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Heloo guyz this is my second ff and it's in ancient set and this completely full my imagination not too much related to historical so tell me if you like this ff.

HIS CHOSEN QUEEN


" A man reserved his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy "

Story :

the devil jalaluddin muhammad akbar have eyes for the angel of ameer jodha who none other than the long lost rajkumari heer kunwari, jalal want to cut her wings and tame this beautiful yet very brave rajkumari, it's the battle between the devil who want to conquer an angel but he just about to find out that to conquer this angel is not an easy task to do.


Character Sketch


Jalaluddin Muhammad Akbar ( 25 yo )

Jalal Shehenshah Hindustan famous for his cruely and brutality, he rule his kingdom like he command his army, and his minority subject call him " The Devil " because of how he treat them, hindu muslim literally very suffers in mughals kingdom, lot of rule that disadvantage hindu but they keep pray and have faith to their God that one day will come someone who can give their shehenshah a light so he realize that he is a shehenshah, a father for his subjects no matter what their religion, and now he have eyes for an angel who dare to challenge him, he want this angel belong only to him no matter what the cost but he never imagine the price he must pay to own her.

Rajkumari Jodha / Rajkumari Heer Kunwari ( 22 yo )

Jodha is rajkumari from amer, for people of amer jodha is an angel because of her kindness and how jodha always helping people in need and she teaching kids who live in poverty and orphans house, she is the long lost heer kunwari rajkumari who finally come back to help her kingdom and her people who in edge defeated of war with mughals after rajkumari sukanya runaway in her wedding day with shehenshah hindustan jalaluddin muhammad akbar, jodha accept her destiny to marry with the devil itself but she will give him hell of fight before she surrender herself to him, and jodha will demand two things from the devil if he want her, two things that she know people and jalal himself think he don't have but she want those and she wont accept less than that.

Ruqaiya Sultan Begum ( 25 yo )

Ruqaiya is the first begum of jalal and she is famous for her beauty and cruelty, she is the head of harem and she demand everyone to kneel in front of her, she treat maids like a dirt and hindu maids get the worst treatment in harem, ruqaiya always believe that jalal is belong to her and eventhough she must share him with other begum but he always coming back to her, and she think she is the only one who can play mind games compare to his other begum until jodha come into picture and ruqaiya feel very jealous towards jodha because she match her level in everything beauty and brain, ruqaiya will do anything to bring her down but she will surprise to find out that jodha is not like what she think and shehenshah new begum will give her amazing fight she ever to imagine.

Selima Sultan Begum ( 27 yo )

Selima is the widow of bhairam khan but jalal marry her to give her honor, safety and position, selima is a smart woman and she sometimes give advice to jalal bout his kingdom and his people which jalal dismiss her easily but selima who have seen the reality of mughals people always try her best to help them and later after jalal eyes opened bout the reality of his kingdom he asking her to help him to make his kingdom a better place, selima feel fond to jodha since she meet jodha and they become best friends and in jodha selima find a companion to helping people behinds jalal's back and she too try her best to help jodha who seems always in trouble since she step her foot in harem and selima know too that jodha is the one who can change jalal.

Hamida Bano / Mariam Makani ( 42 yo )

Hamida is mariam makani and she is very kind lady and still beautiful in her early forty, people love her as she always giving hands for people in need especially minority one, she is jalal's birth mother but their relationship sour since she abandoned him when he is just a little boy to accompany humayun in battlefield, she try to rebuilt her relationship with jalal with but she will need lot of hard work to earn her son love and trust and she know jodha can be the bridge between her and jalal, at first she don't like jodha but as time passed she realize jodha is what jalal need in his cold and dark world and ever since along with selima she act as cupid between jalal and jodha, eventhough they know jalal and jodha always fight like lion and lioness but they can see through their heart and they will try their best to make jalal and jodha realize their feeling for each other.

