Manan os her Hamesha wala promise / need urs sujjetion chk on page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys this one is my 1st Os...if thr is any mistake thn maafi plz...! Day Dreaming

Her hamesha wala promise...!

Behind the Music Wing

A boy was sitting there his eyes are closed...As if He is waiting for SOMEONE...! Suddenly he feel a soft kiss in his forehade a smile came on his face but he didn't opn his eyes bcz he know the Touch...!

thn he hear a sweet voice wishing him

Best of luck MANIK...!

Manik opn his eyes in a jrk but he found no one there. A silent tear drop down from his eyes...!

In the Stage

Manik came to the stage along with FAB4 & took his position. He look at the crowed thn close his eyes & started to sing...!

Chup gaye shame kis gali jane

Chup gaye shame kis gali jane

Ho gaye tum judaa yun dheree dheree

Gir gaye haat se jaise laqeere...!

He remember their evry beautifull moments which thy spnd together. he remember their passionate love making night after Talent Hunt..! thn he remember the BLAST which take His STAR His NANDINI from his life...! tears started to rolling down from his eyes...

Hawaye roj aate jaate

Sunaye mujhe teri baate

yeh mere raat din kuch kash hote

shart yeh hai agar TUM pass hote...!

As if he is telling her how much HE is incomplete without her...! thn he look at the sky & sing

Aa bhi jaa tu khain se aa bhi jaa

Aa bhi jaa tu khain se aa bhi jaa...!

As if he is asking the GOD why he do ths to him...!

Aaj bhi tere naam per

jugnu si jalein aankhe maei

Ho...dekh le kuch bhi toh nahi

badla tere mere darmiyaan...!

Like he is telling her nothing is changed between them. Still today he is her MONSTER MANIK...! & requesting her to come back

Aa bhi jaa tu khain se aa bhi jaa

Aa bhi jaa tu khain se aa bhi jaa...!

Suddenly he saw her standind infront of him. He again started to sing like he is compling her

Jod ke maine jod ke

rakhi hai sabhi yaade teri

O tu gayi jabse tu gayi

soye hi nahi raate meri

Ho..jal gayi dekho jal gayi

taare gin ke mere ungliyaan...!

FAB4 is also in tears watching their friend in this much friend...!

Aa Bhi Jaa TU Khain Se Aa Bhi Jaa... (x5)

Manik kneel down in the stage & cry his Heart out...! just praying her to come back

After 30 mints...!

In the City Hospital

Manik is sitting a V.I.P cabin holding his Nandini's Hand..! a sad smile is in his face

MANIK : hey sleeping beauty...! or kab tak aise soyi rahoge ? plz jaan get up na...it has been 3 yrs Nandini ab toh wapas a jao...!

saying

so He started to cRY...! it has been 3 yrs aftr tht BLAST his Nandini is in coma...!

but

MANIK didn't loose his HOPE...he didn't give up on THEM...because he knowns tht His SHINING STAR will be come back

to

keep her HAMESHA wala promise...!

Ok guys I m done...as it is my 1st os so pata ni kya bakwas lik di...plsss marna mat...!

Keep smiling

TanHa...!

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_Myrah_ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was amazing...
Totally heart wrenching..
Jst loved it...
R u going to continue it or is this the end..???
Pari_mananholic thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow a heart touching os...
A beautiful one..
Luved it...
Do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Myrah_

It was amazing...

Totally heart wrenching..
Jst loved it...
R u going to continue it or is this the end..???


ths is the end dear... but can u help me pls...? can u tell me iski link bana ke pm kaise karti h...?
Edited by angle123tanha - 9 years ago
Tanha_Urmi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow a heart touching os...

A beautiful one..
Luved it...
Do write more...


Thank you...! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story...it will be good if u will continue this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm dear
thanks for pm
try more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a heart touching emotional os
plz dear make it a ts and give it a happy ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
I loved it...
Plz... make it TS...
Manan ko vapis milado...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandininiti

such a heart touching emotional os
plz dear make it a ts and give it a happy ending


Thanksss...har story ka ending happy toh ni hote h na...?

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