Woh lamhe , woh baatein * Shara story * Part 2 , pg 3 up! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
hey seems like a great start , i hope atleast ur story has a mature hot story tellin,since the tele series is hopeless to take off any time soon,cant wait to read further, plz update soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

ahh lovely teaser dear!

Always shirtless haan? ;) hehe just kidding! I so loved the setting.. so hmm he's gonna dwell into his past.. cant wait to read more... :)

Kp up he good work! :)

P.S> u know how much i love ur OSs ;) :*



thanku so much pree 😃😃⭐️⭐️

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️

im so happy you like my oss 😃😃 ( and you im a fan of your stories 😉😃)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: max_thakker

hey seems like a great start , i hope atleast ur story has a mature hot story tellin,since the tele series is hopeless to take off any time soon,cant wait to read further, plz update soon!!!!



thanku so much 😃😃

im happy you liked the teaser 😃😃

i hope you like it when i post it ,

i might post it i a while 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys, heres the part 1 of the story , hope you like it and please please leave your feedbakc even one word , but please leave a comment and encourage and please hit like please ⭐️

Part 1

Shamsher was standing on the terrace of the haveli... He was shirtless ... It was again a cloudy night with cool breeze touching his face ...just like that one ... But the difference was that beforre she was with him and now .. . She isnt ... Everyone else was sleeping in their rooms ... But he just couldnt sleep today... Specially today ... He was standing there with a bottle in his hand... But his mind was reminiscing their past...

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Flashback starts :

Shamsher opened their room door... And was surprised to see their rooms aspect... It was decorated with white red and golden candles and with red white roses ... His eyes then fell on Aradhya ... Who was sitting on their bed wearing a red floral saree with white blouse... Her hair was softly curled and she was sitting in front of the cake ... Lightenig the candles... He was spellbount seeing her...

He took few steps ... And ardhya looked at him... Lovingly and giving him hr a thousand wattsc dimple smile ... He smiled back... Still looking at aradhya ... He was completely lost admiring her beauty. ...

Na main jaanoun,

Na tu jaane,

(aaah)

Kaisa hai ye mausam,

Koi na jaane,

Kahi se hai fizaa aayi,

Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,

Aradhya got up and walked towards him... When she reachd him... She removed his leather jacket slowly... And threw it on their bed... Shamsher was staring at her lovingly... She grabbed his hand and brought her towards the bed where the cake was kept... He sat on the bed ... Then she sat on the bed on the opposite side of him...

A. Happy anniversary shamsher ...

Shamsher suddenly came becack to his senses... It was their firat anniversary ! And he forgot it !

S. Happy anniversary aradhya...woh...mein...

A. Ap bhul gaye the ? ... Mujhe pata hai ... Iss liye toh meine apko pehle wish kiya ...

S. Tumhe ... Tumhe bura laga hoga.. Ki...mein...

A. Nahi toh... Mujhe kyun bura lage ga ? Ap kaam mein busy ho gaye... Toh... Its normal...

Shamsher was astonished at her anwer ... She really didnt mind ? ...

She picked the knife and entended her hand. ... Hoping that shamsher will place his hand on hers... But he just too lost looking at her... So she grabbed his hand and placed on hers ... Abd they cut the cake... First aradhya gave him a bite. ... Then he took the same piece and fed her... But ... .. Some cream got by mistake on her nose... Henoticed this ... He smirked slightly...

She wasloiking extremely cute ... With that cream on her nose ...

Looking at her pationately ... Out of nervousness ... She got up ... She couldnt bare the intensity of his gaze ... then placed the cake on a coffee table ... Shamsher got up as well. ... And followed her... It wasnt planned ... It wasnt a conciously doing this. . ... He was going behind her like a shes a magnet ...


Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: miniapplepie

hi guys, heres the part 1 of the story , hope you like it and please please leave your feedbakc even one word , but please leave a comment and encourage and please hit like please ⭐️

Part 1

Shamsher was standing on the terrace of the haveli... He was shirtless ... It was again a cloudy night with cool breeze touching his face ...just like that one ... But the difference was that beforre she was with him and now .. . She isnt ... Everyone else was sleeping in their rooms ... But he just couldnt sleep today... Specially today ... He was standing there with a bottle in his hand... But his mind was reminiscing their past...

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Flashback starts :

Shamsher opened their room door... And was surprised to see their rooms aspect... It was decorated with white red and golden candles and with red white roses ... His eyes then fell on Aradhya ... Who was sitting on their bed wearing a red floral saree with white blouse... Her hair was softly curled and she was sitting in front of the cake ... Lightenig the candles... He was spellbount seeing her...

