HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome .waiting for rishbala first meeting.
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Nice start.
looking forward to read. Continue soon.
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Nice update...
Looking forward to Rishbala'a 1st meet...
Update soon...
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Thank you so much guys for your positive responses.
Here is the Third Part...hope you guys like it.😊



PART-3


Madhu took and auto and was in the way towards the Studio..

"I have said yes to Mrs.Khanna(The parlour's manager)but i am feeling nervous...what if Maya does not like my work...i will get fired...hey wait... didu told me the other day that Maya Singhania is the Heroine of RK's upcoming movie...that means...RK will also be present there...i wish i could bring didu to the sets...so what if didu can't come...at least i can call Ma and share this thing with everyone"...She called Paddo...

Paddo:Hello

Madhu:Hello Ma this is Madhu

Paddo:Oh Madhu...what happen??

Madhu:Ma...is didu there??..actually i wanted to share something with you people.

Paddo: Yes Madhu Trishna and Roma are here only...tell me what happened?.

Madhu:Ma can you put the phone on speaker.

Paddo:Just a second...yes Madhu...we are listening.

Madhu Narrated the whole story to everyone...

Trishna: Oh My God!!!...is this a dream...wow Madhu...you are so lucky that you will be seeing RK today in person...i am so jealous of you Glycerin...Accha listen...can we also come please please.

Madhu: Didu even i am going there for the first time and that too for my work...i am not allowed to take anyone else...that is why i called you to share this news with you...and didu frankly speaking...i am getting really nervous.

Trishna: Oh com-on Madhu...you should be happy...that you will see our superstar today...don't get nervous...and ya at least take and autograph...and a selfie with him for me please.

Roma: Oye she is going there for work not for autograph.

everyone giggled

Trishna: Ya whatever...but at least try once ok Madhu?

Madhu:Ok...Accha Didu i have reached the Studio...i will talk to you later...ok.

Trishna:Ok bye Madhu...Best of Luck!!

Madhu:Thanks didu...bye.


Madhu took the permission through the intercom from the Guard room and entered the Studio.


RK was busy reading his script when director came and asked him to give the shot...RK stood up and lights got dim...there was a single light focusing only on him..there was silence everywhere...as he was about to say his dialouge he felt someone coming inside...he could here the sound of payal...he closed his eyes and continued listening to the sound...he could feel the sound coming closer and closer...and then he heard someone saying "Ma'am i..."she was cut in between by the other woman "Shh...can't you see the shot is going on??"she said this pointing towards RK. Madhu looked at RK...RK turned around...he could see her face because where she was standing there was enough light that one could see her clearly...RK locked his eyes with her's...he was awestruck by her beauty...for him every bit of her's was completely perfect...her face was full of innocence...she was wearing a simple yellow colour suit...her hair tied up...in the world of glamour he had not seen any girl who could mesmerize anyone with her natural beauty...he was thinking how can this girl can be so simple yet so beautiful...for some time he couldn't say anything and was completely staring at her without a blink...Madhu got confused as she couldn't make out that whether he is staring at her or he is giving his shot...RK started delivering his dialouge with great intensity while coming towards Madhu "Iltija hai bas tujhe paane ki, aur koi hasrat nahi hai tere deewane ki, shikwa mujhe tujhse nahi khuda se hai, Kya zarurat thi tujhe itna khubsoorat banane ki"...and he came closer to madhu...and he continued staring at her...Madhu started feeling nervous...her heart started beating fast...but she continued looking at him...as if something is attracting her towards him...but at the back of her heart she knew that he is only saying his dialouges..."cut it"..director said "RK sir this not the dialouge" RK and Madhu came to their senses...and RK left from there...Every one was confused...Madhu tried to understand that what just happened...her heart was still beating fast...and suddenly someone called her name "Madhubala"...she turned around and said.

Madhu: yes?

Make-up supervisor: Oh so you are the new make-up artist...come Maya ma'am is waiting for you

Madhu: Ok sir...and she followed him.

RK was sitting in his vanity and was busy thinking about the what just happened few minutes before...and suddenly bittuji came inside..

Bittuji: chief what happened why did you come inside...is everything okay?

RK:aa...Yes Bittuji

Bittuji:"Okay"

RK:Bittuji who is that girl??

Bittuji: Which one chief??

RK:No one bittuji leave it...lets go.

They left the vanity...to give the shot.

"CUT IT"...great shot RK sir...RK sat on the chair and started reading his script...suddenly he again felt the same feeling that someone is coming towards him...he saw Madhu coming behind Maya...her face was down and she come close to him and stood up besides RK without realizing it...RK smirked and asked her"what's your name??"

Madhu then came to know that she is standing beside him...she again became nervous and said "sorry sir...are you asking me?"

