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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Mansi.
I got really shocked when Sanskar said he won't marry Swara. Phew everyone got to know it was all AP and Laksh's plan. Loved Sujata 😆
Precap sounds awesome 😳 Update soon ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear
thanxx for the pm
waitng for next update
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing and very interesting update!
Loved it
Thanks for the PM
I am very very sorry for commenting soo late!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!!
in ur face AP!! hahah...
hope evrything gets sorted between swasan...
plz continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved this update. Sujatha s so sweet. i love her character. She told them abt annapurna's trap to save her son's love. I hate annapurna.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeee yipeee thanx mansi...sujata arshi well done..our sanskar has to manaofy swara...swasan..ye.update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 11:
Panditji had come and said that Swasan Kundali was a perfect match...

Sanskar: (Whispering in Swara's ears)See we are made for each...

Swara: (gritting her teeth and replied) Haan warna tumhe ek aur mauka mil jata mujhse rishta todne ka...

Sanskar tries to hold her hand but she jerks it off...

Sujata comes her Swara...
Sujata: Swara je mahre pushtani kade hai...Mahri dadisa ne mujhe diye the jab mahra byah hua tha... Aaj woh main thare ko de rahe hai...
Swara:Bohat sundar hai Aunty...

Sujata: tune ab tak mahre ko maaf nahi kiya kya...pehle kitne pyaar se Mujhe mom kehkar bulati thi mahre ko ab ab kya mujhe Aunty bolege...

Swara:Sorry mom ab main apko Aunty nahi bolungi...kyunki agar aap...Dada...Bhabhi aur Parineeta Bhabhi yeh sab nahi karte toh aaj...(tears welled up in her eyes)

Sujata: Bas Shona ab tu bilkul nahi royegi...aur iss ghade ko toh main dekhti hoon... Sanskar ainda tune mahri Shona ko rulaya toh Arnav tu use ghar jamai bankar rakh lena...

Khushi: Obviously Chachiji... Aap tension mat lo...hum Sanskar ko rakh lenge aap Shona ko rakh lena...

DP:Sujata Roke ki rasam puri karo aur Anurag aur Sharmista ji agle hafte sagai aur uske do hafte baad Shaadi...apko ko takleef to nahi hai na...

Dida:Nahi Durga Prasad ji... Humko koi problem nahi hai...

Sujata competes the Roka giving Swara gifts and Sweets...

Everyone was chatting and discussing the marriage plans...

Sujata: Dekho main toh baato baato main bhul hi gayi...
Sujata gives Swara a beautiful jewellery box...and asks Swara to open it... It contained a beautiful royal neckpiece...

Swara: mom yeh...




Sujata: je mahri dadi saas ka haar hai...janti ho Swara waise Dadisa ne yeh haar mahri maasa ko bhi nahi diya na Jiji ko...aur kyunki mahri aur Inki love marriage hue thi aur mahri saas ko main zyada pasand na thi...woh Inki Shaadi jiji ki behen se karvana chahti thi... Tab je haar mujhe Dadisa ne diya tha... Us din pehli baar laga ki Maheshwari khandan ne mujhe apnaya...

Annapurna: Sujata hume tumse yeh umeed nahi the... Tum jaan bhuj kar yeh haar hume necha dekhane ke liye laye thi na... Kyunki tum yeh jatana chahti ho ki main kitne buri hoon...

Sujata: Jiji main waise bhi je haar mahri bahu ko hi deti...par apne bhi toh hamesha mujhse necha dikhaya...par jiji aaj pehle baar mujhe lag raha hai aaj tak aap jo bholepan ka natak kar rahe the us hisaab se aapke liye Ragini jaise bahu hi theek hai...upar se Savitri andar se Shashikala...

DP:Bas Sujata...kyu bin kaam ke logo se baat karke apni khushiyon ko bigaad rahi ho...

Annapurna feels very bad and angry that DP is ignoring her and the respect he had for her is lost...Now the respect is given to Sujata the lady who she thought was not capable of doing anything without her Jiji...

