My first try on a story Manan: Destiny want us to b 2gether

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manan4everlv

@manan4everlv

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Posted: 9 years ago

hello everyone 😳

I just hv been commenting on ur posts..

Hence dis is my first story on manan Infact my for 1st ever story on if

Hope u like it n do give me ideas to continue. .

Ur writings hv always inspired me

Specially Naddiya di, Juhi di, angel2015, ainahbarbie(I hope Iam writing ur spellings correct ;-)) and many of u.. Don't remember d names yet 😛

Now enough of my blabbering.. Here u go...

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MANAN DESTINY WANT US TO BE TOGETHER

Here she was all shattered.. Yet she was determined to make everything right.. She was planning a birthday surprise for HIM though she knew that may b he would never come back...

She invited all d Fab3 members, Navya and Aryamaan for surprise in Fab5 jamming room.. Evn fab3 after d mysterious absence of Manbir were shattered but never showed dem to each other..

Placing everything in it's place balloons with party hats n a " Happy Birthday " banner for him when suddenly her eyes fell on something.. Which was HIS life, THERE memories wid it... Everything got rewind.. HIM teaching her 4 d 1st time, him playing it in dere 1st date, making her distracted after pandit fiasco n what not.. Yes it was HIS guitar.. His life..

She touched it with so much love and care, and tried to play.. Remembering how he made her play..

"Where r u Manik?? Iam missing u a lot... U have promised me that u'll b wid me HUMESHA :-( ", She said to herself...

Yet he did not come. Now only there good n bad memories were wid her. When suddenly Aryamaan enter d jamming room and said " Bhoo" scaring her :-P. After Manik, aryamaan as a friend had helped her a lot to live her life.. Nandini - " Aryamaan u scared me yaar.. Baaki sab kaha hai?? N hvn't they seen my msg??"

Aryamaan- " Pta nhi Nandini, may b dey r busy.. Hence hvn't seen d msg. U relax i'll ask them".

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With Fab3 n Navya

Alya: " guys Nandini is continuously msging us.. What should v do??"

Navya" Bechari Nandini.. Kitni koshish kar rhi move on karne ki.. Hume uski fikra ho rhi hai ( Iam worried for her), hum to kehte hai ko chalte hai, vo kab se hamara wait kar rhi hai.. "

Mukti -" how can u say this yaar navya. Tum samajh kyu nhi rhi!! Jitna hard nandini k liye hai utna hi hamare liye bhi hai manik n cabir ko bhulna!!"

"Ab to sirf Nandini k liye jaa rhe.. Lets go n see y did she called us :-S "

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On one hand nandini spilled oil and frm other direction Fab3 along wid navya were coming.. Nandini was all set to record d scene hidding behind d pillar n lo dhadam!! Dham!!

Prevent oneself frm falling n holding each other dey all lost there balance n slipped on the floor :-P.. N here r nandini after shooting d video was laughing holding her stomach...

Fab3 " Nandini!! Will u tell us ye kya tha!!"

Nandini suppressing her laughter came out n said " guys i was just reminding d raggings to u did wid other students so i thought to do it wid u n see 1st time in d history of space Fab5 is ragged by a Commoner like NANDINI MURTHY :-P :-P "

Everyone smiled at her inoscence n started laughing when aryamaan who too was trapped in her plan pulled her :-P

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To b continued .. .Wid some twists 😉

A/N NO PROOF READING.. PRESENCE OF GRAMMATICAL ERRORS N SPELLING MISTAKES CAN BEEN SEEN

Pls comment I wanna know about my 1st writing.. This is d first time iam writing for about more den 500 words..

Pls tell whether I should continue or not?? Pls do suggest me ku aage how show I continue?? Me confused.. U can pm me if u wish 😊

And yeh criticism r most welcomed

Thanks

Bye n Gud night <3

Edited by manan4everlv - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

its nice. All the best for ur first story.

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manan4everlv

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Posted: 9 years ago

Guys should I not continue?? No one commented..

I know iam late for dis story but I'll try to make sure dis story to b little different frm d show.. Wid some suspense n twist.. Pakka

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manan4everlv

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 2

Sorry for the late update guys..

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2 days later they were preparing for d elections since Nandini decided that by becoming college president was d only way to know the real reason behind the death of Manik and Cabir.

"Yes guys i just want to become president just for Manik and cabir so guys pls help me in elections.." said Nandini when fab3 asked her the real reason and her sudden behaviour.

"Sorry guys i won't for now, i promise you guys i'll tell u everything ", said Nandini

"Okay then! fine! Guys let's get prepared to win the elections" said Mukti as she was d only member who was hard to manaofy.

Someone on the other hand was listening dere convo... And he was none other then Maddy (well yeah he was maddy.. No Nyonika or Harshad or someone else :-P)

Maddy: So miss Veena vadini.. U r still standing for elections.. N dat too for ur Umm.. Uska name kya tha jiski awaaz mujhse milti hai Umm haa Manik Malhotra.. Yaa.. He is dead naa to kyu fight kar rhi elections.. Ye tumhare bus ka nhi hai.."

Mukti: 😡"iski to how dare he!! Himmat kaese hui tumhari hamare friends k baate mein itna kuch bolme ki..!! Jante kitna ho tum hume!!" 😡Mukti was just going to pounce on her when Aryamaan n Dhruv calmed her down while Nandini was silent yet she was determined to win this election. N she went away..

After nandini went, "Guys Hame Nandini ko any how jitana

padega either by hook or crook without letting her know about our plans.. Done (y)?? "said Mukti. Yes done - said others..

FLASHBACK

When nandini was remembering all the moments spent by her Manik after giving her name for elections..

"Manik Iam missing u a lot..😭 Y did u left me alone.. Guess what Iam fighting in elections just for u". When suddenly she heard the music which was being played by HIM and she ran towards the music room only to get shock that the music was not played by HIM :-(.. Getting strength she just went near the guy asked ki y is he playing dis music?? Don't you know that this music not composed by u.. How could you play someone else's composition and dat too of my... "

But in reply she only cold stares n ignorance "I don't care kiska composition hai.. N yeh by d way Iam Maddy i .e. Madhyam Singhania and let me tell u one thing ki maddy kisi ki baat follow nhi karta so ye attitude dikhana band karo"

Flashback continue..

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A/N

Sorry guys for such short n late update but studies r my first priority now.. Iam a medical student hence need to focus more.. I don't know when will I update d next update.. I will just try to revive our manan n chill maddy will leave in next update.

Edited by manan4everlv - 9 years ago

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My first try on a story Manan: Destiny want us to b 2gether

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