Twinj TS : Yeh Pyaar nahi toh or kya hai? Part 3 on pg 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Hey, thanks for another lovely update. You are doing a great job and your story has a bit of everything, be it emotions, laughter or romance. Keep it up !! Waiting for the next update. Wish you a very Happy and a Prosperous New Year !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
First of all,Happy New Year,Dear...😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Heart-Touchingly explained.😭
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Super se upar wala update. Awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update dear
i loved it very much
it was really emotional
uv and anita the devils rotten in hell
kunj hero line was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hyy dear.. ur an amazing writer.. loved it
Al the scenes are beautiful... plzzz update soon yar m waiting n sory for being late...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Thank you for this very sweet and emotional update.
Loved TwiNJ saving each other and twinkle calming only when Kunj is near,very cute,loved their bonding .
Uv and Anita should rot in jail forever.
Kunj bashing UV was great. You are doing an awesome job.
Please update soon waiting impatiently for what's going to happen next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update is too long read at your own risk.
Part 3
It was six in morning when twinkle opened her eyes, rubbing her eyes.
As she opened her eyes she saw the most beautiful and charming sight of the world, kunj was watching straight at her face.
Kunj said "good morning. Itni jaldi uth gayi? Kuch chahiye tha?"
Twinkle asked "bas khul gayi nind. Tum batao. Tum kaise uth gaye itni jaldi, so jao thodi der or you still look sleepy."
Kunj gave her a sheepish smile "no i am done"
Twinkle replied "kya hua? Yeh smile kuch kehna chah rahi hai, lekin kya?"
Kunj said "umm. Nothing. Ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?"
Twinkle asked "tum sari rat soye nahi?"
Kunj avoided her eyes and tried to make an excuse "main abhi aya. Tum rest karo"
Twinkle placed her hand on his face and turned it to face herself. "Kyu nahi soe rat bhar?"
Kunj said "who said ki main nahi soya? Obviously i slept, bas mind thoda alert tha tumhe leke."
Twinkle just stared at him and tears formed in her eyes "or kitna karoge kunj mere liye?"
Kunj wiped her tears and said "jitna kar paunga usse thoda zada. And tu bht dar gayi thi rat ko, so agar jag bhi gaya ek rat toh kya ho gaya? Chill kar yar. And don't worry main in sab chizo ka badla le lunga jab tu thik ho jaegi"
Twinkle didn't said anything, though she wanted to say thousand of things but decided to say in a special way.
By 7 leela came, "kaisi hai puttar?"
Twinkle smiled and said "thik hu maa ab."
Leela said to kunj "chal puttar ab ghar ja, or aram kar"
Kunj tried to say no but twinkle spoke "ha kunj ab ja. Or kuch ghante soke phir dopahar ko aa jaio"
Kunj's face fell and he asked like babies "ab tujhe meri zarurat nahi hai, tabhi bhej rahi hai na? Thik hai ja raha hu main"
Without listening anything he went from there, twinkle didn't said anything as she wanted kunj to take rest. already he didn't slept for one full night.
She was sad, leela came to her and ask "kya hua?"
Twinkle said "maa vo puri rat mere liye nahi soya, or ab bhi agar main use apne pas rakhungi toh mujhse zada selfish koi nahi hoga"
Leela smiled and caressed her hair " koi bat nahi twinkle. Tu uska acha soch rahi hai na, ab tu agar jane ke liye na kehti toh vo bilkul na jata. Vaise ek bat bta?"
Twinkle asked "ha main bolo"
Leela said "main aaj bhi teri dost hu na jisse sab kuch share kare? Ya in faslo ne hume dur kar dia"
Twinkle said "maa aap aise kyu bol rahe ho? Yeh pehli bar thodi tha jo hum lade. Or vaise bhi maa ladai karne se pyar badta hai. Maa agar aap kal vali bat ko leke pucha rahe ho toh mujhe maaf kardo, mujhe bhi samajh nahi aya ki aisa kya hua ki mujhe secured sirf kunj ke aane se feel hua, meri apni maa jinke rehte mujhe kisi ka dar nahi tha kal unke hone se bhi vo dar nahi gaya. Pata nahi maa mujhe kya ho gaya hai."
Leela said "sach kahu toh puttar kal mujhe bura laga tha lekin main khush hu ki meri twinkle apne pati se pyar karti hai, ki meri twinkle ko koi mujhse bhi zada pyar karta hai. Hum maa baap apni bacho ko har khushi dete hai duniya ki, par tum betio ko kabhi na kabhi sab chod ke jana hi hota hai. Agar tere papa hote toh vo bht khush hote ki jis twinkle ko humne itne lad pyar se pala ab vo agar humse vida hui bhi hai toh ek aise insan ke sath jo tere girne pe tujhe tham leta hai, tujhe uski zarurat hoti hai toh apni nind tak bhul jata hai, sirf teri khushi ke liye vo puri duniya idhar se udhar kar lega. Bas puttar isse zada hume kya chahiye."
Twinkle was listening to each word, her eyes moistened on mentioned her dad. Everything was fine but pyar? Is she in love with him.
Twinkle said "maa hum dono ek dusre ko pyar nahi karte, yeh shadi humne sirf isliye ki taki aap sab khush raho.yeh shadi mere or kunj ke liye sirf ek samjhota hai."
Twinkle thought leela would be hurt listening to this truth but she had a smile on her face.
Twinkle asked confused "maa .mjhe laga aap hurt hoge sach jankar lekin aap toh smile kar rahe ho"
Leela said "agar jo maine kal dekha agar vo na dekhti toh ha mujhe dukh hota ki apni beti ko is shadi mein kyu bandha lekin ab koi dukh nahi sirf khushi hai"
Twinkle asked "aisa kya dekh lia maa apne?"
Leela replied "kal kunj ki jagah tera khud ko knife marvana uske bad kunj ka itna care karna"
