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Posted: 9 years ago
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This a lil gift for my dear readers...well u can say my way of saying sorry for disappearing n thank you for holding onto me n my story...love u uys to the moon n back.

p.s. little bride teaser in a couple of hours...n by morning 10 next part of this story
Plot: nandini murthy turns 21 this year. From a background of a dysfunctional family she might be your angel n demon at the same time. With a tiny winy guilt at the deepest corner of her heart she is happier than ever. But a sudden phone call information turned her life upside down.

Kaise kahoon ishq mein tere kitna hoon betaab main

Aankhon se aankhein milake chura loon tere khwab main

Dancing away to the tune she felt happy n carefree more than ever. Yet a nagging feeling tugged at the corner of her heart...like some bad is on its way. The lyrics felt oddly familiar almost as if said to her, she chuckled at the thought...too much of bollywoodness. Navya tugged her arm out off the disco. "What happened?", she asked a bit nervous. "you go back home lets talk in the morning...dont stay here today"

"r u mad..its my bday" she said as a matter of fact. "he called..." the sentence was left incomplete as mukti n alya came "look the bday girl is running away...chal na kya baat kar rahi hai" "navya baad mein baat karti hoon..aaja" said nandu.

tere saaye hain saath mein

yaara jis jagah tum hooo...

He came out of the shadows. Ha have been here just for a glimpse of the young lady. She looked beautiful today. 4 years passed since he saw her this close. N now that he is back, he would snatch away all that is his. No one not even she can stop it. 4 long years since a lil 17 yr old broke his heart brutally.

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Nandini along with her 3 besties were hanging out in the beach.'yaar can u now say y we r here" alya said, "i don't like my home..they r fighting" she answered alya's query. Wordlessly the 3 hugged her tight. Then changing the topic navya asked..."btw whom were u talking to that day?", "who?" she tried to act innocent, "don't try to act innocent, who was that with a bike that day?" mukti retaliated. Her mischevious smile said it all..not again they groaned. "aare i dint do anything he only proposed me" she smirked...''dont play with feelings nandu'' navya scolded her. 'im not'' she answered back..."im not that type...dont u know i never had a bf" "thats because u never let them pass the basic...ghumake chod deti hai..kiss bhi nahi ki ab tak" mukti answered.

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2 months later..."nandini i love u" proposed the geeky masters student manic malhotra, just at the junction of her school n his uni. A shocked nandini stood not knowing what to answer. She never thought she'll have to be cruel with manic too. Her friends stood around the corner giggling. She felt a tiny pain but brushed it off knowing there is no love..had there been love her parents would have been this.

"im sorry manic i don't feel the same"

But the other day...

She rejected him...

He was ridiculed...

Everyone laughed at him...at the confines of his room he broke down.

He tried to speak to her...

She refused.

He persuaded...her father's men beat him to unconsciousness.

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The past still hurts.

Now he wants her to cry all his life but infront of him. He might just claim his hate for her...yet he knows he still loves her

Main jo jee raha hoon

Wajah tum hooo...

"cabir..everything ready for tomorrow?" he enquired..."manic plz think once again...she was a kid manic, heck she is a kid now too just 21...dont do this" he tried to make manic understand. He ignore it all n started planning to keep her hidden.

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soothu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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soothu first😳😳...manik intentions>>> iam afraid
Edited by soothu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow continue look quiet interesting looking forward to read more .the tourcherous manik malhotra and beautiful.nandini who has captured his heart but broke it in innocence. Oh so want to read it.pls update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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as usual very much interesting
plss update little ride too

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc ...
happy that u r back
now update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyyaa aditi...

Awesome start...

Wat manik is planning...

Waiting for revenge...

Would read ur other one too...

Congrats for new story...


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Cont soon...
😊

STAY BLESSED
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the pm, looking forward the read :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start can't wait for the next update
Thanks For the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!!!
Really looking forward for the updates
Tqvm for the pm dear

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