Ranveer's unsaid feelings #1 (Episode 108 updated page149) - Page 11

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Sry fr rplyng late dear both chp were very nice wud love to ishani pampered by al 😉
Nd dis disha cn never improve
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Superb chapter Sakshi and Disha I will kill her 😡...and pls update soon wait nii hota 👏 😉
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What a nice chapter Sakshi. ...😛 You should be proud of yourself. ...your story is getting better and better each chapter. ...Congrats dear..😃
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Episode 24
It was the next day morning ranveer woke up as ishani was sleeping by his side he saw her and had a cute smile and got up from the bed and he got ready and cleared all the balloons in the room and arranged teddy bears accordingly and baby photos accordingly. He had a final look in the mirror and saw ishani who was sleeping still and he didn't want her sleep to be disturbed and he saw her once again and left the room. As he headed towards the dinning all were finished with their breakfast and were retiring to their works.
amba: dekhra come on have your breakfast
ranveer reciprocated her with a smile and amba served him and he had his breakfast.
ranveer: maa let me leave for office ishani is sleeping still i don't want to disturb her so i didn't wake her up you give her breakfast maa.
amba: haan sure dekhra you don't worry i will take care of her in all the ways

ranveer smiled at her and he left for the office.
ishani who got up and saw the clock.
ishani: oh my god i have slept till now how could i she got up hurriedly and got herself ready and when headed to leave the room amba entered the room with breakfast.
amba: ishani.
ishani: maa aap?
amba: haan come on have your breakfast
ishani: maa i would have come down ha na i am sorry maa i slept
amba: arrey ishani it is natural you will feel tiered and you will feel sleepy no problem come on have your breakfast
ishani: thank you maa

ishani started to have her breakfast.
amba saw the teddy bears and baby photos of the room
amba: ishani aye sub?
ishani: aap ka beta ka surprise
amba: surprise
ishani: haan maa he brought teddy bears for his daughter and baby photos to decorate the room
amba(with smile): how he know it is his daughter
ishani: same question i asked him he said he is sure it is to be his daugher

amba: anyways if that is his wish let it be a daugher
ishani: haan i too wish the same (finishing her breakfast) thank you maa for the breakfast
amba: you no need to tell thank you and don't do any work from now we will take care of it now come with me
ishani: maa but sitting quiet is boring let me do the marriage works
amba: arrey read books see tv but no work for atleast 3 months you should be safe ishani for the sake of your child okay
ishani: tk maa (with smile)


As they both came down to the hall seeing amba and ishani together
disha: (in thoughts): oh god these two people will get the best saas bahu award this year it seems once how they were and now how they are but let me tell you today your chemistry will be broke

Disha went to the kitchen and made a fruit salad and added some papaya so that ishani would experience a miscarriage. She mixed papaya as she couldn't see it with other fruits and she poured the pineapple juice on the fruit salad.
Disha: this would be enough for you ishani you will undergo a miscarriage. she called "ishani"
ishani with amba : maa disha is calling wait i will come you look after the works
ishani got up and went to the kitchen.
ishani: disha you called me
disha: haan ishani
ishani: for what?
disha(showing her the bowl of salad): for this?
ishani: aye kya hain?
disha: fruit salad see this time you should have fruits and keep your child healthy i am your sister i have to take care of you right
ishani(with innocent smile): thanks but i am not in a mood to have it disha keep it in fridge i will have it afterwards

amba(in thoughts): i cannot trust this disha. She got up and started walking to the kitchen
disha: ishani i have done it for you for my sake at least have some and keep rest in fridge please i have done with love for you
ishani:( no other way): tk

She got the bowl and took the spoon and took a spoon of salad and went to keep it in the mouth at the minute amba reached with her words "stop it ishani"
ishani turning to the door saw amba : maa (kept the spoon of salad in the bowl)
amba came inside the kitchen : what is it?
ishani: maa disha has done salad for me
amba: did you have it?
ishani: no when i went to have it you came inside
amba(with a relief) : ishani dekho you should be very careful in your food now eat what ever i give okay
ishani: maa but disha have done it for me what is there in eating fruits.
amba(some how to overcome ishani at the moment): dekhra now only you had your breakfast (getting the bowl from her) you can have it after some time it may be overloaded to your stomach after sometime i will it self give it to you okay
ishani(who has been petted by amba now a days shook her head with smile ): haan sure maa
amba: now sit in the hall and read some books let me come
ishani: tk maa

ishani left the kitchen where disha was standing with huge shock staring amba. amba saw her cunningly.
amba: what have you mixed in it?
disha: nothing
amba: don't think me as fool (held disha's hand to disha's back side and tighten it): come on tell me
disha: haa haa chodiya ( in pain)
amba: tell me i will leave
disha: wow papaya and pineapple mixed salad
amba(releasing her grip): i know you well disha you are such a girl. you can cheat ishani even baa but not me. Might be even baa can side you but i will be the wall of my ishani. you are such a jealousy girl towards ishani but let me tell you she is pure at her heart you are really a cunning girl. You can not even be her half sister. Remember it is ishani's house because of her only you are here if she shakes her head to send you out i will send you out and you will be left as an orphan got it. Never try to harm her i am there to protect ishani and her child. Never come in front of me.


disha(with a cunning and unsuccessful look): oh god how can i be defeated like this the words amba spoke if ishani shook her head she will send me out oh my god now i should not concentrate on ishani parul marriage is important i should stop it without getting into trap of amba or anybody.

