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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Congrats for new thread. U r an amazing writer. U totally deserve this. Thz story is mindblowing. Loved it to core. Continue soon.the way u scripted thz story was commendable👏.

Keep writing
Stay blessed😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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KHAMOSHIYAAN


LIE GAME

Part : 9 A

Nandini P.O.V.

"Why.. can't u.. understand.. that i love.. u.. i.. really.. really.. love.. u.. "he said cubing my face touching his face with mine face.. i was numb. At my place wht to say.. as i love.. him.. too.. but farak.. sirf.. i can't express him

"Since.. we separated.. from.. childhood.. i loved.. u.. socha.. tha.. we will take.. a fresh.. start.. when.. we.. will meet.. but.. u.. bola.. tha.. u r my chotu.. bola.. na.. ki.. tum.. hi.. meri.. nandini.. ho.."manik said holding my both arm n pulling me. closer him n now there no.. limit.. of my tear.. they continuosly falling n i m not looking at him i was just looking down

"Speak.. up.. dammit.. say.. the truth.. "he said now angrily diging his nails in my arms than i look at him his eyes were also teary like me.. but red in anger also..now.. have decided have to say the truth

Manik P.O.V.

"Haan.. hn.. mein.. nandini... hn.. ab.. sachae.. jan.. li.. kush.. ho.. "finally she accepted that she is nandini. I left her hand

"So.. fir.. tumhne.. yeh.. sb.. kyo.. kiya.. kyo.. chupya.. "i said now holding her face directly looking into her eyes

"Kyoki.. i hate.. u.. suno.. tunhne.. i hate.. u.. manik.. mahlotra.. " she shouts making.. me.. hell shocked.. i become numb.. i leave her face n just looking into her eyes for an answer.. why. She hates me
"Kya.. kha.. u love.. me.. u loved.. me.. since.. we separated.. are. Tum pyaar.. meaning bhi.. jante.. ho.. pyaar.. toh.. mein.. krti.. ae.. Tumhse.. humsha.. se.. but.. tum pyaar.. krne.. lyk.. nhi..ho.. yeh.. mujhe.. Mumbai.. ane.. ke.. bd pta.. chla. "she said wht the hell mtlb.. seriously.. now also.. she making story.. to hide the truth behind all her fake stories

Nandini P.O.V.

Oh.. god.. wht.. m saying.. but i have.. to.. as i can't say.. the truth.. no.. chahe.. he will hates.. me...

"Oh.. god.. nandini.. bs.. karo.. tumhai.. lgta.. i will believe.. in this non sense story.. "manik.. said.. oh.. god.. why.. he.. making.. things.. more.. difficult for.. me..

"Okay.. don't believe.. aur.. mein.. tumhai.. kuch.. explain.. bhi.. nhi.. krna.. chti.. "i said pushing him away. Ly down on bed as now i don't have more energy left in me.. to face him n to see his tear. That r only becoz.. me.. i have.. to hurt.. him for.. his betterment.. only..

"Nandini.. f9.. agr. Tumhne.. tah.. kr hi.. liye.. hai.. ki.. tumhai.. sachae.. se.. bhagna.. hi.. toh.. dan it's okay. But mujhe.. pta.. ek.. tum khud mere.. pass.. aogi.. "he said n than heart the door.. sound.. as he left.. from there

"Manik.. kash... mein.. tumhre.. pass.. aa skti.. hoti.. tumh nhi.. smj skte.. jishe.. tum pyaar.. krte.. ushai.. hurt.. krna.. kitna.. muskil.. hota.. n he confess he loves.. me.. kash.. mein.. piche.. ja.. kr.. voh.. 6 din.. ko.. change.. kr skti.. hoti.. toh.. aaj.. hum.. kitne.. achai.. dost.. or.. may.. be.. couple.. hote.. but.. no.. ab kuch.. nhi.. ho.. skta.. " i was thinking all this.. now also tear..r falling.. from eyes

P.O.V. end

"Oh.. god.. why.. she is.. doing.. all.. she said she hate.. me.. kabhi.. na.. socha.. tha.. apne.. hi.. pyaar.. se.. mujhe.. yeh.. sb suna. Padhega.. "manik loss in thought he confused shocked angry sad...

