The Princess and the Pauper (2) Ch 12, pg 123, new thread pg 1 **** - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago









TEASER


She stood outside the giant glass and steel building of Khurana constructions, her mouth wide open. This was not the small office from where Daadima used to work.

"Madam kisse milna hai" the kindly doorman asked her shaking her out of her stupor.

"Wo, Maan .. " she mumbled still staring at the multi storied structure with awe.

"Maan Sir se? Appointment hai?" the doorman asked making her look at him in shock.

Itni badi office hai Maan ki?

The distance from the front gate to the lobby itself was so far. Milne ke liye appointment bhi lena padta hai?

Na jaane duriyan kyu badhti ja rahi hai. This was definitely not the Maan of her childhood.

Romeo saved her from a reply by coming in behind her, "Chachaji hum naye employees hai. Maan Sir ne yaha aane ko kaha hai. Main Romeo Manchanda aur ye Geet Handa hai".

"Accha accha. Seedhe jaiye. Lift se second floor right pe Sasha madam ka office hai. Unse milna. Wo aap ko sab samjha degi", he said letting them in.

"Good morning Geet" Romeo said smiling at her but she was lost in thought.



***

He was doing sit ups on the floor with a smile.

The sight was unusual because it seemed like ages since he had smiled.

As he switched from sit ups to push ups a small weight came and settled on his back.

"Angel ..", Rosie aunty chided, " .. gir jaoge beta. Sa'ab exercise kar rahe hai".

She knew it was futile. The little girl was Maan Sir's shadow and followed him every minute he was home.

"Aap jaante hai na, wo nahi maanegi Rosie aunty. Ja ke breakfast ki taiyari kijiye, main usse le aata hu thodi der mein", Maan continued his push ups as Angel grabbed his hair with one hand and pushed his shoulder to play horsey.

"Not yet Angel, 45 huve hai, I have to do 50", he said, " .. aur aaj horsey tired hai".

She shook her head for no pulling his hair harder and giggling.

"Sach much, dekho", he said doing his daily tamasha with her.

He swayed his body from one side to the other pretending to fall, while she cluctched his hair and squealed with laughter.

"Ye gira, gira, gira", he said, making her tumble along with himself.

In her pure innocent laughter and her messy hair, he remembered the other Angel of his life.

As he lifted up Angel in his arms, he prayed that he would be seeing Geet's laugh like this everyday from now on.

A/N: So happy that you all are picking up your reading speed.

I want to finish this soon as I am going to India in Jan. Ghar mein shaadi hai aur boht kaam hai, so please read and comment fast. I don't want to leave this incomplete.

Do like and comment to keep interest going in writing.

Thanks to those that already do.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Teaser...


This teaser made me crave for more ... yaa. .. I am one of the slow reader for sure but I like this story more than beauty n dusts danav. I love it to see appreciation in geet eye... and angel is sure a treat for readers
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Posted: 9 years ago
Still need to read n comment part 10
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm glad Pandeyji got his due! Maan found Geet hearing her grumbling to Babaji! He wants to help her and that is exactly what she wants to avoid. She is trying hard to be independent and not depend on anyone.
Romeo is so sweet, he came to warn Geet and is ready to take the taunts by going last. Geet and Romeo shift to KC. How did Geet agree to go with Maan in the car?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update 👍🏼
Maan entered IP only to meet geet n her ask a second chance
Maan understood the company was in bad condition bcoz of pandey
Maaneet moments nice 😊
Romeo came to call geet... Maan came to know about pandey troubling geet... Pandeyji gaya
Romeo n geet will work in KC... Wah kya plan banaya maan ne geet ko apne paas rakhne keliye 😎
Teaser 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 10

Nice update...

Maan thought that geet is hiding herself while entering into his new office...uff he doesnt know that it was all pandeyji's plan...

Maan warning pandeyji for not managing the office properly and the way he said GET OUT to him was simply superb...

Waiting to know how maaneet will work together in maan's office...

continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Teaser
It was awesome.
Gosh!! Geet's appreciation over Maan's acheivements are completely clouded over the impregnable distances that have risen between the two. Wherever her gaze reaches, she is struck by the same thought, will they ever be able to traverse these distances. Maan has created an empire out of Dadi's small office rendering himself a prince from the pauper, seeking his salvation from from her (father's) bitter words, his then perceived truth.

And again it breaks my heart for Geet (call me biased that way), the princess she was, never cared for these supposed "distances" when he was the pauper. And now when he is the prince, her perception has been marred by the realities of life, that all she can see is those "distances" .

Maan-Angel scene was cute. Geet ka Maan bhi kuch aisa hi tha na, jo uski har choti-badi khwahish puri karta tha, sirf pyaar karna jaanta tha.. His little wish was sweet.

Please make it a slow torture for Maan when Geet works at KC, with Romeo around, him craving for her attention.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for the pm...
nice update...
maan help geet and pandit ji deserves right...
now geet in maan's office...
waiting to see their more scenes...
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
just read part 7... as always it was amazing... u had potrayed the Diwali sequence so well that I felt that I was reliving the actual sequence only with slight changes...

I am kind of happy with Maan's punishment as he really took Geet for granted... but at the same tym I agree with Maan's statement too... its only him who can bring him back to her normal self

I hate that Pandey ji... bloody male chauvinist... no matter how much one hate women but no one absolutely no one had this right to raise his hand on a woman... I wish he get his rightful punishment soon...

All in all a great update nd now m dyieng to read further updates... love you

nd sorry my comments are bit small compared to other times as my health is very much down... pls excuse me for this...
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely teaser ...
update soon
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