Sandhir and Vidharth FF:Na tum jaano na HUM Chapter 6 updated !!!!!! - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jollyangels

Hey Praniti,

I just sooo loved it! It was too good to be described!๐Ÿ‘
Sandhir and Vidarth reunion was awesome!
I loved Randhir's cool attitude!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Fizzy Farzi!๐Ÿ˜† Iska official name!๐Ÿ˜† Sanyu can never get rid of that name!๐Ÿ˜†
I loved the photo frame set up!
So cute and possessive lines when anyone touched Vids' pic!
Aisa choco jaisa bf mila hai na usey!๐Ÿ˜ณ Parth yar! I love him!๐Ÿ˜ณ
And woh last trump card!
The jailer scene!๐Ÿคฃ

And the ending and precap are just like cliffie!
I want the next update a soon as possible! Please!
Update soonish!

Love u baby,
Erina!!!๐Ÿค—


Thanx Erina๐Ÿค—
Love you too re๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

wow.. that was awesome

loved it..
update soon na
keep writing 
RIDDHIMA



Thank you Riddhima dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Hiii
Finally...Next chappy...๐Ÿ˜‰
Enjoy๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Chapter 5 Asli Maza...

Randhir smirked evilly...He just rubbed his hands together as he got a superb faadu idea to have some fun...with these idiots...

He quickly went towards the car and climbed on the roof of the car with his legs dangling on the front side..

He also took out his socks from his pockets and smoothly opened the dickey saying loudly"Are yeh dickey ache se band nahi ki??"
And while saying this he slipped his socks in the dickey... 
(ps his socks smell very very very bad...ab socho dickey ke ander kya hoga???)

Sanyukta saw that Randhir had stopped laughing so she turned and looked at his direction only to find Randhir dangling his legs and moving it like a child while he was concentrating on his work...

S:Randhir??? Ye tum kya kar rahe ho??? Niche utro..
But Randhir turned a deaf ear towards her...and continued his work..

He also removed the itching powder from his pocket which he had preserved to trouble the Jailor and sprinkled the contents of the bottle in the dickey...

R(in mind):Hehehe...socho...stinky socks+itching powder...bhagwan hi bachaye in logon ko(and he prayed to god and then winked evilly looking towards the sky)

S:Randhir tum niche utar rahe ho ki nahi??

Randhir now heard her voice and cursed her silently:Kya ladki hai 
yaar...Yahan mein uske liye hi yeh sab kar raha hun aur yeh hai ki...huh..

S:Dekho tum niche utro...
P:Nahi utrunga... Kya kar logi????
Yeh apni CID giri kahin aur dikhana...
Tum CID wale kuch kaam ke nahi hote ho...Socha tum logon ki kuch help hi kar dun...
Upar se ise dekho...
Huh...

Sanyukta was not finding any reason to make him come down...If he stayed there anymore..then the car sensours will get activated automatically...and he will burn into ashes...

Actually it's a CID car na..so it is specifically designed to attack the person who ever tries to damage the car even if it includes someone climbing on the roof...
But unluckily...nothing was designed for the dickey...

She finally got an idea and said...

S:Dekho tum niche utro...
Warna mein tumhe shoot kar dungi...(pointing her gun)

Randhir froze on the spot keeping his hands and legs dangling in air and only his body was attached to the roof...
When he had frozen...she quickly pulled his hand and brought him down...if she had delayed her action even by a minute...then she would have regretted...

Sanyukta sighed in relief..whereas Randhir was staring intently at her...
Unknowingly she had locked their hands together...
And as she had touched his hand...Randhir had started feeling different...
Not that he never felt anything like this earlier...
He had felt like this when he had met her for the 1st time...
He had felt the spark but had tried to ignore it...
He had decided to ignore it this time too...
But her touches...where simply not helping...

Randhir came out of his thoughts as Sanyukta shrugged his elbow and asked:Chalein ab??

R:Haan haan...tum jao..mein ek baar dickey check kar ke aata hun...

S(suspicious):Kyun??

