Jaiwanta Bai-Amar SS: A Grandmother's Love

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NONIE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: pari0706
aawww this is so cute please continue writing this

Thank you for the compliment Pari😊

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: my_angel...
aww...i always wanted to see their bond in serial...now by writing this u made my dream come true...awesome start dr...continue soon

Thank you for the wonderful compliment Sowmya. I am glad that I made your dream come true. I also wanted to see their bond in the serial.😃

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: RuVa
A BIG welcome to you as a writer dear!! 🤗

Great start Nonie... I'm really excited to see how this story progresses!

Love,
RuVa

Thank you for the wonderful compliment Ruva

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Sorry for the long delay. I am happy that my SS got good response

Part 2

It was night time.Maharani Jaiwanta Bai prepared Amar singh's favourite dishes.

JB: Amar Singhji bhojan tayar hai. Aakar bhojan karligiye (Food is ready Amar Singh.Come and have your food.)

Amar Singh hearing this enters the room

AS: Bohut acchi kusbhoo a rahi hai dadi ma . Apne bhojan mei kya banaya hai?( It is smelling very good Grandma. What did you cook?)

JB: Meine tumhari priy vengen banaya hai woh bi mere hatho se Amar Singhji.abhi aap kakar batayie ki bhojan kaisa bana?(I prepared your favourite dishes Amar Singh. Eat and tell me how is it?)

AS: Aap apne hatho se bhojan kilage tabhi mujhe bhojan Karne ka Prasanta hogi.( I will be happy if you feed me with your own hands.)

JB: Theek hai Amar Singhji.(Alright Amar Singh)

Maharani Jaiwanta bai was feeding him.

AS: bhojan bohut acchi hai dadi ma. Mere maa ne bhi itna swadist bhojan nahi banaya hai.(Food is very good Grandma. My mother also did not prepare such tasty food.)

JB: Mujhe jankar acha laga ki apko mere bhojan itna swadist laga.(It is good to know that you found my food very tasty.)

AS: Dadi ma apne bhojan kiya hai?(Did you have your food Grandma?)

JB: Nahi Amar Singhji.(No Amar Singh)

AS: apne bhojan nehi kiya toh fir aap humare saath bhojan karligiye dadi ma.(You did not eat your food then have it with me grandma.)

JB: Phele mei apko kilaungi aur apke bhojan hone ke baad mei apni bhojan karungi.(First I will feed you . After you finish your food, I will eat food.)

AS: Nahi dadi ma.Humari icha hai ki aap humare saath bhojan karengi . Agar aap bhojan nehi karengi toh mei bi bhojan nahi karunga.( No grandma. It is my wish that you will eat food with or else I will not eat the food.)

JB: Yeh kaisa zidd hai Amar Singhji. Aap Bhojan karligiye.( What kind of stubbornness is this Amar Singh!Have your food.)

AS: Bilkul nahi Amar Singhji.(Absolutely not Amar Singh.)

Just then Rana Udai Singh enters

US: aap intna gussa kyu hai Bhawarji?aap itna Chintit kyu hai Jaiwanta baiji?(Why are you very angry?Why are you so worried Jaiwanta Bai?)

AS: Mei dadi ma se rusht hui.Kyunki ki dadi ma mere saath bhojan nehi kar rahi hai Bade Dajiraj.(I am angry with grandma because she is not having food with me Grandpa.)

US: yeh bat hai toh .aap bhojan karligiye Amar Singhji ke saath Jaiwanta Baiji.(So this is the matter.Have your food along with him Jaiwanta Bai)

JB: nehi Ranaji apne nehi kaya hai. Mei bhojan baad me karlungi.(No Ranaji you did not eat.I will have food later.)

Amar Singh took some food into his hand and went to his dadi ma.

AS: Mere hatho se apko kana hi padega dadi ma.(You will have to eat food from my hands grandma.)

Amar Singh feeds his dadi ma who was starting at him with tears in her eyes.

AS: Aap ro kyu rahi ho dadi ma?kya mei apko dukhi kiya hai?Hume Shama kar do.(Why are crying dadima?Diid I hurt you?Please forgive me.)

JB: Nahi Amar Singhji. Aab mujhe kabhi dukhi nehi kar sakte hai.yeh toh Khushi ki aasu hai.mere pothe ne apne hatho se khana kilya. isse badi sukh kya ho sakta hai mere like.(No Amar singh.You can never hurt me.These are happy tears.My grandson fed me food with his own hands.There is no bigger happiness than this for me.)

Udai Singh was watching with happiness on his face.

US:Laghta hai ki mere patni aur mere pothe humko bhool gaye hai.(Looks my wife and grandson forgot me.)

JB: Aisi koi bat nahi hai Ranaji.((Nothing like that Ranaji.)

US: Amar Singhji hum apse bohut rusht hai.(I am very angry with you.)

AS:kyu Bade Dajiraj?(Why grandpa?)

US: apne apni dadi ma ko kiliya aur hume nahi.Aap apne Bade Dajiraj ko prem nahi karte Bhawarji.9(You fed your grandma ad not me.you do not love your grandpa.)

AS: Hum apse bahut prem karte hai bade Dajiraj.Abhi met apko bi killunga.(I love you very much grandpa.I will feed you also.)

Amar Singh feeds Udai Singh also some food.

AS: Abhi aap prasan hai na bade Dajiraj?(Are you happy now grandpa?)

US: Bohut prasan hui Bhawarji. Abhi Mei apko killunga.(I am very happy. Now I will feed you.)

He feeds Amar Singh some food.

Maharani Jaiwanta Bai( in mind)"Hey Kanhaji aap saidev apka kripa drusti mere parivaar par banaya rakna"[Lord Krishna please keep your graceful presence on my family always]

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Superb Nonie!

Nice to see US nice here

Loved the part

Wish that they could have showed something like this on the show too

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Ramya

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Unres
Nonie this was really good. So cute, the bonding of the granparents and bhanwarji. 😳 And one thing that i like about it is that the dialogues are in hindi. It may not be that perfect or in shuddh hindi but in a way you get reminded of the serial and start feeling a connection with it as if it could have happened in the show. I too have used this type of hindi dialogues but long forgot to do so. 😛
Superb! 👏

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Garima

@twilightlover29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awww such a nice bonding scene between grandparents and grandchild

This was super cute

Good one Nonie

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Superb Nonie!

Nice to see US nice here
Loved the part

Wish that they could have showed something like this on the show too

Thank u for the wonderful compliment Mahishee😃

I also feel the same ting

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ramya06
Unres
Nonie this was really good. So cute, the bonding of the granparents and bhanwarji. 😳 And one thing that i like about it is that the dialogues are in hindi. It may not be that perfect or in shuddh hindi but in a way you get reminded of the serial and start feeling a connection with it as if it could have happened in the show. I too have used this type of hindi dialogues but long forgot to do so. 😛
Superb! 👏

Thank u for the awesome compliment Ramya