MaNan SS :'' LOVE''-A Farfetched Dream; Chapter 3 updated Page 13 (22.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here I'm, Koyel, back with yet another story. My second story. I will try hard not to disappoint you. This will be an emotional and</font>heart touching story. I hope you would like
it.

With no futher chapar chapar, I present
you my story, ''LOVE''- A FARFETCHED
DREAM



Banner of my story.


Those who haven't read my first story yet, for them: MaNan:LOVE BUGS


INDEX

Chapter 1
Chapter 2




PROLOGUE


A girl in her early twenties was busy arranging the wardrobe when his husband came uo the stairs storming into their bedroom all the while shouting her name.


''Nandini..Nandini..kaha ho tum?'' shouted her husband.


Annoyance and irritation was clear in his voice. He literally zoomed inyo their bedroom and walked towards her.


He got hold of her arm and roughly pulled her towards him with her face facing her.


Nandini got scared looking at her husband's anger filled eyes. Although she had experienced her husband's wrath very often,yet his anger always scared the shit out of her.


His grip on her arm was really very hard with nails digging into the babby soft skin leaving behind marks.


''Nandini...subhah maine tumhe konsa file dene bola tha?'' asked her husband in a cold tone.


Nandini with a trembling voice said, ''Woh..woh.. blu..blue..colour wa..wali..file..jo..jo main ne..ta..table par..table par rakha tha''. Fear was confirmed in her trembling voice.


Her husband pulled her more closer his time grabbing fistful of hair from her neck. Nandini hissed in pain and her eyes became moist due to the pain.


''Par tumne blue ke badle green file de diya..aur tumhari wajase meri ek bohat hi important project haat se chala gaya.'' he shouted of the top of his voice and Nandini shivered.

She felt on the floor crying after receiving a hard tight slap from his husband.


Her husband bend down towards her, grabbed her heard and pulled her ear close to his lips.


With a loud tone he said, ''Punishment time baby...you have to skip your dinner tonight.'' Saying this he literally throwed her out of the room which clearly meant she has to sleep on the couch without dinner.


This was nothing new for her. She should have become habituated with this. Whatever the reason it be, she was often brutally bitten and physically assaulted by her animal like husband. Even if it was not her fault, even if her husband picked up the wrong file from the table and walked out of the house without paying heed to Nandini's warning regarding the wrong file.

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So here comes the prologue of my new story. I hope you would like it. Tell me you reviews, whether I should continue this story or not. Silent readers silently maaza mat lutna...comment krna h .
#OkThanksBye.


Those who wants pms for the next updates, send me buddy request</font>and I'll do the needfull...Others please ignore...!!😛

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sadiya51 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My god this new concept is really dark
It's interesting to read but really scary
As the way manik behaved with her was really wrong
At least manik shouldn't have slapped her
Nandini should fight back with this monster
Really keen to read further
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept...
Nandini should fight back...
Who is this monster?
U have not mentioned who is Nandini's husband?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue
amazing story concept
keep it up
cont soon
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice concept

Looking further to look what the story turns

It is really manik or some other person whom nandini got married.

May be my guess her husband is not manik but some other who torture her and manik helps her to comes up to from mess but anyways superb prolouge


Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear..i don't think nandini husband is Manik..anyways luvely prologue..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept.
who is nandani's husband.
it shouldn't be manik.
her husband is such a monster.
she should fight back and not remain silent.
waiting for update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story
I think it's nt manik
I hope so
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow yr..
Nyc concept
I hope her husband is not manik
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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