He took few steps ... And ardhya looked at him... Lovingly and giving him hr a thousand wattsc dimple smile ... He smiled back... Still looking at aradhya ... He was completely lost admiring her beauty. ...

Na main jaanoun,

Na tu jaane,

(aaah)

Kaisa hai ye mausam,

Koi na jaane,

Kahi se hai fizaa aayi,

Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,

Aradhya got up and walked towards him... When she reachd him... She removed his leather jacket slowly... And threw it on their bed... Shamsher was staring at her lovingly... She grabbed his hand and brought her towards the bed where the cake was kept... He sat on the bed ... Then she sat on the bed on the opposite side of him...

A. Happy anniversary shamsher ...

Shamsher suddenly came becack to his senses... It was their firat anniversary ! And he forgot it !

S. Happy anniversary aradhya...woh...mein...

A. Ap bhul gaye the ? ... Mujhe pata hai ... Iss liye toh meine apko pehle wish kiya ...

S. Tumhe ... Tumhe bura laga hoga.. Ki...mein...

A. Nahi toh... Mujhe kyun bura lage ga ? Ap kaam mein busy ho gaye... Toh... Its normal...

Shamsher was astonished at her anwer ... She really didnt mind ? ...

She picked the knife and entended her hand. ... Hoping that shamsher will place his hand on hers... But he just too lost looking at her... So she grabbed his hand and placed on hers ... Abd they cut the cake... First aradhya gave him a bite. ... Then he took the same piece and fed her... But ... .. Some cream got by mistake on her nose... Henoticed this ... He smirked slightly...

She wasloiking extremely cute ... With that cream on her nose ...

Looking at her pationately ... Out of nervousness ... She got up ... She couldnt bare the intensity of his gaze ... then placed the cake on a coffee table ... Shamsher got up as well. ... And followed her... It wasnt planned ... It wasnt a conciously doing this. . ... He was going behind her like a shes a magnet ...



Aww so romantic their first anniversary 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Thanku amaraah im glad you liked the romance ...thier first anniverdary is besutiful :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Arey wah that was super cute! n romantic bhi... first anniv.. aww.. hope Sham surprises her ;)
n no need to thank me... u deserve the applause.. ur write so well, kp rocking! tc :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

Arey wah that was super cute! n romantic bhi... first anniv.. aww.. hope Sham surprises her ;)

n no need to thank me... u deserve the applause.. ur write so well, kp rocking! tc :)




thanku so much pree , hope you olike the next chappy 😃😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
beautiful forst anniversay of shara :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys , hope you olike this chappy and pelase leave your precious feedback and hit the like button please 😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️


Part 2

it started raining outside... The windows was open... When she turned around ... She collided with shamsher ... She almost fell. .. .but Shamsher held her against him placing his hand on her lower back...

Flashback discontinues...

Shamsher took a sip from the bottle ... His eyes were filled with pain and love... He was feeling bad ... Really bad... He lost ... His love... Due to a promise made to his aji amma...

S. Kaash aji amma ... Kaash apne humko wo kasam na de hoti... Toh aj mein ... Toh aj mein ... Aradhya ji ke saath hote ...

flashback continues ( from where left ) ...

His touch was sending a wild shiver through her body... And a slight blush appeared on her cheeks ... She lowred her eyes ... She couldnt look at his eyes ... She got literally caged in his arms when he placed his othr hand on her waist ...

After a while ...she gathered courage to look into his eyes ... He was looking at her eyes ... Intensely ... Getting comoketely lodt in hereyes ... And slowly leaned forward ... Reducing the distance between them... She closed her eyes ...

She could feel his hot breath on her fsce... He was very close to her ...Unknowingly... She kept her hand on his chest ...

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

He looked at her nose... And softly kissed there... Removing the cream from there with his lips ... That sent shivers through aradhyas body... She noticed what he just did .. And opened her eyes slowly ... Blushing heavily...

She looked at him... His brown eyes...the next moment... His hands slowly moved from her waist to her back... Hugging her ... Aradhya also hugged him back ... Softly caresing his back ... She closed her eyes ... He was also inmersed in the embrace ...

Frashback discobtinues ...

Shamsher had another sip of the bottle ... With red shot eyes... Teary eyes ... Heartbroken ... He couldlive in her memories if was needed... She has slowly become a very important part if his life ... She has basically become his life ... His love ...

Flashback continues ...

His hands were Carressing her back... They were both lost in thier embrace... They didnt want it to end... They wanted to stay in each others arms...

Embracing her... He then broke the hug... They both looked at each other pationately... Lovingly... Shamsher lifted her in his arms... She placed her hands on the nape of his neck... And looking at her... Without breaking the eyelock ... He walked towards their bed... And placedher gently pn their bed ... Leaning forward while placing her there... Reducing the distance between their lips...

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