He reached back to his car leaving her alone.. as he not in his senses after this today incidence baffled his mind fully.. now he is confuse wht to do

He sit in car.. n than try to start car n bad luck or god luck that the car got started n he leaves from there fully heart broken

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Manik reached the home in drunk state as he heart broken n mukti is waiting for him as he got worried that they arrived no call no msg..

"Manik.. where.. is nandini.. "mukti asked as manik entered the house

"Na.. nandini.. " manik said looking toward mukti.. n he can't able to stand also

"Ushai.. toh.. mein.. chodh.. aya.. " manik said n about fall down but mukti control him

"Manik.. sit.. aur.. relax.." mukti said taking him toward the coach n make him sit

"Now.. tell me wht happened.. n where.. is nandini.. " mukti asked as he is so worried as wht happened that manik made his condition like this

Manik tell mukti everything

"Aur.. mein..Kya.. krta.. bolo.. tum.. mere.. sth ushai.. problem de rhai.. ushai.. if she hates.. me.. so.. agr.. ushai.. mera.. uske.. pass.. rhaina.. ushai.. itna.. dukh.. de rha.. hai.. toh.. so.. i left her.. " manik said having tear in his eyes

"Dekho.. manik.. mein... tumhai.. jada.. janti.. toh.. nhi.. hn.. but.. yeh.. jarur.. janti.. hn.. u love.. her.. alot.. aur.. mein.. tumhai.. yeh.. btata.. don.. ki... she also.. love.. u.. manik.. tum jante.. nhi.. voh.. kitni.. kush.. thi.. tumhse.. milne.. ke.. liye.. "mukti said n start telling him about when nandini came one day n ask her to agree.. to change their identity

Flashback

Murthy House

"Angel.. ab se.. mein.. tujhe.. yehi.. bolaungi.. bula.. skti.. hn.. na.. "mukti said as nandini is pecking her bag as she have to leave for mumbai day after tomorrow

"Mukti.. tum kaisi.. bate.. kar.. rhi.. ho..offcourse.. u can call me. N haan.. vaise.. i like.. it.. " nandini said happily..

"I m so.. happy.. mukti... that.. u accept. Me.. "Nandini.. said taking mukti in her arm n mukti also hold her tightly

"Vaise.. yeh.. chahre.. pr.. glow.. bhen.. milne.. ki.. vjha.. se. Yeh.. fir.. bachpan.. ke.. pyaar.. se.. " mukti said to tease her after breaking the hug

"Mukti... stop.. it's just that.. i m going to meet him after so many.. yr.. "nandini said getting up from the bed

"Chahai.. toh.. kuch bhi bol.. i know.. u love.. him. yr.. ab mujhse. Kya.. chupana.. "mukti said also getting up n put hand on her shouder from back

Flashback ends

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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 9 B

"Manik.. meine.. uske.. face.. pr.. dekha.. tha.. than at night she go for party.. next day bhi.. sb normal tha.. haan.. lekin.. lit.. bit.. tense.. thi.. mujhe.. lga.. ho gi.. koe.. chuti.. bat..but next day when we have to leave for Mumbai she looking so disturbed "mukti said n manik is very carefully listening to her

Flashback

"Nandini.. kya.. hua.. sb thik.. hai.. na.. koe.. problem hai.. toh.. u can.. share.. wid.. me.."mukti asked as she look at her face which was so much glowing one day back but now it was looking pale

"Mukti.. aise.. kuch.. nhi.. it's just that.. i m going mumbai after so many.. yrs.. vha.. se.. meri.. bhut. Yade.. jodhi.. hai.. na.. toh.. bs.. muma.. papa.. ki.. bhut.. yad.. aa rhi.. hai.. "she said n mukti got satisfied with her answer but she don't know there was something very serious which was going in her mind

