New SwaSan TS-Broken relationship mended Part 2 Page 2

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Okay I read a topic which stated that maybe Sharmishta would die.I really don't want her to die but if something like this happens I would like it this way.It would be 2 parts or 3 maximum.
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Part 1

Swara sat lifeless near Sharmistha's body in the hospital room trying to rewind the last 4 hours or so.Ragini had found out that Laksh had cheated her with the papers and went on the Baadi's terrace to commit suicide,Sharmishtha had seen her and got worried and had followed her and as usual Urvashiji stuck her nose where it did not belong and followed them.Ragini tried to jump but Sharmistha saved her but Urvashi masi thought that Sharmistha was pushing Ragini and hence she pushed Sharmistha before Ragini could say anything.Sharmistha had received severe internal injuries and doctor declared her critical the moment she arrived.The Maheshwaris had arrived along with Swara.She saw her father lifeless.After the surgery the doctor had declared Sharmistha brain dead and police had questioned Ragini as to what had happened and when she narrated the entire incident Swara's blood boiled for the first time on Ragini.Sanskaar had asked the inspector to arrest Urvashi masi and nobody had objected Ragini tried saying it was not her fault but Swara's eyes showed her the place at that moment.Swara and Shekhar had decided to let Sharmistha go in peace instead of ventilator.And here she sat near Sharmishtha and as she sat she saw her childhood flash before her eyes.Suddenly Ragini came and sat beside her and said-

Ragini-Swara hum jaante hai aapko kaisa feel ho raha hai.Hum...

(Before Ragini could complete her sentence Swara dragged her out of the room in the lobby where all the family members were sitting.Sanskaar tried to stop her but Annapoorna signaled him not to as she could feel the pain Swara was going through.)

Swara- So Mrs Ragini Laksh Maheshwari aap jaanti hai ki mai kaisa feel kar rahu really.Ragini tum kabse meri ya kisi aur ki takleef samjahne lagi ho.

Ragini-Aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai Swara,woh hamari bhi ma thi.

Swara-Really Ragini koi aapni maa ko kidnap nai karta yeh jaante hua ki uski tabyet thik nai hai.Ragini tum itni selfish ho ki tum har insaan ko apne matlab ke liye use karke fekh sakti ho.Woh meri maa thi tumhare liye maa jaisi thi.There is a huge difference.Agar tumhare saath kuch galat hua tha to tum bade papa ke paas jaati is tare se suicide karne ki kya zaroorat thi.

Aaj agar meri ma zinda nai hai to woh sirf aur sirf tumhari aur tumhari masi ki wajah se Ragini.Mai tumhe is baat ke liye zindagi bhar maaf nai karoogi.You killed her Ragini.You know what Ragini dida sahi kehti thi tumhari dadi ki tarah tum bhi sirf zeher ugal sakti ho aur kuch nahi.Kash maine unki woh baat maan li hoti toh mujse itni badi galti nai hui hoti.Meri maa ko Gaddodia family mei bhejna meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti thi Ragini.Tumne aur tumhari dadi ne unhe dukh,takleef,disrespect ke alwa kuch nai diya hai.Just get lost from here Ragini aur mujhe aapni shakaal mat dikhana.

Ragini-Swara hamari baat suniye hum jaante hai hmse galti hui hai par hamara kabhi ye irada nahi tha ki maa hamari wajah se chali jaye.Hame maaf kar dijye please.

Swara-Ragini woh din gaye jab mai tumhe maaf kar sakti thi.Par aab mai tumse maafi maang rahi hu.I am sorry Mrs Ragini Maheshwari ki mai tumhari zindagi mai aai,I am sorry ki maine tumhari help mangi maa aur baba ko ek karne mai kyuki ye meri sabse badi galti th...(Suddenly while speaking Swara faints.Sujata,Sanskaar and Annapoorna immediately rush towards her and Sanskaar takes Swara in his arms and walks towards the car with the other two ladies behind her).

Durgaprasad and Ramprasad. were trying to bring Shekhar out of the shock.