In the evening ranveer came home ishani was reading a book in her room.
ranveer: ishani.
ishani:(getting up from the sofa) ranveer you came? this much early today?
ranveer: from today rv is a family man right so he need to come to home to spend time with his daughter know
ishani(with a smile): you are so excited
ranveer: haan i am so excited you know ishani she is going to come to the world after 8 months but i have a feeling of three members in our room. tk see this he took a album and showed ishani.
ishani: what is this?
ranveer: it is the interior designs how you want to decorate our room for out daughter.
ishani(seeing his excitement): ranveer this is too fast let us decide it in 7th month
ranveer(keeping a child face): what is this ishani i brought it to decide but you are saying like this.
ishani (seeing his child face pinched his cheeks): arrey baba you itself look like a child you are going to have a child unbelievable.
ranveer: oh really what you will give to your child tell me?
ishani: what i will give(thinking) i will give my child lot of love lot of hugs lot of kisses good habits and everything etc.
ranveer; oh really then give me
ishani(with a stunned look): what
ranveer: hugs kisses and love give me
ishani: but for you why i said for our child
ranveer: arrey you said i look like a child know then give me those love, hugs, kisses come on
ishani: ranveer
ranveer: oh come on ishani he held her close and smirked
ishani with a lovely smile kissed his forehead and both the cheeks and rested her head in his chest resting there " is it enough ranveer"
ranveer who was closing his eyes feeling the moment: haaan ishani

Screen freeze on their hug.

To be continued😉
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Wonderful update sakshi 👏
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Lovely update Sakshi...And this Disha :@ WIll she ever change???
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A very big thanks to all my readers😊

a special thanks to those who comment daily reading my story.😊

I am not a that good writer but your likes and comments made my nothing into something thanks to all keep reading the upcoming episodes of my RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS.😉

Once again thanks a lot for all of your support😛

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Hey Sakshi 😊

First of all I am very sorry for the late replies 😭 Been very hectic with studies and all 😭
But I have read all chapters and they have been beautiful 😳 You are a great writer and I love your simplicity 😳 also a huge thank u for the pms 😳 🤗

I cant wait to read the next scene /chapter and hope u update soon 😉 Wishing u all the best for the next chapters and keep writing 😊

With best wishes and love
MM ❤️ ❤️

PS ; I am really sorry again 😕
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Episode 25 (My silver episode and a Mega episode).
It was the night and if the sun rises it is parul's marriage. Everything has been set.
ranveer and ishani with amba made everything ready.
ranveer: maa everything is ready see to that there is no chore happens in the arrangement and (seeing ishani) you madam forgetting you are pregnant don't do any work be with maa she will take care of everything okay.
ishani(joining her both hands playfully): haan baba haan. maa see he has said it almost 1000 times from the date my pregnancy was confirmed
ranveer: haan i care for my baby and wife what is there in it

They were fighting
amba: bas bas both of you. you guys are always lovely even when you fight
Three were laughing at the time lakshmi with her husband and parul entered the room
ranveer: maasi
lakshmi(joined her hands in front of amba, ranveer and ishani): thank you so much moti behan it is because of you and ranveer this marriage is happening
ranveer: arrey maasi she is the only sister of mine i will do anything to make this marriage successful.

lakshmi: thank you ishani
ishani: arrey maasi for what thanks to me
lakshmi(with tears): nahi ishani i was against you in many situation but you are very kind hearted. Bhabhi can stop her husbands from doing anything to his sister but you are very supportive to us thanks
ishani: arrey maasi come on hum sub ek parivar hain so stop crying (she wiped her tears)

amba was mesmerized by ishani's kindness.

disha:(she gave photo to him) he is mr. sharma(parul's groom mohit sharma's father) you should kidnap him when i give missed call to you and bring him back to mandap after i talk to him
henchman:haan sure dishaji we will do it don't worry
disha:after kidnapping him keep him in the next road and i will come there and see him. once i start coming to mandap leave him in the mandap again
henchman: haan sure dishaji saying this he left
disha(in thoughts): finally plan is set the marriage will collapse


In the morning
All the people packed all the things needed and made parul as a beautiful bride and they left to the mandap. As they reached the mandap mohit sharma's family also reached the mandap with bright smile and the marriage formalities started to begin. All had a smile and was happy seeing parul getting married.
Disha: manas i will come soon. need to use the restroom
manas: haan disha.

