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Ashika was RK and Pia's daughter...but she left RK and Ashika for another Man...when she was 3 year old...and after 1 year Madhu came into RK's life and married him only because of Ashika...and soon Ashika accepted her as her mother...but RK didn't like her initially...he only married
her for the sake of her daughter...and his businesses collaboration with her father...but gradually there relationship turned into friendship...and now it was turning into more than that...only the thing was left was confession.


"Oh come Mumma...please just for 2 hours after all its Jiah's birthday...she is my bestest friend" Ashika said it to Madhu. Although she was taking permission from Madhu but she behaved like a stubborn kid.She was standing behind Madhu who was cleaning up the bed with her arms folded...and was staring at her in anger. "No means no Ashu" Madhu said in an adamant way." Mumma please...you know what even Micky Mouse is coming over there" she tried her best possible way to convince Madhu. " Madhu turned around and folded her arms and looked down towards Ashika "Tell me one thing, why do you want to go there...because it's Jiah's birthday or you want to see Micky Mouse". Ashika thought for few seconds for an answer and then she said "Umm well mumma...because it's Jiah's birthday I would be able to see Micky Mouse so I want to go". Madhu kneeled down and said "Ashu...look..there would be so many people...and I can't let you go without papa's permission. ...and he is not here yet...and I can't call him and disturb him for this right?." Ashika made a sad face listening to it...Madhu noticed this and said "Ok I promise that on your birthday we will call Micky Mouse...Rapunzel...Cindrella...and all your favourite characters. .okay"..."okay" Ashika replied in a very low voice. "What happened...why my princess is sounding sad?"...Suddenly a voice came from Madhu's behind...Ashika tilted her head to see towards the person and automatically a smile took over her sadness...It was RK her father..."papa" She shouted in excitement and ran with her little legs towards him...she jumped while RK catched her little daughter and hugged her...he took out her favourite chocolate from his pocket and gave it to her...She got even more happy and said "Thank you papa...my papa bestest"...Madhu smiled at her phrase while RK laughed at her and said "Haha...bestest?"...and Ashika replied in an innocent way "Yes papa...bestest" RK again laughed and kissed her and walked towards Madhu and said "So may I know why my daughter is sad"...Ashika complained "Papa look mumma is not letting me go to the party...tell her na that I want to go"...RK made a confusing face " party which party"...Ashika made a facepalm with her cute little hands and said "Ohfo papa...it's Jiah's birthday tonight...and you know what even Micky Mouse is coming over there...I want to go papa". "Oh so this is the problem...don't worry princess...you will go tonight" he said it while dropping down Ashika. "Really papa?"...she asked..."Yes princess" he replied. "Pinky promise papa" she forwarded her little finger in front "pinky promise princess" RK too forwarded his little finger and crossed it with hers and made a promise. "But Rishabh" Madhu tried to stop him. But then Ashika interrupted " Oh no...papa I should go and see that what I shall wear...bye papa bye mumma" and she went to her room. "Rishabh are you sure that..." as Madhu was about to ask RK cut off her in between and said "Every thing is gonna be fine Madhu...don't worry...and we are with her right." "Ya but I am afraid what if she comes there and creates a scene in front of everyone?"Madhu replied in nervousness. "I will handle everything...I can't take away my daughter's happiness because of that woman...stop worrying and..." Suddenly RK stopped in between. And Madhu asked "And...what...what happened?" He turned around and opened his suitcase and took out a box "Umm...and this" He gave it to Madhu. She got surprised on seeing the box and asked him "What is this Rishabh?". "A.. well I was looking something for Ashika so I saw this saree and I thought it will look nice on you" he replied in nervousness. ..as he didn't know whether Madhu will like this gesture of his...and Madhu blushed on hearing this and she opened the box and said "Wow RK this is so beautiful...I must say your choice is very good" "it's perfect" He said it while gazing at Madhu...Madhu looked at him...she knew he was talking about her...and even she started gazing at him...they started coming closer but then suddenly a voice came "mumma" it was Ashika...Both of them came out of their trance and looked at Ashika "A...w...what happens Ashu?" Madhu asked her...Ashika was breathing heavily because she got tired of running and she said while stopping Madhu to say something further by showing her hand"wait mumma let me breath" Madhu and RK looked at each other and chuckled at Ashika.."Yes...mumma I don't know what to wear please come and help me" Ashika said "I knew that you cannot do this on your own...come with me...we will decide" Madhu replied " Hey wait...I have something for Ashika" Suddenly RK interrupted "What really...is it a dress papa?" Ashika asked in excitement. "Well you can see it yourself sweetheart" and he gave it Ashika Madhu helped her opening the box...and it was a dress...Ashika again jumped in excitement "Wow papa you are the bestest" "Really...ok then give papa a kissi" and she kissed her papa.