Maham anga ( 45 yo )

She is the most trust person in jalal's life, after the death of bairam khan in suspicious accident maham anga become the only who very matter to jalal, maham anga always try to keep jalal under her influence, he dance according to her music and she always have plan to make her son adham to become shehenshah and so she keep try a way to make jalal lost his position as shehenshah but since the death of bairam khan jalal have his own mind and after jodha come into his life maham anga start to loose her power in him and so she hate jodha and silenty always make trouble for jodha but it seem jodha protect by unseen power because she always survive and in her desperation maham anga make evil plan to get rid off jodha from jalal's life permanently.

Abdul Khan ( 25 yo )

He is one of jalal most trusted person and his best friend, he is jalal childhood friends too beside ruqaiya and with him jalal can say whatever he want and sometimes with abdul he can be himself not the shehenshah e Hindustan, abdul really care his best friend and always try his best to keep him safe and sane between people who try take advantage from him.

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Chapter Index
Chapter 1 : Page 1
Chapter 2 : Page 11
Chapter 3 - Page 14
Chapter 4 - Page 17
Chapetr 5 - Page 21
Chapter 6 - Page 24
Chapter 7 - Page 28
Chapter 8 - Page 32
Chapter 9 - Page 36
Chapter 10 - Page 39
Chapter 11 - Page 43
Chapter 12 - Page 46
Chapter 13 - Page 50
Chapter 14 - Page 54
Chapter 15 - Page 57
Chapter 16 - Page 60
Chapter 17 - Page 64
Chapter 18 - Page 66
Chapter 19 - Page 69
Chapter 20 - Page 72
Chapter 21 - Page 75
Chapter 22 - Page 80
Chapter 23 - Page 83
Chapter 24 - Page 88
Chapter 25 - Page 90
Chapter 26 - Page 92
Chapter 27 - Page 95
Chapter 28 - Page 98
Chapter 29 - Page 103
Chapter 30 - Page 103
Chapter 31 - Page 106
Chapter 32 - Page 109
Chapter 33 - Page 112
Chapter 34 - Page 115
Chapter 35 - Page 118
Chapter 36 - Page 121
Chapter 37 - Page 123
Chapter 38 - Page 125
Chapter 39 - Page 128
Chapter 40 - Page 131
Chapter 41 - Page 137
Chapter 42 - Page 140
Chapter 43 - Page 142
Chapter 44 - Page 144
Chapter 45 - Page 147
Chapter 46 - Page 149
Chapter 47 - Page 151
Chapter 48 - Page 153

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Chapter 1

Jalaluddin muhammad akbar watch the beauty of amer kingdom from the top of the hills, he hear about this beautiful kingdom from his soldier, even sharifuddin want to attack and conquer amer because not only mughal sultanat that have eyes on amer but the neighbour kingdom of amer too have eyes on amer and jalal can't blame them since it is indeed very beautiful land, he hear the music and his man told him that it's ganggaur festival and everyone celebrate it, jalal look at him self on his disguise as rajput man with abdul his best friends and some his trusted soldier, they want to enter amer and find bout amer people , bout the strength of amer kingdom, he heard a lot bout the amer soldier who really good in sword fighting, archery and bravery but jalal never fight with amer warrior so that still must be proven to him.

Abdul watch jalal and he smile " wow jalal . . you do look like rajput man " he praise him

" thank you abdul " said jalal " come abdul look at those beautiful kingdom " jalal pointed out to the beauty down there

" yes jalal amer really beautiful kingdom . . it's like jewel in the desert " reply abdul while looking at what jalal pointed

" and i heard rajkumari sukanya very beautiful girl and can make man fall on their feet " said jalal with amusement, he heard his soldier talking about her

Abdul chuckled " that's what i heard too but i heard something interesting story " said abdul

Jalal looking at abdul with curious " what story ? tell me ? "

" i heard from people of amer that there is one girl who really beautiful, soo beautiful than even rajkumari sukanya wont have a chance to start compare with but they don't want to tell me the name of her, all they said she always helping people and teaching kids especially orphan but not everyone lucky enough to meet and see her because she always wear a veil on her face, they call her angel of amer and they are adoring her more than they adoring their rajkumari " jalal really interesting listening to abdul

" sound interesting abdul . . it's like you are talking about who impossible exist " reply jalal

