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First of all I wanna thank all my readers for showering so much love on this story that I got 100+ likes in last update. Love u all guys.keep pouring ur love on me and my stories.thanks a lot again.
PART 4

Ishita- sorry appa this time u have gone too far. I can forgive u as a daughter but can't forgive u as a woman.sorry appa but I can't forgive u .

Appa- I know ishu I did wrong with u by marrying u to ashok.and insisting u to do things to make this marriage a success. But I never knew that what he is demanding from u.I never ever thought that he is trying to use u as a commodity for his selfish motive.if I had known I never allowed him to torture u.

Ishita- aur aapko pata chalta bhi kaise.I wasn't ur daughter but always a burden on u,whom u just wanna shrug off.never ever in my life u loved me,u try to know what I am going through.how hurt I am.u never thought that may be I am right and others r wrong.u always believed that I am wrong and others r right.u never cared for me appa.u never.I always tried to make u happy,always done more then my caliber but u never loved me appa.she said crying.

Appa was ashamed of himself.he look down not being able to face her accusations any more.Raman goes to ishita and said- I think we should go now.let's go.

Ishita- not so soon.first I have to clear something with someone.saying so she goes to ashok.

Ashok look at her and said- I am so

She didn't let him complete and slapped him hard.

Ishita- kyun kiya aisa ashok.main biwi thi tumhari koi roti ka tukda nahi joh tum sabke saath battana chahte the mujhe. Arey log toh apne kutte ke saath bhi aisa nahi karte Jo tumne mere saath kiya.kyun kiya aisa, main taiyyar thi tumhari kami ke saath zindagi beetane ke liye.par tumne darindigi ki har hadh par kar di(why u did so ashok.I was ur wife not a piece of food that u wanna share me.people behave like this to their pets also like u behave like me.I was ready to live with u even knowing ur disability but u crossed every damn limit),she said clutching his collar.she slapped him again.

Ashok- I am sorry ishita.please forgive me.give me one more chance.

Ishita- no ashok.I can't forgive u.

Ashok- then just get lost.I don't need ur mercy.soon I will come back and ruin u two.Raman I will see u.I am not going to forgive u people. Soon I will be back to take revenge for what u did to me.

Before she can tell anything ,Raman came to her,hold her hand and said- we will wait for it ashok.

Ishita look at him,a tear fell off her eyes seeing his support for her.

Raman- let's go from here ishita.ur work has done.ab hamari yahan koi zarurat nahi.saying so he hold her hand and took her outside the police station.

Cop- oye chalo ji sasur ,damad .ab ek saath jail mein party karna(now u guys can party together in jail)put them in jail.and I will look after who will come to their rescue.saalo ladkiyon ki izzat karna nahi jaante.koi nahi hum sikha denge.

Ishra came outside the police station.ishita was sobbing silently.Raman wounded his arms around her waist,she put her head on his chest.Raman touch her forehead and said- u have fever ishita.let's go back to hospital.

Ishita- I don't wanna go to hospital. I am fine.just need some fresh air.

Raman take her to a bench nearby and make her sit there.she was still sobbing.

Raman- OK at least stop crying.ur injuries r fresh.don't stress urself.he said in concern.

Ishita look at him and hugged him tightly. He was shocked at her action but soon he realised she is crying in his embrace.

Raman- hey what happened. Why u r crying.u were so strong inside then why these tears.

Ishita- mera koi nahi raha. Main ekdum akeli ho gayi.(I have noone.I am all alone)

Raman felt bad for her.he consoled her and said- they were not ur loved ones ishita.they were not ur well wishers. They just want to fulfill their selfish motives from u.I think now u should start ur journey afresh.

Ishita broke the hug and asked-how.

Raman- I think by introducing ourselves to each other.hi I am Raman,Raman bhalla.living in Canada for last five years,came back a week ago.

Ishita wiped her tears and said- hi raman,I am Mrs ishita khanna.

Raman- no no,I don't think u r that anymore.u don't have to use ur appa's and ur husband's surname anymore.live for urself, for the ishita in u.

