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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: ishra123
congratulations for completing 50 pages

Thanks rashmi for ur wishes

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: ishra123
sorry for late reply lovely emotional update loved ishra Raman has past toshiji scene was emotional ishita recognize toshiji that she is Raman mother. love mihir,bala,vandita,mihika,. thanks for pm

Thanks rashmi

No need to say sorry

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: kras
Brilliant update di
They both adorable
They both are lifeline of each other
Doctor was also amazed by their love
Their love have so much power
Because of their love doctor misunderstood their relationship
He thought that they both are husband and wife
How cutely she denied when everyone tried to take her to the hostel
How cutely she hide behind raman
And Raman he wanted to convince her to go back home
But he couldn't
But she convinced him to stay there
Their friends were so happy to see them together
And raman really talk rubbish things
But ishu knows how to quite him
And when raman mother came to meet him
She cried for raman
And told that strange lady everything about raman accident
She realized that may be that lady is raman mother
But she didn't ask raman about it
Because she trust him too much
And I love it
She prayed for raman
Because of her attempts Raman remembered his mother
And asked her to not leave him ever
He has so much pain in him
I love that line when she said yes I m ur her
And about raman parents
Mrs bhalla was so much tensed for raman
She was crying
But mihir talked to her rudely
And didn't tell her about raman condition
And he was right at his place
So raman did some mistake
And he feels guilty for it till now
When raman mother came to see him
She was crying
She was so tensed for him
But she can't stay there
She recognized ishu in one look
She asked ishu to take care of Raman
Mast update
Full of emotions

Thanks reet for ur detailed review

Glad u loved the whole update.

Will reveal his past soon

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta
Congrats for completing 50 pgs on 2nd thread

Lovely and Emotional update...
Loved their frnds for always supporting them
and be with them in their ups and downs...
Curious to know what mistake Raman did in
his Past and why his parent are angry with
him...
Toshi ji came to meet Raman in hospital ...
Loved Ishita and toshiji scene ...it was so
emotional...
Doctor called Ishita as Mrs Bhalla...lovely
Loved Raman & Ishita's convo...they are
perfect for each other...
She trust him a lot and thats why she decided
to wait for him to revealed the truth himself...
Plzz revealed the past soon...

Thanks riya

Glad u loved ishra and their friends bonding

Soon I will reveal the past .

Yes she trust him alot

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: nafnaf
First of all congratulations on passing 50 pages on this thread!!!👏⭐️
This was a fantastic update - so moving and emotional!!😳⭐️
He is all okay now and full of love for each other yayyy!!!❤️❤️

So what did he do 3 years ago that he has been repenting for al this time I wonder????
His mum obviously missing him and still loves him!!! She meets Ishita and likes her!!

Ishita does not want to leave his side - so sweet - even when Raman tries to persuade her instead she persuades him to let her stay!!😆😆

She goes to Temple to give gratitude and says she will go everyday for a week barefoot!!!!!!!! She comes back does her rituals on Raman and he open his eyes and said- what r u doing jaan.

Ishita- aapki nazar utaar rahi hoon

Raman remembered how his mother use to do the same.he lays on her lap and said- please always be like this only.

Ishita- I will always be the same.she said caressing his hair.

Absolutely beautiful update and now cannot wait for the next update soon please!!!

Thank you so much for pm!🤗

Thanks nafisha

Glad u loved it.

Yes it was cute when she convinced him in place of getting convinced

Will update soon

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART 11

Raman laid in her lap and said- please always be like this.don't change ever.

Ishita smiled and said- why would I change.I will always be there for u.will never leave u.

Raman- even if I had done some mistake in my life.even if I am not that good as u think.even if I had hidden something from u.still u will always love me naa.he asked looking at her innocently, his voice was broken,fearing at her answer.

Ishita understood that he is asking about the unsaid truth of his life.which she wants to know but seeing the pain in his eyes, she couldn't ask.she wanna trust him and want to assure him that she will be with him no matter what mistake he has done.

Ishita- a mistake can be forgiven Raman. And as much I have seen u and know u,I know u can't do something unforgivable.

Raman cried in her lap- meri galti nahi thi.main janta hoon joh hua meri wajah se hua par Maine jaan bhujkar kuch nahi kiya(that wasn't my fault,I didn't do that intentionally)

Ishita cried seeing him in so much pain, she wanna sooth all his pain.she caress his hair lovie.

Raman- main nahi bacha paya usse.uski cheekh mere kanno mein gunjati hai, mujhe aaj tak sone nahi deti.main nahi bacha paya usse,kabhi kabhi lagta hai shayad main aisi saza ke hi laayak hoon.(I couldn't save her,her screams didn't let me sleep)

Ishita caressed his hair and said- shh,close ur eyes and sleep Raman.everything will be fine soon.she patted him gently ,soon he was in deep slumber hugging her like his very own life depends on her.

She smiled and bend to kiss his forehead.she kissed his forehead and wiped the tears in the corner of his eyes.he stir in his sleep.

Ishita- I know Raman ,u wanna share ur sorrows with me.I too wanna sooth ur pain.but this is not the time. U r too sensitive can't handle any stress now.u r too precious for me,can't loose u to know ur secret.saying so she remembered what doc told her while she was entering the room.