Twinkle said "nahi maa aap galat smjh rahe ho. Maine kunj ki jaan bachayi kyuki yuvi ne dhamki di thi ki vo kunj ko marke mujhse shadi karega. Main bas dar gayi thi, or use uski kisi chal mein kamyab nahi hone dena chahti thi. Or kunj ke liye main uski sirf responsibility hu isliye vo itna concerned tha"
"Agar sirf zimedari thi toh uski ankhon mein aansoo na hote kal" bebe said.
Mother daughter turned to the door to look at the source of this voice.
Bebe said "mujhe maaf karna maine tumhari batein suni. Main toh bas hal chal puchne ayi thi twinkle ka"
Twinkle and leela in unison said "nahi bebe apko mafi mangne ki zarurat nahi"
Bebe said "kaisi hai puttar? Tune toh hume dara hi dia tha"
Twinkle said "main thik hu bebe. Aap kaisi hai ab?"
Bebe said "bilkul changi hu puttar. Ha toh main keh rahi thi agar vo tujhe sirf zimedari samajhta toh kal rota na"
Twinkle said "bebe aap dono ko galatfehmi hai. Itne time se sath hai hum thoda bht toh attachment hai hi, isliye roya hoga" twinkle told them but she herself was shocked her sadu sarna cried for her? Why?
Leela replied "chal thik hai. Tujhe nahi manna mat man sirf kuch saval puchungi or unke bare mein sochio or khud ko jawab dio. Agar yeh rishta samjhote ka hai toh tujhe hurt kyu hua jab usne yuvi ko apni priority banayi, samjhote ke rishte mein koi expectations nahi hoti phir tune kyu expect kia ki vo tujhe believe kare?
Kya tujhe sach mein yeh dar tha ki yuvi tujhse shadi kar paega tabhi tune kunj ko bachaya? Yeh tu bhi janti hai ki yuvi ki itni himat nahi ki vo hum sabke hote hue tujhe nuksan pohchaye. (ignore the episode while reading this line😆)
Yeh sab batein sochio or khud ko jawab dio hume nahi."
Bebe spoke "or agar tu uski sirf responsibility hai na toh vo ab sidha dopahar ko hi ayega. Kyuki kal jo dar tujhe khone ka maine uski ankhon mein dekha, use dekhkar main bol sakti hu ki vo tujhe akela nahi chodega. Vo abhi thodi der mein aa jayega"
Twinkle was lost in her thoughts, but before she could think further door opened and entered her husband. She was shocked to see him so early, it must be only 1-2 hours that he left.
Bebe gave her a I-told-you smile. Leela asked "kunj putar tu phir aa gaya? Tujhe kaha tha na dopahar tak aio. Tujhe itna bhi bharosa nahi hai humpe?"
Kunj spoke immediately "nahi maa. Kaisi batein kar rahe ho aap. Main fresh hoke aa gaya, or mujhe nind nahi aa rahi thi toh maine socha aa hi jau"
Leela replied knowing that he was making excuse "acha acha. Mujhe nahi pata tha puri rat na sone par bhi nind nahi ati."
Doctor came saving kunj from other questions.
Doctor caMe to her and checked her "how are you Mrs. Sarna now?"
Twinkle replied "main thik hu ab doctor uncle, bas thoda pain hai. Baki thik hu"
Doctor replied "ha vo pain thoda rahega. But you will be fine soon. And aap kaisi hai Mrs. Sarna(bebe)?"
Bebe replied "main bhi thik hu doctor. Ab bas yaha se chuti de do"
Everyone laughed. Doctor said "ha bas aaj apko chuti bhi mil jajayegi"
Bebe "chalo achi bat hai"
Doctor left, leela and bebe too left leaving twinj alone.
Kunj sat with her but was angry on her for sending him home.
Twinkle asked "kya hua muh kyu fula rakha hai?"
Kunj replied "mujhe ghar kyu bheja?"
Twinkle said "konsa tum ghar ruk gaye. Aa hi gaye vapis"
Kunj replied "tere liye aya hu twinkle. Ab main ja raha hu or aunga bhi nahi vapis"
Twinkle said "acha sorry baba. Par itni selfish nahi hu main ki puri rat tum nahi soye or ab bhi tumhe na sone du"
Kunj replied "main yaha bhi so sakta hu twinkle. Ghar hu kyu bheja"
They were literally fighting like kids.
Twinkle said "than sleep on that bed. Abhi"
Kunj kept his head on bed and said "nahi main yahi so jaunga."
Twinkle said ruffling his hair "ole mela baby. Soja mere bache"
Kunj said "stop being my mother"
Twinkle shouted "haww. Tumne mujhe maa kaha. Jab khud kal itni care ki thi toh tab kya bade bhai ki tarah ki thi?"
Kunj shouted "bhai. Dimag kharab hai tera? Bolne se pehle soch toh lia kar..."
He was cut off in between by shouting of bebe. "Kya ho raha hai yaha?"
Twinkle said "bebe, maa main ise aise balon mein hath ferte hue bola "ole mela baby soja mera bacha. Or isne bola maa ki tarah behave mat kar. "
Kunj said "phir tune bhi toh mujhe bhai bola. Main kya tera bhai hu?"
Bebe and leela smiled, seeing them kunj realised what twinkle spoke and he was embarrassed.
Leela asked again she was enjoying "kaise kia?"
Twinkle again ruffled his hair and repeated her line. Kunj this time said "chup hoja meri maa"
Twinkle said "yeh dekho yeh phir mujhe maa bol.." She saw the faces of both ladies and realised what she has been saying infront of them. She was embarrassed.
Leela and bebe laughed. Bebe said "tum dono rest karo hum bahar hi hai. Hamare pagal bacho"
They both gave a nervous smile to them.
As they left kunj said "tujh mein sach mein akal nahi hai. 2 bar tune same bat repeat ki. Had hai"
Twinkle said "toh tum mujhe rok bhi toh sakte the"
Kunj said "ya right"
Kinj kept his head on bed and within seconds sleep engulfed him.
Twinkle's thought drifted back to what her maa was saying. She thought to herself "Vaise mujhe kab se yuvi se dar lagne laga. Kya mujhe sach mein yeh dar tha ki yuvi mujhse shadi kar lega ya main sirf kunj ki salamati chahti thi. Kya vo dar isliye tha ki ab main kunj se dur nahi hona chahti, lekin kyu? Kya mujhe sach mein usse pyar ho gaya hai?"
She was thinking about all these things when her gaze fell on a sleeping kunj, who was sleeping peacefully with a pout on his lips.
She so wanted to kiss his lips. She slapped her thoughts when realised what she was thinking. She caressed his face, and than caressed his hair. She kept on doing that, and within minutes she too drifted to sleep.