" that's what i heard from people that i met this morning in market and they all very enthusiasm when they were talking bout her " said abdul

" hmmm very interesting . . i wonder if this angel of amer really exist or just a myth " jalal really curious with this angel

" I believe she is alive in flesh and blood . . . me too want to see the most beautiful girl in amer if only you know how people describe her beauty " reply abdul

Jalal watch him with more curious " be my guess abdul tell me "

Abdul smile listeing enthusiasm in his tone " well they describe her like a rose in the desert soo beautiful, her eyes like a doe eyes so warm, her skin smooth like silk, her lips red like rose petal, and she walk with gracefully, she is indeed like angel walking on earth " jalal listen with thoroughly bout this special woman

" and you sure they don't know her name ? " ask jalal

Abdul grin to him " why jalal ? feel interesting ? people said only when you lucky enough you can see her " tease abdul

" hah jalaluddin muhammad akbar no need luck to meet anyone it's the opposite people will need luck to meet me " said jalal with arrogant

Abdul chuckled " yeah bad luck " he said with amusement

" hahahha abdul if you are not my best friend and one of my trust people you will be dead by now " jalal warn him but they are still in joke mood

Abdul wink to him " yes i'm well aware of that jalal and i use my privilege the best i can as you know no one dare to say the truth in your face " said abdul with happy and smile wide make jalal want to get rid off that smug on his face

" yes well abdul appareantly only you who dare enough and i'm pretty sure eventhough you don't have that privilege you will still said whatever you want to me " praise jalal, he is feel lucky to have him as best friend because with his position as shahehshah hindustan he can't trust no one not even his own shadow but he only trust 4 people in his life and sadly his mother hamida bano not make that cut, as soon as he remember his mother he dismiss it from his mind.

" oooh that such huge praise from you jalal and you know i feel interesting of something " reply abdul

Jalal looking at him with curious " what make you feel interesting abdul ? " ask jalal impatience

" do you feel strange that mughal sultanat have devil like you while amer have sweet angel like her, it will be interesting to see if there will encounter between devil and angel " said abdul with grin

" I guarantee you abdul if this angel meet this devil she will wish she never born " reply jalal with cruel, abdul don't know why but he got the feel that devil and angel will meet and he want to witness that because he didn't reveal one fact bout this angel to jalal that this angel is not a commong angel but angel of warrior, people told him too that she always protect people from enemy.

Abdul smile to jalal " now come on . . let's enter amer, today is ganggaur festival and i feel excited to see it " he add

" then let's go abdul . . tell soilders to stay put . . no need to take them since we are in disguise " said jalal and abdul nod the he leave and tell soldier to wait them there, then he and jalal leave, with excited jalal see the market full of people and they all warm to each other even to him, it's a new experience for him and since here in amer the situation very different from mughal where everytime he visit market to met his people they always hide in scare or just bend their face and refuse to see him in the eyes, but he feel ok with that because of course people must afraid to their king, jalal and abdul check one store who sell sword and archery equipment, he heard that amer make the best sword and archery and rajput famous for bravery, loyalty and fighting skill, in amer since very young age people will training their kids fighting and hunting skill so they are born as natural warrior and jalal really want to face one great rajput warrior.

Jalal and abdul enjoying their time at archery stand when they hear a man announce the royalty ladies will passing by and people move a side and wait the palaquin of royalty ladies, abdul whispering to jalal " well jalal . . it's our lucky day . . we will see the famous beautiful rajkumari sukanya "

