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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3:
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Naina looks up and says 'hai woh kya jaana ? Ke larkh itna bawkoof hoota hai' Ashok grabs her arm to pull her closer 'where are you going ?' Naina stares in his direction with confusion 'To play with all these wonderful kids, they mean the world to me'

Meanwhile, Ishita and Shagun listened to the voice recording 'Naina, Naina, Naina... So young and fun but yet so naive, shaadi tuh tum Ashok sa he kar ho gi' ... Ishita looks over to shagun 'Is this fair on Naina ? To leave her with him' Shagun responds 'I know but Naina is the only one who can face Ashok without get caught' ... 'Par hun Naina ko ...' says Ishita 'We'll find a way out of this' replies Shagun.

On the other hand Naina takes her shoes off and ties her hair, as she runs around with the children, Ashok looks on and thinks 'she's one big child herself and smiles it shouldn't be too hard to convince her to marry me' Naina looks over at Ashok and waves him to come over. He smirks as he makes his way over, he grabs her by the waist and say's i have caught your di and she's mine now.

Naina elbows Ashok and run, she looks back at him and laughs he run towards her and slips in the mud. Naina comes closer and says 'awh poor Mr Khanna ...' Suddenly Ashok pulls her arm and pulls her down 'here have a mud bath with me' laughs Ashok. Naina looks are Ashok in anger 'you look cute when you are angry' do i ? Let me show you how cute i can be she pulls her hair to the side as she leans forward to kiss asks cheek.

All of a sudden she hears kids laughing in the background, lily approaches them 'you two both fight like little kids and we're the kids here' Naina heres more giggling 'is that you Armaan ?' Armaan comes forward and say's 'app uncle for kiss kaar na vaali teeh ? He giggles again, 'kissie kissie' Ashok smirks and says 'hai beta ...' Naina smacks Ashok on the arm 'shut up' ... 'Omg kids look at that ... Ashok kisses Naina on the cheek she puts on a fake smile and hugs him.

They both head towards the office to ask for spare clothes. The event organiser and manager both laugh and ask them how it happened, Naina and Ashok both start talking then stop and look at each other. Naina says 'well basically it's all his fault' Ashok pulls a face and says 'my fault ?' The head organiser asks them to stop playing the blame game and gives them a fresh pair of clothes, both of you go get changed ... As she points them into the same direction, in the same room.

Naina's outfit


Ashok's outfit


'We have to get changed in the same room, this is not happening ?!' Says Naina. Ashok laughs and responds back as he gets closer to her 'you didn't seem to have any problems the night before ?' He runs his hands up and down Naina arm but wait there has to be a shower here right ? Naina looks over 'yes ! There must be for the first time you have actually said something smart' she goes back out and asks where the showers is the manager takes them over and says this our showers ... Naina rushes in and realises there is no lock on the door, she calls for Ashok and says come back and guard my door ! Ashok says 'i have a better idea why don't i come in there and guard it ? Or even better we can shower together ?' Naina rolls her eyes and says just stand outside.

Naina takes a shower, whilst Ashok stands out asking her whether she found a suitable husband yet ? Naina says 'No but my mum is planning to send someone over to my office, since your my boyfriend now you'll probably like to introduce yourself to him too' Ashok smirks and laughs he thinks to himself 'my plan is working' Naina also thinks she is one step closer. Naina comes out of the shower wrapped around in her towel, Ashok say's lets go to the room so you can get changed, Naina goes into the room and changed, she tries to zip but the back of the suit but isnt able to, she calls Ashok into the room. Ashok can you please zip me up ? In all honesty i just want to zip you down ? Naina looks at him & says come on hurry up, as she turns around Ashok is mesmerised, how do i look questions Naina ? Ashok jaw drops ... Naina say's 'that's all i needed to know'

Go take a shower now, i'll stand outside for you too ... Ashok takes and shower and gets changed 'how do i look ?' Naina faces him and folds her arms 'hmm i've always liked a guy in a kurta' They both go towards the office and ask for their leave ... Naina says goodbye to the children and walks over to the car with Ashok. So who's car are we taking ? Lets take yours says Naina i'll have mine picked up later. Naina goes to grab her purse from the car boot & sits in Ashok's car, they drive off in a couple of miles they the police stopping passengers and asking them questions.

