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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovestory55

Your Swayam is really quite a complex character. I love how the shades change so easily but underneath it all he really does love Sharon. Also i love your narrative style, i have been such a huge fan since unrequited love that I absolutely wait so much for your updates. Brilliant update but please don't make us wait too long. Love it .

Neet <3


Hey Neet.
thank you so much yaar.
Yes he is complex and it has reasons...it will be clean with the story. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Heya keechu
The update was indeed great.
The conversation of pia with swayum was jus beautifully written.
The questions u have put at the end is amazing.
We are awaiting the answers
Swayum needs to come clean with his feelings.
If he loves her genuinely Sharon would hive him a chance I guess. But if its jus on her look she is going to answer it back.
Now awaiting what is in store
Though it was a filler chap it was needed.
The first line of the update is beautiful
It was long enough..
Update next asap


Thank you so much dear for the lovely comment. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KittyKat20

Nice Story. Read it in one go.

Swayum should clear his mind. Waiting for next update.

Loving this story so far


Thank you so much.
i feel out of the world when i get a new reader. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 16

"How dare you Swayam?" Sharon yelled at the top of her voice from the guest room. Startled by her yelling he turned to see an angry Sharon coming towards him. Without giving a damn he turned back to look at the screen of his laptop.

"I'm talking to you." She shouted again without noticing that he was attending an important video call.

He again chose to neglect her, but that was a wrong move, irked with his ignorance she harshly closed his laptop and screamed at him again.

"How dare you to keep me lock here Mr. Swayam Shekawat?" At that time she did not care about the outcome, she just wanted to show him his place.

"SHARON" he rose from the couch and roared at her, the whole house shivered with the high intensity anger, he was angry with what she did.

He was in a meeting that he had postponed because of his Delhi trip. She stood there staring at him perplexed, her eyes widened with shock and fear, she had never ever seen this vexed Swayam; he had always tried to keep his calm in everything.

He took deep breaths and sighed.

"Wait for 10 minutes; let me complete this video call, then I will give you all the answers." He replied in a daze and sat on the couch; after opening his laptop he went back to the call.

"Yes Myra, what about that project, did you talk to Mr. Sharma?" He said looking at the screen.

She froze as if someone poured ice cold water over her head. Though she had partially moved on from Swayam the very thought of him still having a relation with Myra stung. She felt useless and ugly.

"MYRA" She murmured. Although that was a murmur Swayam heard what she said. He looked up at her, and she was already looking at him, their eyes met for a second, unable to stand under his stare she moved from there.

***

Shekawat Mansion!

Rishi and Taani were having breakfast.

"Have you spoken to Swayam?

"No, I have not." She said in a gloomy voice, sadness was evident on her face.

A Silence fell over there. They both went to their thoughts. A faint smile adorned their face when they thought about Swayam and Sharon.

"But I had called to his office, he actually came back yesterday from Delhi." Rishi said as a matter of fact.

"Ohh" she did not reply anything more than that; she did not know what to say. She yearned to talk to him, but when she thinks about what he did her blood boiled and she incinerated all those sympathies.

"Taani I want to talk to you about something very important." Rishi said with hell seriousness.

She looked up from her plate.

"What is that papa?"

"Rethink about what you and Rey had decided." Without waiting for her reply, he went back to the kitchen to dispose his plate.

"We can't and we will not." Rishi turned to see taani standing near the door.

"We can never, even if I agree, Rey will not, he is very upset with bhai, and I don't think he will forgive him easily. And more than that, I will never able to live a life with Rey in the guilt of spoiling Sharon's life." She put her plate in the kitchen slab and went from there. It has been months since she took Sharon's name with her lips.

Rishi knew Swayam was at fault, but Taani was taking the blame on her, she regrets that day when she introduced her to Swayam, on her birthday.

***

"What I dared Sharon?" After bidding adieu to his clients he looked up from his laptop. Sharon came out of her thoughts when he asked that.

"You know what I'm talking about, Don't you?" she exclaimed and walked towards him like a predator.

"No, I really don't know. What are you talking about?" His face sparkled with fake innocence; at that moment she wanted to smack across his face, that stupid smile frustrated her.

They stood there face to face glaring at each other. Sharon crossed her arms across her chest and without any awkwardness he followed her action.

"Don't copy me." She pointed her index finger at him.

"Don't copy me." Slightly slapping that finger he mocked her.

He had comprehended that, using sympathy as a weapon would not work with this new feisty Sharon. He had to find a different way to woo her and as a first step he decided to return her favor that was; to give the same treatment she was giving him.

"You can showcase your acting skills in front of some innocent people who trust you more than themselves, but don't dare to show me that reckless character of yours." Sharon was seething with anger. She has grown into an irascible and difficult woman.

"And once you were one of them." He smirked.

Swayam liked this new Sharon and it was fun to talk to her. This lady standing in front of him was his dream girl, not any innocent and naive girl.

"Yeah, you are right, once and were, not again." She glared.

"And today I'm tolerating you because of that stupidity." She continued..