Jalal chuckled because he is not easy to impress and beside there are a lot beautiful woman in his harem even his first begum ruqaiya sultan very beautiful woman and smart too, so he will see if rajkumari sukanya really beautiful or people over do when they praise her " we will see abdul . . we will see " reply jalal, then the palaqin passing him and abdul, first it's rani mainawati, second rajkumari shivani and the last is rajkumari sukanya, jalal and abdul with curious and enthusiasm look up and jalal must confess rakjumari sukanya indeed one beautiful woman, very beautiful but her beauty in the same level as ruqaiya so that mean nothing special bout her beauty but she is true blue blood and it will interesting if he have begum from rajputana and his mind already working on how to get this rajkumari as his begum, while abdul spellbound by sukanya'a beauty, he never see such a beautiful woman, jalal smile looking at abdul watching sukanya without a blink, then jalal smell a very strong rose fragrance, it smell very good on his nose, he look across the road and he froze, there standing a woman in yellow choli and lehenga, she is not too tall, have exotic tan skin, doe eyes, eventhough she is across him but he can see the color of her eyes very clear but too bad she wearing a veil on her face, then jalal remember what abdul said bout angle of amer and he know that moment that he is looking at angel of amer, she don't realize that jalal watching her, then jalal looking two woman come to her and whispering on her ears and she nod then she leave, jalal can see some people fold their hands in front of their chest and greet her, he can see how people respect and love her, some kids stop by to greet her and she kneel in front of them and talk to them, he listening her laugh and it's like a musical on his ears, then she start to walk again, he can hear the sound of her payal and he like that sound, jalal decide to follow her, his heart beating soo fast, he got the feeling that if he following her he can see her face, he really curious want to see her face, her eyes alone enough to hypnotize him, abdul who still amaze with sukanya beauty panic when he can't find jalal around and so he start to looking for him.

Jalal following the angel to the river and he can see the royalty ladies doin pooja beside the river, jalal stand on the stairs above her, she bring a plate on her hands fill with a small candles, then she kneel down beside the river and put the candle on it, she fold her hands on front of her chest and pray.

" jodha . . . . " jalal see two woman earlier come to angel and now he know her name

" yes moti what's wrong ? " ask jodha, jala still amase listening to her sweet voice

" nothing wrong just that i heard if you pray here you can see your future, your destiny for a second " said moti

" yes jodha i heard that too . . . why not we all pray and who know we will see our future " suggest reva

" good idea reva . . come on jodha let's pray " reply moti, then moti and reva with exciting start to pray, jodha just smile looking at her best friends

Jodha close her eyes again and start to pray in her heart " dear Lord . . please always protect my people, bless them with happinss, peace , health and wealth " she pray and ready to open her eyes when she curious with what moti and reva said " and dear Lord one more thing, please show me my future " she add then she open her eyes and look into the water, something start to show on the water when suddenly a very strong wind hit her, she hear people talk that it's very strange that suddenly there is a wind, jodha's duppata fly from head and she try to hold it but the wind too strong and she in trouble try to hold her duppata and veil on her face, then jodha decide to take off the veil, jalal hold his breath when jodha take off the veil and show her full face to him, he never meet such a beauty like her, even ruqaiya and pinaz the most beautiful begum in his harem can't match this woman beauty, her lips red like rose petal, she is very beautiful creature and jalal cant take off his eyes from her, her hairs very dark like a dark cloud, jalal really curious who is this beautiful creature who call angel by amer people, she look like come from royalty but he never heard raja bharmal have a daughter name jodha, the wind make jalal's hair in mess but he don't care as his mind stumb to jodha but then he spot abdul and he know he is looking for him, while jodha looking back at the water and with surprise she see jalal's reflection, she wonder who is that man then she turn her head and look at behind but no one is there, jalal been gone when abdul wave to him, with confuse jodha look back to water and the man reflection and see it's disappears.

" jodha ? what's wrong ? " ask moti in concern

" nothing moti " reply jodha lie to her

" come jodha we must go now before they see you "warn reva, the wind till strong and jodha put again her veil, then the three of them leave the rivers, meanwhile mainawati look at the young woman with veil on her face, actually everyone see her and she heard some people talk that angel come to pray too and they are very sure that God will listen to an angel like her, mainawati curious to who is that young woman, she take sukanya and shivani leave the river with guard by their royal soldier, but when she is just about to get into her palaqin someone hold her hands, mainawati looking at who is holding her hands and guard come to protect their rani.

" shaguni bai " she said and feel relieve that it turn out that it just shaguni bai, the famous parnormal from ambe ma mandir, her premonition always coming true but she can't be ask to told premonition because she will only give premonition to someone she want.