In Swara's room:
Khushi: So ab toh khush ho na maine aur tumhare bhai ne sab theek kar diya...

Swara: Janti ho Bhabhi mujhe Sanskar par bohat gussa aa raha hai...I don't know main yeh Shaadi kyu kar rahe hoon...

Sanskar: Swara tum mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti...

Swara: Haan nahi karna chahti... Kyu karu tumse...

Sanskar: Shona...

Swara: DON'T CALL ME SHONA...Badi maa ne kaha aur tumne mujhe chod diya...Fine tumhe apne pehle pyaar ke yadoon ko dhoka nahi dena na toh theek hai... Main abhi sabko bata deti hoon... Tumhare problem solve ho jayegi...

Swara was about to walk out of her room...Sanskar holds her hand and pins her to the wall...

Sanskar: Haan tumhe koi haq nahi hai mujhse mere pyaar ko cheen ne ka...Mujhse meri Shona ko door karne ka...

Swara: (pushing him)Oh really maine cheena tumse tumhara pyaar... Tumne khud rishta toda tha maine nahi...so jao yaha se mera dimaag mat kharab karo...Jao apni Kavita ki yadoon me raho...

Sanskar: I am sorry Swara...woh badi maa ne mujhse kaha isliye maine yeh kiya...

Swara: Bhabhi mujhe bolo ki main Sanskar ko laat maru...

Khushi: Shona Sanskar ko laat maro...

And our Angry Swara gave our hero a dhamakedar kick on his leg...

Sanskar: Awe Shona kya kar rahe ho...

Swara: Bhabhi ne mujhse kaha maine laat maar di...Simple... so Mr Sanskar Maheshwari go away before I kick you between your legs...

Arnav:Sanskar what the hell are you doing here?????? Get out of my sister's room... Before I kill you... Tumhare himmat kaise hue meri Shona ko rulane ki...

Sanskar: Ajeeb bhai behen ho tum dono manta hoon galti ki hai maine ab galti sudharne ka mauka to do...

Sujata: Kyu de????Shona tanne jab tak iss ullu se gussa rehna hai raho...manne koi dikkat na hai...

Sanskar: Seriously mom aap apne bete ko chodkar Shona ke saath go gayi...

RP:Sirf thari mom na main bhi Swara ke saath hoon...

Swara: Thanks papa...

Sanskar: Shona am sorry na please na I am sorry... Maaf kar do... Please I mean tum mere liye sabse zyada important ho...I know maine galti ki hai par ab kya karu main...Ok ab tum gussa ho...please kya tum mere saath bahar chaloge I want to take you out for dinner...

Swara:Kyu chalu main??????

Sanskar: Cause I want to make my Princess smile... Please chalo na (giving her a packet) Yeh tumhare liye I am waiting down...


He leaves the room...Sujata and RP follows him with a smile...

Swara opens the package and it has a beautiful Saree...


Khushi: Manna padega Shona Sanskar babu ki choice toh bohat achi hai...Chalo ab tayar ho jao...

Swara:Main kahi nahi jane wali...

Arnav: Tum nahi jana chahti toh Shona tumhe koi force nahi karenga...us Sanskar ko main dhakke maar kar nikalta hoon...

Swara:What the????? Aap usse bas jane ke liye kaheye...aur aap sab bhi jayeye...Mujhe akela chodhiye...

Arshi leaves Swara's room

Khushi:Arnav aap usse aur kyu bhadka rahe hai Saare ke khilaaf... Aapne itni mehnat ki Sanskar aur uska rishta phir se jodne ki aur ab aap usse bhadka rahe hai...

Arnav: Are meri jaan main usse bhadka nahi raha... Dekhna abhi 15 min me woh khud neeche tayar ho kar aa jayegi...

In the Hall:
Sanskar: Lagta hai Swara mujhse itni naraaz hai ki woh mujhe mauka hi nahi dena chahti...

Arnav: Galti kiski thi??????

Sanskar: Haan ab tum bhi taane maaro mujhe...