Ishita- I think u r right Raman.I am ishita,Dr ishita.

Raman- Dr ishita?

Ishita- yes I am a cardiologist.

Raman was shocked beyond words.

Raman- u r cardiologist? I hope u know what cardiologist means.he said in disbelief.

Ishita- I know u don't believe me.actually seeing my pathetic condition nobody will believe this.but I wasn't like this two months ago.I was also a happy,mast and bindaas girl.but his sudden death made my world upside down.

Raman- whose death ?

Ishita- my periappa's death.

Raman- periappa?

Ishita- I mean my mother's sister's husband.

Raman- oh u mean ur mausa ji.

Ishita- yes my mausa ji.u know when my amma died in accident, my periamma means mausi was also with him.she also died .periappa had noone coz my cousin also died with them.he was shattered ,he loves his family alot.so he never marry again but he make me his family.after appa got married again.he took me with himself.he use to love me alot,like his own daughter. I got the love from him which I expected from appa.he make me study hard becoz he wants to see me as a doctor.I studied hard and became a cardiologist. He was too happy that day.I invited everyone on my convocation but noone came other then him.appa always loved my brother from my step mom. I too loved them alot but they never loved me.I was happy in my world with periappa but may be god don't like my happiness. My periappa died in an accident and from that day amma and my brother start showing their colour because I was back in appa's house.in a jiffy ashok alliance came and I was married to him and rest u know.

Raman- but why they did so.what they want from u.

Ishita- periappa's property.

Raman- I didn't get it.

Ishita- actually periappa had noone other then me so he gave his whole property, which is of about 200 crores to me,they want me to sign the property transfer deed.infact the house in which ashok was living with me ,is my house not his.its my periappa's house which he had gifted me on my convocation day.

Raman- oh so that house is urs in u live with ashok.he said sadly thinking now she don't need him anymore.

Ishita- yes.

Raman- (st)u r a doctor and have a huge property. Ur all problems r solved.now u don't need me anymore naa.

Ishita look at him and thought- now I have to go back to that house.now I have to part away from u.a tear fell from her eyes thinking that now Raman will be far away from her.Raman saw her tears and wiped it.he look at her,she look at him.they share an intense eyelock. He touched her cheek and then hugged her tight.she too reciprocate the hug.they were not understanding why they r feeling so much pain but they were feeling acute pain in parting away.they cried in each other's arms.

Do pal ruka,khwabon ka caravan
Aur phir chal diye tum kahan hum kahan
Do pal ki thi yeh dilon ki dastaan
Aur phir chal diye tum kahan hum kahan

They were hugging each other when at last ishita said- I think I should go back.

Raman look at her and nodded .he kissed her forehead lovingly. She close her eyes.

Raman called the cab and make her sit comfortably. Raman sit beside her .soon the cab driver start driving towards her house.Raman was looking at her continuously. She couldn't take his gaze so she look outside.

Ishita-(st)Raman u came into my life as an angel.u changed my life in just few hours .u solved all problems of my life but I know I can't wish more from u.how much hard is to part away from u ,I have to go away from u.I know I don't deserve u.being a divorcee I have no right to think about u Raman but being a girl I can't stop myself from falling for u.kyun main khud ko rok nahi paa rahi aapke kareeb aane se.kahin mujhe aapse pyaar toh nahi ho raha(why I can't resist my feelings for u.am I falling for u)

Dil kho gaya ,ho gaya ,kisi ka
Ab raasta mil gaya khushi ka
Rishta naya rabba
Beech ho raha hai
Kheenche mujhe koi dor,Teri ore
Teri ore,Teri ore ,Teri ore haye rabba.

Ishita wiped her tears and thought- but I have to go away from him.because he is like my god.and anyone can ask for help from god can't think of staying with him for a lifetime.

On the other hand,Raman was restless thinking about ishita leaving him forever.