DP-Shekharji is waqt hamari beti ko hamari zaroorat hai chaliye aantim sanskaar ki bhi vidhi khatam karni hai.Aapko himmat se kaam lena hoga.

Shekhar-Mere to duniya khatam hogayi Durgaprasadji.Mere pass jine ke liye aab kuch bacha hi nahi jaise.

DP-Aisa mat kahiye Swara hai Shekharji.Use appki zaroorat hai is waqt.

(At the home Sanskaar brings Swara into their room while Parineeta called the doctor.Annapoorna and Sujata were right besides Swara and Sanskaar all the time.Sanskaar was very worried for Swara.He knew how close she was to her mother and Ragini's involvement in this matter did not help it either.)

AP-Sanskaar chinta mat karo Swara thik ho jayegi.Kuch nahi hoga use.

Sujata-Hum sab hei uske saath chora kuch nai hoga.

Sanskaar-Maa,Mom ye doctor kaha reh gaye hai yaar.

(The doctor arrives and checks Swara and asks Sanskaar some questions about her which are followed by Sanskaar.The Doctor checks properly and smiles)

Sanskaar-Doctor meri biwi ko shock laga haiaur aap has rahe hai.

Doctor-Mr Maheshwari Swaraji ko koi shock nai laga hai.Congratulations She is pregnant.You are going to be a father.

Sanskaar,AP an Sujata are speechless as they know Sharmishtha would had been the most happy with this news.Ragini who was outside the corridor heard the doctor and she was really happy.Yes she was happy for her sister.Yes she was also guilty of her crimes against her sister.She was shocked the way Swara had told her frustrations.She never realized she had this much in her.

Tu yaha keh kar rahi hai chori.(She heard Sujata's voice behind her).

Ragini-Swara hamari behen hai chachiji.Hume uski chinta ho rahi thi isiliye aayi.Congratulations aap dadi banne wali hei.

Sujata-Tuhe joh Shona ne kaha tha whoh samajh nai aaya tha Ragini.Tu door reh usse kitne zakham degi use aur.Saare zakham toh ek baar mei he de chuki hai use.Sahi kaha tha usne thari dadi aur tu aur upar se thari mausi zindagi narak hojay aache khase insaan ki.Tu mari bahu ki paas bhi na aave gi samajh le.Ye mat samajh ke Sharmisthaji nahi hai toh woh akeli hai mai aur jiji dono uski Maa hai Ragini.

AP-Sujata sahi keh rahi hai Ragini.Mai aur Sujata hai Swara ke saath.Tum thodi der jaake aaram karo.Is sab ka hal hum baad mei nikale ge.

Ragini-Thik hai maa.
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precap-The SwaSan convo and Ragini and Swara coming face o face again.


Here is part 1.Enjoy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice TS
But feeling bad for shomi. Shomi was a good wife, mother and a daughter.
I hate the character of urvasi Mausi. She killed shomi.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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do cntinue and pm me fr sure.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story
Very emotional part. Sad to see Sharmista is died. I hope Urvashi will get punished for this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start. the part looks so promising and dialogues were perfect. i just want to see swara yelling at ragini atleast once in the show.
please do update fast and send me pm please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls update soon and PM me

Awesome Story
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Nice strt.
Tho i dnt wnt shomi 2 die.she z very gd,beautiful & positive charectr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very good. I feel bad for Sharmishta. She is such a good hearted woman.
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is
Part 2
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Swara was still unconscious.Doctor had advised her complete rest.Annapoorna and Sujata were in temple praying for Swara's well being while Sanskaar sat with Swara.He did not not whether he should feel happy about his child coming into this world or be sad because Sharmishta ma was no more.She would have been the happiest with this news.Swara stirred slowly nd saw her bedroom and ofcourse her so much worried husband.

Swara-Sanskaar kya hua tha mujhe.How did I faint ??baba theek to haina.

Sanskaar-Shona relax itni tension mat lo tum.You fainted while in the hospital and baba is fine Dad and Bade papa are with him.Doctor has advised you complete rest.

Swara-Rest kya hua hai mujhe Sanskaar ki doctor ne mujhe complete rest karne ko kaha hai ??