" helo rani mainawati . . . it's been a long time "greet shaguni

" what are you doin here shaguni bai ? " ask mainawati, she feel curious why shaguni here because all she knew she barely leave kali ma mandir.

Shaguni bai turn her body to the rivers " Kali ma and nature calling me here . . because here in this river the fate of amer and mughal just decide, the two soul who will change history just meet here . . . . "

Mainawati face become white when she hear mughal " amer and mughal ? what do you mean shaguni bai ? " ask her

Shaguni looking at mainawati pale face and smile " what do you think if I say that one of amer rajkumari will marry with mughal ? " ask shaguni

Mainawati totally shock to hear her words " not a chance shaguni bai . . i wont let my daughter marry to mughal . . . that's very cruel fate to any rajput woman to marry mughal " said mainawati with panic

Shaguni chuckling " i didn't say your daughter rani mainawati. . . . i said one of amer rajkumari ,may be it's your daughter or someone else " she corrected, mainawati look very confuse but then something hit her and she look at her with disbelief " now you remember her . . but let's see what will happen in the future because the devil will choose his own bride, today nature give a sign that he seen all rajkumari and he already mark his bride, he already choose his rani " add shaguni and mainawati feel really worry now

" shaguni bai you are really scare me . . tell me what will happen shaguni " said mainawati

Shaguni look at the moon which turn red and pointed it to mainawati " war rani mainawati . . amer will face war, a huge war, and fate of amer are in the hands one of rajkumari, the chosen one will be savior for amer, and the chosen one will create history and engrave her name not only in rajputana and mughal sultanat but in hindustan " answer shaguni then she leave, mainawati just watching her leave with concern and worry on her face, she must talk to her husband raja bharmal about this matter, she is really scare with shaguni bai premonition, mughal are very cruel and mughal sultanat shehenshah jalaluddin muhammad akbar definitely the most cruel man in the world, people call him the devil, she hope shaguni premonition is wrong, mainawati then get into her palaqin and with lots things in her mind she is back to palace.

In the morning jodha just finish doin pooja and she keep thinking about the reflection she saw in the water when she pray at the river, she don't know who is he but he look handsome and there is something in his eyes, jodha dismiss her what's in her mind and decide to practice her skll in sword fighting, she move with gentle and beautifully with her sword like she and her sword is one, her sword fighting style is very different from people used to, her style is like create for a woman, it may look less powerfull but it's very fast and deadly.

" i don't want to be your enemy jodha " jodha stop the practice and see her sword fighting and archery guru

" sujamal bhaisa . . . . why i don't hear you come ? " she ask

Sujamal smile " you are in deed and full concentration so you don't realise i'm coming, concentration is good but you must still be aware of your surrounding " sujamal warn her

Jodha nod " will do bhaisa . . " reply jodha

Sujamal come to jodha and he take out his sword " ok jodha . . show me what you got " he challenge her

" with pleasure " she said with a smile on her face, a cold smile that sujamal always wonder how can a beautiful, a caring, a kind hearted like her smile with that cold, jodha start to attack him, her move very fast and sujamal think that if jodha born as a boy she can be a great warrior , she is hundred times better from any amer or mughal soldier, then jodha and sujamal hear moti and reva calling for them in panic.

" what's wrong moti ? " ask sujamal

" there are mughal soldier attack ambe ma mandir " reply moti with scare

" what . . don't they have respect for other people belief and God " she said in angry

" and they rob the jewelry inside mandir " reply reva

" come jodha . . let give those barbaric mughal a lesson " said sujamal and jodha nod then both following by moti and reva ride their horses and leave to ambe ma mandir, what they see there is shocking, some people laying with bleeding outside the mandir, and mughal soldiers attacking unarm people, jodha and sujamal come down from their horses and attack mughal soldiers, while moti and reva helping injured people, mughal soldier very shock someone come and fight them and in just couple of minutes kill half of soldiers, they don't know who is the two brave person but their fighting skill are amazing, then there only two mughal soldier left and with very quick jodha and sumajal disarm them.

