HUMSAAYA # 5 Updated Pt-72 / Pg 129 - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 58
Geet messaged Naina about her plan but Naina didnt see the messahe
After knowing the truth everyone is feeling guilty

And Maan panicked seeing the blood on the bed

Jasmeet is coming to see Geet and maan doesnt know what to answer her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan is trapped now    how us he gonna handle his angry wife!!! I loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 59
Anu asked a very valid question  - Does Geet not have any right over the family

Dadi is wondering how to sort things with Geet's mom
She scolded Maan and Veer for airing  their personal problems in front of outsiders
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 60
Maan is still insecure and vulnerable about his family
Jasmeet understood this and tried to re assure him
She also thinks Geet is at fault to some extent but knows that Geet is not careless
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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet to solid gusse main hai... how will Maan manofy her now???
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update  :-)   
Geet is very angry on maan..
She is rite in her place..
Maan Ko gusse mein aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha..
Trust is necessary in any relation. . 
Maan Ka bachpan Jo bi ho.. still a wife can't take such things.. 
Hope realizes this soon... n manofy geet soon... 
It will b interesting to see him manofy his wife  ;-)




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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome... superb..
Thanks for update...

Continue soon..

Ab maan babu thodi to mehnat karni hi padegi...

Geet ko bura laga hai ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago



                   Updating...😳
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Jasmeet sighed... Geet tu bhi kabhi kabhi bachon jaise behave karti hain... she thought of talking to SD.. so she moved out of the room... and she saw maan standing there... she understood he listened everything geet said...


Jasmeet wanted to say something... but Maan said... Good night Maa... hum kal baat karenge...

 

And he left to their room...

 

Jasmeet went to SD ...

 

Jsmeet - Maaji.. Geet bohut zid karr rahi hai... Amritsar jaane kei... Main kya karoon...

 

SD - hum samajhte hai jasmeet... unka gussa bhi jayez hai... Maan ne galti ki hai.. Geet ki narazgi bhi sahi hai... par hum chahte hain ki hum ya aap kuch na kare.. Maan ko hi unhe manane dijiye.. unhe bhi toh pata chale ... arrey Biwi hai unki woh.. thoda izzat to dete.. iss baat pe toh hum bhi naraz hai maan se... thodi mehnat karne dijiye Maan ko geet ko manane mein...

 

Jasmeet - Maaji aap bhi

 

SD - Ha...  hum chahte hain ki yeh baat woh dono hi apne aap mein suljhale... agar hum beech mein gaye toh unki Ego's badh jaayenge aur baat bigad bhi sakti hain...

 

Jasmeet - jaise aap theek samjhe... Ab geet theek hai aur aapki ijazat ho toh main kal ghar jana chahungi...

 

SD - Haa beta waha bhi aapki zaroorat hai... yaha hum sambhal lenge...

 

Jasmeet - Ji... Maaji.. Geet ki galti maaf kardijiye... maine usse samjha diya hai... abhi naraz hai lekin baat samajh jaayegi... aap maan se bhi kahiye... usse maaf karne ke liye...

 

SD - Jasmeet.. ab aap maafi maang rahi hai toh hume bhi mafi mangni chahiye... Maan ki harkat ke liye... aap bhi ...

 

Jasmeet - Maaji aap maafi kyun maang rahi hai...

 

SD - toh aap bhi toh maafi maang rahi haina... Aap formal horahe hain toh hum bhi formal horahe hain...

 

Jasmeet smiled and said.. theek hai maa ji... ab hume chalna chahiye.. rat bohut hogayi hai.. aap sojayiye... SD nodded and jasmeet left to the room...

 

 

Next day morning...


Geet got ready and sat on the bed... she is still angry on her mother that she is not taking her... but she decided she will leave Km by any means...

 

Jasmeet sat on the bed and said - Geet.. meri baat sun.. main jo bhi karr rahi hoon tere liye hi karr rahi hoon.. agar pati patni ke beech koi bhi anban ho toh usse badhana nahi chahiye... jaldi hi usse khatam kardena chahiye.. agar tum mere saath aaoogi toh tum dono ki beech doori aur badh jayegi.. aur yeh baat main kabhi nahi chahti... tum thande dimag se socho... abhi tu gussa hai... toh main jo bhi kahungi .. tumhe acha nahi lagega...

