I can admire the beauty ,I see through her.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi,guys I was completely mesmerized by today's precap which made me right an instant poem on Vidha ,this made in a rush ,so hence bare it and do post ur opinion about it.

I CAN ADMIRE THE BEAUTY ,I SEE THROUGH HER.
WOW !Cool breeze are u a cupid?
U can even make my mind a love's obedient stupid,
The one who is sleeping is the beauty,
Whom even God's of the mighty nations will tempt to adore,
While I am only a normal humanbeing born out of a womb ,won't I adore?
Life can be magnificient,life can be splendid,
But when I see her ,I become insane just like a stupid,
I can derive the actual fact that she is so mighty,
And that one look of her's make me so much cosy,
If I get a chance to stare at the heavenly beauty for days,
I will do it but u made cosy shivering on her to mesmerize my effective look on her which will be extensive beyond days,
Wow what an awesome eyes that personifies beauty she has,
Let me rest her itself to facilitate the ardent cuteness of this damsel's beauty which she has,
God !o God !pls make me a statue this moment,
So that I can make a carpe deim for my angel this moment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow its so heart warming...😳😳😳
love u fr this...😳😳
di jst start publishing these i mean it really...😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's brautiful jenni totally mesmerising.
Honestly only a beautiful soul can find her so pretty. No offence but seriously I hate it when she calls him rakshas
Truly beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WoW! It's so beautiful.Loved reading. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Romantic poem yaar Jenni I loved the precap u have perfectly described the scene dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abshcool

wow its so heart warming...😳😳😳

love u fr this...😳😳
di jst start publishing these i mean it really...😳😳😳

Wow ur comments are always as cute as u my dear
I am so glad u liked it baby🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow ur comments are always as cute as u my dear
I am so glad u liked it baby🤗


🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. What an amazing poem Jenni.

When I saw the caps of precap I thought Dhani can't look pretier. But after reading your poem I saw her more and more peautiful. You described her anglic beauty and its effect on Viplav so wonderfully ..I had goosebumps reading your poem. Soo romantic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

It's brautiful jenni totally mesmerising.
Honestly only a beautiful soul can find her so pretty. No offence but seriously I hate it when she calls him rakshas
Truly beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder

Icompletely agree with u Rosey only a beautiful soul can popularise beauty ur right and beauty lies only in the eyes of beholder and one thing I said she looked like an angel but even he was looking like an angel to my shona was just mesmerizingin that brown t-shirt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 345678

WoW! It's so beautiful.Loved reading. 😊

thanks a lot 😃

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