At the evening

RK was ready...he was wearing a black suit...and as usual he was looking the hottest of all...Madhu was not yet ready as she was busy making Ashika get ready...and as she got finished with her she looked towards RK who was setting up his hair...she was fully impressed by him...and started staring at him with a smile...RK noticed it and said "Madhu...if you will continue staring at me like this then we will reach at the venue when the party will get over" Madhu came out of her trance and brought her hair behind her ears in nervousness. "No I was not staring at you" She tried to cover up. RK turned around and came forward towards Madhu...Madhu got even more nervous...Ashika was still standing there looking at her parents not knowing what are they talking about...RK was now a bit close to Madhu...but then he suddenly changed his direction and walked towards Ashika...and said while still staring at Madhu "Come Ashika...we will go down let mumma get ready. ..because if we will stay here...she will not be able to get ready...and will continue staring at me" Ashika chuckled at listening to this...and Madhu again blushed at his words.

RK and Ashika were waiting downstairs...and after few minutes Madhu came.RK's back was towards her while Ashika could see her.."Wow papa...mumma is looking like an angel" "Really?"...and RK turned towards Madhu who was coming down through the stairs...He was completely mesmerised by her beauty...its not that he had not seen her all decked up but this time he could really feel her beauty...everything was just looking perfect on her...she came down and was busy trying to close her earing but it seemed like a difficult task for her...RK who was continously staring at her automatically raised his hands and started closing her earing...Madhu felt a little bit nervous but somewhere she liked what RK was doing...and when RK closed her earing she looked towards him...who was still lost in Madhu...then Madhu gave it back to RK with his own dialogue "If you will continously stare at me like this then we will reach at the venue when the party will get over". "That's not my fault...you are looking so beautiful" He unknowingly blabbered in front of her...Madhu looked at him in surprise and then Ashika pulled them with her tiny hands and said " Come papa come mumma...let's go please...I want to see Micky Mouse"

And they left...and soon they reached the venue...When they reached the gate Ashika freed herself from RK and quickly ran towards her friend Jiah "Be careful Ashika" Madhu shouted..."yes mumma" she replied. "Chill Madhu she will be fine" RK tried to comfort her.

