swaragini ff deewani...raglak swasan..

part 1

lakshya wake up suddenly and found himself sweating extremely...he searches for water as his throat was drying...

he blabbers ;-kuch galat nhi kiya mene...kuch galat nhi kiya mene...she deserve this...i don't love ragini...

he remembers swara's words ;-lakshya kahi aisa to nhi ki apne pyar me pagal hone ki saja tumne jis ladki ko di...tum usi ko pyar karne ki galti kar baithe ho...

lakshya shouts:- no i don't love ragini wo chali gyi hai wo ja chuki hai aur ab wapis nhi aayegi...and unknowingly tears fell down on his cheeks...he went out of the room and goes to terrace ...suddenly his phone rang...

lakshya(st) ye rat ke char bje koun call kar rha hai ..

man:- lakshya pehchana ?

lakshya :- neeraj tu...

man:- han bhai london wale time par phone kar rha hu tere yaha to rat hogi mujhe laga tha neend me hoga dantega mujhe par tu to utha hua lag rha hai

lakshya:-han office work tha jaldi uth gya

neeraj :- tu wo sab chhod or udaipur ki flight book kara le..

lakshya:- kyu?

neeraj :- abe meri shadi pakki ho gyi hai or meri hone wali biwi chahti hai ki hamari shadi udaipur palace me ho

lakshya :-congratulation me aajaunga udaipur jaldi... koi bhi help ki jarurat ho to batana ...

neeraj :-han sure par aana jarur..

lakshya (st):- chalo achchha hai kuch dino ke liye mood fresh ho jayega...

lakshya goes doenstairs for breakfast suddenly a boy nearly two years old run to him and hugs him..

boy: chachu ..

lakshya ; omg mera tiger itni jaldi uth gya...

swara comes there : shonu me tumhe poore ghar me dhoondh rhi hu aur tum yha chachu ke sath masti kar rhi ho..

sanskar comes from behind and lift swara twirl her and put her down...

sanskar: mere bete ko masti karta dekh tumhe bht jalan hoti hai lo tum bhi karlo masti...

lakshya and shonu laugh on them..

everybody in mm gather for breakfast..

lakshya : papa me kal udaipur ja rha hu..

dp: achanak kyu ja rhe ho lakshya..

lakshya; papa wo neeraj ki shadi hai..

sujata; lakshya beta kal to mene aur jii ne ladki walon ko bulwaya hai tere rishtey ke liye..

lakshya; ma chachi me aap sab se kah chuka hu na ki mujhe koi ladki nhi chahiye apni jindagi me...

sujata: lakshya kab tak tu us ragini ke karan apni jindagi me aage nhi badega...

lakshya; chachi ragini meri zindagi me matter nhi karti aur plz aap mere samne uska nam mat lijiya kariye...

and lakshya storm out of the house...

he was standing outside suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder..

swara; nam nhi lene se yaden nhi mit jati lakshya..tumne ragini ke sath jo kiya kya wo kafi nhi tha jo uske jane ke bad aaj bhi tumhare dil me itni nafrat hai us ke liye ki kisi aur ko pyar karne ke liye bhi jagah khali nhi...

lakshya; swara ragini ne khudkushi ki thi...mene use nhi mara tha jo tum bar bar aakar mujhe ragini ka gunahgar hone ka ehsas dilati ho..

swara; han usne khudkushi ki thi par uski wajah tum the lakshya...

lakshya ; swara ye batein hamare beech pihle teen sal se chal rhi hai inka koi matlab nhi hai..tum aur sanskar plz apni married life enjoy karo aur mujhe akela chhod do...lashya get into the car and drove out of mm..

swara(st) akele to tum ho lakshya aur tumhari galti ki yahi saja payi hai tumne...

precape; lakshya get shocked in udaipur...

Oh wow really nice start thank you for posting it , Laksh is going to meet Ragini when he goes to his friends wedding, hope you post the next part soon

hey im rosina new to this forum loved this ff plz update soon ino im being a bit greedy lol

Originally posted by: dreamyrose

hey im rosina new to this forum loved this ff plz update soon ino im being a bit greedy lol

hi welcome to the AT and yes I'm like you as well want the next update soon

nice start dear...& pls pm me the next chapter if u can

hey guys hpoe u like my work...my this part will be a musical one..hope u guys like my experiment:P

part 2




lakshya reached the udaipur palace ...neeraj and her fiance preeti greeted him...

neeraj: thanks yar aane ke liye..

lakshya; ab teri shadi me nhi aaunga to jaunga kha..

they both laugh..
neeraj : han bas ab tu bhi hme ye takleef dede jaldi se..
preeti; han lakshya tumhari shadi me aana hai ab mujhe.

lakshya suddenly gets silent and distract them from the topic of his marriage..

lakshya:neeraj ye stage kyu lagwaya hai aaj reception aur sangeet sath me hai kya,,

neeraj ; nhi lakshya sangeet to kal ho chuka aaj special performance hai..

lakshya : kiski?

preeti: meri ek freind hai jiya arora...bht hi famous singer and dancer hai apni academy chalati hai aur desh videsh me shows karti hai...
neeraj : han kamal ki bat to ye ki wo apni sari earning ek ngo ko de deti hai...

preeti ; ab tum log chup ho jao uski performance shuru hone wali hai...

lakshya was not intrested he wants to go out to smoke..so he thought that he would sneak out during performance...

the curtains opens with music

Navatunni aali apsara
Navatunni aali apsara
Aashi sundara saaj sazpunna
Aali aali aali
Aali ho aali..
Jaisa maathi maanla gajra
Dokyecha nazra theel tichyauvar
Aali aali..Duniya chi pyari tu
Aaga naari harnigey
Aaga raani sundaraa ha ha..
Aali ho aali
Aali ho aali
Aali o aali


lakshya was not intrested so he turn back to go out but he suddenly stops by listening the voice

Nazar jo teri laagi main deewani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi

lakshya turns and saw a girl in lahanga with duppata covering her face...but the voice was similar he had heard this voice before...

Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahaani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi..
Kehte hain ye deewani mastani ho gayi

it's amazing...
can't wait more...
update soon plzzz...
if possible pm me...

Omg love the 2nd part this is really good aww she has a son which is great boy seems really sweet, I like how she has changed her life and has moved on, can't wait to read what happens next please post it soon.

Thank you

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892

it's amazing...
can't wait more...
update soon plzzz...
if possible pm me...

I want the next part soon

Interesting updt ...