" you are dare to against shahehshah jajaluddin muhammad akbar army, he will kill you both" said one soldier with arrogant

Jodha kneel down and put her sword on his neck " i will fight with whoever who dare to attact mandir, this is a holy place where people come to pray, eventhough you are not believe in our religion but show some respect for other, your shehenshah really shamefull let his army to do something shamefull like this, but today i will spare your life, now you go to your shehenshah that tell him that he is aint no king, he just the devil walk on earth and caused soo much pain for other " the soldier look shock listening her words and they more shock to know that jodha is woman, they've been beaten by a woman, shehenshah will kill them if he know about it " and tell him as long as jodha still alive she will never let him destroy even just one mandir . . . understand ? " she add

" shehenshah will kill you all " said the soldier in panic while pointing to jodha and sujamal

" he can try . . . we wont run and hide . . we are rajput not a coward " reply sujamal, then jodha let go the two mughas soldier and they run like chicken shit, sujamal look at jodha and he smile, people come to jodha and said thank you, sujamal think how people will react if they know the real identity of jodha, that the angel they adore soo much is their long lost heer kunwari rajkumari who they love soo much when she is just a little girl but suddenly disappears, jodha along with moti and reva help to give medicine for the wounded people, jodha make remedy in fast, people really happy that they have this angel to protect them, she always be there for whoever in needs, they bless this angel, then jodha enter mandir and put back the jewelry on kali ma statue, she look at the statue and tears fall on her cheeks.

" kali ma . . those mughlas have no respects, how can they attack this mandir and rob your jewelly kali ma . . shehenshah jajaluddin muhammad akbar is a cruel and he is devil . . . " said jodha with sadly and anger the she cut her hands little bit and let her blood drop to the ground then she look at kali ma " kali ma for every drop of my blood i promise you i will make jalal pay for what he did to you, and i swear as long as jodha live no mandir will be attack and rob again by the devil, give me your power and strength kali ma, i will make him bow his head in front of you, i will teach him how to respect others people religion and God, and one day whenever people calling his name my name will be calling out too " jodha look at kali ma with confident and determination.

" be carefull or what you wish rajkumari heer kunwari " suddenly shaguni bai come from behind, jodha really shock to hear her calling her by her real name, a name and identity that she buried 9 years a go.

" how you know shaguni bai ? " ask jodha curious, no one know her identity beside sujamal, moti, reva, bhagwan das, man singh and dadisa.

Shaguni smile " nothing escape from shaguni eyes . . i knew from the very begginig angel of amer, jodha bai is rajkumari heer kunwari " said shaguni

" yes it's appears that nothing can espcare from your eyes " reply jodha, shaguni looking at the cut wound on jodha's hand

" you must put medicice on that wound " shaguni point to jodha hand

Jodha looking her bloody hand " it's ok shaguni . . this wound is nothing compare the wound in my heart waching mughal attack this mandir and rob kali ma jewelry" said jodha with sad

" rajkumari . . . believe that everything happen for a reason, just like why God create earth, sun,moon and among other things " reply shaguni

Jodha thinking bout what shagubi words " this life full of mystery shaguni . . . . . "

" jodha . . we must go now " said reva from the door and then jodha said good bye to shaguni first before she leave, shaguni watch jodha leave and she smile because what jodha said is very right life full mystery just like jodha and jalal life too full of mystery and shaguni very curious how fate will play their role and how two different individual will create history that people will still remember even after hundred years.

Jalal is in the middle of sword practice with his soldier when abdul tell him that mariam makani hamida bano come to meet him, jalal stop the practice and dismiss his soldier, he come to abdul with cold eyes.

" what she want ? " ask jalal

" don't know jalal . . why don't you ask herself . . you know that she is your biological ammijan, you must break the ice with her, she is very nice and kind, everyone know how she is try her best to build relationship with you " reply abdul

Jalal face expression hardened " just because she is the one who give birth to me that make her a real ammijan , maham anga is the real ammijan for me eventhough I just call her badi ammi, she is the one who taking care of since I was little boy, who hold me everytime I wake up in the middle of night looking for ammijan, she is the one who ready sacrifice her life to protect mine, now that sound like real ammijan right ? " ask jalal to abdul

