OS: Swara's Ordeal (3): An Ephemeral Redamancy?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ! This is absolutely beautiful and so emotional especially the last two paragraphs!
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Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam.

Wow ! This is absolutely beautiful and so emotional especially the last two paragraphs!


Thank you - I guess you are referring to the Resonance quote - I fell in love with that the moment I read it - and it felt really appropriate to have Swara quote the same to Sanskaar, considering that he does not believe she could realise her love for him overnight.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh God 🥺 , this is heartbreakingly beautiful.
You spoke my mind!
This is literally what Swara needs to be doing right now.
She needs to state what she feels and back away. Leave it to Sanskaar to figure out and come to a conclusion.
I have this worry Swara is going to sacrifice and not think about what he's said before... not letting him decide, assume things & he'll end up cleaning the mess she's started. I hope for once, CVs handles this sensibly rather than making their lead a saint who doesn't happen to have any kind of human emotions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant ! 👏 I wish to see this Swara on screen..! Strong, afraid yet resilient..and so very heartbreakingly in love with her Sanskaar.
And giving Sanskaar his space to take a final call on what he truly wants. So he can choose to be with her and not be forced by any one else...Its time he stood up and acknowledged it too! High time !.

Would love to see more such work!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliantly written..It's amazing...👏
Feeling heartbroken whenever think about Swara..
Swara should Stay Away from this.. Don't want Swara to do anything.. It's Sanskaar's time.. Let him decide what he want(I know he want Swara only)..

But this CVs.. 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ur words are so beautiful that it can strike a chord in anyone's heart
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This this this!!
I want exactly this.
Not a mission driven Swara who takes decision on behalf of Sanskaar. She should let him decide .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a heartbreaking and beautifully written OS.
Express swara's emotions perfectly.

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