Bubblegum | Madhavan and Koyal One Shot - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
This is second time I am reading something other than ARSHI...but I loved it.  It was witty and hot...I have never seen this serial but I loved it. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Wow...I just loved this OS!
Very nicely penned down :)
Superb!
Especially the ending...the jerk stole her bubblegum 😆
Keep writing like this!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Awsome !👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it.
Though it was maddy and koyal bt I can only imagine arshi

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
it was nice shot...but the leads are unknown to me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
koel seduced maddy who was engrossed in his work.they romanced.it was beautiful.but the twist was that he put her on the ground n realized that he had taken off the bubblegum from her mouth during the kiss.ha ha.too sweet Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Please write on taarey
Amazing Os thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Please post the Arshi version as well
And please update one last time soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
I read this a couple days ago, but i didn't get to comment; (i barely ever comment on written work unless i really like it hehe😛)
That was a rather interesting take; i still cant see Maddy or Koyal ever like this LOL, but you write really good; easy to follow!