SS: Good Bye! epilogue pg 48 - Page 39

Originally posted by: bawaswift

You shud have named it " Welcome " instead of a Goodbye.. !

Bawa Uncle, this was never supposed to be a SS. I had intentions of an OS, the first part only. But then the forum friends and readers just bombarded me with requests and pms...and the title remained...

Very thoughtful and a wondrous SS Sagi... ! ⭐️👏

Kabir's POV,,,, then Annaya's... n then the ethical outcome.. I mean everything fell into its place with a brilliant line drawn by you ,, n giving it a lovely turn in the end.. ! Awesome... !

What i loved is your narration of Kabir n Ananya's inner thoughts.. Very well explained.. !

Initially I was mad an Ananya. I still am...but then someone had to represent her side of things as well...the question of not what or when, but the issue of who. Had Kabir told her before the email, things would have been different. The very fact that he hid the truth from her was pinching. ANd then her hysterical reactions was too childish. Maybe she had no idea whom she was dealing with!

The last hospital scene is quite emotional... and the family reunion including kabir is just fabulous.. ! I loved it so much.. !

I took quite some time to pen it down. and then there were requests to accomodate the forum fans of RK...so thoda story distort hogaya. But it made a good read, and I am happy at the end.

The way the lost love is found again is a privilege to read.. ! How the two longed each other n the real hearts met .. !

Thanks. Kabir's dilemma was hard to put down. He had no idea that she has not moved on! Is she had, how would he face it? What if Anita would have introduced someone as Ananya's fiance or even worst, husband? Hence he was hesitant initially!

Epilogue is but obvious a beautiful ode to the lovely couple where Ana had to learn something more of her defeated yet a winner hubby.. ! Very touching to know what he went through..

Kuchh mat boliye. Epilogue was a total mess. I had to see a scene wherein one of his past demons revisits, and how Ananya reacts to it. Somethings cannot be rectified in one year alone. And to counter the past, I also had to show something for the future...the junior on the way..

So... the Junior is on its way.. This is very quite n hidden in the last lines.. 😳 Loved to see Kaya happiest once again.. n nothing but cuteness lies in between them... !

Thanks Sagi for this punishment... ! I love to take it... 😳Gimme more of them.. !

God bless you... !

Thanks for all that!

Originally posted by: Kayabiggestfan

Hi Sagi! Well a very happy belated birthday to you dear!! Hope you had an amazing day!

I have read this story twice, and I just love it! Never had a chance to comment before. But this entire story from their breakup to their first meet after 6 months to their patch up. You have written everything perfectly. You perfectly portrayed all the emotions. Really liked the humor in between also! Over all it was an wonderful piece of writing on KaYa.

Keep writing more! I have always looked forward to your writing!!

Also I just wanted to ask about this OS you wrote, I forgot the name. It was when KaYa's first date picture are realised in the press. And kabir announce to whole kkn that they will get married. You didn't continue that OS? I couldn't find the other parts for that. Please continue that story, it will be a pleasure to read more of your work!! :)

Take care!

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very sweet SS Sagi, thanks for giving us the link to read and cherish it 👏

The story is much like filling in the blank that was left in the show and you have perfectly done the justice to it! Kabir suffered at the time when he needed Ananya the most. And Ananya faced the reality that shook her inside and she was not able to judge properly.

Loved how you have changed the line and the track of separation came. This is the time that both realized what they cud have alter and what they loved the most. Inner trauma is much well versed, and loved to see them in love and nothing else hardly matter to them.

KaYa have confused each other, but in the heart they are the only ppl who knew each other very well! Sagi, the way you have picturized Ana's condition and the way Kabir sorted out and took her out of the shocking state - it's purely a romantic way of approach. Beautifully came out and wonderfully expressed 👏

They had to meet in the last and they did. The epilogue is the most understanding each other. Tarini's presence once again solved much and Kabir had to utter nothing much and all got into their places so well! Shreya's truth uncovered and Kaya got a life now with nothing more hidden and forwarding to a future where they are set to welcome their baby! Hope this time Ana will understand Kabir more like Tarini do.

Awesome! Fabulous from your sweet pen Sagi, luv ya for your ability of gluing me to this story, feel blessed ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Thank You Swati Aunty. So finally aapne padh hi liya! Wow.

How is Shubham? I believe you people are still in the US. Waapis India kab aa rahe hain?