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Hi vicky update was just awesome full of chocklates ha full of manan ha and in scene u written collage instead of school iam menting because readers must be confuse so next time check edting and pls pm also
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Originally posted by: rajirock123

Hi vicky update was just awesome full of chocklates ha full of manan ha and in scene u written collage instead of school iam menting because readers must be confuse so next time check edting and pls pm also



hey thanku yar
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Part 2


Present Track


Story Ab Aak:


Druv is Friend with Harshad but now he is not trust him anymore, and Druv and Harshad both got Admission in SPACE


Manik and Nandini is in a relationship from 7th 8th Class. And Manik also Join SPACE this year & Nandini is in 12th class and join SPACE in Next Year

Ab AAGE:


Druvs Home:


Druv is done with his packing and all is waiting for his MAMA JI to come there.


Note- Druv is from Village, and his Parents are very Emotional and they are Afraid to send their son so far from them so his MAMA is going to Drop him to his collage in SPACE.


All the family and Druv is standing with luggage at door waiting for druvs MAMA ji, His MAMA ji is got in Traffic.


Suddenly druv said here is mama ji, look their he is coming


Then he mama is arrived they put all the luggage in auto and leaves for Bus stand, All family member are got very emotional and his mummy is start to crying then his father said don't cry he will come each month to meet us and they all watch druv going with his mama and when why went so far that didn't saw from Door they all go inside the house.


Note- Sorry in Village No Train


Druv and his mama reach Bus stand and they took tickets of Bus for SPACE academy and sit inside the bus


His mama got watch bottle and some chips and biscuit fro journey and after some time the bus start and they leave for SPACE academy


From this Druvs new Life Start. And he didn't know about it.


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Maniks Home:


Manik's Family is all ready for Manik to leaves for SPACE but Manik is nowhere to be seen.


Actually manik went for good bye to his friends or we can say good bye to his Girlfriend his nandu


Manik- Nandu, its time, now I have to leave otherwise I will miss my Train.


Nandu- Hmm and hold his hand tightly


Manik- he notice that she didn't leave him and holding tightly he said Nandu look in my Eyes


Nandini- node his head in no and didn't look towards him and didn't lose her hold on his hand.


Manik- baby if u will hold me like this than I will not go , I will join here also and live with you. I to already said u that I will not go anywhere leave you but u only make me yes to go SPACE and now u will not let me go.


Nandini- by hearing this Nandu suddenly leaves his hand and looks back wards


Manik- he saw that she didn't looking towards him so he said


Manik- nandu


She didn't answer


Manik- NANDINI


Nandini- Hmmd


Manik- NANDINI LOOKS TOWARDS ME OTHERWISE I WILL..


He didn't complete his sentence and nandini turn towards him but looking downwards


Manik Goes Near her and put his index finger on her chin and make her look in his eyes.


He saw tears are forming in her eyes


He doesn't said anything and take her in a born crashing hug.


He knows they both want this.


After 5 min


Manik said still hugging


Manik- nandu


Nandini- hmm


Manik- Nandu take your promise back, I wanna leave with u, I don't wanna go their without you, when next year you passed 12th, we both go their together.


Nandini break the hug and wipes her tears which she stopping from very long time.


Nandini- no manik, you should go, I am coming na in next year. They we will again together and we will talk on phone na so u will not feel their alone, I will always there with you in your heart and place her small hand on his heart


By hear such words manik feel so good, from very long time he also stopping his tears and make himself strong but after hear her love they come out.


Nandini saw them, but she know he is not strong but trying to be strong in front of her so to cheer him up she said


Nandini- ohh THE MANIK MALHOTRA IS CRYING FIRST TIME.


By hear manik understand that she is trying to make him feel happy and smile


He passed her a cheerful smile


Suddenly manik phone ring


He saw that his mother is calling him.


He pick up it


Manik- yeah mom, I am coming in 1 hour.