"Tu.. kahe.. toh.. mein.. tere.. sth.. chlu.. "mukti asked

"No.. it's okay.." Nandini replied after that they do sis hug

After sometime she left the house for Airport

After 2 days

Mukti is lying on lying on bed n nandini calls come

"So.. sb.. kaise.. chl.. rhai.. mili.. apne.. manik.. se.. "mukti said again teasing her

"Acha.. kya.. tum mumbai.. aa skti.. ho.. plz.. "nandini asked her n mukti got shocked

"Nandini everything is alright na.." mukti asked worriedly

"Haan..bs..i need yr.help.."nandini said n than mukti got agreed

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"Angel.. r u.. out of yr.. mind.. yeh.. tum kya.. bol rhi. Ho.."mukti freeks out as nandini asked to inter changed their identity

"Mukti.. u accept me.. na.. so meine.. aaj tk tumhse.. kabhi.. kuch.. nhi.. manga.. so plz.."nandini pleads her

"Nhi.. mein.. iss bt ke liye.. kabhi.. agree.. nhi.. karungi.."mukti said getting up from bed

"Mukti.. agr.. tum aaj meri bt ko agree.. nhi.. karogi.. than i will broke my all relation.. with u.."now nandini emotinal blackmail to mukti

"Tu.. jati.. hai.. ab mere.. tu.. kitni.. imp.. acha.. atleat.. bt toh.. bta.. "mukti asked her in hope that she will share the problem with her

"Mukti... plz.. yeh.. bt.. mein.. kisko.. nhi.. bta.. skti. Aur.. vaise.. bhi.. khi.. bato.. ka razj rhaina.. hi bhetr rhaita.. hai.."nandini said in low tune looking down

Flashback ends

"Manik.. uske.. bad.. i ask her.. thousand of time.. but she always gives silly excuses.. "mukti said n manik is staring at table.. he confused he never think that after meeting her his life will take turn like this way

"Manik.. tum..itne.. jldi.. hr.. nhi.. mn nhi.. skte.. angel.. kisi.. musibat mein.. hai.. vrna.. kabhi.. kisi.. ka dil nhi.. dhukhti.. voh.. "mukti said putting hand manik's shoulder

"Tum.. shi.. bol... rhi.. ho.. she is in a big.. trouble.. that's why she is behaving.. so stubborn "manik said now in Serious tone

"Aur.. mein.. yeh.. jaan.. kr. Rhauga.. "manik said with determine looks on his face..

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Next mrng

Manik gets with jerk n yesterday night flashes in his mind

"Why.. r u not saying anything n nandini.. why.. u r hurting n me.. too... oh.. shit.. 7 bhj gye.. nandini uth gye.. hogi.. ab tk.."manik thinks n than call somebody

"Suno.. nandini... uthi.. "manik asked after calling his driver as at night send driver to that house to picking up nandini in mrng as he cares for alot for a movement he feels so lost he left her..

"Ji.. abhi.. nhi.. sir.. " driver replied back

"Okay.. jb uth jae.. than call me.. "manik by saying this hang up the call

He after taking a long breath get up from bed n goes bathroom for fresh an up..

On the other nandini also wakes up n than she also remember about last night

"oh.. god.. where.. is manik.. "she remembers that he left from there yesterday night

She comes out of room to find him n than he Sees honour of the house seeing in whole

"Mam.. aap.. uth.. gye.. aap.. jldi.. se.. ready.. ho jae.. sir.. mujhe.. aap.. ko.. ghr.. drop.. krne.. ke liye bola.. hai.."driver said as nandini comes to them

"Manik.. kha.. hai.."nandini asked

"Manik.. baba.. toh.. kl rt.. ko.. hi.. ghr.. aa.. gye.. thai.. "driver said n nandini take breath of relief as he is safely reach home

"Oh.. god.. how.. much.. he cares for me.. meine.. itna.. kuch.. sunya.. but... now also.. he cares for me.. "nandini thinking while going to room

