Mourning : Poem( KaYu)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Never thought that the death of the man which bought smile in my lips can bring tears in my eyes later

Never thought I would cry to have a single glance of him again when I laughed at his beheaded head

Never thought that I would wish to have the man besides me whose death I wished for years

Never thought that I would give up everything to see that feet again which indicated the relationship between us

Never thought that I would ignore the affection in my eyes while I was concentrating on his taunts in the war

Never thought that I would hate the land for which the war was fought because of him

Never thought that I would be desperate to call him my brother until my mother unsealed her lips

Never thought that the warrior whose skills I feared can become everlasting memories of him

Never thought that the life which he spared can become a burden to me forever.

Never thought that I would miss him the most than my own sons and nephews

Never thought that the same journey of his life will give a new perspective about him

Never thought that I will wait to get united with him in the other world as his younger brother

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That is very emotional...
Beautiful...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful poem!!! Yudi's grief captured very well! 😳 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

That is very emotional...

Beautiful...😊


Thank you so muchmuch 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KURT15

Beautiful poem!!! Yudi's grief captured very well! 😳 😭



Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This poem is sheer beauty!!! Crisp and substantive writing.😊 You expressed the emotions correctly through words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

This poem is sheer beauty!!! Crisp and substantive writing.😊 You expressed the emotions correctly through words.


Thank you so much for ur kind words😊 I am really glad that u liked this poem😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful 😊. I could feel guilt,anguish and helpless of a brother and his yearning for the one he lost..😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS barbie, loved the way U captured Yudi's pain.👏
Keep up the good work.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

beautiful 😊. I could feel guilt,anguish and helpless of a brother and his yearning for the one he lost..😭


Thank you so so much😊 i want to confess that i was moved to tears when i read your lullaby os on kunti in mb forum😭 I am really glad that u liked my poem😛

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