~~DO$TANA~~ (Swasan&Ragya)- part 4 updated pg 6....

Hellos everyone...Not new at all to this forum but a regular silent member...Basically this is my second story but first one i left incomplete...My this story is completely different from actual SR story but Jodis are same...SWASAN AND RAGYA...yes my story is all abiut SWASAN and RAGYA...Since i dont want this ragini amd laksh to unite im show but i love teju alot so this story will make RAGYA as couple...I am a Swalak fan but Love VK aka sanskar alot...So this story will be completely my other side of imagination...Just wanted to know Others opinion whether anyone interested or not in this story...Then only I will continue... THANK YOU...

Character Sketch...


Sanskar Maheshwari- A well mannered family man...A person with heart full of Love And Respect...He is very punctual regarding his work...Loves his family alot...Respect his uncle Durga prasad maheshwari amd never denies his order...His two weakness- mom Sujata amd BFF Ragini Gadodia...He can do anything For Ragini...




Swara Bose/Gadodia-The BAD girl of society...Her moto of life"I me and myself the best"...The spoilt daughter of Sharmishtha...She dont know to follow rules and love breaking it...A cool singer of college and teach the street children of her society...Her weakness is her mother dida and BFF Laksh Maheshwari...The only man in whom Swara listen and Love to be with...




Laksh Maheshwari-A boy who was found by Swara's Dida on footpath crying when he was 5 year old...Since then hebis leaving with Swara dida and Sharmishtha...A complete ill-mannered man and partner in crime of Swara-his only weakness and BFF...Always save Swara and take blame on himself...Dida's wekness and Sharmishtha's strength... The head boy of college's Bad Company...



Ragini Gadodia- A typical cultured Indian Girl...The sanskari beti of shekhar Gadodia...And ladli of Durga prasad...Shy innocent and studious for world...But comolete child for sanskar- weakness of ragini and BFF...Love to spend time with him...Shares everything with him...Hated by Sujata...Always obey the order of family...Her only dream of life is to be the best singer of India...



The Maheshwaris And Gadodias- bussiness partners...Durga Prasad And Shekhar did their higher studies in same college...Tye6 are very consious about their social status...Hates indicipline...

Bose- The new competitor in bussiness to Maheshwaris and Gadodias... The boss Sharmishtha wants to destroy the Gadodia...In full mood of revenge...


Swara & Laksh- sanskar & ragini- The BFF amd unware of the rest two...


Laksh & Sanskar- Unaware that both are sibblings...The enemies...Typical enemies...


Swara & Ragini- Unaware of being sisters...The north amd south pole...Always ready for musical competition...

Hey interesting concept of ur story

quite interesting...
update soon and pm me

quite interestng

Pls update soon
Cant wait 😳

Loved the character skecht
Pls update faste the part 1 😊

interesting

PART-1 Early morning in Kolkata... BG Voice- Kolkata ki baat hi alag h...yaha har subah log apni din ki meethi shuruat krne k liye durga maa ki puja krte h...Per aj ki subah 3 parivaaro ke liye aam din jaisa ni h...Chaliye dekhte h ki kya khaas h aj ki subah me... Scene- The Maheshwari Mansion... Annapurna(Badi maa of Sanskar) is doing aarti...Every family member is present there...After completing aarti Annapurna come towards Durga Prasad( uncle of sanskar and most successful and reputed bussiness man of kolkata...Despite of being a Marwadi he well settled himself in kolkata)... Durga prasad- Annapurna tum to janti ho ki aj ka din hmari company ke liye kitna khaas aur zaruri h...Apne bhagwan se kehna ki tmhare pati ki izzat ko barkarar rakhe... Annapurna- Ap fikar mt kijiye...Hmesa ki tarah aj v ye deal apko aur shekhar ji ko hi milegi...Bhagwan meri jldi sunte nhi (tears flows out from her eyes)... Durga prasad- Fir v tm inki hmesa puja krti ho na...bas ho gya...isse zyada hume aur kuch ni sunna aur behtar yhi hoga ki ab hm iss baare me aage koi baat na kare... Durga prasad left towards dining table...Annapurna sad...Entry of Sujata( mother of sanskar) Sujata- Jiji manne apse kitni baar kaha h je bhai sab ke samne purani baato ka zikr na kre.. per ap to maari kuch na sune h...aj ke din bhaisab ka muh mitha aapko hi karna h... Annapurna- Tum v to ek maa ho Sujata...Tum to mera dard samjhti ho...fir v aese bol rhi... Sujata- jiji bhaisab ke samne ache ache dard ghutne tek dewe h...fir maare kuch kehne na kehne se aapko fark na parna chahiye... Annapurna-Sanskar kaha h??? Sujata-jiji maare chore ke bare me to maare se kucho na pucho...u chokra kab jata h kathe jata h kab aata h maare ko to bhanak na lage h... Annapurna- acha thk h thk h...chalo sbka khana lgate h... Durga prasad- Sanskar kaha h??? A Voice coming from outside- kv to apne bete ko aaram de diya kar duggu...kitna kaam krwaega usse... Everyone turns towards main door Its none other than shekhar Gadodia( bussiness partner of Durga Prasad and His childhood Friend) Durga prasad- Samjh gya main...Tumne hi Sanskar ko kahin bheja hoga... Shekhar-Ha yarr maine use Ragini ko recieve krne ke liye bheja h...Aj Ragini Apne Dada Dadi le sth kolkata waps aa rhi...aur tu to janta h Sanskar jaega use lene to zyada sahi rhega... Durga Prasad-Ha ye baat to tmne sahi bola...Ragini Aur sanskar agr sth h to hme darne ka fikr karne ki zrurt h hi ni... Sujata- ye dono ram lakhan to maare eklaute rajkumar ko suli pe chadhane k liye hmesa khade rhte h...Ka zrurt thi uss Ragini ko lane k liye maare chore ko bhejne k liye..?? Annapurna- bas karo sujata... Sujata- Na jiji...iss ladki ka naam sun ke maara khoon khaul jata h...per isme inki v kaa galti h...shekhar bhaisa ne ek baar pucha hoga aur maara chora dus baar kood kood ke bola hoga ha chala jaunga...Hey bhagwaan maare ke utha le... Je ladka maari to zara v ni sunta... Durga prasad- kuch pta chala ki aj kon si rival company hume takkar dene kolkata me aayi h?? Shekhar- Nhi...iss company ki ek v information av tk pta ni chali bs itna janta hun ki iss company ki boss ek Lady h... Durga Prasad- Ek aurat jo kolkata me nayi h wo Maheshwaris and Gadodias ko harane le sapne dekh rhi h?? Chalo aj ek aurat ka gooroor todd hi dete h... Shekhar- Ab pta chalega ki kolkata me M&G ki barabari koi ni kar sakta h... Precap- Entry of Sharmishtha Boss...and entry Of Sanskar Swara Lakshya and Ragini... Hope everyone will like it...

very interesting carry on..