Raman- (st)I know I should be happy thinking that ur all problems r sorted now and u r going to live happily and safe henceforth. But I am feeling terrible thinking I will not be a part of ur life.kyun mujhe itna bura lag raha hai,kyun main khud ko tumse alag nahi kar paa raha.kahin mujhe tumse pyaar toh nahi ho raha(why I am not able to part away from u,am I falling for u)

Kabhi naa sukoon aaya
Kabhi naa qaraar aaya
Jab se hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya

They were lost in their thoughts when the driver said- sir we have reached.

Raman- oh thanks.saying so he paid the money.ishita came outside the car and look at him.

Ishita- thanks alot Raman.I know saying thanks is not enough for what u have done for me,

Raman interrupted and said- even this is not required.just take care of urself ishita.he said tucking her hair behind her ear.

Her eyes filled with unshed tears.she wanna crush herself in his arms but she knows well ,if she do that then she can't part her away from him.

Ishita- u too take care Raman.have a wonderful life.saying so she started going away crossing the road.Raman eyes were filled and ishita's too.but she wasn't turning to look at him.ishita knows well if she turned ,she can't go back to her previous life.

Raman- alteast turn once ishita.he said to himself with tears in his eyes.

Like she hear his plead ,she turned and look at him.both were standing on opposite sides on the road.their eyes were moist.

Raman look at her like saying- don't go.

Ishita looked like saying ,I can't stay further.

Raman -we will never meet again.
(Its their soul talk)
Ishita- its good for u that we part away.

Raman- I don't wanna leave u alone ishita.

Ishita cried and said aloud- then take me along Raman.

Raman smiled listening to her,he ran to engulf her in his arms,she was waiting for him to come crossing the road but in between them a car came and pulled ishita inside the car.

Ishita screamed- Raman help.but before he came the car went .

Raman ran behind the car shouting,ishita,ishita.

That's all for now .will wait for ur responses.
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
So ishu is Dr...
Liked soul talks.
Their hug...

Omg.. I love it so much
Update soon
Edited by ishrasoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
100+ Likes !!!!!!

Congo!!!!!!

You see ...you got this much likes from this story...& @starting you were saying that ... people will not like this much...

Superb Update...

Ashok got two slaps by Ishita...waah...but he deserved a slap by Appa too...

Now both are in jail...Ashok got small punishment...He should be beaten by Mahila Morcha!!!! & Buri Najar wale tera mooh kala...😆


Ashok- then just get lost.I don't need ur mercy.soon I will come back and ruin u two.Raman I will see u.I am not going to forgive u people. Soon I will be back to take revenge for what u did to me.

Kutte ki punch thedhi ki thedhi...he deserves more punishment...

Before she can tell anything ,Raman came to her,hold her hand and said- we will wait for it ashok.

Means...Raman will not leave Ishita alone ...

Ishita- mera koi nahi raha. Main ekdum akeli ho gayi.(I have noone.I am all alone)

Why Alone...Darne ki kya baat jab Raman hai saath...

Raman- I think by introducing ourselves to each other.hi I am Raman,Raman bhalla.living in Canada for last five years,came back a week ago.

Wow...Canada...again a new city of world ...but which profession ...did you mention it earlier ..!...sorry I don't remember it...

Ishita wiped her tears and said- hi raman,I am Mrs ishita khanna.

Haaye...Mrs. Khanna...ab aur nahi...

Ishita- I think u r right Raman.I am ishita,Dr ishita.

Raman- Dr ishita?

Ishita- yes I am a cardiologist.

Raman was shocked beyond words.

Raman- u r cardiologist? I hope u know what cardiologist means.he said in disbelief.


Oh My God...Doctor ...& Moreover ...a Heart Surgeon...Hume to laga sirf Raman ke dil ka ilaj karegi...par yeh to sab ki Doctor nikli...

I am also shocked ...😲

OMG...200 crore
& that Bungalow was also hers...

Now what will Raman do !!!!!!! She doesn't need any financial help from him...😭

Ishita- u too take care Raman.have a wonderful life.saying so she started going away crossing the road.Raman eyes were filled and ishita's too.but she wasn't turning to look at him.ishita knows well if she turned ,she can't go back to her previous life.