It was five years since they slept.
They were sleeping peacefully when kunj felt warm warm feeling on his neck and face, ticklish feeling. He opened his eyes to find two cute girls giggling, tickling his neck. He lifted his face to get proper view and realized that twinkle's hand was covering his face.
He slowly picked her hand and placed a kiss there.
Than he saw other sources. He found two really cute and chubby girls one was trying to wake twinkle and one was trying to wake kunj.
As he observed closely, he found both to be twins. Both were wearing same clothes.
Kunj got up and lifted her in his arms.
"Hi baby. Aap kon ho cutie pie?" Kunj asked that girl.
Who in response just giggled and made some voices, in her language said hi.

On other hand twinkle was sleeping when she felt her cheeks being pulled, some laughter voices.
She scrunched her eye brows and opened her eyes, to find the most beautiful sight in front of her.
Kunj was lifting one baby girl and was making her laugh. And than she saw another princess dressed in same clothes, pulling her cheeks. She always loved kids, she in excitement with a jerk tried to get up but ended up hurting herself. She screamed but slowly. "Aah"
That baby who was playing with twinkle's cheeks and hair stepped back she got scared. And kunj too got alert, he put the girl down and came to her. "Kya hua twinkle? "
Twinkle spoke "main toh bas us baby ko uthane ke liye uth rahi thi, main bhul gayi ki mujhe chot lagi hai"
Kunj blasted on her "what the hell is wrong with you twinkle? Had hai yar. Thoda toh apna khayal rakh lia kar. Mujhe bol deti main na leke ata inhe? Seriously yar twinkle apni nahi toh oro ke bare mein soch lia kar"
Both the girls were standing in a corner, they got scared.
Twinkle too blasted "2 din se yaha hu. Irritate ho rahi hu, par tumhe thodi koi parvah hai. Bas bat bat pe dantna hai. Pak chuki hu bed pe leti leti, i want to go home. But le it be, you just keep on scolding me" she turned her face to other side.
Kunj in fit of anger again shouted on her, he need to do things good.
He turned around and smiled at that girls, they too smiled.
He brought both girls and lifted them, he made them sit on her bed and asked them to give her kissi.
Girls happily placed kisses on her both cheeks, kunj too took the opportunity and started kissing twinkle's cheek. Saying sorry to her.

