Dark FF: Complications In Love/ Teaser UPD 23/11 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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waiting for the next chaptr😲😎😈
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Originally posted by: nikii11


asad is dangerous character then

so will he kill someone in the process😲

arre i have nt designed the plot to that extent re everything is at primary stage now!
May be may not be😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looks interesting :) eager to know how will the plot develop!😆 thanks for the pm😊

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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Are oye! Wify kidhar he tu?

mei toh yahi hu... Mere pati ko meri yaad aari???
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Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

mei toh yahi hu... Mere pati ko meri yaad aari???

yesh
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interesting characters dear...barun is kabir , that was awesome...
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toh karo yaad...
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PLEASE DON'T PLAGIARIZE GUYS IT REALLY HURTS!









❤️Teaser 1❤️

The streets of Mumbai seemed to be havoc that day when the winds were threatening for another storm bigger than the one the city had faced the previous night!
"Allah Miya What's wrong with this f*cking car?!", Zoya banged the staring wheel in extreme anger but the things were not that worse when she realized that the car had stopped just in front of a shopping mall which had an inbuilt multiplex and the thing that caught her attraction was the poster of 'Prem Ratan Dhan Payo!'
How could she leave the chance of watching it tenth time?!

***
--Interval--

She went out to grab the popcorn as the movie was getting interesting and she was jumping with excitement

But something was at miss!
She could hear something!
What?
A sob!
A cry!
Terrified voice from behind a poster

She approached to see who was there!
A small girl approx. about 6-7 year old weeping, crying the skin around her neck tightened due to lack of oxygen. Zoya immediately understood she wasn't able to breathe! In a reflex she went near the girl and hugged her from side, no sooner did she do so the girl cuddled her feeling heaven in her warm embrace with tears seeping down her chubby milky white cheeks!

"Angel... Angel!!", she whispered brokenly with sobs escaping her mouth, thus Zoya couldn't understand what she was saying!

"SANJEEDA!", a womanly voice screamed
"HEYYA HELLOWW!" , Zoya called out to get her attraction
"Sanju!!..", the woman rushed and hugged the kid, "Thankyou!", she said to Zoya kissing on the kid's photo
"It's okay!... Take care of her!", Zoya said

As Zoya hugged Sanjeeda, Sanjeeda hugged her back smiling while Shabana was shocked to see her smiling...
YES SANJEEDA WAS SMILING COURTESY A STRANGER!
But hold on is this girl really a stranger?
Why does she feel she has seen Zoya somewhere?
But where?

Shabana's thoughts broked as Kabir came there running!
"Sanju!!", he hugged the girl tight

Zoya immediately recognized the voice as her heart thudded faster and faster... she turned to see the guy b-but his back was turned towards her, thus she wasn't able to see his face!

"Angel...Angel!", Sanjeeda kept chanting like a mantra making Kabir turn in the direction she was looking at but all he could see a girl's disappearing figure in blue jeans and yellow t-shirt!

"She is the one who helped Sanju when she was going through a panic attack!"

"Zoya!?", his mouth involuntarily escaped the name in whisper making him numb at knees for a second

"Did you something?"

"Errr... actually you should have stopped her.. I would have loved to talk to her personally!"

"Hmm she didn't wait! Let it be!", Shabana answered and Kabir nodded as its okay!

**

"Zoya you here?", Najma caught Zoya's hand from behind startling her

"Najma?"

"Yes.. but I will catch you later I am in a hurry... Bhaijaan doesn't know I am here!"

Zoya let out a sigh and left

"Mr. Khan's car!", Zoya said looking at the new electronic black BMW that only the finest rich people could afford!

He must have came to drop Najma!

But Najma did say she didn't tell Asad anything!

So what was he doing here?

Whom is he following



Najma

or

Zoya?



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You guys must know I love kit-kat chocolate! Today I went to my bench and there were three kit-kats wo bhi aise hi padi thi... To meine kya kiya? meine usse kha liya😆 and when I told my friend she said there may be some secret admirer of yours.. and I ws like Secret admirer😲 hahaha stop joking babes😛😆 aur ekk baat hui thi wo agli baar bata doongi!😳
Anyways I have decided to give you guys two teasers so you guys get an idea about this fic! Negativity and darkness koot kootke bhari hai meine isme!😆
Well lemme tell you guys this one will have some 40-50 parts and an epilogue(maybe).. I may even shift it too my blog if I feel to do so in any time near future also lemme tell you this may be my last fic here ever as I am planning to take a break from IF or may be even quit IF asI feel I am getting way too addicted and attached here on emotional par too!

anyways hope you enjoyed this part<3

**Toffees and pastries**

-Fleurdelice-




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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing teaser loved it can't wait for the update thank you for pm.

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