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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Excellent update!!

What is wrong with Ishita not believing Raman when everyone else believes and trusts him!!!!!!!!!

The Bhallas die in accident - poor Raman!!!😭
Ishita comes back and has confrontation with Mihir!!! Well done Mihir!!👍🏼

She finally realises she loves Raman and that she now wants to believe him yayyy!!!👏👍🏼❤️

Once FB is finished everything will back to square one where she has lost her memory and again she does not believe him and I guess Raman will leave her and go away!!!!😭😭

Please update soon - it is sweet now but will be sad again!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!🤗



thanks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
A--- is it Ashok?
Was shaggy preggy

Shagun Raman k dialogues aise thei k mis-interpret hi hone thei lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 2
Too emotional
I can't see Raman crying
Its main protagonist is Raman naah?



thanks dear
yes yes raman is protagonist...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 5...
Awww... But oye... Past ka happy moments thoda or stretch kar dete ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
With this I completed this one too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Part 5...
Awww... But oye... Past ka happy moments thoda or stretch kar dete ;)


hahahha...
glad u like it...
actually it is short na...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

With this I completed this one too



yes u completed this one...
waiting for your comment on others...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Kasak

Chapter 6

Present:

After some time, ishita gets up... she sees raman sleeping beside her.. hugging her.. her head was on his chest while his arms were protectively around her waist... she sees him...

Ishita thinks: really raman you are innocent??? Then who is the killer raman???

She touches his face and sees the dried tears in the corner of his eyes..she felt pained... She wanted to forget all the bad memories and hug him...her heart is telling her to believe raman...

Her tears fall on raman face... raman gets up and sees her crying...

Raman: what happen?? are you okay...

Ishita hugs him... Raman hugs her back.. and caresses her hairs...

Raman: don't cry jaan... tell me kiya hua??? Dard to nahe horaha??? You are fine na???

Ishita cries...

Raman: don't stress your self ishita... Please... If you don't want to stay here... its okay I will take you to appa house... just take care of yourself...

Ishita sees raman with teary eyes... Raman wipes her tears and reluctantly kisses her forehead... ishita closes her eyes to feel the touch of raman...

Raman: rest karo... let me change then I will drop you .. okay...

Saying this raman takes his clothes and leaves to get ready... ishita was lost in thoughts... She was thinking... She tries to remember... some flashes came across... but its was blurr... Her head start spinning... she holds her head... raman who comes there sees ishita holding her head and writhing in pain... rushes to her...

Raman: ishita... ishita...

Ishita loses her conscious... raman calls the doctor... and doctor strictly told them to take care of her stress is not good for her... and leaves...

Raman glares at mihika... and signs her to come with her... raman leaves... mihir and mihika follows him... ishita also gains her conscious... She sees that no one is there... she was feeling thrusty... she sees the jug is empty... she thinks to get water... she gets up from bed... and moves towards the hall... Listening to the shout, ishita goes towards the room...

ROOM:

Raman: I told you na... don't give any sort of stress to her...

Mihika: I am sorry bhai... I thought if I show proofs to Bhabhi she will accept...

Raman: ishita ko kisi proofs ki zaroorat nahe hai... uska dil agar manega to wo maan jayegi.. aur abhi meri innocence proof karne say zyada important ishita ki health hai...

Mihir: relax bhai... aisa phr nahe hoga...

Raman: hona bhi nahe chahiye... I cant loose them... I cant loose my baby and ishita... I cant live without them... he cries and collapses on floor...

Mihir hugs him... while mihika cries seeing raman shattered...

Raman: mihir... Bhabhi ko appa kay ghar lay jana... I don't want her to stress herself... I can live far from her but I cant live without her...

Mihika: bhai sab theek hoga...

Ishita gets teary seeing raman broken... She was feeling pained to see raman this much broken...she returns to the room thinking... Her chain of thinking gets broken when she hears voice.. her inner voice

Innersoul: kiya hua??? Dukh horaha hai yon raman ko dekh kar... kiyon wo to aik killer hai... murderer hai... You hate him...

Ishita: I don't know...

Innersoul: you hate raman... remember...

Ishita: no... I love him... cries...

