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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: pslove

Wow

Wow
Wow
Wow
It is amazing



thank you 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: _Annie_

I don't follow this seriesregularly but have a fair idea about it's plot and since my darling vaishu has written it, so I decided to give this OS a try. Teri writing skills par poora bharosa hai mje vaishuu😆

This was Amazinggg meri jaan :)) Their last convo was nice... I specially loved his last dialogue!

Write more hun🤗




Aww thanku so much swthrt.
Thanku🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

hehe lol 😆 Zee website pe dekhlo



aww...I will try 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel


Kya website hai. Mujhe batao. Mujhe bhi much episodes repeat pe dekhne hote hai😉



shalu...u r vry mch addicted to this show...😆
yeh kunj bhi naaa...kya kiya meri bestu ke saath 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Aur kya hua tere cell ko? Doc ko dikhaya?


sue...actually I don't know she told u or not...
her phone have some complaints...
not charging ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update , loved it continue the os plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone.
Thanku so much for your wonderful response.😊
Back with another part.
Hope you guys will love it too 😳

Part 2

Its been two three days after kunj and twinkle knowing yuvi's truth.
Twinkle said "kya kare kunj ki yuvi ki sachai sabke samne aa jaye?"
Kunj said hesitantly "ek chiz toh maine observe kari hai. Ki agar hum ladte hai toh vo gussa hota hai, lekin agar hum thoda bhi ek dusre ko dekhte hai ya accidentally hamare hands touch hote hai toh vo bht bht zada gussa hota hai."
Twinkle asked still confused "toh isse kya kehna chahte ho tum"
Kunj said "yahi ki i have a plan, but there are chances ki tu comfortable na ho us plan se"
Twinkle said "tu bol toh shi"
Kunj narrates her the plan but instead of twinkle being angry she smiled and gives a thumps up to plan.
Twinkle said "i am ready kunj. And ya, i trust you" she walked out saying so.
Kunj smiled like a teenage who fell in love with this girl, he was happy that the girl he is falling for trust him. He than went out and started his plan.

Kunj came to house after 1 hour. Yuvi approached him as he saw him, and was intrigued on seeing one polybag in his hand.
Yuvi asked "dost yeh kya hai? Tu mere liye kuch laya hai?"
Kunj blushed and said "actually yeh twinkle ke liye hai. Main uske liye saree laya hua."
Yuvi was angry which didn't go unnoticed by kunj but he changed his expressions "twinkie toh saree pehenti hi nahi, vo toh sirf suit pehenti hai na. Phir kyu? Or koi occasion hai kya?"
Kunj replied "aaj main use i love you bolne vala hu tabhi"
Yuvi fumed in anger, kunj noticed this and excused himself.
Yuvi said in mind "twinkle ko saree nahi pasand, vo kabhi nahi pehnegi. And tumhari itni himat ki tum meri twinkle ko propose karo.

Yuvi sat in room and waited for twinkle, he wanted to see her reaction.
Twinkle entered in room making lunch. She asked kunj "all set?"
Kunj replied "yes. Umm. Twinkle agar main tujhe kuch du toh tu legi?"
Twinkle said happily "ha. Kya doge?"
Kunj handed her the box.
Twinkle opened it with excitement but her face fell on seeing saree.
Twinkle said "yeh saree toh plan ka hisa nahi tha"
Kunj noticed her sadness " ha i know. Par meri ek fantasy thi hamesha se to see my wife in a saree. But because you are not happy so its ok. Dont wear it. And vaise bhi i can't force you into all this" saying so he exited the room.
Twinkle said to herself "i will wear this saree for you kunj. So what if i dont wear sarees par still i will wear it for you."
She dialled her maa's number. "Kaisi ho maa?"
Leela replied "thik hu. Kuch kam tha?"
She replied "maa vaise toh apko aaj ghar pe bulana tha taki aap bhi yuvi ka chehra dekho ki vo kitna gir chuka hai. Lekin abhi maine isliye call kia, ki agar aap aa hi rahe ho toh plz thoda jaldi aa jao. Mujhe saree pehna do"
Leela was about to ask about yuvi but her statement of wearing saree shocked her to hell. "Tu kavse saree pehnne lagi?"
Twinkle replied hesitantly "vo actually. Kunj mujhe saree mein dekhna chahta hai, or main mana nahi kar pai"
Leela "kyu? Konsa tu usse pyar karti hai jo uski wishes puri kar rahi hai"
Twinkle spoke with a smile on face "pyaar. Pata nahi maa, ki yeh pyar hai ya kya. Par ha man karta hai ki kunj ki har khwaish puri karu. Thanku maa meri shadi ek aise bande se karvane ke liye jo meri respect karta hai or sabse zada apki. Thanku"
Leela was happy that her daughter was falling in love that too for a guy who is a gem.
Leela replied "main aa jaungi"

Kunj started decorating room with red roses and candles, he did everything which fit into his budget, but still was sad that although its fake but still he couldn't prepared a lavish set up.

