My 2nd ff: romantic RoKa..PART18 UPDATED!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys ,,😊
ur replies forced me to write my second ff soon..šŸ˜›

so here's my 2nd one..😃
robbie......ro
Kasturi......ka

and this is a romatic ff and there are RoKa noke-jhokes too..😳

In this ff robbie isn't a rockstar and kasturi is middle class girl..
once there was a marriage ...
robbie's frnd was dulha (groom)
kasturi's frnd was dulhan (bride)

kasturi was so exited for her frnd's marriage so she was deciding all the arangements for the marriage

like ...
how to decorate the hotel..
what curtains should be used to decorate the mandap..

and the amazing thing is.. ro was so much impressed by her decorations..

when there was the decorations for the room where all the 'rasmein and games'(games like ...to find

ring from the milk) should go... on that room, it was to be decorated by the colourful handprints of

children.. so kasturi was showing them how to do ..so kasturi was taking green on one hand and red on

other hand.. and for fun she placed some red colour on one child's face and that child was running

behind her taking colour on his hand to put on ka.. and ro was coming out from his room wearing a white shirt... ka accidently falls upon ro and the colours fo her hands printed ro's shirt..

ka... oh!!!! I am so sorry ..
ro...its ok..
ka... I am so sorry ..sorry
ro...its ok..its ok..its fine..chill out..
ka... apki shirt kharab ho gayi na..
ro...nahi.. its ok.. ab mai shadi ke ghar me sirf white shirt pehen ke ghumta to accha nahi lagta..so apne use printed bana diya..
ka...ab uske liye maine sorry kaha na ..ab kya karun?
ro...abhi to kuch nahi par waqt aane do. zaroor kaam karne ko order karunga..
ka...ok kabhi bhi..and thank u
ro...thank u?? kis baat ke liye?
ka...apne mujhe girne se bachaya..
ro...its ok.

next day..

when ka was taking flowers from the room and she was coming down and suddenly she heared a noise and she was unbalanced and she was to fall then again ro catches her and again he saved her from falling down..
ro... aap kya hamesha yun hi girti-padti rehti hain.?
ka... aap kitni baar mujhe bachayenge??
ro...(silently)jitni baar aap girengi..
ka...ji????kya kaha apne???
ro... kuch nahi..[ro was still catching her]
ka...ab aap mujhe chhodenge.. mujhe jana hai..
ro...oh!! am sorry..Jaiye

ka goes and ro too
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Final day... [marriage day] on next part..and oke jhokes too.......

NOTE:- I will post my second part here only so stay tunned..


PLZ PLZ post ur comments...


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HobbitButt thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!! It's so sweet, amazing and very different.šŸ‘ Please keep going... 😳
samans02 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's really sweet please contiune 😃
*princess*15 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very sweet n plz try 2 post soon
white star thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nic nic šŸ˜›
continue soon 😃
Parth Garewal thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys here's da 2nd part...

but first of all thanku soooooooooooo much for da comments and i will be waiting for ur comments on this part too...so plz comment..

Part 2
ka's frnd's name is mahima(who is getting married to mahendra)
ro's frnd's name is mahendra(who is getting married to mahima)

final day {marriage day}


yesterday ka worked till 4 am morning so everybody said let her sleep she had worked soooooo much

but the kids they liked her so much that they were getting bored widout her and they were not

letting her sleep ..
Finally she wake up and again she started working and decorating the mandap ...
everybody was saying that if ka will do this much of work she 'll soon get sick..but she was not

listenning she was carring some decorative items and telling the workers how to decorate it..

and now it was night....

all the people of dulhan's side were waiting for dulha to come...
and ka was in the hotel she was checking all the arrangements and suddenly ro came there and he

said..
ro...hi
ka...hi
ro...mai tumse kuch kehna chhta hun
ka...dekho ro mere paas time nahi hai dulhe wale aate hi hongey ...waise ye arrangements un logo ko

pasand to aigi na..u thimk they will like it???
ro...ofcourse..akhir ye arrangements tumne jo kiye hain..tumhari har chiz bahut acchi lagti hai ...
ka...achha flirt kar rahe ho??
ro...wo to mai pehle din se kar raha hun ..tumhe aaj pata chala??...
ka...kya....????tumse baton me koi nahi jeet sakta ..
ro...siwaye tumhare..
ka...tum na... tumhe mai kya kahun..?????
ka in her mind...mai janti hun ro tum kya kehna chahte ho ..mai bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hun..

when dulha comes..all girls were so happy....

ka to her friend mahima...dekho to dulhe miya ke aane ki baat sun kar iske chehre par to bahaar aa

gayi...
mahima..ka tum na mujhe chidhana kab bandh karogi???
ka...ok ok mai tumhe nahi chidhaungi..

than when marriage was going on ro was taking care of mahendra's shoes bcoz if ka steals it they

have to pay the money..
ka made a plan to steal them..
ka to ro..
ka...ro tum mai tumse kuch kehna chahti hun..
ro...han mujhe maloom hai tum juta chori karne aayi ho na?
ka...ro tumse mai itni important baat kehne aayi hu aur tum ho ki juton ke pichhe pade ho..
ro...achha thik hai bolo..
ka...ro mai tumse ye baat pehle din se kehna chahti thi..
ro...bolo na..
[ro was concentrating on ka and a little girl came from back and took the shoes and went to the

kasturi's room]
ro...plz jaldi bolo..
ka...tumhe pata hai mai na ....mai na ....
ro...ab bakri ki tarah mai-mai hi karti rahogi ya kuch bologi bhi???
ka...I m sorry ro par maine na jute chura liye...
[ka was laughing and ro was shocked]

than ro ran behind her and caught her in her room...ro cathes her hand tightly and asked..
ro...ka mahendra ke jute kaha hain?
ka...nahi maloom
ro...mai bewakoof nahi hun mujhe pata hai jute tumhare paas hain..
ka...ro mera hath chhodo mujhe dard ho raha hai...
[ro leaves kas turi hand]
ka...{shouts and than runs away}...mai nahi bataungi ki jute kahan hai
ro...{shouts}...ti phir thik hai mai khud pata laga lunga ki wo jute tumne kahan chhupaye hain...

[ro searches so much but he didnt find them..than he goes to ka]
ro...ka tumne jute kahan chhu paye hain mujhe bata do..
ka...nahi bataungi..
[ro goes near her]
ro...ka bata do jute kahan hai
ka...nahi..
[ro goes more near]
ro...bata do..
ka...itne hi samajhdar ho to pata laga lo.
{she pushes him and runs away}


next part: ro proposes ka in the middle of all the guests of marriage..


plz plz reply me ur comments.. i am waiting for them eagerlyyyyyy.. plz guys dont do Kanjoosi in repling.. u can tell me my faults also...




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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so sweet,wonderfull,fantastic,fabulouas,romantic šŸ‘ i have no words or agar ho sake to aaj or abhi nxt part post karlo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz šŸ¤—

u know wat mujhe tumhara ff itna pasand aya ki mei use continusely read kar rahi hoon šŸ˜† once again jaldi se nxt prt post karo

Edited by *princess*15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awesome fantastic
it was so good that i read it 2 or 3 times
i loved it very much
now pls post the next part as soon as possible
i am very eager to read the next part
pls post it as soon as possible
once again i tell u thank u

😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmm ...
itz different ... like it ...!!!
ur story iz reall refreashin n different ..!!
white star thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg dis ff reminded me of soo manyy things... ahhh old memories šŸ˜›
ur ff is different but its cool šŸ˜†
do continue soon hun 😳
ufff these ff's are soo addicting
Edited by white star - 18 years ago

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