Sense of enoughness... an apt title, actually perfect for this update. However, I'm not feeling that enoughness at the moment. Your greedy, SS wants more dammit!
The ease and flow of this update is what stood out for me. Yes we had the emotions, your mastery written words, but what I appreciated was the way you showed them play out.
We start with Arnav realizing how Maya was not okay, something was bothering her. And it hits him, it was related to their son. What he does is commendable, trying to confront her to eliminate her concern. We all know it won't be easy for Maya, but him not pushing it aside and helping her through it, is what will make all the difference.
So someone wants to take our Arnav out for coffee... um... no! He is taken! That scene had me smiling ear to ear. Loved it!
One of the things I have admired about Second Chances is your approach to autism. And Mohan is my jaan, who holds a special place in my heart. To see his struggle is heart wrenching, but to see how Meera helps him through it is heart warming. Ahhh that was deep, and so so so touching my dear SS. Take a bow!
That bit where Khushi's apprehensions creep up, was as realistic as gets. After all it's only been one week since arrival to India!
The end left me with hope, and yearning to see the actually day that these four become a family... for that I shall wait, knowing you won't disappoint. 🤗
Edited by Chokri_ASR - 9 years ago
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