Saajna - the cosmic connection- SwaSan (UPDATED CONCLUSION PART AT PAG

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A night before Kavkar wedding...sanskar in his room sitting wd a mrg invitation card and staring at the bride and groom's names...after a while he stands up from his sofa walks towards the drawer near his cupboard...takes out a marker pain...
aftr standing there for a while...suddenly he just started cutting the name of kavita madly.like he just wnna remove her name from there...he jst covered up kavita's name will blue ink...tears coming up from his eyes.he is still silent but his eyes keeps crying...he slowly brings out the broken frame of him and swara's photo...remebered how ragini breaks it and swara is crying...he just uttered her name in broken voice "S-W-A-R-A"
"haan sanskar", swara replied looking at the door.she thought that as if sanskar is calling her with her name.she is in mm now cz kavita wants swara to prepare her for wedding.swara agrees for that.but while saying yes she noticed sanskar is crying looking at her.she knows the language of his eyes.he is deeply heartbroken to see his swara in pain.even no one noticed bt she noticed that sanskar didn't come for dinner also...aftr that cnfession to now he is still in his room.The door was closed...bt still she can hear that her sanskar is crying like a poor baby.she goes to the window from where she can see the moon is more brighter today.sky is covered with stars.as if the nature prepare to witness a beautiful event...she said, "sanskar tum thik to ho na?"
"sab kuch kaise bikhar gaya...thik karna hi to chahta tha main.tum thi to sabkuch ek haseen sapne se tha...kyun aa gyi ye duriyaan????main thik nahi hu swara...kya tum thik ho????", sanskar uttered in his mind...he remembers how swara kept fast fr him the long day in Kc.how she confessed her love infront of everyone thrice...bt today everything has changed.The very next day will apart them forever.he feels like someone stabs his heart repeatedly that he couldn't even breath properly.
Swara takes out the lehenga which he brought fr her in diwali and keeps it on her bed.Then she brings out all the hankies of sanskar which she has kept with her from long time.All of her ornaments, make-up items, mangalsutra, shakha-pala, sindoor everything she keeps on her bed one-by-one...and smiles like she is so satisfied to see all this.
Sanskar goes in-front of the mirror and just moving his hand on all the females accesories of swara's use.He takes up her hairbrush and start settling his hair with it and brings out his wedding sherwani from cupboard which he wear on the day of their wedding...he wears it again and looking himself at mirror suddenly someone knocks at the door.
END OF PART ONE
GUYS SHARE UR FEEDBACKS...I WILL WRIGHT THE LAST AND CONCLUSION PART TOMORROW.IF U LIKED IT DONT FORGET TO LEAVE A RPLY.JUST TRYING MY HANDS.GOOD NIGHT.
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soumi93 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnx guys...will update it by tomorrow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one
Let me know the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful start
update soon n do pm m
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THAT WAS PERFECT HIPE U CONTINUE SOON I FEEL WAY BETTER AFYER READING THIS AND SEEING THE PIC OF SWARA IN THE WEDDING DRESS SO EXCITED...hdshebakdhdbsnixudis


THANK YOU
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Friend,it was a really heart touching post. Really loved it. The cosmic connection between swasan was awesome. And sanskar trying to remove the name of kavita from that invitation letter, you simply said it. Sanskar's true love is swara.And the sequence they were recollecting there memories. The update was awesome. Thank you so much for giving a beautiful update. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz pm me for the next part
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hw can u end this here yaar??? plzzz update soon
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PART 2
Swara in her room gathering all the things which somehow linked her with Sanskar...seeing her bridal attire she remembers that how she prepares in bengali attire that day...Ragini's blackmailing and sanskar's request to confess everything to badepapa...but they got married...everythings seems like just it was yesterday's event to her... she sits on bed and rubs her hand on the clothes with teary eyed smile.
Suddenly the bell of clock rings.its already 1 am at night...few hours left for her to loose her love of life, her oxygen, her soulmate Sanskar...she gets up...wipes her tears and goes to washroom while thinking something...
[In sanskar's room]
He is wearing his bridal sherwani of his and swara's wedding while someone knocks at the door...he gets surprised...looks at the clock...Its 2 am...suddenly he remembers
["aaj raat ko shaadi se pehele tumhe milne aaungi main. main bhi to dekhu shaadi se pehele tumhara chehara dekhne se mujhe kaun rokta he"...kavita said to him in her mehendi ceremony at the evening...but he was not paying attention to her words then coz swara overhears everything and her eyes was full of tears] Sanskar got really annoyed and decide not to open the door and pretends to be sleepy by switiching of the lights of his room...
He was just trying to ly on his bed when suddenly a voice comes from the door..."Mujhe pata he tum jage hue ho...ekbar khol do darwaja" darwaje ke bahar intezar kar rahi hu main tumahara...Itna haq to hena mujhe?????"
He literally gets shocked to hear the voice...bt he thought may be he was mistaking but no again the voice says, "darwaja nahi to ek khidki hi khol do"...nope he is not wrong anymore...he is 100% knows the voice...he smiled like a small baby and feels relieved...he rushes to the door and opened it...yaa he is right...There she is... he with smile and excitement just hugged her tightly...and kisses her face all where with no space left...and gives her a forehead kiss and hold it for some while...after a few minutes...he backs to his senses...he just cupped her face in his hand and snatch her to his room and closed the door.The room is still dark coz sometimes ago he puts off the light thinking of kavita stands at the door...but no...its nt kavita...the room is dark but his eyes,face filled up with lights of happiness...the moonlight is helping enough him too see his angel clearly...her face,lehenga is literally glowing in the darkness more...who cares to put on the light...there is no sign of darkness anymore...the almighty had decorated their room in the best possible natural way...She comes a step closer to him...keeps her palm on his lips...he is standing there still and looking at her speechless...she is looking like an angel, an goddess glow comes out from her...he just cant take his eyes off from his Swara...she comes a more step ahead to him...removes her palm...closes her eyes...a tear drop falls on sanskar hand...and she kissed him holding his head in her hands...he is still in shock but after some seconds he too joins her...the whole world becomes meaning less for them...they are just so busy into pouring themselves into each other...as if they just wanna mix up with each other in that very moment...after few minutes...sanskar opens his eyes.so as his lady...both looked into each other's eyes...swara holds his collar and brings him a lilbit closer to her and says in his ear..." I - Love- You- Sanskar-...nahi rahi sakti main tumhare bina...I'm sorry"...by saying this she just about to looses the grip of her hands from his collar...he senses that and holds her from falling down...

END OF PART TWO...
CONCLUSION PART WILL BE UPLOADED BY TOMORROW...ENJOY READING 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice...
Did swara do something to herself

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