Naina rummages through her purse, what are you doing ? Asks Ashok ? Well im trying to find a ring and i found one ! Naina places the ring on her ring finger as they approach the junction ... The officer stops them and asks them to get out the car ... Naina and Ashok both get out, the officer says im looking for a young couple they have run away together. Ashok say's yes but we are a married couple ? The officer asks for proof Naina shows her ring & say's see we're married 😊 the officer say's 'okay but why did you marry him ? There are plenty of good looking men like myself ? 'Naina says 'officer, what can i say my mum chose him for me and his big muscular arms was the reason why i said yes' Aur tum na iss ka saath kyu shaadi ke ? Says the officer ? Ashok says 'look at her, she has everything i want'

The officer say's ask then more questions and say's when did you get married ? Naina says a year ago ... The officer looks at Ashok and says bacha ? Don't you have any children ? Naina looks over and says 'See i told you people would ask us that ! He's not a fan of kids, that's why !' Naina sheds a tear ' I really want children, but he's not ready' The officer looks over at Ashok and says 'App aja he iss ko ek bacha do ga' Ashok say's children don't grow on trees, the officer looks at and tells him to lean forward he whispers in his ear and says 'honeymoon ? Suhagraat ?' Ashok smirks and says sure. The officer asks says they can leave and tells Ashok to remember what he said . Naina gets in the car & looks at Ashok 'what did he say to you ?' asks Naina ? They begin to drive off ... Ashok says nothing much, he just told me a way to give you a baby ? Because that's what you want ? Right ? Naina rolls her eyes and says 'of course ? and laughs i cannot believe that ! The only thing he asked was why don't we have kids ? Ashok looks over at Naina and says 'If you want to become a mum, i'll do it ...' Naina laughs, Ashok smiles and begins to laugh too, Naina says what's so funny ? He told me to go on a honeymoon but little does he know we went on one yesterday.

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
lovely update dr.update soon.thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
we all know preet concentrates on one character Ashok Devar ji 🤣 .. thanks for posting it here tas. i was reading through mail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting re..
Ashok might change eventually..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Wowww! Lovely update! Will ashok actually fall for Naina n vice versa! Looks like both are planning. But im kinda worried wht if naina gets pregnant!
Hope not! Cont soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Naina n ashok vl definately fall fr each odr
Let's c how ishgun plan works
Or ashok turns into a new leaf
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Posted: 10 years ago
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extremely sorry for very late reply dear

belated happy new year dear

amazing concept dear and it is different also

plan by ishu and shagun was nice but feel bad about naina

sorry dear i hate ashok so much but in this story he is somewhat nice

ashok flirt with naina was nice

more over ashok naina fall in ashok somewhat

naina in event and chatting with children was cute dear

ashok is nice when he is with naina but have a feeling that he is somewhat acting

hope ashok fall in naina plan not naina fall in ashok

fight in mud was cute

naina seducing ashok was cute dear

continue soon dear

please pm me dear


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

extremely sorry for very late reply dear
its okay 😊

belated happy new year dear
same to you 😆

amazing concept dear and it is different also
plan by ishu and shagun was nice but feel bad about naina
sorry dear i hate ashok so much but in this story he is somewhat nice
ashok flirt with naina was nice
more over ashok naina fall in ashok somewhat
naina in event and chatting with children was cute dear
ashok is nice when he is with naina but have a feeling that he is somewhat acting
hope ashok fall in naina plan not naina fall in ashok
fight in mud was cute
naina seducing ashok was cute dear
I'll say thanks to you on Preet's behalf 😃

continue soon dear
Depends on Preet 😉


please pm me dear
Sure 😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Chapter 4:
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Naina says what's so funny ? He told me to go on a honeymoon but little does he know we went on one yesterday. Ashok asks Naina how did you know they were looking for a couple ? Naina frowns and glares at Ashok 'Well i goggled the local news in this area ... Duh...So clearly, I'm the smart one in this relationship'