RK kept the script aside and stoop with both hands in his pocket and said "is there any one else you can see here?"

Madhu was confused that why is he asking her name but she didn't bother much about that and said "Madhubala...Madhubala Malik".

RK: MADHUBALA AHAAN

"Make-up" MAYA shouted as she completed her shot...Madhu walked towards her hastily...but she collided with Vicky(Makeup supervisor)

Madhu: Ouch

Vicky: who purposely came in between pretended that he did'nt see her and got collided and he said sorry.

Madhu: "It's Ok sir" and she went towards Maya.

Vicky smiled and and was looking her lustfully...and then he gave a wink to his friends who were laughing on that incident. RK who saw all this got very angry and closed his fist but suddenly he thought of an idea and smirked again.

It was 6 in the evening and RK and Maya gave their last shot of the day...when Maya was about to leave RK said "Maya"

Maya:" Yes RK"

RK:"I want something from you"

Maya:Maya gave him a Mischievous look and said "sure honey...tell me what can i do for you" and she was about to put her arms around his neck but suddenly RK stopped her and pushed her hands away.

RK:"stop thinking nonsense babe...i want something else from you"

In the mean time Madhu gathered all her stuff and went back home.

Madhu came home.
Trishna was eagerly waiting for her and when she saw her entering the house...she could not control her excitement and ran towards her.

Trishna: Madhuuu...Madhu Madhu Madhu...how was it...isn't RK hot...of course he is...tell me na what happened...did you his autograph.?

Madhu who was still lost in her thoughts didn't pay attention to trishna's words.

Trishna: Hey Madhu...tell me na did you took his autograph??

Madhu: came back to her senses and realised that she could not ask him for his autograph and said to trishna" I am so sorry didu...i completely forgot to ask him for his autograph...actually i was very busy today...and when in between i got time then he was busy in giving his shot...i promise i'll ask him tomorrow."

Trishna: Making a sad face and then suddenly jumped in excitement again and said "Ok yell me how was your first day on sets...did you enjoy it?"

Paddo and Malik Joined in...and Madhu narrated everything to them...but of course she did not say anything about her meeting with RK.


The end.
enjoyed it guys?...please comment...THANK YOU!!😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys please tell me should I continue??
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PART - 4

As Madhu finishes talking and Trishna says

Trishna: Woahh Madhu...your first day was quite hectec...ok now get freshen up and we'll have dinner together

Madhu: Yes didu...i am really hungry...i'll just be back.

At RK Mansion..

RK comes home...and is about to go upstairs when she is stopped by his Mom.

Radhaji: Rrrishu.(RK stops in midway)...beta i have made your Favourite Aloo Gobhi..exactly the way you like...a little bit burnt...come and have dinner...Deepali comes and cuts her in between.

Dips: Oho mummyji Aloo Gobhi is not good for him...you know na that he has to remain fit for his films.See i have made his favourite pasta salad which is tastey as well as healthy for him...come Rk i'll serve you.

RK: (while clapping his hands he says)Wow!!what a performance,i must say you guys are brilliant...but don't you guys get tired of doing this drama everyday...or should i say that you both enjoy getting insulted by me...Ha?

Radhaji:(a tear rolls down from her eyes)But Rishu this is not a drama...i am genuinly concerned for you...and this food..(suddenly RK cuts her in between)

RK: Huh...concerned...If you don't remember, let me remind you Mrs.Bhatia you stopped concerning for me 13 years back by marrying that Kuku Bhatia.

Radhaji: But beta he is your father.

RK: He is not my father(RK shouted)...my father died 13 years ago...and along with them my mother also died...so stop all this drama Mrs.Bhatia.

His words were so harsh that Radhaji couldn't control herself and started crying and left from there.Deepali was still standing there.RK looked at Deepali

RK: Do you want me to insult you individually?

Dips: But RK i...(suddenly a voice comes)

Man: honey!!...Baby!!...where are you.

Dips:(In a frustrated voice she murmurs)Sikkyyy!!

RK: Go your "MUH BOlA" husband(so called husband) is calling you...take this pasta and you both can throw this pasta on each other's face...i promise...i won't mind(and he heads towards his room).

Dips:Till when you will stay away from me RK...one day i'll make you mine...(she pauses for 2 seconds and says)..AGAIN!!

Madhu's Home

Madhu joins everyone for dinner.

Roma: Mother India...Don't you think it is the right time to talk?

Padmini: Yes yes...Malik will ask her ...right Malik?

Malik: what?...ma..ma..meee...and starts coughing.

Madhu: Malik...(she pour water into the glass and helps Malik drinking it...and rubbs his back)

Malik:Thank you Madhu beta.

Madhu: (Madhu smiles at him and again sits on her chair to finish off her food.)Roma...What are you talking...is everything ok?

