|~SanDhir 3S:White Lily~|_Part 2 updated @ pg 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sandhir Ts:White lily ...
I entered in my sweet 16
I was naive yet pretty
People told me
To be witty ...
I knew that
It will start .
They will start it .
The comments
The letters
The stalkers
I was liking it
I laugh on some of dem
But I also know thats
It's all momentary
I knew it will start
As I had said bye
To my childhood
And entered into a new
Phase .
But wht catch my
Daily
It was that white lily
On my side table
With a smiley ...
I dunno who keep it
But it was d most liked
Liked or maybe loved
By me .
As no cheapness
Just a effort to make me smile
A true Admiration .
For me ...
...
Days went on
So as d white lily was der on my side table
With a Smiley note ...
Days turned out in years
I completed my graduation
And it was time to leave my parents
And chance to explore d world with my higher studies ...
On d day when I have to catch d flight
I grabbed my lily but
Note had a add on
Der was smiley
With
P.S:Please turn over
As I turned over d
Chit
I saw a face
His curve downwards
And saying please don't go...
I dunno wht got in mind ...
Big fat tears made their journey through my eyes
...
To be continued...

Guys pls coke
Love
Shruti

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it and the concept behind it..👏

I am eagerly waiting for part 2

Don't make me wait more than tomorrow😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U have nailed it again Somu
Briliant job dearie
Do update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Brilliant Shruti


you exactly described the events happen when a girl turns 16
she blossoms into beautiful girl

in the midst of countless admirers there is some one who is so pure in expressing his love
the admiration continued for years

one day then met

update the next part soon
excited to read further

Thanks for PM

Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Beautifully written
It was cute

Excited to see what hppns next
Update soon

Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well done! You've tried a new style of writing and done a very good job.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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described nicely abt teenagers
lovely poem
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start to ur TS
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayu27

I loved it and the concept behind it..👏

I am eagerly waiting for part 2

Don't make me wait more than tomorrow😛

thanks ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

lovely😳😳
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thanks

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