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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 60

Veer felt a sensation as if "being embraced" in a loving manner, by an unseen forceHe did not open his eyes.

He felt enormous pleasure in that embrace

Sharp shadow roamed around the room. The storm raged the night.

Next Morning

He found Chandni sleeping peacefully next to him.

 

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The day was misty...dark clouds gathered to hide the beautiful blue sky...the weather was as bad as was never before...

Maneka woke up and looked at the kitchen... "Omg...what's that?" she peeped at the kitchen window... that was scary... "Chandni... Veer"

She shouted on top of her voice...

Veer quickly treaded towards the kitchen... "Why do you scream?"

"Look there" Maneka pointed towards the window

It was covered with blood... Veer examined from outside... he touched it with his finger... smelled it...

That was indeed disgusting... it didn't seem to be a human blood...

"Don't know where this came from?"  He mumbled...

 "We will get this cleaned..." he said and walked around the cottage to check any other clue...

Maneka was now scared of the place... but she had to support her dear friend... who was in need... but why didn't she get up on her screams? She must be sleepy...

Maneka thought of making Chandni's favourite tea and will wake her up...

"Veer you need tea?"

"No..." he replied "I am going for a short walk" he added

Maneka lifted the utensil on the gas... "Where is the matchstick?"

She looked around... and saw a sharp knife... full of blood... "Damn... What's that?" she stepped closed to examine... "How come the blood"

She thought of not touching it... The smell made her puke...

 

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Veer was walking down the road when he saw a same old woman he saw once in Darjeeling...

"Excuse me..." he stopped

"Did we met before?" he queried

The woman smiled... "Yes."

"So you live here?"

"Yes"

"But we met in Darjeeling"

"Yes"

"What the h***... when did you come here?"

"Now"

"Oh... Anyways..."

"Veer..." She smiled at the confused handsome boy who was now finding it difficult to swallow... how she knew his name... That is so weird...

"Do you know my name?" was the next question from the long list that was sitting in his brain...

"Yes"

"Oh..." he cannot waste any more time on this old frame... what has happened to you Veer... he thought to himself...

"Ok..." he murmured and started walking...

The old lady smiled... "You will soon come to me again..."

 

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Maneka saw the door open and Chandni peacefully sleeping... "Thank God... at least she had a tight sleep"

"Chandni...wake up" Maneka kept the cup on the small table next to the bed...

But Chandni did not move at all...

Maneka tried to raise her voice a little "Chandni...get up now...it's so late"

She did not reacted at all...

Now Maneka felt anxious...

She touched her forehead... she was hot... Indeed very hot... "Omg she has fever..."

She quickly walked back to her room to get some tablets...

 

After few minutes... She sort out with the tablets... "I think she must take two"

She shake her a little... but Chandni did not responded...

Maneka thought of calling someone... may be a doctor...

After some time...

"Chandni... open your eyes..." Veer and Maneka were standing next to her... but there was no comeback from her...

Doctor looked at her... "I think you must take her from here... to some big hospital"

Veer nodded ... "I told her not to come here... she never heeded"

He asked Maneka to pack the stuff and he will arrange everything...

Veer looked at Chandni... touched her burning cheeks "please Chandni...wake up"

Maneka packed all the clothes and was ready to leave... While she took the things away her eyes fell on the sharp knife again... It was clean...  "Who cleaned this?" she murmured...

She thought of quickly getting out of this place... "Veer was right...they should have never come here..."

After few hours...

A big van stopped outside the cottage ... They left the place.

Veer took Chandni straight to the hospital in Rajasthan to get rid of her fever ...

Maneka and Veer were still waiting for the Doctors to complete the treatment...

After a long time...

"We can't say anything..." said one of the Doctors...

Veer was now getting angry "you mean you don't know?"

Frustratingly he called Manohar ... "Manohar... Listen to me very very carefully..."

It was just after he had made few phone calls... that there was a team of the best doctors at the hospital who were trying to examine the problem ...

"Veer..." said one of the doctors

"She is normal, breathing fine, her temperature has come down... But still she did not open her eyes... we will monitor for another couple of hours and see"

Veer nodded...

It was late night and he was sitting on the couch... Due to exertion he felt fast asleep...

Chandni has a sly smile on her lips...

 

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Next day

 

Veer was now finding it very unusual... he had done all the treatment... even the best doctors were called for her... but she did not responded at all... he was still thinking when Chandni moved a little...

He quickly stepped towards the bed "are you ok Chandni"

Chandni opened her eyes slowly and looked at him... "Yes..." she nodded and tried to get up...

He helped her sit on the bed... "I am thirsty..." she said slowly

Veer poured some water in the glass and handed to her... she smiled...

After few minutes doctors came to check her... "She seems good... no fever"

Veer patted her shoulder "you scared me"

"Did I?" she smiled...

"Veer... we can discharge her... she can go home now" said the doctor...

