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The unres will be a little late though
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Well I told you I would be late. Still sorry for the delay 😊
This story was a complete package! There was love, hatred, MU, wooing, past present aurr badla, step sister, villain, maara maari, romance... 😃 Ek dum full on story 👏
Now there was enough suspense in the story to keep me on edge. There was a present in which we had Arnav and Khushi coming to terms with their feelings for each other and trying to move on from their shared past. There was a past where I would read moony eyed about how they fell in love and read with apprehension of how they fell apart. But this isnt it. You so cleverly introduced another past with toddler ArHi and made their bond all the more strong and lovely ⭐️
PS: Twice in the story you have mentioned Garima instead of Padmini.
PPS: Are there other completed stories of yours which I should know of?
The unres will be a little late though
Edited:
Well I told you I would be late. Still sorry for the delay 😊
This story was a complete package! There was love, hatred, MU, wooing, past present aurr badla, step sister, villain, maara maari, romance... 😃 Ek dum full on story 👏
Now there was enough suspense in the story to keep me on edge. There was a present in which we had Arnav and Khushi coming to terms with their feelings for each other and trying to move on from their shared past. There was a past where I would read moony eyed about how they fell in love and read with apprehension of how they fell apart. But this isnt it. You so cleverly introduced another past with toddler ArHi and made their bond all the more strong and lovely ⭐️
PS: Twice in the story you have mentioned Garima instead of Padmini.
PPS: Are there other completed stories of yours which I should know of?
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