Twinj + Mahi OS: Di and Jiju Are Made For Each Other

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow it was long and awesome. really loved reading it. very well done.

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Yes Twinkle and Kunj are perfect for each other!

Can it play like this on the show? CVs come check indiaforums 😆

beautifully written...I love how Kunj supported Twinkle every step of the way

and Mahi's redemption was nice

Ofc Twinj romance/nhok joke is something i love

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

aww...such a cute piece of work...loved it.. Kunj was so supportive...n mahi's realisation was nicely portrayed... of course TwiNj nok jhok n romance was lovely... CVs plz copy this story..hehe...it would b best if something like this really happens in d show 😳

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update, beautifully written 👏 . Loved it.

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved such a cute and awesome update.
Waiting for more from you.

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dmgomg

@dmgomg

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the concept of it. Hope Mahi is positive in the show, the way you portrayed her here!

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Piyali

@PiyaKaira

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it!!!

I hope something like this happens in the show.

I love the way you portrayed Mahi here!

Beautiful OS!

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

wow dear

kash it happen in the serial l

loved it

it is wonderful update dear

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

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Omg this was absolutely amazing! Such a wonderful read, the intense beginning, Mahims redemption, Kunj saving Twinkle and the cute bedroom scene, I loved it all! I actually read it twice, that's how well written it was! Perfect blend of all the things I love to read about and I hope something like this happens in the show! The way you incorporated nhok jhok and romance is something the CVs have to see LOL. This was wonderful, thank you!

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