Keeping all thoughts aside he messaged twinkle to come in room.
Leela tied twinkle's saree and by the time twinkle filled leela with there plan, it was leela's duty to bring everyone in her room as she hear some noises.

Twinkle entered the room and found it decorated with rose petals and scented candles, she was shocked as this was also not in plan.
On other hand kunj was shocked on seeing twinkle in his gifted saree, she was not looking less than an Angel in her black saree which hugged her on perfect places showing her curves. Blouse backless held with 4 doris, hair on one shoulder.
Kunj was happy seeing her in his gifted saree, she was looking beyond his imagination.
Twinkle broke the trance and asked "yeh sab. Kis liye?"
Kunj made an excuse "so that sab kuch real lage"
Twinkle's felt disappointment on listening that this was all because of the plan, she still passed a half smile which didn't reached her eyes
Kunj saw yuvi behind the door and started there plan.
Kunj kneeled infront of twinkle asking for her hand, twinkle was confused but understood when kunj told her with eyes to look at the door.
Twinkle gave her hand in his (sajna ve moment)

Kunj spoke eyeing her "its true yeh shadi ek samjhota thi hum dono ke liye, main hamesha se alisha se pyar karta tha lekin jab tu life mein ayi toh pata laga ki agar pyar karvana ho to tujhse sikhe koi, kyuki vo mere sath hokr bhi meri nahi hoti thi. Pata nahi kyu par tujhe dekhte hi main sab bhul jata tha. I know ki tu yuvi ko pyar karti thi par phir bhi dil karta tha ki bas har waqt tujhe protect karu, tujhe sabse chupa ke rakhu.
Pehle teri bak bak se bht irritate hota tha par ab main apna ek bhi pal teri awaaz sune bina nahi nikal sakta. Main toh sirf tujhe chidane ke liye syapa queen bolta tha kabhi socha nahi tha ki tu sach mein meri queen ban jayegi.
I love you twinkle, kya tu apni puri zindagi apne is khadus pati ke sath bitana chahegi?" The confession was a part of plan but every single word spoken was full of love and honesty. Kunj said what he felt for her.
Twinkle had tears in her eyes, she don't know why but she felt every single word to be the truth. She nodded in response and sat with him. They were so lost in there moment that they forgot it was all a plan until kunj felt a punch on his face.
Twinkle shouted "yuvi. How dare you?" She got up and slapped his cheek very hard. "Teri himmat kaise hui mere pati ko hath lagane ki?"
Twinkle turned to kunj "kunj tu thik hai na?"
Kunj nodded and was about to beat yuvi but twinkle stopped "kunj aaj mujhe ise handle karne de. Bht kuch kia hai isne aj tak jinki saza ise milni chahiye"
Kunj understood her point and jept quiet.

Twinkle turned to yuvi and asked "tu samajhta kya hai khud ko? Tu hota kon hai Mere kunj ko marne vala? Tune sabko bewakuf banaya, kunj ne tujhpe phir bhi trust kia. Usne mujhpe nahi tujhpe trust kia, uski achai tujhe zara bhi nahi badal pai?"

Yuvi spoke "kya kunj kunj laga rakha hai? Aisa kya hai kunj mein jo mujhe mein nahi. Mere pas itne paise hai ki tu jis chiz pe hath rakhegi vo tere kadmo mein hogi.
Kunj ne akhir tujhe dia hi kya hai ajtak? Jab se tu is ghar mein ayi hai sirf insult hi hoti hai teri, teri so called MIL kabhi tujhse khush nahi hoti, tere FIL pe itna debt hai ki unke yeh ghar bhi apna nahi hai. Or in sab mein is kunj ne tujhe pehli bar koi gift dia or voh bhi kya? Ek mamuli si saree. Isse better and romantic dates main tjhe aaj tak deta aya hu. Mere aage yeh kunj sarna kuch nahi hai. Maine tere liye kya kuch nahi KIA, memory khone ka natak kia, apni hi maa ko chudail bola. Or phir bhi tu sirf kunj kunj karti hai. Kyu?"
Everyone listened to yuvi's trutg, anita was furious that for twinkle his son treated ill with her. Bebe was shocked that twinkle and yuvi loved each other.

Kunj was hurt listening the truth, he agree with yuvi.