Flashback

Ishita was going inside his room,when doctor called her.

Ishita- what happened doc. Is he OK.

Doctor- yes he is stable.but I can't say he is OK.see he is recovering but since it was a head injury u have to take at most care of him.u should avoid any kind of stress.keep him happy.that will help him to recover fast.see Mrs bhalla I saw how much u love ur husband and don't wanna loose him.am I correct.

Ishita- yes doc.

Doctor- so I will ask u to keep him stress free and happy.ur love and care is most important to make him fit and fine like before.

Ishita- doc he is fine,naa I mean any threat on his life.

Doctor- see Mrs bhalla.I don't know why but he is being over sensitive.I also saw him weeping in his sleep murmuring, I couldn't save her.I don't know about whom he was talking.but I want u to avoid any stress .his being in such a vulnerable position means ,he can really slip into coma.

Ishita- what?

Doctor- yes its true.his head injury was massive.so please try to avoid such topics.just keep him happy.

Ishita- thanks for telling doc.I will take care of him.how much time he needs to recover.

Doc- it depends on the way u can assure him that he is not alone.actually its his mental problem then physical one.I hope u r understanding.he needs someone to sooth his pain,generally we prescribe therapy for these kind of patients, I don't know u know or don't but he is in heavy mental tension.if u want we can call a psychiatrist.

Ishita- no he don't need any.I am there for him.today and always.thanks for informing doc.saying so she went inside.

Flashback ends.

Ishita kissed his cheeks and said- I love u Raman.I will always be with u,no matter what u r,what u did.u don't have to worry.even if the whole world is against u ,then also ur ishita will be with u only.raaste kitne bhi mushkil ho,main aapka saath kabhi nahi chodungi.I will bring u out of this darkness.I will love u like no one had ever loved anyone.

He smiled in his sleep like he is listening her talk.she smiled seeing his smile.she hugged him more into himself adjusting him to sleep comfortably.

That's all for now.I know its a chotu update,but its getting late,I have some really urgent work and I don't wanna disappoint those who resed after me.next update will be early and long one.pakka promise.

Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago

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mannat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

Beautiful update

Enjoyed reading it

Lyked ishita concern for Raman

Loved ishra in it

Plz open the suspense soon

Thanks for pm

Cont soonish

Edited by mannatkhan - 10 years ago

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abha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

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Superb di but chotu...koi na u said na next will be longish and soon...

Raman want to share but still threat on his life...Ishita's love and care will cure him...i am sure...

loved their moments...

Who is Raman...jaldi jaldi suspense kholo...

Continue soon...

Thanks for pm...

Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago

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Prayosha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#389

Hey Di...

Very Nice Part...Emotional too...

Raman- even if I had done some mistake in my life.even if I am not that good as u think.even if I had hidden something from u.still u will always love me naa.he asked looking at her innocently, his voice was broken,fearing at her answer.

Aakhkir aisi kya baat chhupa raha hai Raman...

Ishita- a mistake can be forgiven Raman. And as much I have seen u and know u,I know u can't do something unforgivable.

She is so understanding...So loving ...So caring ...

Raman cried in her lap- meri galti nahi thi.main janta hoon joh hua meri wajah se hua par Maine jaan bhujkar kuch nahi kiya(that wasn't my fault,I didn't do that intentionally)

Ishita cried seeing him in so much pain, she wanna sooth all his pain.she caress his hair lovie.

Raman- main nahi bacha paya usse.uski cheekh mere kanno mein gunjati hai, mujhe aaj tak sone nahi deti.main nahi bacha paya usse,kabhi kabhi lagta hai shayad main aisi saza ke hi laayak hoon.(I couldn't save her,her screams didn't let me sleep)

Aisa kya hua tha!!!!!

Kise nahi bacha paya Raman!!!! Simmi, Shagun Rinki, uski Sister!!!!!

Doctor- see Mrs bhalla.I don't know why but he is being over sensitive.I also saw him weeping in his sleep murmuring, I couldn't save her.I don't know about whom he was talking.but I want u to avoid any stress .his being in such a vulnerable position means ,he can really slip into coma.

Ishita- what?

OMG...coma...!!!!! 😭

Ishita kissed his cheeks and said- I love u Raman.I will always be with u,no matter what u r,what u did.u don't have to worry.even if the whole world is against u ,then also ur ishita will be with u only.raaste kitne bhi mushkil ho,main aapka saath kabhi nahi chodungi.I will bring u out of this darkness.I will love u like no one had ever loved anyone.

Yes...Ishita kuch nahi hone degi Raman ko...koi saath ho na ho...wo humesha saath rahegi...

Please Make Raman healthy soon...

If you did not want...there was no need to update...we can understand you...You gave us beautiful OS & 2 Prologue Tomorrow/ Today Morning ...we can adjust with those..

Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago

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--S.Divan--

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome update but emotional one...

I'm curious to know ki wo kaun thi jise Raman
bachaa nahi paya...???

Ishita loves Raman unconditionaly and she
trust him a lot...she is so understanding...
chahe jo hojaye Ishita Raman ka saath kabhi
nahi chodegi...

Flashback was emotional ...but I know Ishita's
love and care cure him soon...she never let
happens anything wrong with him...

Plzzz revealed his identity and his past soon...

Edited by riYa09guPta - 10 years ago