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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 9 C

Mahlotra Mansion

"Manik. We r back.. "cabir n alia jumped on manik from backward while manik was setting his hair standing in front of mirror

"Kaise..hi.. my baby.. little.. princess.. "manik said hugging Alia

"Sale.. tune.. 3 din.. ek br bhi.. call nhi.. kiya.. "cabir. Said teasingly to manik

"Bhai.. nandini.. ka.. kuch.. pta.. chla.. "alia asked taking a deep breath

"Manik.. don't worry.. she will come.. one.. day.. "cabir.. said he looks manik worried face

"She has.. come.. but.. "manik said in low tone looking down

"Sachi.. tum mile. Ushai.. kisi dikhti.. hai.. voh.."alia became over excited but cabir cutted alia's words n now also manik is looking down

"Ek.. sec. Alia.. manik.. is everything alright.. ? U r looking so disturbed.."cabir asked putting hand on manik's shoulder

"Manik.. u r scaring us.. hua.. kya.. hai.. "cabir asked as manik hugged cabir tightly n start sobbing n alia also got worried as manik never cried like this before

"Cabir.. why.. she is doing this.. "manik said b/w his sobs

"Manik.. first u.. relax.. "cabir said patting his back n than he broke the hug

"Bhai.. kya.. hua.. hai.. "Alia asked holding his hand

Than manik told everything n cabir n Alia also got shocked n confused after listening this

"Guyz.. mein.. kya.. karu.. voh.. kuch.. bolne.. ko ready nhi.. nhi. Hai.. pta..nhi. wht thing is stopping her.."manik said at last looking as he is now not having any hope left he can't face her fake hatre anymore

"Manik.. tu.. itni.. jldi.. hr.. gya.. tune.. pure.. 10 ushai.. pyaar.. kiya.. ab jb voh tere.. samhne.. hai.. toh.. u give.. up.. aisa.. nhi.. tha.. tu.. "cabir said looking toward manik

"Haan.. bhai.. we will do something.. we r wid u.. don't loose hope.. "Alia said as she can't his brother this condition

Murthy House

"Angel... wait.. where.. were.. u last.. night.. "mukti asked as soon as nandini entered in house

"Mukti.. i m teried can we talk after sometime.."nandini said moving toward to her room

"Nhi.. i want to talk u.. now.. "mukti said holding hand of nandini

"Mukti.. i told u.. na.. i will.. talk u... later.. let me go"nandini said jerking her hand

"Nandini.. tum janti.. bhi.. ho.. how much.. he loves u.. ushne.. kya.. halt krli thi.. apni.."as soon as mukti said this nandini stop n look at her

"Kl rt.. mein.. vha.. gye.. tumhre.. bare.. pta.. krne.. but i see his condition.. he fully heart broken tum kyo.. kr rhi.. ho.. yeh.. sb.. tum ushe.. pyaar.. krti.. ho.. n he also loves u.. toh.. fir.. problem.. kya.. hai.."mukti asked her

"Problem.. yeh.hai .. ki.. He don't deserve love.. suna.. tumhne.. voh.. pyaar.. krne.. ke.. lyk nhi.. hai.."nandini said n mukti get shocked by her words

Nandini after saying this close the door on mukti face

"Seriously.. she increasing my worries by each passing.. day.. i have to talk to manik.. "By saying this mukti left from house

Nandini close the door n collapsed on the floor with support of door n brust into tear

"Kis.. gunha.. ki.. saza.. de.. rhai.. ho.. mujhe.. sbko.. mujh.. pr.. kitna.. trust.. hai.. sb kitni care.. krte.. hai.. meri.. aur.. mein.. "she said b/w her crys


Nandini P.O.V.

