ISHRA FF: kiya pyaar karogay??? # 4 part 37: page no 127 dec/24 - Page 55

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

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Will read last parts again n then unres

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Hi Rida...,

I told you I'm reading this story from the past one week and completed it today...! I'm so happy that I peak into it. It worth it 👏 I'm looking forward to read all of your works, but would do slowly and surely. It's just that I'm very slow in reading 😆 I enjoy every single word while reading which made me a "snail" in this field! Moreover, the initial chapters were in Hindi which I couldn't get along easily.

Coming to my review...;
You wanted a long one right? I hope you won't get bored of reading long review...🤔 I don't mind taking few minutes to type it as I've been spending days to complete reading...! Still, I'm warning you...I don't know how to give goid reviews 😳

Anyways, here it goes...,

From the very first scene, to be precise, the Prologue..., the story has the same pace that you've brilliantly maintained until the latest chapter. This is what I loved in your writing.

Coming to the story...It's super good. You vividly and convincingly portrayed the Aman and Raman differentia! The way Ishita accepting Raman and moving on was so spontaneous, yet gradual.

Only thing I couldn't take in was the shootout. "Khushi's" death and their dejection. Those parts were so emotional. I wished for some miracle to happen, so that the baby won't die. Maybe because I've placed Ruhi in that baby's place that I couldn't stomach the lose at first.

Again, the moving on thing to start afresh...I mean the honeymoon ☺️ That was lovely and cute.

I forgot to mention someone..., Shagun...!!!!! 🤣 Oh girl...she loves RKB as brother! What else is needed for a relief. But haan...the confusion and jealousy unmindfully created by Shagun in Ishita was just too adorable.

Then what...?

Yeah...anniversary...the twist...I mean the explosion created by the "Pregnancy Test Report." Raman's justifiable (yet wrong) anger towards Ishita and her depression over his ditachment...Shagun's confrontation with Raman...him getting sense...Woosh... Let me breathe...I was talking in one go...😉 Well...everything was just wow!!!!

Finally...our Rooh baby has born 😳
*Happy Dance*

See...I've recollected all these and appreciated you. I've a sharp memory 😉 And as you wished, I've given a lengthy review...
So it's your turn to fulfil my wish to read a long update ASAP...!!!!!

Love you...

Gaya3

Originally posted by: amenaDivAnhasan

Truly beautiful

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

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Will read last parts again n then unres

Meri jaan aapko na shastang dandavat pranaam karni chahiye

Kaha se late ho itne intelligent ideas???

Mujhe toh ek update likhne mein bheja fry ho jata hai

Sach mein yaar u r very talented

Mai is story KO jitna tareef karlu utna kam hai

Show ke starting mein mai raman ki bahut badi fan this

Lkin kuch tracks ne mera pyaar kam kar diya

Par aapke ek ek story phir se mujhe pyaar karne de rahi hai

Thanks so much

Aur baat is story ki

Awww such a cute couple they are

Ishita says Raman does not hug her fully now a days 😆😆😆

Kitna cutely bola usne

Raman ne kitne ache se use mana liya

I just love raman

Baby ab jaldi aa jao

Even I can't wait

Raman made a room for baby in their room 😳😳

N smoothie is banda na meri jaan leke baitega 😳😳

Ishita ka dream 😭

Hope sab theek rahega

Is baar kuch galat mat hone Dena

Jaldi jaldi update karooo

Waiting waiting

Jaldi hi unres kiya Maine nahi??? 😉😉😉

Kiya pyaar karogay???

Part 37

BHALLA HOUSE:

Bhalla house was decorated as bride with flowers, curtains, balloons and teady bears all were of ishita choice by strict raman orders. All members of the family running here and there for the preparation of the welcome party of the new member of the family... The car horn makes every one alert.. they all runs towards the entrance... raman and ishita standing at entrance with their little angel... Mrs bhalla and madhvi thanks to god for bringing this happiness in their house... Blesses the couple...

Toshi jee performs aarti and they enters the house... ishita was overwhelmed by seeing all the preparation... raman holds her by shoulder...

Raman: do you like it???

Ishita nods.. and her eyes fill with tears of happiness...

Romi and mihir comes and says: excuse me...

Raman smiles at them and praises them for all this arrangement...