Twinkle was sitting, trying hard to control her tears, she thought "nahi maa yeh sad sarna mujhse pyar nahi kar sakta. Yeh mujhe har bat pe dantta hai bas..."
She was brought back to reality when she felt so many kisses on her cheeks. She saw both girls kissing her, and than saw kunj taking the advantage and kissing her cheeks saying sorry.
There moment was disturbed by click of door, there entered an unknown lady, worry written on her face.
She was calling for manya ans sanya, she saw the moment and apologized. "I am sorry, actually my daughters are no where i m finding them from last half hour"
She than heard two voices calling her "maa maa"
Her face lighten up seeing them, she rushed to them and took them in arms, she cried hugged them kissed them. TWINJ got emotional seeing the scene.
Twinkle said "we are really sorry. Hume pata nahi tha ki yeh gum ho gayi hai. And yeh itni pyari hai ki dhyan hi nahi aya ki yeh kon hai"
Kunj too said "ya. We are really sorry. BTW your daughters are really beautiful like angels.
That lady said "its ok. Thanku that aapne inhe yahi rakha, nahi toh kahi or jati toh problem hoti. Vaise bhi girls ki safety bht zaruri hai. Thanku so much"
Twinj said "mention not"
For one last time they hugged them and kissed them and both the girls left.
Twinkle and kunj were happy.
Kunj said "mujhe bhi baby girl chahiye. Tumhe?"
Twinkle said "betia papa ki hoti hai, or main toh apni maa ke close hu kuki papa toh the hi nahi. Toh mujhe bhi hamesha se beti chahiye thi, jiska bond tumhare sath itna acha ho. Ki main jo moments apne papa sath nahi spend kar payi vo tumhare through karu. And vo mere bhi close hogi hi"
Kunj came to her and hugged "aww le mela baby."
Twinkle than realised what they were talking and kunj too realised. Both had a crimson shade on there cheeks.
Like seriously they were planning for there babies.
Suddenly both craved for that scene to happen in there lives, both want that they should also have a bundle of happiness there happiness.
Kunj again said sorry but twinkle said "ek shart pe maaf karungi"
Kunj said "kya?"
Twinkle said "main hamesha se chahti thi ki main hospital mein admit hou or meri friends mere liye fast food laye hide karke or main khau. Or vaise bhi main bore ho chuki hu yaha pe"
Kunj said "pagal ho gayi hai? Tabiyat kharab hai teri. Main kuch nahi la raha"
Twinkle said "sun. Plz ja yaha se, sirf responsibility hi hu na. Cool. Mat kar kuch mere liye. Or ha mere liye nind sacrifice karne ki zarurat nahi hai, ghar chala ja vapis mat aio ab. Plz leave kunj"
Kunj went from tgere, he was hurt listening that word 'responsibility'.

