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Posted: 9 years ago
sooo finally maan confessed his feelings to geet

aur sab ne milke maan ko phasaya aur maan jealousy main sach bol gaya

hayeee wat a sweet confession
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CHAPTER 84. JHALLA! MERA AASHIQ JHALLA!

Day - 8 Friday

Sheeshmahal

Khushi giggled as she hid her face behind her hands. And then controlling her laughter, she pulled her hands away. But the moment her eyes fell on the decorations surrounding her, she giggled again and hid her face back behind her hands.

Today was the wedding night of Khushi Arnav Raizada nee Gupta and she sat on her marital bed waiting for her husband eagerly. Surrounding her were strings of flowers covering the bed like a canopy while rose petals were spread all over the bed. On the bedside table, milk was kept along with some fruits and just few minutes back, Geet, Anjali, Lavanya, Annie and NT had left the room after teasing her and making her blush. They left with the promise of sending her husband to her but only after they got some money out of him and Aakash. Khushi got so excited at the thought of her sister-in-laws asking money from ASR and her Jijaji, that she had actually got up from her bed ready to follow them. That is when it clicked to her that she was the bride and was supposed to sit in the room waiting for her husband. Amidst the laughter from the other ladies, Khushi rearranged herself on the bed.

Now Khushi was waiting for her husband to come and make her his in every way. She blushed at what was about to come but also could not deny that she was anticipating those moments since she fell in love with him. She was nervous too just like most of the girls but there was the anticipation too! Oh! How many times had she dreamed since she fell for him that Arnav would come into the room and lift her ghunghat and she would lift her eyes and see his face. Arre! Ghunghat se yaad aaya! Khushi slapped her forehead and lowered her ghunghat so that next thing she would see was Arnav's face.

As Khushi adjusted her duppatta so that enough part of it was hanging in front of her, her eyes fell on the curtains in front of her. Right now the curtains covered the room from outsiders but Khushi remembered when she had once seen the place without the curtains. Right behind the curtains was the glass door which led to the swimming pool. Khushi grinned as she remembered the first time she saw it. She had arrived to Dilli just few days back and had gotten employed as Maan's secretary at KC. Then she had visited Anjali and her family where Anjali had given her a tour of this place ending it with the poolside.

Khushi grinned as she remembered how she had envied the person who owned the room leading to the poolside. Water in front of her, surrounded by plants and in the late night, the stars shining in the sky including her parents; yes, she had coveted the room. And now it was hers! Humein toh pata bhi nahi tha us waqt jis insaan se hum jal rahe the woh aur koi nahi lekin Rakshas the, humaare hone waale pati. Aur ab jab yeh kamra humaara hua, toh ek taraf se toh hum apne aapse hi jal rahe the! Khushi giggled at the situation.

Suddenly, she heard the door knob clicking and Khushi realised that Arnav was entering the room. With thrill rushing down her body, she pulled the ghunghat letting it hide her face. Her hands felt restless with excitement, her heart thudded in her chest and the grin on her lips refused to go away. The door opened and Khushi held her breath. She looked up a little and lucky for her, her ghunghat was transparent enough to see that it was Arnav who entered the room. With butterflies fluttering through her stomach, she looked down. She was unable to look at her Arnavji anymore and with restlessness she waited for her Arnavji to come and sit by her, lift her ghunghat and look at her.

Khushi heard Arnav's footsteps come close to her bed and she gulped. She felt the urge to run away and yet another part of her could not wait for her husband anymore. She held her breath as the footsteps continued. She frowned when she realised that the footsteps was going to the other side, towards the wardrobe and bathroom area. Ab Arnavji wahaan kahaan chale? With confusion she raised her eyes, but there was no one in front of her. Just then she felt the bed shift by her right side and her heart started doing its marathon again. He was right behind her. Khushi grinned eagerly, curious to know what Arnavji will do next. She waited. She waited. And she waited.