Romi: bhai... muje bhi uthane do na baby ko...( bhai let me take the baby in my arms)

Mihir: nahe Bhabhi baby pehly mery pass ayegi...( no Bhabhi baby will come to me first)

Both start their fights and ishita and raman smile seeing this...

Toshi jee comes and says: shut up you both fools... dadi kay pass ayegi meri lado...

Madhvi comes and says: toshi ... my child will come to her paati...

How can Mr. bhalla and Mr. iyer stays away... they also joins in the line to hold the baby...raman and ishita smiles seeing this enthusiasm... They all were cutely fighting.. ishita ask raman to stop them..

Raman: okay oaky... listen to me... Papa and appa will hold ruhi first...

Toshi jee: ruhi????

Ishita: haan maa... raman has named her ruhi...

Madhvi: my son in law chooses so nice name...

Toshi jee: oye... first he is my son...

Raman: hold your fight.. please amma ... and maa... Ruhi will think that her paati and dadi fights a lot...

Toshi jee: I was not fighting... your amma was fighting with me...

Madhvi tries to say but ishita intervenes: let it be na amma...

One by one all family members hold ruhi and enjoys... raman and ishita were on cloud nine... ruhi started crying... all tries to make her calm even ishita but she was not stopping raman holds her and rocks her and in seconds ruhi gets calm and with her tiny hands tightly holds raman finger... family smiles seeing this lovely moment...

Raman: okay... celebration will continue but let ishita and ruhi have some rest...

Mihir: okay bhai but only one thing is remaining let us do ... please...

Raman: we will continue it but let them rest mihir...

Romi: please bhai... please...

Ishita: raman I am fine.. and ruhi is also enjoying all this pampering... let them do what they want...

Raman: ishita...

Ishita: please raman for me...

Raman: okay...

Mihir: chalo romi...

Both leaves while raman and ishita wonders what they want to do... after five minutes, both comes holding a lovely cradle decorated with flowers... and ask ishita to put ruhi in it... and we all will make her sleep... then you can rest...

Ishita put ruhi in cradle and one by one family members rock it ...

Toshi jee: lori kon gaye ga...

Ishita: raman aur kon...

Raman: i??? no..

Mihir: yes bhai you sing well... cant you sing for your daughter...

Raman smiles and says: okay...

He goes towards the cradle and wishper in ruhi ears: this is for you my baby... the little angel smiles.. raman start to sing...

Chhoti si pyari si nanhi si aayi koyi pari

Bholi si nyari si achhi si aayi koyi pari

He cradles her and kisses her forehead...

Palne me aise hee jhulati rahe

Khushiyo kee baharo me jhumati rahe

Gate muskurate sangit kee tarah

Yeh toh lage rama ke git kee tarah

Ra ra ru, ra ra ra ra ru ...

He takes ruhi in his arms and walks slowly slowly and pats her head... and sings...

Chhoti si pyari si nanhi si aayi koyi pari

Bholi si nyari si achhi si aayi koyi pari

Palne me aise hee jhulati rahe

Khushiyo kee baharo me jhumati rahe

Gate muskurate sangit kee tarah

Yeh toh lage rama ke git kee tarah

Ra ra ru ra ra ra ru...

And sees his daughter sleeping peacefully holding his shirt button... while family was awe looking at them... ishita wipes her tears and prays to god to keep this happiness on raman face forever...raman takes her to the room and places her on bed covers her with duvet and lowers the AC temperature... he tries to leave but his daughter was holding his finger tightly... his face get bright with happiness.. he kisses her cheek

Raman whispers: let me bring you mumma.. than we all will rest together... okay sweety... ruhi smiles in sleep and leaves her hold... he surround her with pillows and leaves...

HALL:

He comes down and ask everyone to have some rest and takes ishita to their room... Ishita comes and smiles seeing their daughter sleeping peacefully... raman makes her lay beside ruhi and covers her... kisses her forehead and ask her to sleep...

Ishita shook her head in negative... raman ask for reason.. she sits and wound her arms around his neck and rest her head on his chest...

Raman: madam you are getting naughty naughty... My daughter is sleeping here... he kisses her hairs and wraps his arm around her waist and pulls her more closer...

Ishita: thank you raman for coming in my life...

Raman: I think I should take you to doctor.. there is some problem with you...

Ishita looks on and sees raman with narrow eyes... raman smiles and kisses her nose and says: you always say thanks... mimics in her voice and continues: thanks for coming in my life raman thanks for bringing happiness in my life.. you are too nice raman...