Mom- 1hour, manik your train in half an hour and u said u are coming in 1 hour


Manik- manik holds nandus hand and saw time on her watch and said


Manik- ohh shit nandu


Mom- NANDU


Manik - realized that he is still on the phone


He said


Manik- not nandu , I said ohh shit not good.


Mom- MANIKKK


Manik- MOM


Then looks towards nandu and pass a smile


Mom- manik I thought u went to meet your friend but you..


Manik- he didn't complete her sentence and cut her in middle and said


Manik- yeah mom I am coming and cut the call.


He looks towards nandini who is standing clueless what manik is talking


Manik- What??


Nandini- What?


Manik- Nothing.


Nandini- Manik


Manik- wo mom called me to tell me that my train is in Half an hour and I am spending time with my GIRLFIREND.


Nandini- What? and her eyes come out due to shock that maniks mom knows about them


Manik- start laughing to see her shocked face


Nandini- manik tell me truth na in a serious face and verge of cry. She is afraid that what will his mom think about them


Manik saw tears in her eyes he controls his laugh and holds her hand and said


Manik- relaxes nandu, mom knows that we are best friend and u r a girl, but she don't know that u r already my GIRLFRIEND. But she had doubt on me for that.


Nandini- she got scared and looks horrified to think that when her family knows about them then what will be their reaction


Manik saw that and ask


Manik- what happen nandu


Nandini- manik what if over families comes to know about us, did they separate us?


Manik - he also feel hurt when he hear her and take her in hug again and said


Manik- no nandu, nothing will happen, u relax, I am here na, I will handle everything , u trust me na,


Nandini- yes I will trust u


Manik- than trust me I am always there with u


Nandini - HAMESHA


MANIK- HAMESHA.


Then manik put herhand on her chin for last kiss before his next journey.


At that time nandini saw his watch and saw time, onllt 20 min laft in his train.


Nandini jerks his hand


Manik got shocked by her sudden act and said


Manik- NANDINI, in angry tone.


Nandini- Manik looks towards time, only 20 min left , u have to go


Manik- no first I want kiss


Nandini- no manik u leave otherwise u will miss your train; I will give u kiss on phone in night.


Manik- no I want it now face to face, in the reason of sending me away from you


Nandini- she also want to kiss him so she didn't deny and looks downwards


Manik goes near and by his hand raise her face and saw she already closed her eyes and ready for kiss


Manik- he amazed by her this act , he kiss her for head , then her both eyes and her knows, and then he kiss her on lips,


Both are kissing each other but due to time shortage nandini break the kiss


Manik- what is this nandini? I know u also want to kiss me then y u break it?


Nandini- manik u r getting late


Manik- no I m not going anywhere until I didn't get a proper kiss.


Nandini- manik when u will come from space to meet me I will give to 10 kisses for the return of this, so u wants this 1 or 10.


Manik got happy and said


Manik- I want 10 so I will go now and come from their today itself then I will get 10 kisses and shouts huuuree


Nandini- what?? Shocked


Manik- what what? I am coming miss morty in evening so u wait and prepare for our special night with your 10 kisses


Nandini- no manik u r not coming home today, u will come on after 1 month than only I will give you 10 kisses, if u will come today I will not talk to again.


Manik- what?? U r not serious


Nandini- yes I am serious and smirks


Manik - he made a said face and after thinking something he said


Manik- I didn't want 10 kisses I only want 1 , ant that now itself.


Nandini- what?? Shocked


Manik- what?? I said I want 1 proper kiss now itself, I didn't want your 10 kisses after 1 months


And after 1month I will surely take more 10 kisses by my method he wissper himself


Nandini- she hears him and said


Nandini - what? Now u didn't get anyone , u will leave now?


Manik- not fare nandu


Nandini- everything is fare in love and war


Manik- okay and suddenly he said


Manik- ohh my god who is here


And looks in back side od nandu


Nandini also turns


Suddenly manik kissed her chick


Nandini notice that this is manik act to make her fool, she is shocked


When she looks towards manik he already leaves from there looking towards her


Manik for far


Manik- nandini wait for me till 1 month, I will come for my 10 dues and reward also.