Raman comes, ishita wipes her tears.. and sees raman... raman holds her and takes her.. ishita was seeing raman... Raman drives to iyer house. Whole journey was silent... stealing glances... raman badly wants to goes back to time and change this...he sees ishita...

Ye kasak dil ki dil mein chubhi rah gayi

Zindagi mein tumhaari kami rah gayi

(This aching of my heart remained pinching my heart (forever) (that) there remained an absence of yours in my life.. )

Raman reaches at iyer house take ishita in room and leaves ishita there... he turns and sees her before going. He wants ishita to stop him...

Ek main ek tum ek deewar thi Zindagi

aadhi aadhi banti rah gayi

(It was you, me and a wall,

and life left divided into two equal pieces..)

raman leans on his car and takes a deep breath remembering how history is repeating... How they were happy and shagun murdered and ishita left him... raman sits in car while ishita sees him going from window and cries...

Maine roka nahi wo chala bhi gaya

Bebasi door tak dekhti reh gayi

(I didn't stop him, he left too,

and helplessness kept staring till far away.. )

at night:

both raman and ishita sitting in their respective room and crying... ishita goes near the window and sees the moon... and remembers how every thing is changed...


Raat ki bheegi bheegi chhaton ki tarah

Meri palkon pe thodi nami rah gayi

(Like the wet roofs of night('s dew),

Some wetness was left on my eyelids too.. )

Raman takes ishita photo and hugs it and cries loudly... says: just once ishita.. just once listen to your heart... just trust me once... I cant take this anymore...


Ret par aansuon ne tere naam ki

Jo kahaani likhi bepadhi rah gayi

(The story of your name that my tears wrote

on sand, remained unread that is, you didn't read it)

Morning:

As per raman request, mr and mrs iyer did not talk with ishita on raman.. They takes care of her... ishita was missing raman badly... she does not liking anything in this house... madhvi come with milk...

Madhvi: ishu... Drink this kanna...

Ishita makes faces and says : no she does not want to drink this... I don't like milk...

Madhvi: but its good for health and baby needs it na... for baby...

Ishita : no... baby also not like milk... and lays again and says: I am sleeping don't disturb...

Madhvi shooks her head on her antics and calls raman... raman takes the call hurriedly seeing the caller id...

Raman: amma... ishita theek hai na...

Madhvi: she is fine... but she is not drinking milk... she says she and baby does not like milk...

Raman laughs...

Madhvi: I know its all because of you ... You pampered her a lot... now tell me what should I do with her... how she will drink milk...

Raman remembers...

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Flashback:

Raman trying to make ishita drink milk but ishita was admant...

Raman: ishita... baby wants to drink milk...

Ishita shooks her head and says: no... baby does not like this milky... its so smelly smelly.. and holds her nose...

Raman: then what does baby like...

Ishita: baby papa does not even know what baby and mumma like to have...

Raman: dramebaaz...

Saying this raman goes and comes back after 5 minutes with milk glass again.. ishita glares at raman and touches her tummy and says: look baby papa again comes with that smelly milk... papa does not love us...

Raman sits and says: its not smelly baby... Is nice... drink...

Ishita: no...

Raman: only one sip jaan... for me...

Ishita: no.. never...

Raman: jaano...

Ishita: no...

Raman: for me...

Ishita sees raman.. raman gives her glass and ask her to drink.. ishita makes yucky face.. raman gives a stern look.. she takes sip and looks on...

Raman: what???

Ishita: its not smelly...

Raman: magic...

Ishita drinks the milk and raman smiles at her..

Flashback ends...

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Madhvi: raman...

Raman: add kesar and honey... she will like it...

Madhvi cuts the call and prepares kesar milk for ishita and gives to her which she drinks happily...

BHALLA HOUSE:

Raman gets ready and leaves for his work... he sees beautiful flowers and thinks of ishita.. he stops the car and goes to buy some... while returning back... a car hits him, whose driver wears the bracelet written A...

Raman lays on road with some blood...

That's it my dear friends hope you all will like the update...waiting for your lovely comments and response...

Edited by ishrasoul - 10 years ago
akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
So m d frst one to comment
superb update
ishu confused between her heart n mind
i hope she will b able to trust raman soon
n raman hit by an A ashok i guess
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG Raman has an accident. Ishita is such a dramebaaz

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