Abdul know better not to argue with jalal bout this matter " all I'm saying jalal . . . mariam makani still your real ammijan and I believe one day you will realize this and you will love and respect her as a son not as a shehenshah " said abdul

" I doubt that abdul . . . hell will frozen if that happen " reply jalal with sarcasm " now let's see what mariam makani want now " he add then he leave, abdul feel really sorry for jalal and hamida bano cold relationship, he understand both jalal and hamida bano act, as a wife hamida bano mun follow his husband even to battlefield and the life she and humayun goin through that time very dangerous for a baby and that's why she giving up jalal to maham anga and ask her to raise him like her own son , and jalal's angry to hamida bano too understandable and sometimes abdul feel there is a little jalal inside him who missing his real ammijan but jalal pain and ego prevent him to getting closer with her, and abdul too know that jalal love maham anga blindly and wont accept anyone say bad thing bout her, but abdul wonder what will happen if jalal know the true face of maham anga, abdul know maham anga haye eyes for the throne for adham khan but she hide her passion really well and after bairam khan suspicious death maham anga become the one that jalal really trust, abdul still investigate the death of bairam khan and he is doin this behind jalal's back and he must do it quietly and secretly because he suspect maham anga behind all of this and if she alert that he is doin investigate she will kill him but abdul not alone in this matter, he work with aziz the son of adgah, and abdul notice adgah too about what he and aziz doin so if something happen to them adgah will know and adgah just ask them to be carefull because beside maham anga had jalal her back she is very dangerous, adgah know bout her cruel nature and he don't want abdul and aziz getting hurt, abdul just hope they will find the truth bout bairam khan death before the evidence disappears.

Jalal entering his kemp and find hamida bano sitting in the middle of room waiting for him, jalal really don't like if they must talk just the two of them, the situation really awkward to him.

" adaab . . mariam makani . . . what the honor that you must go all the way here ? " he ask

" jalal . . . oh it just that I've just got from salim baba to ask bless for your and mughal sultanat safety, then I heard you are in this area so I decide to visit you " reply hamida bano

" oooh that's the first . . . but like you see mariam makani that I'm fine " said jalal and there is bitter in his tone and hamida bano feel sad how come her relationship with jalal become sour and cold like this, he is her beta and she love him soo much

" what are you doin in this area jalal ? you have plan to attack rajputana ? " ask hamida

" that is none of your concern mariam makani . . . I will announce my plan when the time is come " reply jalal and hamida bano heart feel really hurt with his ignorance to her " you better go back to agra it's not safe here, you may go tomorrow morning since it's getting dark " he add, hamida just lost words woth jalal act towards her, how many time her heart shattered into pieces but she always pray and hope that their relationship will heal but everytime he break her hope.

" as you wish shehenshah . . Allah hafiz " said hamida bano and with teary eyes she leave, jalal looking at hamida bano back until she disappear from his sight, jalal don't know how he always manage to hurt her but everytime he done that his heart feel hurt too.

Jiji anga watching hamida bano come out from jalal's kemp with teary ayes and she know that jalal reject her again, jiji anga feel sorry for hamida bano who try to rebuild her relationship with jalal but always hit dead end, hamida bano ask everyone to prepare to leave.

" are we goin home now ? " ask jiji anga " you don't want to spending time more with jalal ? " she add

Hamida shake her head and tears falling down on her cheeks and she wipe it gentle " no jiji anga we better leave now, jalal might feel unhappy with my presence here " said hamida bano with sad

" oohh hamida that's non sense " reply jiji anga

" it's true jiji anga . . . let's talk about it later now we better live " said hamida and jiji anga decide not to said anything, hamida bano definitely feel hurt and it show in her eyes, she watch hamida bano get into palaqin and so she follow her too and they leave, jalal watch hamida bano leave and he feel little bit surprise that she not wait till morning to leave, there is a slight regret in his heart but he dismiss the feeling, abdul too watching hamida bano leave and he watching too when hamida bano cry after talk with jalal, abdul just shake his head, jalal will regret big time when he realize that hamida bano is the one who love him unconditionally not maham anga, jalal spot abdul looking at him with accused stare and jalal about to say something when his soldiers yell and pointed to two jalal's soldier who run towards their kemp, they look just got hell of fight, jalal and abdul run to them just when the two soldiers fall on the ground, some soldiers help them to stand.