Sanskaar-Shona you are pregnant.We are going to be parents soon.

Swara-(had tears in her eyes but her hand directly went to her stomach)-She would have been so happy Sanskaar.Aaj mai aanat ho gayi Sanskaar,I lost everything perhaps this my punishment of trying to force my mother living with that family.

Sanskaar-Shh Shona stop crying.It's not good for your health.Mai hu na tumhare saath.Relax.

Sujata-Kis ne kaha Shona ki tu aanat o gayi.Mai na hu thare liye hu.Mujhe to laga tha ki tu mujhe aur jiji ko thari ma hi manti hai.

Annapoorna-Ha Swara hum aur Sujata dono hai tumhare saath.Tumhare paas ek nahi do-do ma hai aur Sharmishtha ji aaj hamare beech nahi toh kya hua unka aashirwaad hamesha tumhare saath rahega.

Ek kaam karo Swara thodi der neeche chalo.Sab se milogi thoda fresh ho jaogi.Kamre mei thoda suffocation ho raha hoga.

Sanskaar-Ha Shona chalo par sambhal kar ok.

Sanskaar,AP and Sujata takes Swara downstairs where DP,RP,Adarsh,Pari all are present.

DP-Swara beta aao betho kasi hai aab tumhari tabyet.

Swara-Mai theek hu bade papa.Baba kaise hai ?

DP-Shekhar ji bilkul theek hai Swara.Hum tumhe bata nahi sakte hum kitne khush hai aaj.Tumne humare poore parivar ko sabse badi khushi di hai.

RP-Sansaakar aab tu Swara ka theek se khyal rakhna aur Swara beta agar ye chorra thara khyal na rakhe to tu sidha mujhe bata dena mai ise dekh looga.

Adarsh-Ha Swara tum bilkul chinta mat karna mai aur Pari tumhari team mai.Milkar Sanskar ki aisi class lege ke dekhna kabhi pareshan nahi karega.😆.

AP-Bolo Swara kya abhi bhi tumhe lagta hai ki tum aanat ho gayi ho.Ye poora parivar sirf tumhara hai.Tumhare paas 2 ma ke saath saath 2 pita,bhai ,bhabhi aur ek pyaari behen jaisi nanad bhi hai.Khabar daar tumne khud ko akela ya aanat samja hai.

DP-Swara beta aisa kabhi mat sochna ki tum akeli ho.Tum toh meri beti ho.Tumhe pata hai barso se hme ek beti ki kaamna thi jo bilkul tumhare jasi ho.Samajhdar,righteous,Jo bado ka maan kare.Aab hume bhagwan ne Uttra ke saath saath tumhe bhi diya aur nasseb dekho humne tumhara kanyadaan bhi kiya tha.

Pari-Swara hum sab ke hote hua tumne khud ko akela kaise maan liya.Tumhi ne kaha htha na ki mai umhari badi behen jaisi hu.

Swara-Aap ne sahi kaha badi ma.Mai akele nahi hu aap sab mera parivar hai.Aur shyad mujhse naseeb daar aur koi nahi hoga jise itna accha parivar mila hai.

Sujata-Shona naseeb daar toh hum bhi hai ki hume tumhari jaisi beti mile hai kyu jiji?

AP-Bilkul sahi kaha tumne Sujata.Sanskaar tum Swara ko kamre ai le jao.Swara tum aaram karo hum tumhe khana upar hi dene aayege.Neeche aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

(After Swara and Sanskaar exit AP asks Adarsh)

AP-Adarsh Laksh kaha hai ?

Adarsh-Ma woh aapne kaha tha na ki use kamre me rehne ko kahu toh woh wahi par hai.

(AP went towards Laksh's room.He had been given enough liberties.Now it was time to set her son straight.)

Laksh-Ma aapne is tarah se mujhe kamre mai rehne ko kyu kaha tha ?Sab theek to ha...(AP doesnot let him complete the sentence and slaps him right across the face.Lash had never seen AP so angry.)

AP-Aapn ghandi zooban se mujhe ma mat kehaa Laksh.Tumhari ma mar gayi.