Roma: Yes Yes...glycerin everything is fine...(and she stares at Malik as if ordering him to ask her).

Madhu: (Looks at everyone and is confused) Will someone tell me what's going on??

Paddo Pinches Malik

Malik:Ouch!!

Madhu: What Happened Malik??

Malik:(Malik gets Nervous and says) Aa...bbb..Mmmadhu..."TUMHARA KHAYAL KE BAARE MEIN KYA SHADI HAI?"(What do you Marriage about think).

Madhu:What...Malik i didn't get you?

Malik: Mee too...hehehehe.

Roma:Bhai

Malik:Ok ok...Madhu what do you think about Marriage?

Madhu:Malik...why are you asking me this question?

Trishna: Oho glycerin...it's a simple question...give us a simple answer...tell me what do you think about marriage.

Madhu: But Why you guys are asking me this question?

Paddo: Madhu...beta actually...we have seen a boy for you...and they are coming to meet you day after tomorrow.

Madhu:M..m..Ma..Ma i have just joined parlour few days back...right now i can't even think about marriage...and Ma after what had happened last time...i am scared to trust someone else...what if the same thing happens again?

Paddo: Madhu beta don't think negative...and no one is saying you to marry him tomorrow...they are only coming to see you...first you both get know each other...if you didn't like the boy you can say no...it's totally upto to you.

Madhu:(Madhu thinks that it's just only a meeting and says)Ok Ma..i will meet him.

Everyone get's happy...but Madhu she is neither happy nor sad.

Trishna suddenly remembers something and quickly switches on the T.V

Madhu: what happened didu?

Trishna: Madhu i completely forgot today IIFA awards were going to be telecasted...and i read in the newspaper that this time again RK won the award of BAM...i hope i havn't missed that.

Everyone finished their dinner and joined Trishna for watching IIFA awards.Madhu and Padmini were in kitchen and were busy cleaning the kitchen and after sometime they also joined them.

Madhu: Ma i am really tired and i have to get up early so i am going to bed...good night everyone.

Trishna: Are Madhu...RK is going to win the award just sit na.

Madhu: Didu he had already won it...and i have to get up early so i am going now.(she was about to leave and a suddenly a voice came from the T.V "and the award for the Best Actor Male goes to..(Madhu stopped and turned back and looked at the T.V...her heart again started beating fast...and she was completely staring at the T.V. screen)any guesses guys??...Yes people it's none other than everyone's favourite Rishabh Kundra...for Jahaan"

Trishna: OMG OMG...yes again...i wish he wins many more.

Madhu just looked at Trishna and smiled and then again started looking at the T.V. screen."Hey everyone..i think this award is in love with me...for the past 4 years it's with me and doesn't want to go in any one's else's hands...well this award deserves the best...and i am the best...so even i am not going let you go in any one's hand baby".

Trishna: What an attitude...he is indeed a superstar.

Madhu says to herself "How can someone be so self obssessed...he didn't even thank his parents because of whom he is standing here...anyway i should go to bed now...and she goes to her room and sits on her bed and suddenly she realizes that the same magazine is there on the side table which Trishna was reading the other day in which there is Picture of RK along with his interview.(and she started reading the magazine).

Madhu: Hahahaha...what?...Favourite dish...Aloo gobhi and that too a little bit burnt...no wonder his language is so harsh and bitter.(She finishes off reading his interview and she starts getting flashbacks of the moment when RK and she met..suddenly the door opens and she comes out of her trance and she sees Trishna coming inside and she quickly keeps the magazine on the side table.)

Trishna: Madhu?...You haven't slept yet...i thought you must have slept by now.

Madhu: Yes didu...i was about to sleep only(and she quickly changed the topic)...what happened didu...you came so early...is the episode over?

Trishna: Ahh no...Malik and Roma are still watching...even i was feeling sleepy so i came.

Madhu:Ok...Good Night didu.

Trishna: Good night Madhu(She said while Yawning).

Soon they went to sleep.

RK in his room.

After taking a shower he came and layed down on his bed...and he started getting flashbacks of what all happened on the sets today...and few minutes later he went to sleep



RK offers his hand to Madhu and she gives her hand...He pulls her close and they start dancing on the song "Dheere dheere se"

Madhu rolls and RK Pulls her back...she rolls again towards RK...and finally they give the "RK pose"...Suddenly RK leaves Madhu and she falls down.


Madhu and RK both wake up in surprise.There heart starts to pump faster and faster...and they realise that it was just a dream.

Madhu: Oh God!...What was that...nothing Madhu it was just a dream and it is only because you spent your whole day at the Studio(she tries to calm herself by saying that...and she drinks some water which was kept on her side table.)