Khushi frowned and lifted her ghunghat. Yeh kya hua? She turned to her right and her eyes widened. Arnav was lying beside her with his back to her. So gaye? Khushi's jaw dropped open. Shaadi ki raat ko so gaye? And Khushi did one thing that even her husband would have done in this situation. She opened her mouth and blurted out, "What the!"

"Arnavji!", Khushi spoke in worry. What if something was wrong with her Arnavji? Why else would a man hit the bed when it was his wedding night and his bride and the love of his life was waiting for him? So obviously he was ill.

"Arnavji!", Khushi shouted as she nudged him. But Arnav did not react at all. Now Khushi wanted to cry.

"Arnavji! Utth jaayiye na!", Khushi pleaded and that is when Arnav finally replied.

"Nahi uthunga!", was his reply.

Khushi heaved a sigh of relief. Phew! He was ok! Just then she frowned, then why was he trying to sleep? Doesn't he know what happens on wedding night?


"Kyun nahi uthenge aap? Aap jaante haina aaj humaari suhaag raat hai?", Khushi whined as she continued to nudge her husband.

"Main nahi uthunga kyunki main tumse naaraaz hun!", Arnav replied.

Khushi huffed, "Dekhiye Arnavji! Aapko agar humse naaraaz hona hai toh aap baad mein hote rahiyega! Aaj humaari suhaag raat hai! Pehle woh manaayiye!"

"Kya?", Arnav sat up and looked at her in shock.

Khushi's eyes widened as she realised what she said just now. Her cheeks burned red but she pushed away her embarrassment because Arnav was sitting up and she had to know her answer before he lied back down.

"Humaara matlab hai ki Arnavji aap naaraaz kyun hai?", Khushi asked.

Arnav growled, "Kyun naaraaz na houn? Tell me! I begged you! I begged, I cried, I groveled! Yaad hai! Subah jab tum humaare rishte ke liye manaa karke gayi thi! Kitna roya, kitna gidgidaaya tha tumhaare saamne! Par tum thi ki apni akad dikhaane pe adi thi! Ab main kyun tumhein pyaar karun? Kyun tumhein wife ka darja dun? Forget it! I am not going to forgive you for this!" He turned around to go to sleep again and Khushi grabbed his arm and pulled him closer.

When Arnav glared at her, she looked at him with a pout, "Arnavji! Par hum maan gaye na! Aaj hum aapki patni haina!"

Arnav cut her off with, "Haan! Par Geet ke kehne ke baad! Meri baat maani tum?"

"Par Arnavji! Woh waqt chala gaya! Ab yeh naya waqt hai! Kyun na hum yeh sab bhool ke, humaari zindagi ki nayi shuruvaat karein!", Khushi pleaded.

"No! No way! You did not want to marry me! So I won't treat you like my wife!", Arnav huffed, tugged his hand away and lied down. He turned away from her and Khushi pouted, "Arnavji! Suniye toh!"

Now what? Khushi wondered as she sat on the bed with a pout on her face. Paani phir gaya humaare suhaag raat pe! Sab kehte hain ki yeh raat dulhan ke zindagi ka sabse important day hota hai! Aur yeh Arnavji ise naaraaz rehke bita rahe hain! Hey Devi Maiyya! Ab hum kya karein? Ab iss Arnavji ko kaise manaayein? Ab inhein kaise samjhaaye ki humein pata hai ki hum galat hain? Kaise inse maafi maange? Aur kaise inse maafi dilwaaye? She continued to pout as she looked around and then her eyes fell on something it lit up. Patidev! Hum bhi aapki patni hai Dammit! Aapko iss raat ko barbaad karne nahi denge!

Arnav remained still on the bed as he smirked. Ab aayega mazaa! Lets see what you will do to win me over Khushi dear! Yes my dear readers, ASR was not angry at his wife at all. He was just teasing her. You see he was annoyed at the fact that Khushi made him suffer so much before she said yes to their marriage. He had begged, groveled, cried and yet he did not get a yes from her. At that time, he felt that he had no chance at getting his love as a part of daily life and that thought petrified him. The hopelessness and helplessness he felt at that moment was something he never wanted to feel ever in his whole life! Hence, he believed that he deserved a bit of revenge after the torture Khushi put him through in the morning.