Khushi: Sanskar khaafi der ho gayi hai... Shayad Swara bohat zyada gusse me hai...

Just when Khushi said this...
Swara came down the stairs... Looking heavenly in the saree...Sanskar found his world stop revolving... He was still...

Arnav: Muh band kar do warna makhi ghus jayege...

Sanskar: Mumhh!!!!!Shona tum bohat jyaada khubsoorat lag rahi ho...

Swara: Agar tumhari jhooti tarif ho gayi ho toh hum chale...Mere paas zyada time nahi hai...

Ouch that hurt him...His Shona sounded like she was doing some favour coming with him...

Sanskar and Swara left and in the car Swara was not talking to him also the answers she gave were just nods or a simple yes or no...So Sanskar switched on the music player...
The male version of Samjhawa started playing...Swara looked out the window and remembered her concert when she dedicated the female version of the song for Sanskar...

Sanskar: Shona itni naraz ho mujhse ki ab meri taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti...Itni naraz ho ki apne dukh apne ansoon bhi mujhse chupa rahi ho...

Swara turned and Sanskar was right... Swara was crying... Sanskar felt more guilty...

Sanskar: I know Swara maine tumhe bohat dard diye hai...Ab aaj Shyam ke baad phesla sirf tumhara honga... Ki tum mujhe maaf karna chahti ho ya phir mujhse door jana chahti ho...

Swara wiped her tears and kept mum...

They reached their destination... Swara was shocked Sanskar had got her to a sunset point along the banks of the river... A beautifully decorated boat house was made ready for them...

Sanskar: Swara tumhe hamesha se padhado aur Samundaro se pyaar hai na ab Kolkata main Samundar toh nahi la sakta toh socha kyu na tumhare liye yeh chota sa surprise plan karu...

Swara's heart melted seeing this she gave up and hugged Sanskar tightly and Sanskar hugged her back... And kissed her forehead...

Sanskar:I am sorry Shona ab tumhe mujse koi alag nahi kar sakta I am sorry...I promise ab kuch bhi ho jaye koi main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karunga...I love you... I love you so much...

Swara: I love you too Sanskar main tumse aur door nahi reh sakti hoon...

Sanskar separated from the Hug and kissed her on her lips... Swara was Shocked first but later she responded...

Sanskar: Chalo andar chalo

Sanskar takes Swara inside the boat and a beautiful table for two was decorated and laden with Swara favorite dishes...

Swara: Sanskar yeh sab... I mean Sandesh... Rosogulla...yeh biryani... Puchka(pani puri)...
Itna sab mere liye...

Sanskar:Hmm!!!!Kehte hai na dil ka rashta pet se hokar nikalta hai...

Swara and Sanskar sat down and had the yummy dinner feeding each other... After the dinner Swara was standing out feeling the fresh salty river...and the moonlight made her look more heavenly...

Sanskar came next to her...
Sanskar: Swara you always dedicate your songs for me aaj main tumhare liye gana chahata hoon... (Getting down on his knees) will you dance with me Princess??????

Swara laughed and gave her hand...

Sanskar started singing and pulled Swara in his arms...They were doing a slow romantic dance...

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

(Swara smiled as she was hearing him sing from his heart)

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Wooo...

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

(He kept her hand on his heart and then kissed her hand)

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

(Swara hugged him tight not wanting him to ever lose him again)

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...

They stayed in each others arms and the moon... the stars and the waves became witness to the unsaid promises they made to each other... The secret prayers the sending to heaven for each others smile and for never separating them...


Precap:
Give me suggestions?????
Can't think of it further...
Do you want me to end the story or you want me to continue it????????
I am planning the wedding preparations and then end of story... So please give me your views...


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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome dear..pls end mat karo..i want to see more swasan romance😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
update is amazing...
finally they are engaged..
i had thought it wil b tough for sanskaar to manaofy swara..
but romantic diner awww..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

awesome dear..pls end mat karo..i want to see more swasan romance😊

Thanks for your comments😉
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