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Posted: 17 years ago
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just a little story about how i think the situation with Nakul and his mothers should end....

Nakul and Laksh are sitting on the terrace talking about what Tripti has done

Laksh I can't believe mom could do this to us, to the our family

Bhaiya how can you still call her maa after everything she did

*sigh* all my life Laksh I just wanted to have my mother s love and even if it was fake she gave it to me she never once walked out on us like Ganga mom did

Laksh come here for a second Baa is calling you Archita yells

Go Laksh I want to be alone for some time

Are you sure bhaiya?

Yes Laksh go

Nakul sits on the swing and cries

Damini comes there and says Nakul I know I should not have listened to you two talking but I think there is something you need to understand beta Ganga didn't leave you because she wanted to but because she had no other choice and you may or may not remember but she came back for you and Laksh but Sahil and Tripti never let you go with her. Your Ganga mom loved you more than anything beta but she was unable to be with you no matter how much she wanted and if she had tried to take you through the courts they never would have given you to her beta you know that no judge will take two kids out of a family and give them to a single mother.

All my life I just wanted my mother to love me, to hold me when I cried, help me sleep at night but all I got was rejection, Tripti mom whom I treated as my mother was just using me to get Papa 's money Nakul breaks down and cries even harder

Nakul beta you do have a mom and I promise I will take care you like I should have all those years ago I am sorry beta forgive your maa please Damini puts her arms around Nakul and hugs him the song plays in the backround….

(Khushiyon ka din aaya hai
Jo maanga voh paaya hai) - 2
Aaj mujhe meri maa ne beta kehke bulaaya hai
Khushiyon ka din aaya hai
Jo maanga voh paaya hai
Aaj mujhe meri maa ne beta kehke bulaaya hai
Maa meri maa, maa meri maa - 2
(Poochh na mujhko kitna rulaati thi
Har ghadi har pal teri yaad aati thi) - 2
Seene se aake tune lagaaya
Saare dukhon ko pal mein mitaaya
Tu na jaane bin tere maine kitna dard uthaaya hai
Khushiyon ka din aaya hai
Jo maanga voh paaya hai
Aaj mujhe meri maa ne beta kehke bulaaya hai
Maa meri maa, maa meri maa - 2
Maa mujhe tere aanchal mein palna hai
Thaamke ungli tere saath chalna hai) - 2
Pooja ka meri vardaan hai tu
Mere liye to bhagwaan hai tu
Har mandir har moorat mein bas tera roop samaaya hai
Khushiyon ka din aaya hai
Jo maanga voh paaya hai
O, khushiyon ka din aaya hai
Jo maanga voh paaya hai
Aaj mujhe meri maa ne beta kehke bulaaya hai
Maa meri maa, maa meri maa

Laksh comes up on to the terrace see Damini and Nakul and goes back down smiling.

A little while later Nakul goes into Laksh's bedroom

Laksh when is Ganga mom coming back, have you heard from her yet?

But bhaiya I thought you didn't want to talk to her again

Nakul smiles you know Laksh all my life all I wanted was my mother's love and today I have got love from two mother's I have never been happier

Two mother's bhaiya I don't understand

From Damini mom who gave birth to me and from Ganga mom who raised me as her son

I'll call mom and ask her when she will be back Laksh smiles

The End


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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww that wus so sweet .. yu have the best endings<33
Edited by babypink<3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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itz nice
keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for all the feedback guys it really helps in writing the story

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