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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looks interesting...
i hope its not that dark...???

anyway thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
wow another story
excited
prolog is interesting
continue soon
and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR dear
new year..new story...nice👍🏼
looks interesting
continue soon
is that boy manik😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
it seems an amazing story...thanks for the pm. continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It seems very interesting and please continue soon.
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nice concept...
as per the name,,it will be interesting...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part-2

A new morning which was waiting by sum people very excitedly whereas for one person it was the most disastrous day which was going to change his life.
Murthy people were going to malhotra mansion for the roka ceremony. all were doing preparations and were very happy with d alliance as the only heir of malhotra Mr.Manik Malhotra has accepted the proposal that too with many problems(u will get to know later on).
mr. and mrs. murthy with their two daughters alya and nandani visited malhotra mansion.
they were welcomed by mr.and mrs malhotra.Manik also come and touch d feet of mr and mrs murthy and wink to alya to which she smile whereas nandani was looking very tensed.
manik come near nandani and said kyun bhai saali saheba aaj mood off hai kya. she nods simply no and says aisi koi baat nhi h jija ji and gave a smile as every1 was looking on both of dem.
he was ask to sit wth alya
but he says I will toh sit with my nandu as i luv my saali saheba and says u know na saali saheba saali adhi gharwali hoti h holding her waist tightly while every one started smiling
nandani was shivered by his touch, she trys to remove his hand but his grip was tight on her.he says in his ear dat stand straight or else i can do more than dis . do u want that??
she just nods no. he says gud girl now come and sit with me. manik was sitting in between alya and nandani where his one hand was now also holding her waist and alya was holding his one hand to which he was paying no heed.
mr and mrs murthy applied tilak to manik and mrs malhotra was giving gifts and sweets to alya for d roka ceremony
Nandani was bsy in admiring her family who were looking very happy. For once she forget all her problems and was smiling and Manik was admiring her smiling face.
After the roka ceremony manik ask nandani secretely to come in his room but she denied. So, he thinks another way he ask nandani about the Mr Shah presentation that was going to b held today and says to come to her room as he hve to discuss abt it.(nandani work in malhotra office and was manik's p.a.)
murthy's were leaving but manik stopped nandani saying he has some office work with her.malhotra were also going to shopping with murthy family.
so,literally dere was no one 2 disturb manik and nandani as everyone has gone for shopping.he brings nandani in her room and lock d door and turn to face nandani.she was looking very tensed thinking wat dis monster is upto now.
manik moves toward nandani while nandani moves backwards both were haing eye lock and moving till nandani collides with wall
till she can move out he kept his both hands so dat she was trapped in between his hands.he moved closer to her face and kissed his left cheek. she at once says sir dis is not gud.u r going 2 marry my sister plzzz leave me. alya really loves u.
manik says den wat i cn do? if ur sister luves me. I m marrying her bcoz of u and don't expect more den dat i m going to do for her. she can hve d right on my parents,home,property and room but not in my heart. as in my heart only u r dere.but why don't u undestand dammit dat i madly luv u.
manik says wats d prblm in me? say na bolo wen I see u I can't control myself but u toh never understand dat, wen u smile I feel like I smile, wen i see tears in ur eyes it kills me but nhi nhi u don't luv me right and he break d mirror wth his hands.
nandani gets frightened. Blood starts flowing frm his hands. she says sir aapke hands se but manik don't let her cmplete and says toh wat???? U go do shopping for my marriage U r happy wth dis marriage.
he shouts i tell u many times dat
i luv u
i luv u suna tumne nandani
i really luves u nandani