"Thanks"

Veer dialled a no "three tickets to Darjeeling, yes urgent"

"What are you doing?" she stammered a little

"Going back home... From this nomad place" he responded

"Ok" she smiled

Veer was surprised as to how easily she agreed ... But he least bothered... he was happy that she was all fine... he did notice her while she looked around...

"Your favourite orange juice" he offered her...

"No...I don't like it" she looked away...

He thought it may be because of the medicines she had... "Do you want to eat something?"

"Yes..." she gladly looked at him...

He knew what she like and ordered the food for her...

After few minutes...

The food was placed nicely on the table...

"Come I will help you..." he took her hand in his hands and guided her towards the table few steps from the bed

Chandni frowned as she looked at the food "what is this?"

Veer was surprised at her "your favourite salad and veg curry and rice"

"I don't want this..." she retorted angrily...

Veer was confused now "but this is your favourite food..."

She stared angrily at him...

He knew she was not well, and he would not argue with her now ... "ok... What will you have?"

She looked at him ... "leave it...I am not hungry now"

He was shocked at her behaviour but ignored, it could be because of the medicines she is taking

Maneka walked in ... "Hi Chandni... you look better now"

Chandni smiled at her... "I know..."

Maneka was little surprised by her reply but she ignored... "Ok Veer, everything is ready... we just have to leave now"

Chandni looked at the sandwich in Maneka's hands... "Give me that"

Maneka was surprised "Chandni this is chicken ...and you are vegetarian"

"I said give it to me" she demanded

Maneka helplessly offered the sandwich...

Veer and Maneka were shocked as to how chandni gobbled the sandwich in her mouth...

 

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Posted: 8 years ago
omg...is chandi possessed then what happen to the real chandni and whose blood was that??? so much mystery..nice update. tfs
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update 
This new avatar of chandani is just awesome
Waiting for next part eagerly 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow very nice ud ... But itna chhota ... :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow aftr so long
So muc mystry !
Cnt wait nw.. update soon ! :)
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OMG! What was that? Blood in kitchen? On knife? This is getting scary. Chandni is in her unusual self...I'm sure she is possesd. But if this is it, then whose blood was that?
And that old woman. I remember her mysterious meeting with Veer in Darjeeling. Waiting for their encounter again. 
Update soon.
Thank you for the pm! ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was short but was amazing
chandu possessed n blood on knife n in kitchen
what was that?
MYSTERY...MYSTERY N MYSTERY
But this side of chandu is nice, I am sure she is going to make veer hell confused n hmmm ummm mmm
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 61

 

Maneka took her luggage and placed it nicely above her seat... then she glanced at Chandni sitting near the window seat... "How do you feel now?"

"Why does everyone keep asking me the same silly question?" she snapped at Maneka who was quiet but shocked at her response...

Maneka failed to understand why Chandni was so rude... then she thought that it may be because of the medications..

Veer sat next to Chandni and Maneka sat on the opposite seat ...

 

"Can I get a drink?" Chandni paused at the air hostess ...

"Yes Maam...what will you have?"

"Umm..." She looked at the bottles...

"One glass of wine please" Chandni smiled at the air hostess...

"Sure Maam"

"Chandni" Veer prompted

"What?"

"You will have wine now?"

"So what?"

"Are you out of your mind" he snarled

"No thanks... just orange juice" he re ordered...

Annoyingly she sat back ...

Veer observed her and nodded his head in despair...

"When I was drinking... you had a problem...now I have stopped drinking... now you want to drink?" he retorted angrily...

She glared at him "I would never stop you... you can drink as much as you want"

"Why do I think you have changed so much?"

Chandni thought something ... "ok, i...I will do as you say"

"That's better" both smiled.

 

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"Ok... now you go inside... I have to meet Manohar" Veer dropped her luggage at the door... and was about to leave when Chandni hugged him from behind...

"Wow..." he turned and hugged her back...

She gazed at him and sucked his lips...

Veer was still wondering what on earth she was up to...

"Chandni..."

She smiled... "I love you"

"I love you too..."

He kissed her back...

"Now go... Your Grandmother must be waiting..."

He left and she waved at him...

She knocked at the door...

Kamini opened the door...

"Chandni... my darling..." she hugged her...

Instead of hugging her back... Chandni moved away

"Yes. Yes..." and gave a fake smile...

"I am so tired... have to sleep..."

The moment she stepped inside the house she jerked away...

"Are you alright Chandni..?"

"Yes, I am okay... just tired..." she walked upstairs without looking at the temple near the kitchen...

"And yes...don't disturb me"

Kamini looked at Shama who was equally puzzled over her strange behaviour..

"May be the tiredness Kamini" Shama said

"But her behaviour was not good... she never talks rudely even though if she's tired..."

Kamini murmured

 

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Veer was waiting for her outside...

"Hi Veer" she smiled at the handsome man standing next to the car...

"You are late???"

"So what?"

"Chandni, I am surprised, you never reach late anywhere... and you are quiet a punctual person..."

"Veer...come on lets go"

She quickly brushed off the topic and slid into the car...