At least invite him for a chai yaar... 😉

Raman- alteast turn once ishita.he said to himself with tears in his eyes.

Palat...palat...palat...❤️

Aakhir me palti hi...

Wow...Heart to Heart Convo...was superb...

Then she said loudly ...take me along ...

But before Raman...someone else took her away from Raman...my heart broken ...🥺

Update Soon...
Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unresss...

excellent update
you have potrayed every emotion brilliantly

poor ishra😭
their POVs are heart touching

finally
another twist
you are becoming twists queen
i must say

i think that is her brother now

thanks for pm
please update soon
Edited by detha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohooo I'm late
ressyyy
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Meri Pyaari Rakshu Diii
Seriously aapne mujhe rulaya
It was too emotional Diii
And due to these exams of mine I don't get anything to write
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Waise Ishu yaar U r a doctor a cardiologist
Yaar seriously why didn't you stand for urself earlier?
I think u didn't do so because of your Appa
U did all this for your Appa's love n all
But still yaar I can't agree to this.
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N Raman n Ishita
I wish u two be together always.
Acha hua jaldi samaj mein aagayi donom ko that they love each other
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Ashok
Kitni besharam Insaan ho yaar tum?
Cheee disgusting
Teri itni himmat itne sab kuch ek aurat ke saath karne ke baad u didn't even regret
kameena😡
Agar tu meri haath lag gayi na tumhe toh main jaan se maar doongi
Idiot Woh saare 🤬 words hai na woh sirf tereliye hai
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Aur appa aap
Kitni besharam insaan ho aap bhi?
Aapne aaj tak apni beti ke baare mein nahi socha n when u r in trouble u want her to forgive u
Disgusting😡
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Aur Rakshu Diii
periyappa n Ishu's life it was sooo nice
N ab yeh kya naya problem hai?
I think it may be a plan of Ishu's step mom n her son.
Pls diii
Update soon
Don't separate Ishra
Edited by Roohachu - 10 years ago
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unres...

ummm...first of alll... i read it all together...not saath saath...😆...though i visited twice to seee if its done or not...😳

Now coming to update...
It was emotional ride...how can u do this...make me cry...when i thought...eerything is good they gonna hug...car took ishu...now who is behinf this...ashok is in jail then...

Coming to ashok...yuck...cheee...what a disgusting man yar...cheee...🤢🤢...he still have guts to say alll that...

Ishu periappa thing was so good...so she is doctor and owner of big property...

THeir soul talks...❤️...

BUt who is behind kidnap??????? i want hint...plzz plzzz...thodi siii...

I really loved it...they are in love...

next part soon...soon...soon...plzzz...
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Congrats !!!! for 100 likes on ur previous update...


Awesome update...
Written very well...👏👏👏

Ishita slapped Ashok ...👏 Wow...but he deserves more than this...
But this man wil never change... Itna sab hone k baad bhi iski akad nahi gai...disgusting man...😡

IshRa scene was heart touching...loved the way how Raman consoled and support her ...😳
OMG !! she is a cardiologist...aur to aur 200 crore ki owner bhi...and that house is also hers...😲

Loved IshRa soul talk...they fall in love with each other...😳
But is se pehle ki dono kuch keh pate ...somebody kidnapped her...😲

Now who is this new villain...??😡... eager to know...

continue soon...



Edited by riYa09guPta - 10 years ago
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Updated next part in page 77.enjoy and don't forget to leave ur valuable comments, will wait for it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
what an update
brilliantly written
ishi a cardiologist n is soo rich
such a shock
but itz nice
loved how fearlessly she talks to ashok n his appa
loved her attitude
raman n ishita soul talk were soo gud
but but
without confession ishita kidnapped
who's d new entry
thnx fr pm
continue soon
Edited by anisha960 - 10 years ago
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Confession ka time bhi nahi diya.
Aur ab kon agaya story mein.
Nice update.
Cont soon.

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