'We're in a relationship now too says Ashok. Naina smacks his arm 'well your the one who said we're ? and your just lucky i took this ring off before boarding the plane otherwise we would be screwed' Ashok smirks and says which way is your office ? I'll drop you off and then head out myself ? Aren't you just sweet ? says Naina ... Turn left, carry on straight for a 3 miles and then right.

Naina arrives at her office, she looks at her assistants and asks for Ajay to come in her cabin. She takes a seat and waits for Ajay, he enters her cabin and Naina asks is this office sound proof ? He nods his head. Naina gets up and hugs Ajay, i missed you Bhai Im sorry you had to come on a separate flight ! But what would i do ? I just helped to Ishita and Shagun, but what about you ? Says Ajay ... Im your younger brother and i can't even help you ! Well you can now Ajay I need you to tap into Ashok's phone and see who he's calling ... That's how we'll know who informing Ashok ?

Ajay asks Naina 'but how will this help Ishita and Shagun ?' Naina folds her names and says 'because if we find the informer we'll know what Ashok is planning, i also need you to make some business papers once i marry Ashok' the clauses within the papers must state {If Ashok divorces me after receiving partnership in my business it will bounce back and become mine once again} another clause you will have to add is {If Ashok is found cheating on me with another girl in the marriage he will have to divorce me without a fight and give back the share of the business}

Ajay do you have any other idea ? 'Yeah ? Don't marry him' If i don't marry him who else will ? We gotta get him ... Oh shit ! I need you to create a fake article first so him or his brother which states im directly linked to Raman Bhalla ... Because i know he'll do some research on me especially his brother ! Ajay says done 'i have tapped his phone and made that article which will appear as a first suggestion but one thing i don't understand is you have done hacking and everything else you could of easily done this, Ajay as much as i love you ! You asks some stupid question.

Our back grounds ironically are both related we studied the same subject but all these other businesses are cover ups for what we really do. Ajay laughs and says 'yeah of course being we have to appear as boring business people rather than those cool undercover agents !' Naina looks over and says 'This why im older and your younger'

Suddenly, a knock on the door 'Come in' Ashok enters the room Naina smiles and hugs Ashok 'heyy you, i really didn't expect seeing you here !' Ashok says 'why have i disturbed an important meeting ?' Ajay replies and says 'Well you could say that ? I'm Ajay Naina's brother' Ashok smiles and greets Ajay ... What about that guy who was coming ? Oh him ? He never came ... Says Naina

All of a sudden Suraj calls Ashok 'Naina is Raman's sister !' Ashok says 'what ? Wait ? I'm coming home' Ashok rushes out of the office and head home. Naina and Ajay smiles looks like our plan worked 'ab tu ya gaya' says Naina

Ashok arrives home and say's Suraj ! What are you saying Naina brother is Raman ? Suraj says not blood related but she does respect him as a brother and has taken full brotherly responsibility as well as this article states that Raman loves her as his own sister' Ashok says 'perfect, i have had a change of heart' Suraj says 'what do you mean ?' 'Well i was planning to kill Raman through Shagun but she failed only if Naina came before then no one would get hurt' Suraj says 'Are you crazy ? Im glad you didn't go that way you have done enough damage to our business' Ashok says 'Now Naina will be mine and so will her business but most of all Raman will beg me to have his little sister back and away from me'

Chapter 5

Edited by Tc_Tc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice planning..
Both bro-sis did a neat job..
Waiting for Khanna to fall in this trap..
Cont soon yaar, sorry still I dunno your name..😆

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