Ishita hits raman shoulder playfully and says: I talk like this???

Raman: hmm... and take rest my wife... else my daughter and me will not let you for even second... this is good chance for you to have rest... and winks at her...

Ishita lays back and pulls him also.. and says: then make me sleep...

Raman: itti si baat... he lays in middle of ishita and ruhi... ishita put her head on his chest while raman pats her head... and kisses her eyes say: close your eyes... And softly pecks her lips and says: smile and sleep... because I love to see your angelic face when you sleep with this beautiful smile... her lips curves into smile and she hugs him tightly... after sometime, raman sees his lovely girls are sleeping... he pats the head of his little daughter and kisses the forehead of his wife... and closes his eyes to believe that at last he is living his dream... he can hold, touch and talk with his daughter... he sleeps...

Time passes, now their little angel is of three month. Bhalla family organize naming ceremony of her...happiness has no boundaries in bhalla house... their morning start with ruhi, day passes with ruhi and their day ends seeing ruhi sleeping...

Raman... Raman was just feeling that he is out of the world... Seeing his daughter... is just a bliss... Ruhi was much more attach to raman then ishita... raman puts ruhi to sleep... ruhi only wants her papa to be always with her...

It was difficult for raman to handle business and ruhi at same time.. but he was enjoying this phase of life... no out of city tours... no late night sittings... no early morning meetings...

Ishita: raman you are spoiling her... she is only three month and you are ...

Raman playing with ruhi sees ishita who was glaring at him.. laughs and goes to her and kisses her nose and says: I love to see this angry avatar of my wifey... And I am no spoiling her... you are here for her na.. you will give her best upbringing... I know... Now stop disturbing us... let you play...

He continues to play and tickle ruhi... while ishita smiles seeing this sight... Raman lays ruhi on bed and surround her with pillows and sees ishita staring him... he goes towards her and snaps his finger ...

Raman: what are you thinking madam??? Aise dekhogi to nazar lag jayegi tumhare pati ko...

Ishita wraps her arms around his neck and says: biwi ki nazar nahe lagti...

Raman touches his forehead with hers and says: hmm... as I am a businessman... I would allow you only to stare at me like this when you pay your fees...

Ishita: is it so mr CEO

Raman: hmmm

Ishita: and what is your fees...

Raman: you knows exactly what I want...

Ishita: and now I am not disturbing you and your daughter...

Raman: hmmm... No... I have played enough with my daughter now I want to play with my wife... do you have any problem??? He winks at her

Ishita: raman...

Raman lifts her and moves towards the couch and lays her on it and position himself on top... started kissing her face, jawline and neck line senselessly... While ishita was pulling his hairs in pleasure... soon they were busy in exploring and pleasuring each other and their naked bodies were tangled and sleeping after getting exhausted with their continuous make out session...

NEXT DAY

MORNING @ BHALLA HOUSE

Ruhi morning alarm.. means her cries was the signal that indeed sun has risen... and what she want first after opening her eyes was... her mother feed??? No... she want to be hold and kissed by her papa... raman was busy in getting ready... ishita make ruhi ready and comes to raman...

Ishita: look papa your princess is ready...

Raman turns and smiles and says: wow... My princess is looking so beautiful... and kisses her both cheek making ruhi smile wider... she tries to touch raman cheeks.. raman holds her tiny hand and touches his cheek... ruhi made a sad face as her soft hands touches the hard beard on his cheek ...

Raman: my pricness does not like papa in beard???

Ruhi continues to made sad face... raman says: no problem dear.. I will shave it today... And goes in bathroom...

Ishita lovingly pinches ruhi cheeks and shouts: don't shave raman I love it... ruhi... mumma loves papa in beard... ruhi smiles in return...

Raman shouts from bathroom: understand ishita... ruhi does not like na...

Ishita: that's why I say you love you daughter more than me... She shouts back...

Raman opens the door his face was covered with gel.. says: I love you both... and gives fly kiss...

That's it dear... thanks for your lovely comments and love you have given to this story... thanks gaya for reading and commenting... I tried to write a long update for you... hope you will like it... ignore any typos or grammar... well my friends do lots of comment so that I will post next update in thread 5... Love you all...

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

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amazing chapter

everyone fighting for ruhi😆

ruhi is more attached with raman😊

continue soon

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