He shifted in his position uncomfortably when she said that, though that was true when someone openly blame us we would surely lose it.

A dangerous silence fell there, they both did not talk just stared into each others eyes; He searched for a hope in her eyes, and she for the truth behind his change.

"Why did you lock me here?" She broke the silence.

"Because I had that choice," he smiled.

"Locking me up was not your choice, that was your need." She stated.

"Exactly, I could not afford to lose you." He said in a faint voice. She looked into his eyes for a mere second. She did not exactly hear what he had said in the last.

"And I asked why did you do that?"

"That is simple and easy Sharon; I did not want you to leave this house."

"How could you be so cruel, you very clearly know that I hate this place and I'm scared of darkness." She shouted.

He did not reply. Her fear of darkness was a new thing to him.

"Ohh, I forgot that I'm talking to Mr. Swayam who does not even care about his father and sister." She mocked him.

The whole earth slipped beneath his feet. Though, she had told the truth, but that hurts, Truths always hurt.

"How could you be just so heartless that you let taani destroy her life? I'm ashamed to even say that you are her brother, how could you spoil her life? I don't care about mine and what you did to me, but how could you let her do that? You are a shame to the men who dies for their family."

He stared at her amused. Everything she said was right, but he only noticed her.

"Wow Sharon, I never expected that there would be a day like this that you would shout at me." He grinned like an idiot.

She stared at him as if he had grown to a ghost.

"Are you crazy? Have you gone mad? Here I'm asking you something and you are playing with me?"

"Actually, that was their decision; they told me that they will not marry till you forgive me." He said without looking at her.

"And you approved it. You did not do anything." She accused him.

"No, I talked to them, dad, even Rey's parents too, but everyone asked, you in return." He smiled helplessly.

"And I even thought..." he started to say something but she interrupted him.

"Lets play a game." She said out of the blue.

"Game, what game?" he frowned.

"You know that I came here for them, so I want to meet them and we will get them married. We both will act like a lovely couple till they believe that I forgave you, a similar play that you played months back." She looked at him with an expectation. But she saw pain in his eyes. Her game hurt him.

"So it's a deal?" She forwarded her right hand in front of him for a shake hand. He stared at her palm unable to comprehend about in which direction his life was heading. With shivering hands he took it and shook, as an indication that he was ready to play along with her.

"Swayam" She called out.

"Huh"

"So is it a deal?" this time she asked clearly, an unknown emotion flashed across her face.

"Yeah, it is. We will do it." He assured her and turned to leave but she interrupted.

"If you want we can sign a contract, a contract for a few months with our some conditions." She said without waiting for him to turn, her voice was emotion-less though that carried lots of feelings. A few seconds, no one moved from their place, when her words stung in his head, he turned to look at her, to say that he was shocked would be an understatement. That time he could see himself in her place, she was his reflection. She sweetly smiled at him, and her that small smile mocked him, a thousand needles pricked into his flesh causing him to flinch. Her that smile was capable of to hang him to death, while standing there he realized that sometimes a simple smile can cause the pain that a thousand tear drops can not.

"If you insist." he said and turned like a Robert to go to his room.

She had planned to play a game, and at the end of this game she would bring everything back to normal, but what about them, She did not say anything about their relationship, and he did not have the courage to ask her, he knew their past was not an easy one to forget in a blink of time, it needs time. And he was ready to wait, however, he does not really know what he wants, Does he love her, He does not know, he was only aware about the new formed feelings inside him, his insights would not have been allowing him to call it as love, He was afraid of that feeling, might be at the end of her game he would come clean with his feelings.

It would be a time waste for Sharon to even think to give a chance to Swayam, but everyone deserves a second chance only if they were truly regretting, and sometimes Swayam and Sharon can be cantankerous like an old grumpy man.

He knows that he has to make strenuous efforts to win her trust. Sharon has lots of trust problems, after living with Swayam for the few months she came to know that she could never trust him again. Even if she forgives him there will be germs of doubts inside her. She could never smile with him without doubting his efforts; she could never stay in a room alone with him without doubting his intentions. Even if he did everything that he could do that time to win her there would be a space. That would be waiting to fill and they both would never able to fill that space, Love needs trust, and trust needs love, they both don't have these two then how would they move on?

***


Edited by Keechu_SwaRon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Guys!

SURPRISE!🥳

That was long and im tired.
I hope you guys like it. I'm so nervous about this part and i dont know why. 😆

Actually my laptop was not working, so i had to format it, and unfortunately i lost my whole files of the FFs, So i will take time to update my other FFs. Really sorry guys.

Add Keechu.Pms for pms. 😳

Thank you.
Keechu.🤗


Edited by Keechu_SwaRon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its nice diii
Waiting for next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow this was an unexpected update...

lovely update.. what a twist u brought
now waiting for swaron
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
what a twist
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was good.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ...
Felt little sad for swayam but still he deserves this..even if as Sharon has planned after taarey wedding she will leave him and if she actually does then too I m ok with it..swayam should know how it actually feel when this happens to u...but eventually they should be together...
Plzzz update soonish ...
I want to know what will swayam do ...

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