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-3

Manik says kya farak padhta hai tumhe jayo yha se and he breaks all d photo frames wth his hands
blood starts flowing rapidly frm his hands.
he shouts suna nhi tumne jayo yha se just leave me alone.
she goes near him to holds his hand but he jerks her hands with force due to which she slips down on floorr and some glass pieces r pierced in her hands too and blood starts flowing from her hands due to which she screams a little.
he turns and see her hands from which blood is flowing.
he at once forget eveything and run towards her ,holds her hand and says
I M SORRY NANDANI
how cn i do dis? U need first aid hmmm
yaa u need first aid, even blood was flowing frm his hands dat too more den her but he doesn't care abt his hand
the only thing dat was running in his mind was dat her hand was bleeding, it may b paining to her
Nandani was just quiet and was watching him dat how he brings first aid. he sit on his knees,take his hands ,take out glass pieces frm her hands and apply band aid.
In dis whole process he doesn't even 4 once look at her .he was feeling very guilty dat due to him she was hurt.after applying band aid he was going when nandani holds his hands and says sir u also need first aid plzz let me do it.
he sits and let her apply d band aid.while she was bsy in applying him band aid her hairs were disturbing her, he was controlling not 2 touch her but in few seconds his hands reach in her hairs and he put them behind her ears
as she feel his touch she at once close her eyes. he says
SORRY NANDANI I DON'T MEAN TO HURT YOU
I CAN NEVER EVER HURT U
PLZZ MUJHE but he was shused by her by putting her finger on his lips and says SIR it was by mistake,i know u cn never hurt me
infact, u cn never hurt any1. but plzz for god sake aap alya dii ko ek chance toh de.
give a chance to ur marriage.I m sure u wll fall in love with alya dii please u try at least once and den these relations wll not get complicated
manik was hearing her keeping quiet.
after she cmpletes he says nandani I m not making relation complicated its u who is doing dis?? plz stop all dis rubbish otherwise kahi aisa naa ho ki baad main tum chaho toh bhi main kuch naa kr saku. plzz stop dis marriage, I know u don't believe in love but I wll give u my whole life for it but mujhe apna aap se door mat kro plzzz
she says alya dii
but he again shouts wat is dis yar i thought i wll spend sum time wth u but nhi tumne alya alya lga rkha h.
he holds her waist and brings her closer and says nandani kya main itna bura hu jo mujhe mera pyaar naseeb nhi ho skta bolo. chup kyun ho. Problm kya h ? plz tell me,I wll help u
his eyes were blood red, nandani was also crying she says sir iss matter pr hm ab aur baat nhi krenge plzz jo jaise chal rha h,let d thing keep going like dat only.
She was moving out when he holds her hand and push to himself such dat her back was colliding wth his chest. He comes near her ear and speaks at 8pm in my farm house . i wll b waiting 4 u.
she at once widen her eyes and look at him in disblief
to which he says look kya de rhi ho u only say naa sir iss matter pr hm ab aur baat nhi krenge plzz jo jaise chal rha h,let d thing keep going like dat only in her tone.
So, remember our deal and wink at her.
he says chalo first of all office work abhi cmplete kr lete h, tomorrow toh u know naa we wll b tired baby and smirked by seeing her irritated face
Manik's pov
Thank god , now she has stopped crying.Tears r not made 4 her.but she is so stubborn she wll not tell d prblm by her own so, miss murthy I hve my own way
Nandini's pov
she thought in her mind d monster mode is on but now he was smiling. He looks gud while smiling, but why doesn't he understand dat I don't luv her, I hate d word luv,dis word is not in my dictionary but what to do abt deal, OH GOD!!!
PLZ SAVE ME FRM DIS MONSTER TONIGHT
he ask d servants to clean d room and moves towards study room with nandani where both were now engrossed in dere work.
servants come and ask manik sir lunch lg lga de. he see nandu is bsy in her work and may b she wlll b tired and hungry . so,he nods yes
He was moving towards nandini but stops in midway as alya comes and holds him and hug him from back


So guyz.. here.. next update... so howz.. comment if u wanna me.. continue.. posting...

Love Mehak



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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Its very interestinv!
Manik really loves Nandini!
Do why is he marrying Alya!
Intrigued to know the deal he has with Nandini!
Very well written!
Thanks for the pm!
Continue soon.
Take care😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Interesting...

Manik loves her so much..

i think nandu also but something
is stopping her...

keep smiling n take care

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