Arnav waited with bated breath as he wondered what Khushi will do next. Will she go and ask their family to help him? Or will she continue to bombard him with her apologies till he relented? Or will she talk to her Devi Maiyya and ask her for some solution? Oh no! What if she cries? He cannot see her cry! As Arnav wondered on what to do next, he heard the tune his laptop made when someone switched it on. What the! Why is she opening my laptop? Don't tell me she is going to search how to appease me on google! Arnav blinked at that ridiculous idea. But before he could ponder more, music started playing from his laptop.

Jiska Aana Jigar Pe Lagaaye Chot

Arnav's eyes widened.

Jiske Jaane Se

Bomb Phate

Atom Bomb

Ho Jaaye Visphot

She is playing a song on my Laptop! Hey Devi Maiyya!

Aashiqon Ki Hai Shaamat

Ya Aafat Hai

Chaand Baby Hai Aayi

Qayamat Hai

Arnav blinked in confusion, unable to guess what song it was! Yeh kaunse movie ka gaana hai! Haven't heard it before! As he mused on what song it was, the song continued.

Aashiqon Main Jiska Title Titanic

Arnav listened to the song curiously wondering what was so special about the song that Khushi chose it!

Ooo... Aashiqon Main Jiska Title Titanic

Is she calling me Titanic? Arnav's ego bloated and he smirked.

Muaah Kinaara Dikha Karke Dooba De Gaya

His ego deflated. His face fell.

Jhalla

Mera Aashiq Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Balma Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Jhalla Wallah

Wallah

What the! Did she just call me jhalla aka an idiot?

Humne Samjha Tha Golden Jubilee Jise

Haaye Samjha Humne Tha Golden Jubilee Jise

Arnav blinked at the song's weird lyrics.

Woh Toh Matinee Dikha Karke Chumma Le Gaya

Arnav gritted his teeth at that. Seriously Khushi? Seriously?

Jhalla

Mera Aashiq Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Balma Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Jhalla Wallah

Wallah

Arnav refused to move now. He refused to even look at Khushi's face now. How dare she! How dare she call me Jhalla! I was planning to be angry at you only for a while, but now I definitely won't forgive you for the whole night! The music continued to play and he wondered what Khushi was doing. Must be waiting for me to get up in curiosity. Hmmph! Never! I am not going to look at you Khushi! Take that!

Khushi frowned as she noticed her Arnavji not moving. Itni curiosity bhi nahi ki dekhein ki hum kya kar rahein? She had been dancing and he did not even look. Ab hum kya karein? Nahi! Hum haar nahi maanenge! Hum Arnavji ko manaakar rahenge!

Mehfil Sajno Ki

Arnav frowned as he heard Khushi's bangles coming close to him.

Gentlemano Ki

He opened his eyes only to see his wife starting to dance in front of him.

Mehfil Sajno Ki Gentlemano Ki Hai

Mehfil Sajno Ki Gentlemano Ki Hai

Grabbing a bottle from nearby she imitated a drunk making him chuckle.

Bevda Koi Ho Jaaye Toh Aaye Mazaa

She sang along the song and dancing to the lyrics all the while signaling him to come closer.

Aao Nazron Se Peene Mein Kya Gunaah Hai

Bakhuda Kaise Peete Hai Roohafsha

Arnav stared as he saw Khushi in a never before avatar, dancing like a siren to woo him.

Jiske Lover Ki Khabar Pe Pairoom Hai

Dil Ki Breaking News Usko Sunaaye Koi

He sat up without realizing as he stared at his wife seducing him.

Kaise Nazar Se Kamar Ka Ratta Lage

His eyes went to her kamar and he stared as she continued to dance.

