omg shot..updated ..(update on pg 3)(no stories allowed)

once in a dark night, a new married couple was hesitation for first night fir achanak,

(here the couple is Nibir)

k ran towards n and holds her tightly.

N -k tum kya kar rahe ho??

K-vahi jo nahi karna chahiye tumhare saath. Par majburi main kar raha hun.please n aaj meri izzat bachale!!!N-tu ye bol kya raha hai??? izzat vagera vagera... achanak se tuje kya huva???

K -mere khandaan main sabhi purush kisi se nahi darte.chahe vo koi mahila bhi kyo na ho???

N -mahila????

K -i mean wife.

N -to...???

K -vahi to kar raha hu na.plz apna dupatta mujse na 6udva.

N -kabir mujhe 6od mujhe dard ho raha hai.Main sab ko bolungi ki tu mere saath jabardasti kar raha hai.Kabir plz leave me. you can't touch me without my permission. understand???

K -what understand??? agar tumhe 6od diya to mujhe shakti kaise milengi is kul ka purush banne ki??

N -now I am shouting...

(when she tried to shout k shuts her mouth)

K -are chilla mat. vaha bed ke niche ek mouse hai. Aur mujhe use bahot dar lagta hai. Tujhe pakde rakhenga to mujhe kam dar lagega. aur mera ye sab se anjan dar jankar log mujpe hasenge..
(he makes a crying cute baby face).

write about what you have feelings...

give your suggestions that can make it more interesting...

Nd this is my new series of moments, in which there can be poem, small incident that make you more emotional, laughing bird, more angry... but which can be special for you... no stories are allowed.

Yes plzz continue the series it is very interesting

Please continue soon spruha 😃
But make it a comedy one please

Awesome one

Oh God Spru😲 Yeh KYA tha?😆

Curious Title...👏 Jisse padhkar maine post open kia & then... I was like🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kamal ka story series tha👏👏👏👏 Loved it 👍🏼& Laughed a lot😆🤣

Purush.. Mahila... Kul ki purush banne ke liye shakthi...🤣🤣🤣🤣

Mouse se dar hai Kabira ko aur voh Nishu ke Duppatte se Power nikalna chahtha hai😆 taaki use dar kam lage🤣🤣🤣


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Uff maine post ka naam padh k open kia😲

Aur ye kya nikla spru🤣

M rofling like a mad person🤣

Mere ghar me koi purush kisi se nhi darta chahe wo mahila hi kyu na ho🤣🤣

Kul ki maryada🤣

Nisha chilla rhi thi🤣

But ye kya kabira chuha se dar rha tha🤣

Omg has has k mera stomach pain krra 🤣

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Please continue soon spruha 😃
But make it a comedy one please

okkk.. I will try my best..

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Oh God Spru😲 Yeh KYA tha?😆

Curious Title...👏 Jisse padhkar maine post open kia & then... I was like🤣

Kamal ka story series tha👏 Loved it 👍🏼& Laughed a lot😆🤣

Purush.. Mahila... Kul ki purush banne ke liye shakthi...🤣

Mouse se dar hai Kabira ko aur voh Nishu ke Duppatte se Power nikalna chahtha hai😆 taaki use dar kam lage🤣🤣🤣


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thanks... :-)
and I miss you and your comments...
dil garden garden ho gaya...

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Uff maine post ka naam padh k open kia😲

Aur ye kya nikla spru🤣

M rofling like a mad person🤣

Mere ghar me koi purush kisi se nhi darta chahe wo mahila hi kyu na ho🤣🤣

Kul ki maryada🤣

Nisha chilla rhi thi🤣

But ye kya kabira chuha se dar rha tha🤣

Omg has has k mera stomach pain krra 🤣

thanks... bas aise hi haste raho to hum aisa likhte rahe