|| Ishq e Benaam || Part 2 Added on to Page 1

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A troubled mind, a pregnant, hopeless young girl and the two's union

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|| PART 1 ||

"Do pal tak ka sukoon nahi hai mujhe! Kaam se thaka haara laut tha hoon thaaki kuch lamhein shaanti se bita sakoon. Magar nahi choti se choti baat ko lekhe tumhe roz ladna hota hai! Chod do mujhe please!!"

Toh theek hai phir... jaa rahi hoon mujhe shouk nahi hai tum jaise nikame ke saath rehne kaa!"

In the fight between his parents; the one who suffered the most was Raman. He'd father re married soon after. Having had enough, he ran away from home.

He's journey began ...
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woah...back with new one
nice starting di, waiting fr next part
update soon
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its nice dear continue soon very interesting concept..
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nice prologue
update soon
pm me too
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Really nice start dear
Please update soon
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He sat outside, in the dark; his eyes covered with the strong grip of his elbows; weeping incessantly.

He was a mere spectator to the brutality inflicted upon his mother. He saw her; crying, pleading her intoxicated husband who had no sense of time, place or even his young son. That beast hadn't even realised what he was exposing the young innocent mind to. He was inebriated; pouncing hungrily on the helpless woman. He ripped her clothes apart; robbing her off of her self esteem, her self respect. He had witnessed how she hung herself to death. It wasn't suicide, it was murder. He felt stifled.

A young lad of thirteen was thrown into bewilderment. He resented the world... he hated his mere existence. The fact that he was born from that man made him feel nothing but shame. How could he tolerate a moment longer under the same roof as that animal?

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The young boy sat on the streets in the middle of the night; the terror fresh unwilling to come out of the shock.

What would it take for him to come out of that one terrorising memory?

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