At night twinkle was sleeping, her room was dark. As said by her kunj didnt came to hospital after that, leela came and sat by her side.
Twinkle's sleep was disturbed when she felt something covering her face and mouth. Due to dark she couldn't see the person, she was scared that it was none other than yuvi.
She felt herself carried in arms, she protestes but all went in vein.
She was breathing heavily sweat bids covered her face. She cursed herself for sending kunj home.
She felt she was seated very carefully. She heard the sound of door shut, through which she guessed she was in a car. Within seconds she heard other door also shut.
The person first removed the tape from her mouth, as the tapse was removed she said "yuvi mujhe chod de. Plz. Bachao koi hai plz help. Kunj"
Than her eyes were uncovered and the person she saw infront calmed her down. "Kunj" she cried tears of happiness.
Suddenly she realised it was not yuvi it was. "Kunj yeh sab kya hai?"
Kunj said picking some things from back seat. And handed to twinkle "le tera fast food. Tu bht adventurous hai na so maine socha, sab kuch thoda hat ke hona chahiye. Main doctor se tere discharge ki bat kari he agreed to discharge you and than i told maa to be with you for sometime. As soon as you slept she went home and i came there. "
Twinkle still was shivering "dimag kharab hai tera? Pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi. "
Kunj replied "ole mela baby. Dar gaya. Tu toh meri sherni hai na?"
Twinkle replied "mazak mag kar kunj. Yeh dekh meri heartbeat kitni tez ho gayi" without thinking she took his hand and placed on her chest. Kunj was shocked by her sudden action, he blushed as his hand touched her chest (not in a vulgar way).
Kunj asked glaring straight into her eyes "itna trust hai mujh pe? Ki bina soche mera hath vaha rakha, kahi koi fayda uthaya toh, Jaise farmhouse pe uthaya tha"
Twinkle than realized where his hand was, she asked from her 'us rat ke bad bhi, i trust kunj?'
Twinkle replied "i don't know us rat kya hua. Lekin jitna time tere sath thi vo comfort level apne aap ban gaya"
Kunk replied "toh phir let me tell you. Us rat main nahi vo sab yuvi ne kia. Goa mein usne bataya tha mujhe"
Twinkle was shocked "or tum phir bhi uspe trust karte rahe?"
Kunj said ignoring the topic "vo sab hum bad mein discuss karenge. Tu pehle yeh sab toh kha jo main tere liye laya hu"
Twinkle was hurt and that was visible on her face.
Kunj saw that hurt, he took her hand and placed on his heart "trust karti hai?"
Twinkle replied "ha"
Kunj said "toh abhi kuch mat bol. Is bare mein paka bat karenge. Ghar jate hi karenge. Par abhi nahi, yeh time teri wish puri karne ka hai"
Twinkle for some time let it go, she asked "jab mana kia tha toh kyu laye?"
Kunj replied "kuki meri syapa queen ki wish thi. Teri har khwaish puri karunga twinkle"
Twinkle smiled, she pulled his cheeks "aww. So cute"
Kunj replied "oye. Cute nahi hu main"
Twinkle loved teasing him "cute toh tum ho"
Kunj replied irritated "whatever. Le tu, momos laya hu, noodles, dahi bhale, tikki or gol gappe"
Twinkle's eyes twinkled seeing the food.
Twinkle said tasting all things one by one "haye. Zindagi kitni achi ho jati hai agar khana mil jaye vo bhi man pasand. Thanks kunj. Bht yummy hai. "
Kunj was just staring at her with love filled eyes. Twinkle was looking really cute while relishing all the food items, relishing that much ki she forgot to ask from him.
Twinkle after few bites realized kunj didn't ate anything. "Kunj tum kyu nahi kha rahe?"
Kunj said "yad aa gaya ki main bhi hu?"
Twinkle gave him a sheepish smile and stuffed one spoon full of tikki in his mouth.
Kunj struggling to eat "aah. Twinkle fook toh marti yar garam thi."
Twinkle said genuinely "sorry sorry. Wait" saying so she dipped one gol gappa in sweet water and stuffed in his mouth. "Feeling better?"
Kunj said "umm. Yaa"
Twinkle said "thanku so much. Bht bht yummy tha sab hai"
Kunj "teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi"
Twinkle blushed feeling his intense gaze on her.
Twinkle asked "chale ghar?"
Kunj replied"yup. Lekin ghar pe kisi ko nahi batana that maine tujhe yeh sab khilaya"
Twinkle cheerfully said "ha done".

On there way to home twinkle was unusually silent, there was frown on her forehead. Kunj noticed this and asked from her "kya hua twinkle?"
Twinkle dismissing her thoughts "umm.. Kuch nh."
Kunj stopped the car. "Aisa kya karna hai jo us insan ka gussa or dar tere man se nikal jaye"
Twinkle smile a sarcastic smile "dar or vo bhi us bande se. Darti nahi hu kunj usse. Agar sawal sirf mera hota toh koi bat nahi thi, dar sirf is bat ka hai mere sath vo tumhe or puri family ko hurt krta hai"
Kunj replied "twinkle ek bat bta. Agar kabhi alisha all of a sudden aa jaye life mein or aise problems create kare toh kya tu sath nahi degi?"
Twinkle without thinking "obviously dungi kunj. Or uski itni himat nahi ki mujhse panga le. Huh"
Kunj smiled and continued "toh bas phir kyu darti hai? Main hu sath tere or jab tak main hu vo toh kya koi hurt nahi kar sakta."
Twinkle replied "that toh i know."
Kunj said "or bhi kuch hai. Bol na twinkle, aaj se hum apni life ki nayi shuruwat karenge so i dont want ki koi bhi purani yad ho"
Twinkle clenching her teeth said "gussa aata hai mujhe us yuvi ke."
Kunj replied "toh nikal de aaj. Jo bhi man mein hai sab nikal de. Spit it out"
Twinkle in full sherni mode "vo kutta samajhta kya hai khud. Pyar karti thi usse , usne kabhi kadar nahi ki. Vo itna matlabi insan hai, or jab maine apni zindagi tere sath start ki tab usse vo bat bhi bardasht nahi hui or meri life hell banane aa gya.
Kya samjhta hai vo khud ko, i swear Baba ji agar ek khoon maf karde na toh main bina soche use jaan se mar du.(she stopped for a second and than said) lekin nayi yar, agar usko mara toh bhi lifetime guilt mein rahungi.
Pata hai kunj i believe in karma and i will wait ki karma hi use uske karmo ki saza de. Till than vo jail mein hi sadna chahiye.
Haha. Vo tujhe or khud ko compare karta hai, tu kaha hai or vo kaha. Chi. Tere pair ke nakhun ke barabar bhi nahi vo, agar mujhse pyar karta vo toh mujhe aise tang na karta kabhi nahi. Uske liye main insan nahi sirf ek trophy hu. Sirf ek trophy. Ghin ati hai kabhi kabhi kabhi khud se ki aise bande se pyar kia tha. Ab toh doubt hota hai ki vo pyar tha bhi ya nahk. Pata hai main maa ko jitna thanku bolu utna kam hai ki vo tujhe layi meri zindagi mein" she had tears at the end so did kunj.
Kunj just hugged her tightly taking care of her wound "mujhe ni pata tha meri syapa queen mein itna gussa hai. Hey Bhagwan"
Twinkle smiled through her tears "hai toh sahi, lekin unke liye jo deserve nahi karte"
Kunj replied "oh aisa kya? Chalo vaise ek bat pata lagi ki main us yuvi se better hu"
Twinkle realised what she spoke "zada udne ki zarurat nahi hai, vo toh flow flow mein bol dia tha Maine. Or ab chalo ghar late ho rahe hai"