"No.. nandini.. u have.. to be.. strong.. vaise.. kl bhi.. u have.. become weak infront of him.. i have.. to make.. them.. believe that i hate.. manik.. n specially to manik.. u have.. to do.. this..nandini.. u can't be selfish u have to do this for manik.."i get.. up.. after.. convincing myself that i have to be make myself bad for my love..
Mukti.. oh.. god.. i have.. to lie.. to her.. too.. itne.. salo.. ke.. bd.. i get.. her. Love.. back.. my sister back n now again i have to face her.. hatre.. as mein.. ushai.. bhi.. kuch nhi.. bta.. skti..

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Mahlotra Mansion

Manik and cabir setting at bar n alia too.. but she drinking juice.. as she didn't drink alcohol

"Manik.. teri.. bato.. se.. toh.. lgta.. hai.. nandini.. se bt krne.. ka. Koe.. fayada.. nhi.. hai.. "cabir said and than they all turn n look back as they hurt female voice

"Yeah.. right.. now.. it is useless to talk to her.. "mukti comes there n said as soon as he heart cabir words n alia n cabir look at her confuse expression

"So.. let.. me.. introduce u all 1st i m mukti.. nandini's sis.. "mukti shakes hand with both cabir n Alia n they greet her

"Ab.. mujhe.. yeh.. btao.. asli.. vli.. mukti.. aur.. fake.. "cabir asked teasingly n mukti look at him with confused expression

"Cabir.. stop.. acha.. mukti.. u have. Any idea.. why she is doing all this voh tumhri.. bhen. Kuch toh. Idea ho hoga.. "alia asked mukti after making cabir quiet

"I m sorry.. guyz.. mein.. khud.. hi.. nhi.. smj.. paa.. rhi.. why.. she.. is doing all this.. pr i really need yr.. help.. as i know.. she is some big trouble.. that's why... se behaving like this.. "mukti said in low tone

"Acha.. mukti.. tumhri.. kuch.. bt hoe.. nandini.. se ghr.. ane.. ke.. bd.. "manik asked mukti
N mukti told everything wht she said

"Oh.. god.. matter.. toh. Bhuth serious lgta.. hai.. boss.. idea.."cabir said n about to gulf the wine but he stop n shouts n look at him confusingly

"Jb.. ishan.. na.. bole.. toh.. uski. Daru.. jarur.. bolti.. hai.. "cabir said gesturing toward the wine

"Wht.. tu pgl.. ho gya.. hai. We will spike her drink.. no.. "manik said denying his plan

"Nhi. Manik.. he is right she will never accept to the truth.. hope.. so by this she will open her self.. "mukti said having hope

"So done.. mission nandini.. daru.. begins.. "cabir said forwading his hand in front of them

"Yes.. "both alia n mukti puts on hand on his hand but manik is standing there with confuse expression than cabir taking manik hand put it on his hand



So here.. is next part.. with new twist n turn one.. side. Nandini.. decided something n on the other her well wishers also made.. the plan.. who will win or who will lose...iske.. liye.. u will have to wait for next update.. n hmm.. don't forgot to do.. big.. wale.. as they.. motivates me.. to write.. story.. comment big n get big part..

Love mehak




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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Fab 4 vs nandu!
Story is getting more and more intense day by day

I'm loving it

Continue soon

And Congo for the new thread!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohhh god... this going to be real fun...*_* drunk nandu... hope she tells ...atleast something...:(
cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow amazing update Dr...
Manik confessed his love to Nandu...
She is such an touch but to crack Dr...
Manan both are broken ...
Cabiraa idea always rocks...
Waiting for the truth revelation dr
Congratulations for the new thread Dr...
Thanks for the pm dr
Waiting for the next update eagerly Dr..
Always stay blessed and happy Dr
Edited by Afiiiieee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome update

Poor nandu hurting manik aa well as herself

hope nandini daru mission successful ho so that the truth is out

Will be waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update...
Finally nandu accepted tht she is nandu...
Manik confessed wow...
Y nandu is doing all this...
Jst hope this idea works...
Jst hope like always cabira will be able to set the things straight...
Luved it...
Cant wait for nxt...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope spike drink does some work and nandu spits the actual problem.

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