RK: What the hell...how can anyone enter in my dreams...she is nothing but a make up artist...how can she come in my dreams??

Both try to calm themselves through different reasons...but somewhere their heart knows that it's something else.

What is it...is it just an infactuation...or something more than that...well we will get to know about that in the upcomming parts.

In the morning

Madhu arrives on the sets...and head towards Maya's Vanity...she knocks at the door.

Maya: Oh Madhu...it's you.

Madhu: Hello ma'am(Madhu sees another man who was doing Maya's make up...she gets confused).

Maya: Sorry darling...but i have hired a new makeup artist.

Madhu: (Madhu feels relieved as from now she can continue her job at her parlour) It's Ok ma'am it was nice working with you...I'll take your leave.

Madhu was about to leave when suddenly Maya said

Maya: Hey wait...i am not finished yet (Madhu could not understand what is she saying) i said that i have hired a new make up artist.but your job is not over yet...from today onwards you'll be working for R.K and not for me.

Madhu:(Madhu couldn't believe her ears...she got really shocked upon listening this) B..B..but ma'am i came here as your make up artist...how can i ??(Maya cuts off her in between)

Maya: You don't have to worry about that sweetheart...infact RK himself asked me to send you to him...so i am doing that...now go from here...and Good Luck(she winks at her while saying this)

Madhu get's down of the vanity...she is still in shock.

Madhu: What the hell...i thought i'll be free now...but this is such an unfair thing...i am dancing from here and there...first from parlour to The sets...and now from Maya to RK...(she suddenly jumps and says).Oh My God!...RK...like really??...Bappa why are you doing this to me...in the whole world you found only me to bear his tantrums...i have heard that he has an attitude problem and i hate that kind of people...i wonder how will i sustain here...please be with me bappa.

Madhu knocks the door of his vanity.

RK: Come in( Madhu gets in)

Madhu:(she clears her throat and says) Hello sir

RK: (his back was towards Madhu...he recognises her sound and says) Come Madhubala

Madhu gets surprised on seeing that how he could make out that the person standing behind him is she?

RK turn towards her and looks her with a smirk...he starts walking towards her

FLASH-BACK

RK: Maya

Maya: Yes RK?

RK:"I want something from you"

Maya:"sure honey...tell me what can i do for you" and she was about to put her arms around his neck but suddenly RK stopped her and pushed her hands away.

RK:"stop thinking nonsense babe...i want something else from you"

Maya: Oh come on RK...just tell me...i'll do anything you say

RK: Your makeup artist..

Maya: What...hahaha...is this what you want from me...well may i know why.?

RK: Your duty is to say yes or no...well well well...you can't even say no to me...if you do so...than i'll expose your relationship with Mr.Chopra to everyone (Mr.Chopra is the director of the same movie for which they are shooting)...so don't even dare to say no.

Maya: (in an angry tone) Fine RK...i'll do as you say but please don't do that.

RK: Good girl (He says in a husky voice)

And he leaves.
RK: So Miss.Malik...shall we start?

Madhu: Sir may i know that why my duty was exchanged...i mean i came here as Maya Mam's makeup artist...and suddenly now..

RK: Miss.Malik except my school teacher i have never alowed anyone in my entire life to raise a question in front of me...and today a make up artist is having so much guts to ask me these stupid questions.

Madhu: (gets angry but she has to control herself) Sorry sir but it's my right to know that why i have been appointed as your make up artist.

RK:(he smirks) You know what Miss.Malik girls are mad for me...they can fake their identity as a makeup artist just to be with me...and you had got this golden opportunity and you not seem to be happy...may i know why?

Madhu:(in a confident and strong voice)..Because i am not like those stupid girls who can do anything just only to get a glimse of an actor...now may i know the reason behind appointing my duty as your make up artist?

RK: Sorry sweetheart...this can't happen...now come on i have to get ready.(and turns around and head towards the mirror)

Madhu: In that case Mr.Rishabh Kundra i resign as your make up artist.

RK: (He suddenly stops by listening to that and shouts in anger) You can't Miss.Malik (He again turns towards her and says)..and if you resign than this will be your last resignation because after this you won't get job anywhere.

Madhu gets shocked and she has to listen him as she has no other choice.

The End of Part 4.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please guys let me know if you want me to continue?😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update!
So, Rishbala finally met n also feel an attraction towards each other.
D dream seemed like an indication towards d events of future...RK let Madhu fall! 😲 It seems to be symbolic of something awful!
Do update soon...
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey buddy, plz mention d update number n date of update, along wid d name of d story, so that d readers come to know of it, every time u give an update... 😊
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hey dear 1st of all thanks 2 giving back 2 back updates n all last 3 updates was awwwesomeee n curious about what happen next... sooo plsss dear continue this story dont stop n update soon as cant wait 4 next

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