Bubblegum | Madhavan and Koyal One Shot - Page 4

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

it was nice shot...but the leads are unknown to me

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

koel seduced maddy who was engrossed in his work.they romanced.it was beautiful.but the twist was that he put her on the ground n realized that he had taken off the bubblegum from her mouth during the kiss.ha ha.too sweet

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raddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Please write on taarey
Amazing Os thanks for PM

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Sweety012345

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Posted: 10 years ago

Please post the Arshi version as well

And please update one last time soon

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

I read this a couple days ago, but i didn't get to comment; (i barely ever comment on written work unless i really like it hehe😛)

That was a rather interesting take; i still cant see Maddy or Koyal ever like this LOL, but you write really good; easy to follow!

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