She gave the missed call the henchman came with other two man and came slowly to the mandap(dressed up in good attire) came behind mr. sharma.
henchman: mr. sharma i am friend of rv can i speak to you
mr. sharma: now
henchman: if you come now it will be useful for you

mr. sharma saying to his wife came out with the man to mandap varanda. disha saw it and had a smile she walked towards the next road. henchman closed mr.sharma's mouth and dragged him in the car where by gods grace sharman coming to mandap varanda for talking phone saw sharma getting kidnapped and came running before he reach them the henchman took sharma in the car.
sharman: arrey they took sharma if he is not her it would be a problem to parul's marriage oh my god i should search the car it is a bit remote area from city it will take some minute to cross the area so if i go by left side(the henchman took sharma in right side) i could catch them. He was running and searching the car.
As sharman was expecting the car to be in running mode for his luck he saw the car in the next road and went towards it but stopped by disha's face seen there.
sharman(hide him behind a wall): what she is doing here (he saw sharmaji now being freed ) why disha is here and what is her connection with sharmaji
disha: hello sharmaji i am really sorry to kidnap you
sharma: who are you wait a while you are rv's sister in law right?
why have you kidnapped me leave me?
disha: sure sharmaji i am surely going to leave you and i have done this without any other way(had crocodile tears) it is for your family and son's future.

sharma: son's future.what are you saying say it clearly.
disha: haan sharmaji the bride your son is going to marry is not of good character. She may be rv's sister but she had many contacts with many guys. She was even behind my husband see these photos (she showed the manas and parul's engagement photos in the mobile).
sharma: they were up to be married and due to some reason's they were not married rv said it to me
disha: it was because manas was in love with me but parul was behind my husband she is a characterless women she was with many guys.
sharma(believed it): i should stop the marriage oh my god
disha(with smile and when sharma saw her she changed her expression): sharmaji i said it for your goodness but you won't say my name... ha na
sharma: nahi beta you are the best well wisher i will stop it your name won't come out.
sharman(who was watching the entire scene): oh my god this disha can never change i am ashamed to call her my sister she can be our same blood but she is not even to the dust of ishani's feet , i should stop sharmaji now and tell him the truth
disha with happiness came back to mandap and stood as though not knowing anything. sharman followed sharmaji but everything was in vein sharman got hit by a car thought nothing happened people surrounded and driver held him to scold.
driver: can't you see and come
sharman: sir it was my wrong please leave me i have an urgent work

but the driver didn't leave him and there was a small fight.

The marriage formality was at full swing the panditji was saying the mantras. Both mohit and parul had a lovely smile mohit was falling for parul at each glance especially for her character. Their dresses were tied to each other all the family was happy at the marriage were ranveer and ishani shares some romantic eye locks.
When they asked the groom to tie the knot he went to tie the knot but the omen plan of disha worked out sharmaji reached the mandap with his voice "stop it mohit"
mohit stopped and saw his father at the enterance of the mandap all were shocked by the word of mr. sharma
mrs. sharma: where were you sharmaji
mr. sharma: that is not important now let's leave marriage is cancelled all were shocked where disha was at the top of the world. sharmaji came and made mohit to stand up
mohit: arrey papa but why ?

mr.sharma: she is not good girl let's leave and i am not interested in this marriage.
rv: but mr. sharma i have said what all happend to her but why are you stopping it now

ishani lakshmi and amba was at the top shock.
baa came forward: sharmaji she is the best girl someone have manipulated you wrong.
mr. sharma: i am not that fool to act on others words i don't like this alliance please leave us.

mohit: papa please we should not do it think about the girl's life
mr. sharma: for that we cannot do anything our life is important to us
lakshmi went to mrs. sharma: please mrs. sharma my girl is a good girl

mrs. sharma: i understand but mr. sharma will do what he thinks i don't know what to do
lakshmi started crying as mohit was held and took out of the mandap and their relations left. Whole parul's family was in their shock and took time to realize. rv doesn't know what to do. lakshmi cried terribly parul left her life almost in her loud cry where ishani and baa held her and don't know how to console her. amba held lakshmi and she too cried a lot. rv some how got the guts and to the relations
rv(not even able to face them): thanks for coming to our family functions please forgive us and leave having your food thank you. all left the mandap
rv who was broken to the extreme sat in the steps of stage where ishani seeing him signed baa to held paurl and came to ranveer
ishani(with tears): ranveer
ranveer: what is happening ishani how did this happen i cannot accept it what i have done to parul today(he started crying)

ishani held him supportively
parul got up the stage and came down to lakshmi and cried terribly ranveer: what happend i cannot believe i have destroyed everything i have destroyed parul's life to a great extreme its only me he was crying terribly.
sharman: nahi ranveer its not you
all saw sharman in the enterance with pale face.
baa: sharman
sharman: its no one's fault even it is not mohit's family fault it is all because of a person who we should have not allowed inside the house. who we should have sent out long back because of keeping her inside we are in such a worst situation.
rv(wiping his tears): what are you saying who the person is?
sharman: the person who sees others tears and smile the person who don't care for anyone. the person who i don't want to call as my sister none other than(going and helding disha's hand) disha


All had a shock and have many questions why was marriage stopped and cannot accept expressions.The episode ends in the tears wiped and shocked expression of ranveer.

Hope all need Ishveer scenes but to move the story a episode need to be like this so all negative comments even welcomed

To be continued😉


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Lovely ^_^ SIce you ended it in such a note, update it ASAP >_<

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