They drove past the happy valley towards the city...

"Kaka will be so happy to see you" Veer said softly...

"What?? Where are we going?" she retorted

"To meet Kaka"

"I thought you were taking me for a date" she turned to look at him annoyingly

"Come on Chandni, you know Kaka is important. Once we meet him, after that I will take you for dinner"

She did not utter a word to him. Veer was not pleased with her brashness. There was something wrong with her, he just wasn't so comfortable with her whereas he used to die to be with her all the time. Chandni was always anxious about others, he failed to understand why she reacted so badly ... he squinted at her once... to his surprise she was smiling...

"Glad?"

"Of course"

Then he looked at her from top to bottom... He stopped the car immediately

"What are you wearing?"

She looked at him then looked at herself "clothes"

"Just a t-shirt...?"

"So?"

"Chandni... are you out of your senses... I don't want world to see you naked?"

She came closer "really?"

She touched his lips... Her fingers rubbed his hair... "You are so possessive about me?"

He shook her hand away "what are you doing?"

"Loving you" she whispered

He looked at her... another second she was kissing him madly ...

She held his hand on her inner thigh...

Veer responded back, he passionately kissed her...his fingers dig into her flesh.

He tightly held her closer

"Let's go to your house" she whispered in between the kissing...

Veer pulled away a little... "Chandni, are these medicines making you more seductive?"

She smiled... and continued kissing him all over his face and neck...

 

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Veer draped his arm around her shoulder and opened the door...there wasn't anyone in the house...  He closed the door and grabbed her by her hips...and her hands reach for his hair and mouth. He pushed her against the wall...she moaned into his mouth, and one of his hands moved into her hair...pulling her head back as they kissed savagely.

"What do you want Chandni?" he was breathes

"You" she gasped

"Where?"

"Bed"

He scoops her into his arms and carried her quickly and seemingly without any strain to the bedroom. He pulled her t-shirt over her shoulder. His lips part as he took quick shallow breaths.

Then he drags his shirt over his head...

He took off her bra ...

He bends over the bed and slowly crawls up and over, kissing her all the way... he pushed her legs apart with his and moves so that he's hovering above her... without taking his eyes off hers... he slams into her... Finally he collapses on top of her, his head buried in her neck...

 

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 As sanity returns , she opened her eyes and gazed at him...he stroked his nose against hers bearing his weight on his elbows, he plants a gentle kiss on her lips as he eases himself out of her.

"I really missed this" he breathed

"Me too" she whispered

"Well when we did this first time, you were so angry at me...and I tried again but every time you pushed me away" he said totally astonished at her reply...

She stretched herself towards his chest... "Forget about that..."

He gently kissed her on the forehead...

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It was late night when he got up and saw her sleeping next to her...

"Chandni... wake up, you have to go home" he whispered in her ear

"Umm" she held him closer...

"Chandni...wake up"

Veer thought Manohar will come anytime and it won't look good...

Soon he heard the knock at the door...

He slid into his shirt and jeans and closed the door behind him...

 

"You are back?"

"Why didn't you come to see Kaka?"

"Chandni had some work in the office..." he quickly drank a glass of water...

"How is she now?" Manohar kept his bag on the bench top

 

"Hello everyone..."

Manohar and Veer looked up at Chandni standing in the mid-way of the stairs...

Manohar could not digest... "Chandni!"

Veer frowned angrily and walked towards her,

"What the hell are you wearing?" he tightly held her arm and whispered in her ear, slowly dragged her back to the room...

"Veer...what are you doing?"

"What is this Chandni...look at you?"

She looked herself from top to bottom... her hair all messed up, white t- shirt up till her thighs... "So what?"

Veer was almost getting mad at her "I will drop you home right now"

 

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Kamini and Shama kept a religious ceremony at home which had to last until morning... it was whole night worshipping the goddess.

Few other ladies gathered around and started worshipping with the big plates that had some flowers, dry fruit and other religious items...

 

"Veer listen... I am sorry... please" Chandni tried to convince him but he was still angry at her...

"Chandni you go home and rest... and next time if you come out in t-shirt..."

She kept her hand on his mouth "fine... I won't"

Soon the car stopped outside the house...

"Now go" he looked at her...

She nodded

"Come on Chandni... we can tomorrow"

Sadly she stepped out of the car...

Waved at him and stepped towards the main door...

Veer reversed the car and left

One of the servants opened the door...

The moment the door opened... Chandni jerked back and saw the religious ceremony ...

"Stop this..." she tried to shout and was unable to step inside the house...

She pulled her hair

Every time she tried to put her foot at the entrance door, something pushed her back...

Kamini saw Chandni and smiled at first but then she saw something that shocked her...

 

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Edited by Freethinker - 8 years ago
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Hi Readers

 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow after long time u update ... Thankbu 
Its nice us ..
Plzz veer ka bhi ud update karo na...
Chandni I really hope she is fine & veer plzz she is not ur chandni ... Recognized it as soon as it possible ... Next ud soon