-----BREAK TIME-----

TWINJ reached home, twinkle was walking with support of kunj, as she don't have to stress her lower body much.

Bebe and leela were on door waiting for twinkle with aarti ki thali.
Bebe took arti of twinkle and wished her to stay away from all bad deeds, she also wished tje same for kunj.

Bebe said "kunj tu twinkle ko leja room mein main tum dono ka khana lati hu"
Kunj replied "nahi bebe. Main khud le jata hu abhi"
Bene replied "par main lati hu na"
Kunj said "main le jaunga bebe. Aap dono jake so jao"
Twinkle found something fishy.
Bebe replied confused "changa phir"
Leela said "bebe ab mujhe ijazat do main bhi chalti hu"
Bebe replied" aaj yahi so jao na leela ji."
Twinkle too said "ha maa yahi so jao na mere pas"
Leela replied "nahi bebe. Main kal aa jaungi, abhi kuch kam bhi hai ghar mein" all nodded and she left.

Bebe too woshed good night and left for her room.
Kunj escorted twinkle to there room, placed her on bed.
Twinkle said "itna andhera kyu hai kunj yaha?"
Kunj said "tum light on karo main tab tak khana lata hu" saying so he left from there.

Twinkle switched on the , she was surprised to see whole room with sorry posters, notes pictures. One full bowl was kept on side table containing numerous notes.
She picked it up and opened all notes one by one.

"I am sorry"

"I know jo kia uski mafi nahi, par phir bhi ho sake toh maf karde"

"Plz twinkle :("

"Main janta tha farm house ka sach lekin phir bhi sirf isliye chup raha kyuki tu usse or gussa hoti. Par twinkle chahe uska sach nahi bataya lekin us halat mein bhi maine use koi aisi vaisi harkat nahi karne di"

"Plz meri syapa Queen tu apne khadoos pati ko maaf nahi kar sakti?"

"I promise aaj ke bad kabhi tujhpe doubt nahi karunga"

"Mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas hai. Kya mujhe sirf ek chance de sakti hai?"

"Kya tu vo sab bhula sakti hai? Sirf for first and last time?"

"I am sorry"


Twinkle had tears reading all the notes. Than she saw a sorry card on bed, she read it.

She was crying on kunj's efforts, he was genuinely sorry for doing all that what he did to her. She saw many baloons entering inside on which sorry was written.
Kunj kneeled down infront of her and gave her the baloons.
"Sorry twinkle. Plz mujhe maaf karde yar. Plz"
Twinkle was about to say something when kunj pulled one knob leading to showering of rose petals on twinkle.
Twinkle was first surprised than she smiled. She was feeling like a princess at that time.
Twinkle bent a little and hugged him tightly.
"Thanku so much kunj. Thanku so much. Maine tumhe maaf kia. This means a lot to me. Thanku"
Kunj too hugged her in happiness "you deserve this. And thanks to you."
Twinkle just hugged him tightly, she love the feeling she get when kunj hug her, kiss her. She love being with him.

*Love is in the air*

It was new year's night, this whole week kunj skipped his office and stayed by twinkle's side to make sure she was fine.
Twinkle was now fine her wounds have almost heeled, 99% she was fine. But still kunj didn't allow to do her much things as still sometimes she fumble on her feet.
But before she could trip down she always had kunj by her side to protect her.
Twinkle finally realised that she is in love with this man, and she decided to confess it to him. Even if he says no she will not force herself on him.

There was hustle bustle in Sarna's family, as there was a new year party at there house. Twinkle was instructing everyone as what they have to do and kunj was also doing his work but he had his eyes on twinkle to make sure she was fine.