Usko Meri Geometry Bhi Dikhaaye Koi

Jhalla

Mera Aashiq Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Balma Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Jhalla Wallah

Wallah

Arnav came out of the trance remembering that he was supposed to be angry at her. He huffed. Did she really think that she can melt my anger with her dance? Forget it! And yet, as he ranted at her mentally, his eyes automatically went to his enticing wife, who dressed in the bridal red Saree, the same Saree that he gave her as a gift ages ago, continued to give some dhumkas making his eyes go right to her fair waist.

Arnav shook his head vigorously. No! No! NO! You are not supposed to focus on her kamar! Even though it is quite enticing, he mused. Again he shook his head. Focus Arnav focus! You are angry at her! Yes! I am angry at her and I am hitting the bed. He grabbed the blanket at the end of the bed and he lied back down, covering himself with the blanket.

Khushi huffed in annoyance. Itna naachne ke baad bhi nahi pighle? Ab hum kya karein?

Kya Bataayein

Jisko Sanam Maankar

Shab Bhar Mare

Yeh gaana sachchi mein humaari dil ki baat bata raha hai! Inse kya ummeed thi aur kya nikle yeh!

Haaye Jisko Sanam Maankar Shab Bhar Mare

She climbed on the bed.

Woh Kameena Subah Hote Phur Ho Gaya

Grabbing the blanket covering him, she pulled it away from his face in one swift motion. Arnav looked at her in shock.

Jisko Mohabbat Ka Teacher Samajhte Rahe

Crouching down, she let her fingers trail his cheek singing along the song.

Woh Phateechar Ek Lesson Mein Fail Ho Gaya

She pushed him a little in annoyance and got down from the bed. Imitating his angry expression, she copied his walk.

Kaske Jean Pant Gentleman Jo Bane

Raat Bhar Paijaame Se Ladta Raha

Grabbing his blanket she pulled it.

Hum Jagaate Rahe

As the blanket was about to slip off him, he sat up and grabbed it from his side.

Dil Jalaate Rahe

She tugged again and he tugged back.

Woh Jamhaai Rajaai Mein Lagaata Raha

Annoyed at his attitude, she left the blanket and Arnav who was still pulling, fell down and the force of the pull threw him right out of the bed.

Jhalla

Mera Aashiq Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Balma Jhalla

Wallah

Mera Jhalla Wallah

Wallah

Khushi started laughing as her husband fell down the bed.

Jhalla...

Arnav sat up on the floor and narrowed his eyes at his laughing wife.

Wallah...

You call me Jhalla? I will show you Jhalla! Arnav decided.

Wallah...

He got up from the floor and dusted his Sherwani.

Wallah...

The duppatta still hanging down his neck was pulled by him and thrown on the bed as he walked towards Khushi.

Mera Hero

Mera Aashiq

Mera Majnu

Mera Saiyyaan

Khushi finally noticed Arnav looking like a predator stalking towards her and her laughter died. She gulped and started walking backwards suddenly scared at this Arnav who walked towards her with purpose.

Mera Balma Wallah Haaye

Arnav walked towards her.

Mera Jhalla Wallah Haaye Haaye

Khushi stumbled backwards.

Hero Aashiq Jhalla Wallah

Saiyyaan Balma Jhalla Wallah

Her back slammed into something. She realised that the wall was behind her and she had nowhere else to go. "Arnavji!", she whispered in trepidation as her husband walked towards her with intense look in his eyes.

Jhalla

Jhalla

Jhalla

Aaa...

Jhalla

"I am a Jhalla! Right?", Arnav asked as he slammed his hands on the walls, caging her between them. Khushi stared at his face anxiously. She slowly nodded and when Arnav's eyebrow rose in surprise she shook her head vigorously. "Jhalla! Is it? Alright! Let me show you what kind of Jhalla I actually am!", Arnav whispered and her eyes widened. He leaned closer and proceeded to show Khushi for the whole night exactly what kind of Jhalla he actually was!