" what's wrong ? who did this to you ? " ask abdul

" we are in kali ma mandir to destroy it as your order but there are come two warriors and they fight with us, they kill all our soldier but let us both go to send you a message " said one soldier and abdul can see he feel scare to send the message

" two warrior did this to you ? I've send more than twenty soldiers how can two warrior beat you all " ask jalal with angry

" they are fighting with amazing skill and I must confess their skill are in your level shehenshah " said another soldier with honesty, jalal looking at him with anger

" wow . . two people against more than twenty soldier . . I want to meet these two man " reply abdul with curious

" a man and a woman " reply the soldier

" I'm sorry what ? " ask abdul

" the warriors . . . one a man and the other one is a woman " said soldier and they bend their face when jalal looking at them with disbelief

" you've got beaten up by a woman ? are you kidding me ? " he ask with high note

" it's true shehehshah . . . but she is not an ordinary woman, her sword fighting is amazing, I never see that kind sword fighting style, it's looks very gentle but it's very quick and deadly and the man definitely have high skill in fighting and his sword fighting more like you, quick and powerfull " explain one soldiers, jalal and abdul looking at each other and they curious too who are these warriors who can beat their soldiers and mughal soldiers is not a common soldiers.

" you said they let you go so you can send message for us . . what's the message ? " ask abdul, the two soldiers looking at each other with worry and scare

" what the message ? speak up ? " said jalal

" hmmm the woman said that as long as jodha still alive she wont let jalaluddin muhammad akbar touch even one mandir and the man said they are not coward and they wont run if we want to attack them they will ready " jalal can't belive what he just hear, his soldier said one the warrior's name is jodha, jalal confuse is this the same jodha or there are another jodha.

Then jalal looking at his soldier " I should kill you both for beaten up by a woman but I will spare your life today, now get lost before I change my mind and my sword will taste your blood " said jalal in angry and without wait any longer the two soldiers leave.

Abdul watch jalal and he guess jalal know something " so want to tell me something ? you look surprise hear that warrior woman name, you know this jodha ? " ask abdul

" hmmm I'm just curious abdul . . . you know today I've seen the angel and amer and believe it or not her name is jodha . . " abdul look surprise because jalal didn't said earlier that he met this angel

" ohhh damn jalal why you didn't told me that you've met her ? " ask abdul with angry

" because there are too much in my mind so I forget " reply jalal but of course he lie, he can't stop thinking bout jodha since he leave the river.

Abdul observe him and know that he is lie " yeah right jalal like I will believe that . . anyway so if the angel of amer name jodha . . is she the one who fight with our soldier ? " ask abdul but he know that she is the one because what he heard from people that the angle of amer always protect them from enemy.

" hmmm I think she is the same woman abdul . . . and she and whoever that man who fight with my soldiers challenge me hahahaha very nice jodha . . now let's see how many mandir that you can save from me " said jalal with cold and cruel " abdul summon sharifuddin to meet me tomorrow may be after lunch I want to hunting first in the morning, you'll see abdul this beautiful amer will be mine and that jodha will see with her own eyes that I will answering her challenge " he said to abdul and abdul just nod, he know that jalal will invade and attack amer soon or later but he never guess he will move this fast, this jodha just waken up the devil and he is afraid that amer will face worst nightmare.


Happy Readings . . hope you all like this ff 😛

Edited by ndi.anggraeni81 - 9 years ago
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Hi ndi

Congrats for this new story👏
Update the chapter soon...
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congrats for new story ndi 👍🏼
nice cs
update chptr soon ... eagrly waiting

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Congrats Ndi🥳
Loved the CS and waiting for the chapter😃
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Congrats for your new story, NDI...😃
Loved the CS...And waiting for the chapter...😳😃
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congrats for new story , must say it is going to be another powerful ff in forum...😃
waiting for chappy...😳

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Congrats for new story 👏
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Congrats for new story ndi
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