Twinkle talked on phone "ha chinky, sari preparations ho gayi na?"
Chinky replied "ha twinkle. I am so happy yar tu finally usko..." She exclaimed excitedly but twinkle stopped her in between seeing kunj coming towards them.
Kunj replied "kya batein ho rahi hai besties mein?"
Twinkle replied with a smile "umm kuch nahi. Vo main bas puch rahi thi ki sab tyari hogayi na?"
Chinky too replied nervously "ha jeeju yahi puch rahi thi." She excused herself from there as she is not good at speaking lies.
Kunj found something fishy, twinkle saw this on his face and quickly diverted his mind. "Chalo ready ho jae. Varna party ke host hi late honge"
Kunj spoke "ha chalo"

Twinkle wore a black saree with black blouse, complimenting her skin perfectly. The blouse was not hiding her mark of wound and this thing tensed her a lot.
Kunj came out from bathroom all dressed in black tuxedo. (PRIYA, Ragini, aalina, khusbery(wrong spelling sorry), dumps, shernijerry, ian, and many other girls can imagine and go back in sid land😆). He was fixing his white shirt's color, his gaze fell on his beautiful wife who was clad in a black saree complimenting her white milky skin.
Looking at her his manly desires were rising, than his eyes fell on her face which showed tears. He forgot everything and went to her.
"Twinkle kya hua?" Kunj asked worried.
Twinkle without lifting her eyes "kuch nahi."
Kunj asked "btao na? And tum nazre kyu nahi mila rahi mujhe?"
Twinkle just turned and showed him the wound "kya tumhe is wound ko dekhkar sharam nahi ati mujhse? It is so ugly. Or yeh chup bhi nahi raha. What will i do now? Idea i will wear gown." Saying so she was about to fetch the gown from wardrobe when she felt a tug at her hand.

Kunj said "sharm kis bat ki twinkle? This is the proof of your braveness, and jab mjhe koi problem nahi hai toh tumhe ya kisi or ko kyu hai?"
He wiped her tears and put her hair on one shoulder.
Twinkle said "let it be there, phir vo clearly visible hoga"
Kunj replied "twinkle love yourself, and accept yourself the way you are than only world will accept you. Or vaise bhi insan ka dil sundar hona chahiye, and trust me tera dil bht saaf or sundar hai"
Twinkle was overwhelmed listening to his talks, at that very moment he made her feel beautiful.
"Thanku kunj. You are the best" twinkle said with utmost honesty.
Kunj joked "vo toh main hu hi"
They both laughed at his statement.
Kunj asked "tu ho gyi ready? Chale?"
Twinkle "ha."
Kunj said "vaise tu bht beautiful lag rahi hai is saree mein"
Twinkle said tucking her arm with his "or tum bht handsome lag rahe ho"
Kunj said "thanku"

They both entered the party, bebe complimented them "bht sundar lag rahe ho bacho. Rab tumhari jodi hamesha yuhi banaye rakhe"
Both blushed and took her blessings.
Meanwhile leela too came and said "haye mere bacho. Bht change lagde peo"
Twinkle hugged her "thanku maa"
Kunj too hugged her "thanku maa"
Twinkle's chachi came and saw her mark and said "haye twinkle tera nishan dikh raha hai acha nahi lag raha. Cover karle"
Kunj said "nahi chachi. Koi zarurat nahi hai, mujhe isse koi problem nahi hai, or bakio ko bhi nahi honi chahiye" he gained respect from bebe, leela, twinkle at that time.
Twinkle was just staring at her with love filled eyes.

Party was going smoothly, dance performances were there.
TWINJ too performed on romantic number. Bebe and leela too performed. Chinky, bubbly everyone performed.
Kunj was enjoying the party when he noticed twinkle was not there. He got scared, he searched everywhere, his heartbeat was racing.
He can't afford to loose her again.
To increase his fear he got a mesaage from twinkle "kunj plz jaldi upar aao. I need you"
He ran upstairs, noone noticed this as he was on 1st floor.
He entered the terrace, it was all dark.
He screamed "twinkle. Kaha hai tu? Twinkle"
Fairy lights were on showing the pics of his, her and them together.
Each photo was kept on a board and that board had fair lights on it.









He was so scared that didn't saw the pics properly. "Twinkle kaha hai tu? Tu thik hai na?"
One voice came "ha main thik hu. Ab jo bolu bas suno"

Kunj was at relief that she is fine.