SONG DETAILS:

Song is from Ishaqaade (2012) and sung by Shreya Ghoshal. In 2012, someone made an Arshi VM on the remix version of this song and that is when I had the idea of Khushi dancing on this song on her wedding night while calling her husband Jhalla. Since then, I was eagerly waiting for this update, just so that I could write a song sequence on Arshi's suhaagraat.

So did you like the chapter?

Hope you do!

Next up is Maaneet wedding day! And reception of course!

Also just like in Arshi wedding chapter, there won't be actual marriage being shown here!

After all, enough writers have written the wedding rituals!

I would rather focus on reception where my readers would be invited!

Yes people, MG version has contest too!

CONTEST:

I am announcing a Contest for all my readers just like I did for Arshi reception!

Who is interested in going to Maaneet's reception?

Because it is in next update!

If you are interested, then please leave a post in the thread with your name or nickname, your message for Maaneet, your gift for them and what will you wear for their reception!

If you took part in this contest, you will get to be part of Maaneet's reception!

And lets not forget that you get to eat Punjabi dinner too!

Last date to post your answers is 28th January 2016!

Don't be shy! Do take part! I would love to have you there!

Taare Hain Baaraati Chaandni Hai Yeh Baaraat...

Jeevan Saathi Hum Diya aur Baati Hum...

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
yayyy...
im 1st to comment...
about update...
seriously i love the choice of song...its a very nice peppy no...
loved it...
kkgsr seduced asr..lolz
but what i like was khushii exclaiming what the...
and asr ...devi maiya...lolzz again...
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now about maaneet wedding ..

1. I m going to wear Sharara ...elegant one... anarkalli i had at arshi wedding cant repeat you see...have to maintain standard...

2. white gold diamond or classic kundan jewellry with lots of colourful bangles on one hand and simple studded watch with chime bracelet.

3. most important gift...
broom and belan to bajaofy maan whenever he tries to be msk in front of her...and ear plugs to maan helping him preventing his ears from gmsk blabber...lolzzz
jokes apart...
i would give them ghandhar sculpted statue of lord shiva and sati... u known sati reborn as parvati maa...as soni reborn again in terms of love as ...Maan's Geet...
and
i would also give then pomegranate show piece bcz it brings good luck...martial prosperity ...health...compatibility at last lots of children like its seeds...
private paltan of msk and gsk...
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ps thats one of the longest comment ever made by me..
taaliyaan👏👏👏
Edited by lively-piia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. Khushi and her Jhalla😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
A Fabulous and Vibrant Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
wat the..? hehehe :-)
awww khushi ki suhagrat pr pani fir gaya...
omg...hilarious. .superb updt...
arnv actually naraz nahi tha..but thoda attitude to banta he...bechare ko kitna tadpaya tha...
nd song selection was mind blowing. ..
man ne ki jgah arnv aur gussa ho gya...lollzzz
waiting to know...wat will happen now..?
nd.. also wanted to know about maan n geet..
next part maaneet ka updt krna...pllzzz
Edited by maaneetcrazy24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved Khushi and her jhalla...

Regarding Maaneet's wedding reception, I would like to attend it wearing Peach and gold Elegant anarkali, matching Kundan set and lots of Peach and golden colour bangles. As a gift, I would love to give them a silver Ganesh Idol.
Edited by fffan123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update...finally everything is right...continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
maaneet marriage...wow...abb toh khushi gaya...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all ur update was amazing hats off to you!!👏
1. My name is Ammu nickname and for their reception I will be wearing a beige gown with a jewelled collar and with red roses and green jewel design on it. It's the gown in my profile pic
2. The gift I want to give Maaneet is honeymoon tickets to Canada Toronto with a full cruise and your to the Cn tower and Niagara Falls.
3. I want to wish them a very happy married life and want to advice maan that whatever happens he should never give up as true love is a blessing and he is very lucky to have gotten his true love and soulmate after all his hardships.


P.s I want to see a lot of AB and geet bonding since she helped him a lot

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