R:Tum jao jaake baitho...mein baad mein tumhe baad mein bataunga..

Sanyukta shrugged her shoulders and went and sat on the driver's seat..

Randhir again gave an evil grin and removed his last weapon...
Itching powder...!!!

He quickly sprinkled a large amount of the powder at the opening of the 

dickey clever enough to not let the guys know that he has a huge surprise for his unwanted guests!!!

R:Cherry on the top...perfect...Ab pata chalega ki RSS se panga lene ka kya result hota hai...(and rubbed his hands)

He quickly locked the dickey so that the real fun begins soon...
He came towards the driver's seat and made a face to see that Sanyukta was sitting there...

R:Oye...Fizzy Farzi...ye yahan kyun baithi ho???

S:Tum blind ho kya???? yahan nahi toh kya tumhare sar pe baithu??? Ab apni bakwass band karo aur jaldi baitho...tumhari wajah se already late ho gaye hain...

R:Oh really???? like really??? meri wajah se late hua??? woh kaise??

S:Oh hello...bol to aise rahe ho jaise ki dickey ke wahan tum nahi mein timepass kar rahi thi...

R(murmerred):Uff...yeh ladki bhi na...jab reason bataunga na ki mein dickey ke paas timepass kyun kar raha tha to dar ke mare gale se awaaz nahi niklegi...huh...such a fizzy...

R:Thike thike...ab tum utro...

S:Kyun??? mein kyun utrun??

R:Kyunki mein bol raha hun isilye...tumhara kya bharosa...pata nahi kaise gaadi chalati ho...

Sanyukta bit her lip but felt offended...how dare he to question her driving skills...she knew...well she agreed with the world...that she was worst driver...but there was no time soon that she would let this devil know that soon...

S:Shut up okay...mein bahut achhi driver hun...
R:Hmm pata hai...isilye...ek baar news mein popular ho chuki ho...almost ek bike wale ko udaate udaate bachi ho...aur kehti ho ki tum achi driver ho????huh...What a poor joke Ms Fizzy...

S(fumbling):Tum..he ka..ise p..ata??

R:Oh Ms dumbo...mujhe sab pata rehta hai...ab zyada nakhre na 
dikhake...aap utar ne ka kasht lengi???(he said sarcastically bending a bit forward)

Sanyukta flared her nose,turned her head to the other side and 
said:Nahi...mein nahi utrungi...

Randhir chuckled again...she's still has some of her posessed attitudes intact with her...
He calmly leaned on the car door and folded his hands in front of his chest and said:Thike...mat utro...waise bhi mera nahi...tumlogon ka kaam karne ke liye hi Mumbai jaa rahe hain...Abhi mujhe blame kar rahi thi na ki maine time pass kiya...Fine...ab mujhe bolne ka mauka milega ki tum hum dono ka time waste kar rahi ho...(he gave stress on the word "TUM")

Sanyukta flared her nose again and glared at him angrily...

R(chuckled):Mujhe ghurne se koi fayda nahi hoga...its not as if I will turn into ashes by your glares...
Sanyukta was shocked as how come he came to know that she was glaring dangerously at him even when his back was facing her...

After glaring at him for few more minutes and uttering curses under her breath...she finally said:Fine...I'm getting down...(Randhir made way for her and she got down)But dare you..agar tumne iss gadi ko kuch kiya na...toh mein tumhe chodungi nahi.This is my favourite Car..(she said threatingly)

R(mocked):Aye aye Captain(that means Sure Captain)

Sanyukta irritatingly went and sat on the drivers seat while Randhir sat on the drivers seat and gave a smirk to Sanyukta and thought:Oh poor Car...abhi toh mujhe mere unwanted guests ko acche se sabak sikhana hai..so sorry baby...tumhe yeh Car ko sacrifice karna hoga...

And with this he accelerated the engine and started driving...
He was driving were harshly...

Sanyukta looked at him horror...Her favourite car and he was...destroying..or was trying to test her patience...

S:Randhir??? ruko car...yeh tum kya kar rahe ho???? Just stop the damn car damn it...maine kaha tha na ki yeh meri favourite car hai...how dare you ki tum isse aise treat kar rahe ho...