"Yad hai hamari first meet? Haha kitni tashan se bhari thi.
Halaki hum dono ek dusre ko pasand nahi karte the phir bhi na chahte hue har point pe ek dusre ki help karte the, or i should say tum meri help karte the.
Pata hai tum pehle aise bande ho jisse main itna ladti thi, har point pe ladti thi. Lekin mujhe us ladai mein bhi maza aane laga, tumpe koi zulm hota tha toh mujhe acha nahi lagta tha.
Mujhe laga yeh sab sirf insaniyat ke nate hota hai, but i was wrong.
Tujhe mujhse ek shikayat hai na ki tere kasam dene ke bad bhi main kyu us din beetch mein aayi, par mere budhu Mr. Kunj Sarna tumne yeh nahi socha ki main us din isliye aai kyuki agar tum hi na hote toh kasam toh vaise bhi tut jati."
From the dark she came into light slowly slowly. She came to him and stood infront of her.
"Pata hai kunj mujhe end tak bhi samajh nahi aya ki kya hai yeh sab?" She placed her head on his heart and hugged him "kyu jab bhi main tumhari dil ki dhadkan sunti hu toh vo ek medicine ka kam karti hai, bahut sukoon milta hai? Kyu mera man karta hai ki main bas tumhari bahon mein rahu or puri duniya ko bhul jau? Mujhe yeh feeling pehle kabhi nahi aayi kabhi nahi. Kyu mera man karta hai ki sone se pehle sabse pehla chehra main tumhara dekhu or uthte hi sabse pehle tumhara hasta hua chehra dekhu?"
She than placed her forehead on his lips and continued "tumhare hoth jab meri skin ko tou h karte hai na toh ek nasha sa ho jata hai, har dukh har dard jaise gayab ho jata hai. Main sochti rahi ki yeh sirf shayad dosti hogi.
Par in kuch dino mein samajh aya ki yeh mehez dosti nahi yeh pyar hai. Mujhe pyar ho gaya hai tumse kunj. Kya tum mujhe vo scene dikhaoge jisme tum hamari beti ko bht pamper karo, har burai se dur rakho. Koi bhi ladai ho toh vo tumhari team mein ho. Main vo chiz feel karna chahti hu ki jab hamare bache hume mummy papa bolenge.
Lekin kunj ek bat dhyan mein rakhna mujhe pyar hai iska matlab yeh nahi ki tumhe bhi ho. Agar tumhe pyar nahi hai toh Baba Ji ki kasam main kabhi khud ko tumpe force nahi karungi"

Kunj had tears in his eyes.
"Pyar? Pata nahi, mujhe tujhse hai ke nahi. Lekin abhi jab tu kuch der ankhon se dur hui toh aise laga meri zindagi khatam ho gayi.
Us din jab tu operation theatre mein thi meri jaan atki padi thi. Ankhon se ansoo ruk hi nahi rahe the, main itni jaldi rone valo mein se nahi hu.
Man karta hai ki is duniya ki jitni bhi khushia hai vo tere kadmo mein lake rakh du, agar koi tujhe nazar uthake bhi dekhe toh jaan lelu uski.
Main chahta hu tu hamesha khush rahe or teri us khushi ki vajah main hou, vo ek jo naughty si chamak teri ankhon mein rehti hai na, vo hamesha rahe. Bas ansoo kabhi na aye.
Vaise jab tu mujhe kiss karti hai ya hug karti hai toh aise lagta hai meri life complete ho gayi. Dil khush ho jata hai mera.
Or rahi bat bacho ki, toh chinta mat kar hamari princess meri team mein hogi or hamara prince tri team mein. Aise unfair hona pasand nahi mujhe.
Us din hospital mein un babies ko dekh kar mera bhi bht man hai ki hamare bache bhi ho, jinki harkatein tujh par, shararti ho, sensible ho meri tarah(twinkle's mouth formed a O at this statement to which kunj laughed making her laugh"
Bas maine bhi bol dia jo bolna tha.
Twinkle like a baby asked "toh ab pyar karte ho ya nahi?"
Kunj smiled at ber syapa queen. "Nahi. Itna sab kuch vele hi bol dia maine. Kya twinkle tu bhi na. Obviously i love you yar. Usi din se jis din tu mere liye police station ayi thi"
Twinkle hugged her happily, kunj too reciprocated tightly.

Crackers were fired indicating arrival of new year, clock stuck 12.
They both broke apart, and said in unison "happy new year"
Twinkle was blushing, in nervousness she licked her red hot coloured lips againg rising kunj's desires.
Kunj said "vaise maine suna hai ki sal ki starting mein jo bhi karo vo pura sal karte hai"
Twinkle said "ha maine bhi suna hai" she than saw him eyeing her lips, she blushed.
Kunj leaned forward stoping at inches away asking for her permission, twinkle too leaned forward.
Kunj claimed her lips, the kiss was soft, both sucking eachothers lips, nibling on them.
Kunj pulled twinkle more into him by her waist. Twinkle too had hand full of his hair pulling more into herself.
The kiss was not perfect as it was there first kiss, but still it was magical.
They both broke apart for the need of oxygen, kept there foreheads agaianst eachother, breathing heavily.
Kunj said "tumhari lipstick smudge ho gayi"
Twinkle said with a blush "its ok. "

The end

Hush.
So how was it?
I hope it was nice .
It was the longest part i have written till date.
Happy new year to all and happy Lohri also.😊
Love Vish ❤️

Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
wow dear
nice update
just loved it
and thanks for long update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Wow Amazing update dear, beautifully written.
Nice ending, loved it. 👏
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#90
Perfect!!!!amazing
Sooo adorable
I loved everything in it...
Thnx a lot for this very long update
Very sad that this is the last part
I want more of ur writing

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