Nandini blushed and looks down.


Manik- nandini


Nandini looks towards him


Manik- I love you nandu


Nandini- I love u too.


Then manik turns to leaves


Nandini- manikk


Manik- yes


Nandini- come soon


Manik- he saw that she is crying


Manik come running to her and hugs her tightly and said


After 1th moms bday is there so I will defiantly come and I promise that


If u want I will daily come and go for u, u want it


He said last line to make her cheer up


Nandini node her head in no


Manik- okay then looks in my eyes


Nandini looks towards his eyes,


He wipes her tears and kiss her forehead


And said


Manik- nandu


Nandini- hmmm


Manik- I have to leave, only 10 min left


Nandini- she listen this and shout


Nandini- manik go fast otherwise u will be late


Manik- relax nandu, if I miss my train I will go by next na


Nandini- no manik u will go by it


So now u go


Manik- okay


And they they hug for last time to say bye to each other and leaves for

their respective homes


Nandini reach home and got ready for her school and after breakfast leaves for her school remembering about manik how he daily meet near her house on read to pick her up and then both goes together.


Then she saw cab come and stops near her.


A driver come out and said


Driver- maam plz sit inside, manik baba brought this car yesterday and said me to pick and drop u anywhere u want to go.


Nandini- she got shocked and happy also and didn't said anything and sits inside the car


She wants to call him and shouts on him and also thanx him but in school phones are not allowed so after make her decision that talk him in evening she leaves for school.


Manik also reach home.


His parents got angry with his this behavior but then manik know how to make them happy and after talking they all leaves for railway station


Then manik saw that his father already does their reservation in ac coach,


They all set and leaves for space.


Note- manik is a city boy so his all family comes to drop him only his big bro not come because he is not home and in foreign for MS


After 5 hours

SPACE ACADAMY


Collage Gate


One boy saw that a big tall handsome boy is trying to pick up his luggage but can't make it because there are a lot of things to pick up


He only has one luggage in which some books and cloths are there and his mama is picking it.


He goes near that boy and said


1st boy- hey can I help u, I am free, and my luggage is with my MAMA.


2nd boy- hey thanku very much, but my family with myself they are coming look their they are paying this autorixa


I will manage, u don't worry, I to trying that how much weight it have and laugh


1st boy looks on that side and saw that his all family comes to drop him, and his only MAMA come, not even father come to drop him.


2nd boy- btw I am MANIK MALHOTRA


1st boy- DRUV VEDANT


Then maniks parents comes and manik introduce druv to his family


Manik- mama papa he is druv he is also in my batch


Druv she is my mom and he is my father


Druv touch their feet and said Namaste


Maniks parents feel happy.


Then manik mom said


MM- druv beta where is your family? They also come here na to drop u here


Druv- no aunty, actually my parents didn't want to send me so far from them so they got emotional when I am leaving so my MAMA(my mother's brother) come to drop u.


Then druvs mama said


Mama- come druv your no for registration for hostel is come.


Then druv byes to them and goes to his mama


Maniks mom- how sweet boy is he, his family really loves him so they didn't want to send him so far and got emotional


Manik- its okay mom, I will come each month to meet u


Manik mom- yeah I know, if u will not come then we will come here to meet you


Manik- ok mom


Suddenly a voice come from hostel room


Office- MANIK MALHOTRA please comes here for registration


And then manik family goes in office for hostel registration.

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Edited by vickysinghalwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc update


tnx for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res.I am a bit busy bhaiya!Will comment soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb fantastic update

Manik madly in love with Nandu and cant live without her yet he went away for her only

Dhruv and manik now become friends

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanku😊
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Originally posted by: nawJAHAN

nyc update


tnx for d pm



thank u😊
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wow SHAANDAAR👏
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