 

Maan knocked and entered... he took blessing of his MIL and said... Maa mujhe geet se baat karni hai...

 

Jasmeet nodded and went out... Maan locked the room and came to her... Geet turned her face to other side...

 

Maan - Main jaanta hoon geet tum mujhse naraz ho... aur tumhara haq bhi hai naraz hone ka ... maine harkat hi aisi ki hain... lekin main tumhe abhi apni safayi mein kuch nahi bataoonga... main nahi chahta maine jo galti kit um bhi wahi karo... maine kal bin soche tumse bohut kuch kaha... aur ab... main nahi chahta ki tum bhi wahi galti karo... Maine tumhe bolne ka mauka nahi diya... 


He took a deep breadth and contniued... as there was no reaction from her... mujhe tumse bas itna hi kehna hai tum bhi wahi galti mat karo... jab tumhara gussa thanda hojaye aur tum meri baat sunne ke liye tayyar ho... main tab tak intezaar karoonga... bas tum ghar chodke mat jao...

 

Geet didn't respond... she remained quiet... Maan sighed and went out...

 

Jasmeet saw him... she asked him... Maan nodded in a no...

 

Jasmeet - Geet ko kaise rokege kuch socha hai... mujhe pata hai.. woh soch rahi hogi kaise bhi karke mere saath aajaye... shayad Maaji ko manalegi.. agar unhone haa kaha toh hum kuch nahi karsakte...

 

Maan - nahi maa.. kaise roku... mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaraha hai...

 

Jasmeet - Mere paas ek idea hai...

 

Maan - App mujhe geet ko rokne ke liye idea derahi hai?...

 

Jasmeet patted his cheek and said... Haa ...  pehli baar hai isliye.. aur iss baar Galati geet ki bhi hai... issliye tumhari help karr rahi hoon... agar meri beti ko dobara rulaya toh main teri kaan kheenchungi aur apni beti ghar leke chali jaaoongi.. yaad rakhna...

 

Maan smiled at her sweet threat and said... Abse Galati nahi karunga Maa... main baar baar ek hi Galati kyun karunga... ab toh mujhe geet ka gusse ka bhi andaza hogaya hai... he said smiling ..  par idea toh batayiye...

 

Jasmeet showed him Meera who is at the BF table...  Samajh mein aaya...

 

Maan understood and said... Haa... Thank you Maa... you are the BEST... 


Jasmeet smiled and went down taking her bag.. 

 

BF table...

 

Everyone gathered at the BF table...

 

Geet also came down... as she wanted to ask Dadi... as her mother is not allowing...

 

Geet cleared her throat... she saw everyone.. Maan.. Veer.. Naina... Angel...Anu... RB... Dadi... Meera and even her Mom...

 

Geet - Mujhe aap sabse maafi maangni hai... meri wajah se aap sab logo ko takleef hui... mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki ghar mein kya horaha tha... Naina... I am sorry.. tum yaha Angel ke liye pareshaan thi aur main waha Angel ke saath masti karr rahi thi... Veer... tum bhi... mujhe maaf...

 

Veer - Geet... Plz... agar tum galat ho toh hum bhi galat hai... aur tum itni formal kyun banrahi ho... mujhe khushi hai ki tumne angel ko cheerup kiya .. jaha hum sab fail hogaye.. main apne kaam mein aur naina apne kaam mein busy hokar uspar dhyaan hi nahi diya... hume pata tha woh upset hain phir bhi...  tumne toh apna outing ko bhi cancel kardiya... hamari wajah se...

 

Geet just smiled weakly... Naina said .. Haa geet.. saari Galati meri hi hain... maine tumhare messages hi nahi dekhe... saara din main wahi baithi thi... jaha mera phone pada tha.. phir bhi mera dhyaan waha nahi gaya... jo kuch bhi hua.. meri wajah se hua... I am sorry...

 

Geet  - Tum sorry kyun kehrahi ho.. Galati toh meri hi hain... mujhe hi batake jana chahiye tha... maine dekha ki angel garden mein ro rahi thi aur mujhse dekha nahi gaya.. toh main usse wahi se leke gayi... mujhse thoda bhi andaza nahi tha itna sab kuch hojayega... Ab se aisi galati nahi hogi...