Laksh-Ma aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai.Mai 2 dino ke liye Delhi gaya tha usme aab Ragini mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hai,Swara bimaar hai aakhir hua kya hai.

AP-Laksh baas karo aab tum.Tumne Ragini ke saath jhootha pyaar ka naatak kiya tha property ke papers paane ke liye.Tumhe aandaza bhi hai ye tumhari harkat ki wajah se yaha kya kuch ho chuka hai.Raini suicide karne gayi thi,Sharmishta ji use bachane ke chakkar mei aapni jaan gawah bethi.Dono behno ke beech mei daraar paida ho gayi hai aur Swara ma banane waali hai par afsoos uski ma aaj is khaushkhabri ke liye is duniya mei hi nahi hai aur tum waha Delhi mei shanti se bethe the.Chee mujhe sharam aati hai ki tum mere bete ho.Agar maine us waqt tumhare papa ko tumhe daatne ki azzadi di hoti toh aaj is tarah hamari parvarish ka tamasha nahi banta.

Tum meri baat sun lo Laksh tumhara Swara aur Sanskaar ke bacche ke saath koi rishta nahi hoga.Tum uske kuch nahi.Uski sirf Ragini hogi woh bhi Masi.Tum Sanskaar ya Swara ke aas paas bhi nahi bhatko ge.

Laksh-Ma ye aap kya keh rahi hai.Woh baccha mera bhi kuch hoga.Aap aisa kaise kar sakti hai mere saath.

AP-Tumhai galti ki wajah se Sharmishtaji aaj Shona ke saath nahi hai.Shona tumhari ya Ragini ki shakal bhi nahi dekhna chati hai.Aur use takleef ho ye mujhe bilkul kawara nahi hai itna samajh jao Laksh.Tumhari impulsiveness ki wajah se bahut kuch seh chuki hai woh.Agar use ya uske hone wale bacche ko kuch bhi hua tum mai tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karogi.Aur ye mear aakhri faisla hai.

(Laksh stood there numbless way.He had no idea so much had happened in one day.Sharmistha ma...he never wanted her to suffer in this.She was a god's soul.He felt extremely bad ecause in his impulsiveness once again it was Swara who had suffered.But he could not do anything about it.)

Here in Swara and Sanskaar's room Uttara and Adarsh were showing Swara some of Sanskar's childhood photos.

Swara-Oh my god Sanskaar you were so naughty in your childhood days.Look at you in this one. 😆😆.You with all the mango juice on you.What is it exactly that you were trying to accomplish ?😆

Adarsh-Mai bata ta hu Swara.Actually woh kya tha na Swara ma hum sab ke liye Mango juice bana rahi thi and one day Mr Einstein here had a curiosity as to ye juice banta kaise hai and he tried his hand on the juicer without noticing that the juicer box was not closed properly and voila this photo.😆

Swara-Oh My god Sasnkaar(Pari,Uttara,Swara) are continuously laughing at the phto as well as Sanskaar curiosity.But Sanskaar on the other hand while he was embarrassed but he was also very happy that his Shona was also smiling.😳

Sanskaar-Kya bhaiyya aap bhi meri purani photos le aaye.Aab puri zindagi sunna pade ga iske baare mei.

Sujata-Kai hua tum log aise haas kyu rahe ho sab ???

Swara-Arre mom woh Adarsh bhaiyya nei hume Sanskaar e juicer wala kisska aur photo sunaya isiliye.Aap batayi na mom Saskaar bahut shararat karta tha bachpan mei.??

Sujata-Arre Shona tu pooch mat itna shararti tha ye ladka poora din idhar se udhar.Ek mimute ki shanti na deta tha na maare ko na jiji ko.Aur agar maine daat diya toh baas seedha jiji ke paas jaake chup jaata tha.

Sujata and others talk and laugh about the children's old days while Ragini listens to the entire thing standing outside.Though Sanskaar had sen her he doesnot say anything.He knws there will be right time for this also.
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Pre-Cap-Swara and ragini's conversation.Laksh finds a way to apologise to Ragini as well as Swara .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Was waiting for this!
Awesome update :)
Plz update soon & plz PM me!

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