But Randhir turned a deaf ear to her...and continued his rash driving...
There was a big reason behind him rash driving the car...
and that was he knew The CID cars had special smoke alert system which is placed in the dickey of the car...and if he continues to drive like that for the next 1 hour...then he will have 2 missions accomplished side by side...

1:They will reach Mumbai very early...
2:The goons which were hiding up will have a good taste of smoke which leaves you numb for atleast 2 days...

Sanyukta saw that Randhir was nto listening so she tugged his arm very angrily and said:
Tumhe samjh mein nahi aa raha hai kya??? mein tumse kuch bol rahi hun...

R(frustated):Tum thodi der chup baithogi???Dekho its really 
important...hame jaldi Mumbai pahunchna hi hoga...

S(angrily):Kyun???? Itni kya jaldi hai????Mujhe bhi batao...

Randhir stayed num and continued his driving...

At last Sanyukta tugged his arm again which resulted to mis balance on the steering and Randhir rammed the car's backside in a truck...

(The goons in the dickey would have been dead๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)

Randhir got angry while Sanyukta was shocked that they had actually rammed the car on a truck...
Car had come to a stand still and Randhir furiously grabbed Sanyukta's neck and pulled her and joined their foreheads

R(angrily):Can't you understand one single thing???? Ek baar Mumbai pahunchne do fir mein tumhe sab kuch bata dunga...But till then...plzzz zip your mouth...

Sanyukta was quietly listening to him...his flaring nose was leading to his hot breath directly falling on her lips...creating a sexual tension...between them...

Randhir was about to fall in the depth of her eyes but quickly released her neck and calmed his breath...
How much he ever tried to distance himself from her...he was getting attracted to her more...
Now you might be thinking why he is distancing himself??
Well he has a reason...to which he himself is not sure is worth or not...
So he is not taking the risk...

Randhir started driving...Sanyukta closed her eyes and rested her head on the window and kept sitting like that...
Randhir took a glance at Sanyukta and he sighed sadly...

Within 1 hour they reached Mumbai...thanks to Randhir's awesome driving skillss...
Sanyukta quickly got out of the Car and went behind the car and checked the damage...

The car looked like this...


S:OMG...now i'm dead...Maasi will kill me...

M:Sanyu...

S:Shit!!!!

V:Kya hua Sanyu itni tensed kyun ho???
M:Haan Sanyu??? Kya hua??? 
P:Aise darr rahi hai??? kya hua???

S(pinching her throat):Maasi I swear car ki aisi halat maine nahi ki...woh to iss pyshco ne car drive ki...wo bhi maniacs ki tarah...(pointing at Randhir)

They turned their gaze towards Randhir who was inspecting the dickey of the car as to how to open it as the lock was jammed...as the dickey has a met harsh ramming...

All moved towards Randhir even Sanyukta...
What they saw left them shocked...

Precap:Actual Plan...And the mission to accomplish...


How's it???
Likes and reviews plzz๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by natureloverr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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unress..
amazing awsm update..
dickey scene was awsm...
then randhir ke driving skills...
bechara car.. feeling bad for it...
excited so much for next part...
update soonish...Edited by Twinkle_Isha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update yaar...
maasi ne kya kiya...๐Ÿ˜•
rd ko gale laga liya kya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago
too good re !!!!
loved the whole scenario ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
funny Randhir n hilarious update
loved the whole scene
Randhir ne goons kitna pareshan kiya
when they reached Mumbai car ki kya halat hogayi thi
Sanyu toh gayi kaam se

loved it
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update๐Ÿ˜Š
 
hilarious๐Ÿ˜†
 
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ha ha..rd is tooo smart
genious rd
and bichari sanyu ki car๐Ÿ˜†

faaadu update๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsme update
loved it

that was very intrstng

rd us awsme
kya band bjaya goons k

then sandhir fighting
he knows abut sanyu so well

then that intense scene was cherry on top

I wonder why was the reason for the hurry

update soon
wtng