Maan closed his eyes... he knew geet will never take Angel out... Ab main angel kya kahunga .. agar woh poochegi ki Geet usse bahar kyun nahi leke jaa rahi hain... 

 

Anu - ab bas karo... I am sorry .. I am sorry ka drama... jaldi jaldi BF lagao.. bhook lagi hain.. aur office bhi toh jana haina sab ko...


Dadi - Haa ab bas karo... Kyun ki gaklati toh dono se hui hain... Main chahti hoon ki mere bache sab miljulke rahe... aise chote chote incidents toh hote rehte hain... bas tum log dhyan rakhna ki woh repeat na ho... Family ka matlab yehi toh hain...an ek doosre ko maaf kare... Haste khelte aage badho.. 


Very one smiled at dadi.. Geet to smiled... Naina side hugged geet .. geet to reciprocated...

 

Dadi -  chalo BF karo sab...

 

Meera was there at the table... but she was lost some where... she didn't even listen to geet or any one at the table...


Geet didn't get a chance to ask Dadi at the table... and Jasmeet is planning to leave after BF... Maan had booked her flight ticket...

 

After Bf.. Geet was going to Dadi to take permission... but Maan blocked her way in middle...

 

Maan - Main jaanta hoon geet... tum ghar jana chahti ho... magar main nahi chchta kit um aise jao.. mujhse rooth karr... agar tum ghar jaogi toh khushi khushi jaaogi... aur main tumhe leke jaaonga... magar aise nahi jane doonga...

 

Geet glared at him and was about to proceed...

 

Maan - Main tumhe aise nahi jane doonga... yeh tumhara ghar hai... mere na kehne se kuch nahi badlega... tumhare maang mein jo sindhur hain .. usse tumhe woh haq mila hai.. jab tak woh hain main khud tumhare haq ko na nahi keh sakta...

 

Geet looked at him ... she had tears in her eyes... but still she didn't talk to him...

 

Maan came forward and wiped her tears... Tum fail nahi hui Geet... main fail hogaya hoon...tumhare baare mein sab jaante hue bhi.. amine asi baat ki... Galati meri hain... main bas yeh chahta ki tum mujhe ek mauka do...

 

Geet moved away from him... and passed him to go to Dadi...

 

Maan - theek hai geet.. tum pyaar se nahi mangi toh mujhe doosra rasta apnana padega...

 

Geet turned and looked at him as if asking .. will you force me...

 

Maan - Haa... I will make you stay...

 

Geet folded her arms.. like challenging him...  Make me...

 

Maan - Agar tum jana chahti ho toh... zaroor jao... main nahi rokunga...

 

Geet looked at him ... Do you know what are you saying... one moment you say.. you will stop me.. and another you say.. i can go...

 

Maan - mujhe pata hain main kya kehraha hoon... aur Jaate jaate tum apni behen ko bhi saath leke jaana... iss ghar mein woh tab tak rahegi jab tak tum ho... aur tum chaligayi toh woh bhi jaayegi..

 

Geet looked at him in horror... What...

 

Maan - Haa... tumne sahi suna... Agar jana hai toh apni Di ko bhi leke jao... aur usse tum kya kahogi .. kaise leke jaogi.. woh sab tum sambhalo... I am out of it... Main kuch nahi bolunga.. tum dono ke beech... .. ek baar aur kehraha hoon... dhyan se suno...Woh iss ghar mein reh sakti hain jab tak tum is ghar mein ho... agar tum ghar chodke jana chahti ho tum apni behen ko bhi leke jaao...



Maan left from there with  out wating for Geet's answer... as he knew she will no go... as Geet cannot take Meera to Amritsar.. and what will she say... Meera thinks herself as Maan's wife... how will she convince...


Geet frustated and left ot her Room... 


On the other side... Meera is in Deep thoughts... Kaun hai woh... aur woh kaunsi jagah hai... woh mera sapna tha ya haqeeqat... Main kisse poochoon... kaise pata karoon...




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Next update will be little late.. as I am going out on a small vacation...





Edited by -indu- - 8 years ago