

Maa ne socha ki jis bande ko fikar hi nahi, grateful nahi ki jaan bachai hai uske peeche bhaagna bekar hai

Geet also felt that she needed a fresh start

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Maan ne relocate kar liya

He sets up his own firm with his college friend

Friend needed some capital and Maan needed to lose himself in work; and any business in beginning is struggle and tats just fine

Upar se, doctor ne kaha tha ki he has to keep his health and regularly exercise left side of his body or the condition; that is, non-feeling of fingertips and feet may grow to other parts

So he living a cleaner life style, no smoking, no drinking, it dulls his brain and makes him remember stuff that is best forgotten

He would go for morning run if possible or if he wakes up late as there is no Ram Singh to wake him up, he goes straight to work

He lives alone in a small place by the beach, no neighbours...it's not the popular part of the city

He still likes the ocean and the beach

It is a 3 room place, single floor, a small terrace in the front; the beach palm trees are his garden

Kaam par jaata hai, works his as off aur jis din subah work out nahi hota uss din shaam mein aur raat mein jab bhi before sleeping and food

He thinks it's best to stay away from all girls. He doesn't look at them. He isn't much interested in talking to them and in general he avoids them. Wo to friend ke sath hai business who knows his past warna shuru mein adhe office ke log doubted ki he is gay and other half thought ki he is a reclusive sociopath

But he was neither...it's just recent events in his life changed him

On weekends, he does some community service

He doesn't want to be idle. He doesn't like free time, a free mind. It wanders and yearns too much

He didn't used to care about anyone but himself but Geet showed him a different side of the world and he came to understand and care

Agar ab Geet se rishta nahi rakhna that doesn't mean he has to and will forget everything else...people change...he changed

Even his friend is confused at times ki itna drastic change kaise. Maan was a selfish bas***d in college days, ab aesa sudhaar kaise

Maan would shrug and say that it gives him peace and friend thinks ki haan shayad he has turned gay

Friend ne kaha ki ok sab ke liye itna kar raha hai hai to mere liye bhi kuch karde, meri bhi ek help karde

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Geet uske nani nana ka ghar Sagarmati naam ke himachal ke chotte se kasbe mein hai

She made it a point never to talk about Maan to nana nani and pain her family more

So she mainly keeps things to herself, helping nani around the house and going to walks in the valley

The family has an apple orchard

Subah suban wahan orchard mein jaati hai nanu ke saath

Nani ka chotta sa restaurant hai, nani ki help karti hai and she acts as the waiter

Sometimes she would play violin

She has learnt to read and write...so she practices by reciting poems

She has also learnt to ride a mo-bike, jo pehle uski ma chalati thi...khataara h..par sahi hai

Bass aise hi apne kaam se matlab rakhti hai

She makes it a point not to argue or speak much with people

Geet ne ghar pe sabko strict instruction de diye hain ki she won't ever get married, she doesnt have any such wish or inclination..islie koi iss baare mein baat bhi nahi karega, naa ladke ki baat hogi.

Geet has decided to raise Kiara's baby as Kiara was throwing a fit that who will marry her now with the baby and all. Geet, hence decided to take care and raise Kiara's baby and will spend her whole life with Kiara's kid

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M-Dekh yaar I am only doing this for you

Friend-Dekh yaar, meri family responsibility nahi hoti to chala jaata. Ek mahine ki baat hai meri family hai, responsibilities hai.

M-I understand

Friend-I know tere liye difficult hai as it's a hill station to teri health...

M-I can take care of myself

Friend-Hmm..aur main gaya to tha...wo log resort ke liye zameen dene ke liye maan hi nahi rahe hain...puraane khayaal ke log hain...you are a great negotiator...tu hi kuch kar sakta hai

M-Don't worry main sab se sign leke, kaam shuru kara dunga

Friend-Aur sunn, chotta kasba hai..koi hotel nahi hai wahan..ek railway station hai aur ek pagal khana...ab baat karke tere liye pagal khaane mein hi ek room mila hai doctor's quarter mein, khaana bhi included hai..I am sorry...it's just...

Maan smirks

M-Doesn't matter

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Maan reaches the small beautiful exotic hill station, Sagarmati

He was living in the mental asylum which was located a little downhill from the main town

Maan rented a car for himself from the nearest city

Ab Maan ki car khadi thi bahar

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Geet ghumao wale hills ke raaste se apni mobike pe savaar kahin jaa rahi thi

Ab raasta hota hai hills ka ghumne wala aur chota, saamne se approaching vehicle kai baar nahi dikhta

Ab Geet ne achanak dekha ki badi si bus saamne aa rahi hai

Side se nikalne ke chakkar mein thokdi ek car jo side mein parked thi

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Maan nikla kahin jaane ke liye to dekha gaadi thuki hui, headlight tutti hui car ki

Par wahan ek stick paper pe 'Sorry ' likha hua

Maan ne paper to phek diya crumple karke

Par usko bhi laga ki kya ladna, chotti jagah hai...I piss off one, I'll piss off everyone...chodo

Lekin logon oi laga ki shayad sahab ka asli mein ilaaj chal raha hai, gaadi chalani bhi nahi aati...thok di

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Maan ko raat mein neend na aaa rahi thi, socha zara walk le lete hain

Ab chota kasba hai, sab jaldi jaldi so jaate the...sab bilkul silent peaceful sa ho jaata hai

Maan andhere mein mandra raha...

Kaano mein sangete ki si awaaz aai...violin ki

Dhun jaani pehchaani si hai'

That tune haunts him in the night when he can't sleep

Isiliye to bahar aaya tha

Ab yahan bhi dhun peecha nahi chodti...lagta hai bohot jaldi sahi mein pagal khane mein admission ho jayega

He followed the tune par aas-pass logon ke ghar the...kahan jaata, to wapas chala gaya

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Posted: 9 years ago
Seperation thats sad poor maaneet maan change a lot huh kaira didnt change a bit but it s also good she moved in new place so maaneet r in same town cant wait for next thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
A major change in both Maan and Geet
both now have decided to live life without the word of enjoyment and marriage
now both are at the same place and Maan hears the sounds of violin playing he follows the sounds but gets to a private house so he just goes back to his accommodation
Why should Geet take c9ontrol of Kiara's child she again is only thinking about herself she has a child and her child should be her first priority but again she only thinks who will marry her
why Geet's mother keeps quiet and allows Kiara to carry on doing the wrong she should tell her that she is the mother of the child and has to take care of her child first than whoever wants to marry her should accept her with her child

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
The 6 months leap brought several changes in maaneet's life.Both are living like lifeless souls.
Geet now lives with her grandparents,working there.She also decided not to marry anyone.Its fine if she doesn't want to marry but why she should raise kaira's child when kaira herself is alive.Its hightime for geet to think about her own life rather than making sacrifices for unworthy people like kaira.
Maan on the other hand relocated,established his own business and completely engrossed in his work.He ignores girls which made his colleagues think he is a gay.poor maan.
Maan living in mental hospital due to non availability of residence totally cracked me up.He totally became a saint according to his friend.
Hope maaneet meets soon and sort out their misunderstandings before its too late.
Waiting for next part
Thanks for pm
Edited by kkrnightriders - 9 years ago

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