Twinkle retorted "bol lia jo bolna tha? Toh ab sun. Tujh mein or mere kunj mein zameen asman ka fark hai. Manti hu ki main jabse yaha ayi mummy ji mujhe pasand nahi karti, papa ji ko loss hua jiski vajah se hamare pas paise nahi. Lekin in sab mein jo kunj apne papa ke aage muh tak nahi kholta usne gow snan(cow's urine bath) ke liye apne papa ke aage bola, usne har point pe mera sath dia. Or mera khayal rakha. Teri vajah se meri maa ne mujhse bat karna band kia tha or vo kunj hai jiski vajah se meri maa mujhse thoda bht bolne lagi. Are tu kis paise ka ghamand dikha raha hai or kise? Twinkle Kunj Sarna paiso se bikne valo mein se nahi hai. Tu bhale hi mujhe expensive gifts dede, dates plan karle lekin jo secured feeling mujhe kunj ki bahon mein aati hai vo tere sath nahi. Kya karu aise paise ka jo mujhe secured hi feel na karvaye.
Tune mere kunj pe pehle bhi attack kia or mera bhi rape karne ki koshish ki. Or in sab gunaho ke liye jail tera wait kar raha hai."
Within seconds police too came and arrested him in crime of attempt to murder and attempt to rape.
Leela was proud of daughter, whereas bebe was hurt.
Bebe spoke " tune ini vadi gali mujhse chupai twinkle. Tujhe ek beti ki tarah mana ,Tujhse yeh umeed nahi thi."
Twinkle spoke teary eyes "Bebe mujhe maaf kardo, par main karti main bata hi nahi pai apko. Please bebe mujhe maf kardo"
Bebe cupped her face "aaj tune jis tareeke se apni family or kunj ka sath dia, tujhe maaf karti hu. Khush reh putar."
saying so one by by all left the room.
Twinkle was happy that yuvi's truth was out he turned to express her happiness bht saw kunj sitting on floor head bowed down. Twinkle closed the door and came to her.

Twinkle asked "kya hua kunj. Itne sad kyu ho? Itni khushi ki bat hai yuvi ka sach samne aa gaya"
Kunj said defeated "thik toh keh raha tha yuvi. Maine tujhe ajtak konsi khushi di hai? Main aj tak apni maa ke aage teri image sudhar nahi paya."
Twinkle scolded him "shut up kunj. Ab tum uski baton pe dhyan doge?"
Kunj said "kuch galat bhi toh nahi kaha usne? Yeh date yeh setup bilkul bhi perfect nahi hai"
Twinkle had tears in her eyes seeing his state she again said "chup hoja kunj"
But kunj didn't stopped "yeh saree bht hi sasti hai bht hi mamuli hai. Main kitna bada losser hu twinkle main apni biwi ko ek achi lifestyle nahi de paya. Twinkle tu chahe toh mujhe chod ke..."
Twinkle had enough of his insecurities, she did what she felt was right, she placed her hands on either side and clamed his lips.
Kunj was shocked would be an understatement, he gasped in shock. Twinkle took the advantage and started sucking his upper lip, she dont know why she kissed him but she couldn't stopped herself from shutting him up.
Kunj too sucked her lower lip tasting her.
Both nibbled on eachother's lips, sucked them.
They broke apart when felt the need of air.
Twinkle spoke against his lips resting her forehead against his.
"No doubt yuvi ne mujhe bht mehnge gifts die, usne bhi mujhe saree di. Lekin maine kabhi nahi di, bhale hi yeh saree costly nahi hai lekin mere liye priceless hai kuki yeh tune mujhe di hai. Loser nahi hai tu kunj, mere pati loser nahi ho sakta. Or yeh set up yeh bht beautiful hai. Nahi chahiye yar mujhe paise, kya karungi paise jab headache hone pe tu mere bal sehlane ke liye nahi hoga? Kya karungi paiso ka agar mujhe khana khilane ke liye tu nahi hoga toh? Kya karungi itni costly saree ka jab dekhne ke liye tu nahi hoga? Or kya karungi loving family ka jisme tu sath nahi hoga.
Pata hai kunj mujhe or yuvi ko kitne sal ho gaye the relation mein lekin maine aajtak use khud ko kiss tak nahi karne dia or aaj bina soche tujhe kiss kar dia.
Are nahi chahiye aisa paisa aisi lifestyle jisme tu na ho. Mujhe vo zindagi chahiye jisme tu har pal mere sath ho chahe phir hum sirf ladte rahe. Plz kunj khud ko loser bolke meri insult mat kar. Tu meri choice hai, tu mera husband hai. Agar main teri syapa Queen hu toh tu mera khadus king hai."
Kunj had tears in his eyes, he pulled her in a bone crushing hug. Twinkle too hugged him tightly, she do fell in love with this man.
Kunj spoke in her ear still hugging her "vaise tu is saree mein bht sundar lag rahi hai"
Twinkle replied "thank you" and buried her head more into crook of his neck.
Kunj said "i love you twinkle"
Twinkle replied "pura toh nahi but thoda thoda i too love you"
Kunj broke the hug and placed a light kiss on her forehead "main is thode ka pura hone ka wait karunga"
Twinkle placed her head on his heart listening to his heartbeat, and kunj kept his one arm on her head and one on here bare waist sending shivers down her spine. He drew circles on her waist, which soothed twinkle.
They remained in each others arms like this for whole night.

So how was it?
Hope you guys like it.
Plz do tell.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: binuuu



shalu...u r vry mch addicted to this show...😆
yeh kunj bhi naaa...kya kiya meri bestu ke saath 😉

Mujhe bhi kunj jaisa hubby chahiye yar
Bura hal kia hai kunj ne mera 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: binuuu


sue...actually I don't know she told u or not...
her phone have some complaints...
not charging ...

Ha sue dikha dia doc ko.
And ab ph. Bilkul thk h 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update , loved it continue the os plz.

Thanku so much dear. 😛
Done 😉

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