ISRA : love that gives both Feel and Pain updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii friends i am here to write a new story based on present track
shall i continue r not based on ur response i will decide???
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HI friends iam here to update the story
before reading its my first story if i write any mistakes iam sorry
and in my story no surrogate process is there
coming to the story in this story total rinki death mistrary is revealed and all family members r coming out of the pain slowly due to each support
raman and ishitha are strong and to support the family members
the gap between the raman and ishitha are not reduced they didn't try to slove the issues between them
Note: Raman as R, Ishitha as Ish
Ruhi as R, Adi ad adi
mr bhalla as mr, mrs bhalla as mrs
appa as ap, amma as am
mihir as m, mihika as mi
shagun as sh, simmi as si
the scene starts with manoj informed to R to come to hospital to discuss the surragote process.
R informed to Ish that he is going to office for important work
Ish simply said k.
while Ish is cleaning the room
vandhu hii Ish wht r doing
Ish hii akka nothing just clening the room
vandu ish if u r free can u accompy me to the hospital
Ish what akka is there any problem
vandhu nothing ra just causal check up after the delivery
Ish k akka when will we leave for hospital
vandhu if don't have any work shall we leave now only because after that kids will come from school
Ish k akka go and get ready i will be in 10min
vandu k ish i will inform to amma and meet u in the parking area
Ish ok akka
Ish informed the matter to mrs and si and leave to hospital with vandu
acutally Ish and vandu came to same hospital where R ans Sh is there. but either of them see each other.
vandu Ish i want to go for check up u will here only ra
Ish no problem akka u go for check up i will be here only
when vandu went for check up Ish is sitting outside suddenly Ish saw R and Sh with manoj
R and manoj are discussing they didn't saw Ish and went to the cabin
Ish thinks R informed me that he has a important meeting but what he is doing in hospital that to with Sh and manoj i want to find out with that she went to the cabin of manoj
Inside the cabin
manoj R i already informed u the process and Sh be the surrogate mother ur child. if u r ready with that i can start the proceduer
R i am k with it i want a child i don't know what iam doing but iam doing this for Ish happiness.
manoj have u signed the documents from Ish
R haa the document contains both signs here is the file check it
manoj k u both will talk i will just come back
R k
R to Sh give the folwers and wish that the process will get sucessfull and she want to be pregnant
Sh got shocked and asked R still now u remembered my favirote flowers. last time u gave these to when iam pregant with adi
R how can i forget that one.
They both r talking they didn't saw Ish watching and listing all the talks,
But she don't know how to react. R broke the trust of her
and with out informing her he went to surrogate process that to Sh as a surrogate mother.
she felt like cheated by loved one with whom she loved to the death and can't digist the fact that R cheated her for baby.
she is crying outside and to stop the process. she went to meet manoj
manoj shocked to see Ish after composing wht r u doing Ish
Ish is very angry and crying but she composed herself and informed to manoj that i don't want any surrogate process. i won't support any one and its my finally decesion.
Ish informed to manoj and leave hospital without meeting R and vandu also.
inside the cabin while they r talking
manoj came there running to meet R and informed that what happend ouside and about Ish
R shocked and cried don't know what to do and how to convience Ish he just collapased on the floor and is crying continously.
Ish is crying and driving to home while in mean time msg to vandu akka she has a work for that she is leaving.
She came to home and without meeting anyone simply go to her and locked the door.
all r shocked to see Ish like that they want to give some space to her
inside the room
Ish is thinking how her life changed in few hours and is crying countinously. don't know what to do. why R why u do to this me???
why R?
Is am not worth for love????
how u broke the trust of mine???

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome yaar
U can gladly write ur thoughts here
Everyone will support u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hii friends
updated a small part if u like to continue it r not???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing dear

want to know what will happen next dear

well written dear

please continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishitha POV
why R why u always hurt me???
when ever u hurt me i simply forgiven u but this i won't give u
she is crying continusly and remebering all the happens in her life
how their marriage happen sirf Ruhi keliye thier fights
parram incident, amma accident, mihir engagemnet, shagun's interference
all their moments how they love each other and care each other, their support
and finally decide that to leave R and his Family because Ish thinks that R loves Sh and can do anything for her now she changed to good may be he want her in his life.
she write one letter to her family and another letter to R.
finally once check their room and leave the room
in the hall all r waiting for Ish
when Ish came down all r shocked to see her state she is crying
om puttar wht happen to u
mrs tell me puttar whr r u crying? any thing happen to u.
will R scold u? by seeing u iam getting tension.
Romi tell me bhabi is there any problem wht r u crying?
Si also questiong Ish
But she didn't said a word to any one.
after composing her self
Ish mammiji, papaji iam leaving the house.
All r shocked they don't know any reason but they think that its a very big decision because Ish won't take any decision like this for small reasons
mrs first reacted from the shock and says wht happen puttar if there any problem say it to me. we will solve that but don't do this puttar.
u r DIL of the house. if u goes there is no happiness in this house.
Om yes puttar don't do this. If u have fight with R then we will talk to him but don't do this
romi yes bhabi u r the happiness in our house. we will try to solve the problem but don't leave the home.
Si if u have any problem with bhai. we will support u but don't leave us.
But
Ish SORRY to all but my decision is final iam leaving the house iam just informing u as a responsibility. with that she leave the house with out listing their pleads
they don't know anything happen between ISh and R that ISh take a decision to leave the house.
mrs bhallaji wht happen see our DIL leave the house. wht R said to her
om don't worry mrs we wil wait for R then only we know wht happen between them. more over Ish is aslo very leave her some space to cool dowm her anger. after she is living in adject house only. will talk to her again
Romi & Si yes mammiji first we want to know wht happen. then we will talk to bhabi she will surly come to our home.
Om with anger called to R but he is picking up the call
they r really anger and r waiting for R impatiently
after some R entered the home with so much fear he don't know wht to do how to convience his ISh with stamering feet he entered the home.
by seeing all the members in the living room with their tensed sad faces. He simply went to them
R wht happen mammaji why r u all tension ans sad
till now Om was silent but the R question angered him more
and simply SLAP R
all r shocked
Om wht R u don't know any thing u r asking us
tell me wht happen
Why ISh leave the house.
R shocked WHAT ISH LEFT the house and she left him he don't know any thing. he simply collapased on the floor and crying

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mind Blowing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its nice..
I hope Raman will realize his mistake.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Y u stopped. Such a beautiful one. No one have written in this way the surrogate OS. Please continue soon.

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