Soon the birthday cake was cut...Rishabh and Madhu were looking at Ashika who was happily...having cake with her friend Jiah...Suddenly Rishabh said "Thank you Madhu" Madhu got confused and looked towards Rishabh and said " Why are you saying this?" "Madhu I was so lonely when Pia left...Even I was getting far from my daughter...she reminded me of pia whenever I looked at her...but then you came and changed everything". Suddenly a tear rolled down through her eyes..." Oh oh wait" Rishabh said while looking here and there "Why what happened" Madhu asked "I am looking for a bucket" he said "Bucket...here...but why...what will you do with a bucket" "I will collect you tears atleast a bucket will be filled with your tears and we can use it for washing clothes" He teased her "Stop it Rishabh" She wiped her tears and smiled...RK too laughed at her and said "But seriously Madhu...you know what I always used to think that why she left me...but then when now I look back towards everything...I feel so thankful that she left because if she wouldn't have left I wouldn't have got you as my wife" "RK...are you" before Madhu could ask him he said "Yes Madhu...I wanted to confess my feelings but I was not able to...but not this time Madhu...I will tell you everything what I feel for you" But suddenly someone interrupted "So Mr.and Mrs. Rishabh Kundra" Both of them looked towards the person and it was none other than Pia. "What are you doing here" RK asked her angrily "Well even I am invited here ex husband" she replied "Excuse me" Madhu said "No Madhu stay here" RK stopped her. Pia looked at them in jealousy "So Pia what did say when you were leaving me...that I will not get anyone right. ..now look at her...I have got one" RK proudly said to Pia "Oh please...she doesn't even match my level" Pia should attitude while saying this "Oh yeah Pia She doesn't even match your level" RK agreed to her " Madhu looked at him in shock but then he said while looking into Madhu's eyes "Because she is above all...no one can be like her...she is the best...best friend best wife and..." "bestest Mumma" suddenly Ashika shouted from behind...and came towards Madhu and held her hand. Pia looked at Ashika and said "beta she is not your mother...I am your mother come here baby" "No you are not...she is my mumma...and I will never leave her...and I don't even like your hair style they are all messed up...look at my mumma...her hair is so nice and sleek...go go go from here". People who were listening to them started making fun of Pia which left her with no option but to leave from there...and she left. Madhu kneeled down and said "Thank you Ashu" While Ashika wiped Madhu's tears with her little hands and said "No more crying mumma" "Okay Boss" she replied...RK looked at them and was happy on seeing the way his life is turning into.

Soon they left from the party.They were in the car when Ashika thought of something and asked Madhu " Mumma...how do we grow old" Madhu got confused but she tried giving her the answer while RK was driving " Well Ashika you remember when we sowed the seed the other day for flowers to grow" "Yes mumma " she replied "likewise we also grow each and every day" Madhu said it very confidently. ..but again Ashika cross questioned her by asking "But how do you sow a seed for a baby I have never seen anyone doing that mumma...tell me where did you and papa sowed my seed mumma?" And Madhu and RK were hell embraced on this question...and Madhu started looking away outside the window...when Ashika again asked her " Mumma why are you not answering. ..tell me no" Suddenly RK interrupted "Ashika...go to sleep now...no more questions" "But papa we aren't even home yet" she said "Never mind you sleep in the car...you have to go to school tomorrow right...and you should not ask so many questions...do you get it Ashu?" But there was no reply and he again asked "Ashu are you listening to me?" Again there was no reply and then he saw through the rear view mirror that she was asleep...and then she looked at Madhu who was still looking outside the window and smiled at her.

Soon they reached home...and RK who was holding Ashika in her arms carefully dropped her on her bed While Madhu went into their room...while she was opening her necklace RK came behind her and held her from the back and said is a husky tone "So my Biwi what do you think about Ashika's idea...don't you think she is big enough to have a brother or sister?" Madhu smiled and pushed him away and was about to walk forward when RK pulled the dori of her blouse from behind...Madhu skipped a hearbeat...she pressed her lips in nervousness while RK slowly walked towards her and then he kissed her neck from the back and then her earlobe...and now slowly Madhu was loosing her self to RK...RK lifted Madhu in her arms and walked towards the bed while still looking into her eyes...and then he dropped her on the bed and removed her earings with his lips and then he removed her bangles...and closed in to kiss...they made love the whole night...and after making love he said "the bestest thing ever happened to me is you Madhu...I love you" "I love you more Rishabh" she replied and then he kissed her forehead and they hugged each other and fell asleep.



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snehalata thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet & lovely os
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lovely os...!!
pia got there to make a scene & in return she got her own doze...😆
madhu & rishabh were giving dialogues to each other & important wrk is done by ashu as she popped up with brilliant idea☺️..🤣...
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS
ashika is so cute
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Awesome OS, Ashika is very cute.
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Such a sweet n beautiful, OS!😳
Loved it to d core!
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fabulous.
a v sweet,cute n lovely os.
piya left rk n their daughter.
rk married madhu n then da love blossomed
ashu gave brilliant ide hahahaha.
keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely n sweet os.
Write more .
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hey superb os dear...loved it
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Awesome os simran. Loved it to bits. Loved ashu a lot. N also the wsy she gav back 2 pis. Thanks a ton for the pm

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