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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rufana10

superb OS
beautifully written 👏👏
loved it
thanks for pm 😊


Thanks dear Rufana 😳

I am glad you liked it 😃

You're welcome dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: usaonly

THIS IS FOR I AM SORRY OS. Guri this was awesome OS I just found in your Imdex and had in English. The beginning make me scare for Raman behavior he had slap Ishu without listen tO the story cause he nlindly love Adi. And in this Story it little different from the real show cause Ishu not have enoug patient and terrolate to Shagun and Adi.the way she talk back to Adi bad manner say it all. And the way she talk back to Raman after slap was very angry in his behavior but it going well after Raman confess his love plus with his Action he ready to give up Ruhi for Ishu so she can live happily cause he know Ishumlove Ruhi and Ruhi also love her a lot he ready to near the lost and the pain for her. This point is win Ishu love back and thank you Ishu to give him a second chance to live together again. Beautiful Written story and I am lucky that I miss it but I found it and have chance to read your beautiful work little late but I have chance to read. Thank you so much.🤗🤗


Thanks a lot Jum dii 😳

I am glad you liked it...

I am overwhelmed to read your comments...

I thought you have read it... As it was the first OS...

Never mind... Late... Still you read it and liked it...

I am sure AMBREEN will be on cloud nine... When she will read the comments and reviews...!!!

Love you Jum dii!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Friends!!!

AMBREEN'S AGENT (GURI) is back with an OS!!!

Hope you all remember me... I am again here to post an OS written by my dearest friend AMBREEN... I am posting it as she doesn't uses IF...


NOTE:----


I have tried to do some editing... As some the readers have asked me to translate the dialogues in English..

As she writes with mix language dialogues... So the translation and some editing is done by me.. And rest actual story is written byAMBREEN...


It's just a Random OS... Don't know how it came... I have written it long back... You all can say when our ISHRA had ''Kuch-Kuch hota hai" moment!! Please bear it...


Enough of my bakh-bakh... Here it goes...


MAUSAM YEH KAISE BADAL GAYA..


Ishita woke up with a sneeze...she rubbed her nose and got up to sit...she turned to see Raman on the bed...she smiled...he was in a deep sleep...she moved her blanket and went to him...she sat next to Ruhi...she smiled at the father-daughter duo...they looked so innocent to sleep...she stroked Ruhi's hair...and kissed it...a small family she had made...she then stroked Raman's hair and went near to kiss him but she stopped...


At the very moment she remembered last night,...where her husband had proved her he is not khadus and insensitive...she remembered him backing out from the possible kiss after the rain dance...


She just couldn't believe he was the same monster she got married to...he started to look more handsome...more wise...more charming...more lovable...more well perfect!...she was secure for the very first time...she got up without kissing him...she came out of the bed and went to his side and sat down...she kneeled to him...he had just turned to her in her sleep...she again runs her hand through his hair...her eyes filled with love...

Ishita out to herself- kya hai yeh?...Raman yeh kya asar hai aapka mujh par?...ye sab!...kaise?...kya aap pehle bhi aise the?,...kya meine nahin dekha?...kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai!...aap wohi ho na?...mere Ravan Kumar?...aap khadus nahi ho!...bahut sweet ho!...mera kacha aam pakne laga hai!...Bala jiju sahi the...


[What is this? Raman what is this effect of yours on me?... All this!... How?... Were you like this before?... Haven't I saw it?... I am not able to understand!... You are still the same na? My Ravan Kumar?... You are not arrogant!... You are too sweet!... My raw mango is ripening!... Bala Jiju{brother-in-law}was right...]


She then slowly gets up...and goes to the closet ...Raman sneezes...he gets irritated...Ishita looks at him...he looks disturbed...he can't stop sneezing...he gets up and sits with his hands on his face...it looks like he is a lil sick...


She goes to him...she is fully concerned...she makes him lean against the bed...she opens the drawer next to the bed...and takes out some balm...she goes to apply on his nose but he moves her hand...

Raman- mujhe balm chehre pe acha nahi lagta hai!


[I don't like balm on my face!]


Ishu- toh mein...uhmm...mein...


[So I... uhmm... I...]


Raman- kaho na!!


[Say na!!]


Ishu- mein,...uhmm...woh chest pe laga doon?


[I... Uhmm... Can I apply it on chest?]


Raman- yeah...fine...



His hands still on his face...he is really disturbed...she had little blush...she slowly puts her hand on his shirt and unbuttons it...she starts applying it slowly...she looked down...he suddenly moved his hands from his face to notice her...her gaze was down because she was shy of him without his shirt...even though she was his wife...a slightest smile appeared on his face...very tiny...after it she closed the balm box and kept it back...


She got up saying- hot bath le lijiye...sardi chali jayegi!...


[Take hot bath... Your cold will go!...]


She leaves the room...Raman sees Ruhi next to him...


He talks to Ruhi while she is asleep- tumhe pata hai Ruhi...tumhari jo Ishima hai na...tumhari maa ke saath meri biwi bhi banne lagi hai!...achi hai...pata nahi yeh kaise feeling hai...kya tumhe pata hai?...agar tum Ishima ki chamchi nahi hoti toh mein tumhe tab bolta jab tum jaag rahi hoti...warna tum jaa kar yeh sab Ishima ko bol deti ki mein kaisa feel kar raha hoon!...


[Do you know Ruhi... Your Ishima na... She is becoming my wife with your mother!... She is good... I don't know what feeling is this!... Do you have any idea?... If you wouldn't been on your Ishima's side then I would have told you when you would be awake... Else you would tell everything to your Ishima whatever I am feeling just now!...]


He gets up and goes to take a shower...he opens the wash room with a towel...Ishita comes in the room and goes to Ruhi...she wakes her up...and makes her sit in the lap...she is still sleepy so she puts her head on Ishita's chest...


Ruhi- Ishima...


Ishu- haan mera baby!?


[Yes my baby!?]


Ruhi- papa kal raat bahut sneeze kyon kar rahe the??


[Why was papa sneezing a lot at night??]


Ishu- haaawww...unhone sneeze kiya?


[Haaawww... Did he sneeze?]


Ruhi- haan Ishima...full night!


[Yes Ishima... Full night!]


Ishu- acha?


[Oh?]


Ruhi- haan,...unko sardi hai kya?


[Yes... Did he felt cold?]


Ishu- hmmm...pata nahi let's see!...chalo go get ready!!...


[Hmmm... I don't know let's see!... Now go get ready!!...]


Ruhi gets off of her and runs out of the room...Ishita sits in the bed...then even she gets up and leaves...she goes to the kitchen to prepare stuff...


Raman comes after taking a hot shower...he was shirtless with a towel on his shoulders...


He yells in the room- Ishita mera white shirt nahi dikh raha hai... Kahan rakh diya hai tumne?


[Ishita I cannot see my white shirt... Where have you kept it?]


Ishita hears him and goes to the room and sees him...


Ishu- kya hua Raman?


[What happened Raman?]


Raman- mera white shirt kahan hai?


[Where is my white shirt?]


Ishu- woh... I think it's in the cupboard... let me see... (she checks in the cupboard)... It's here...


Raman- oh thanks...


She sees him for a sec...she simply stares...she remembers before when he came to borrow the Business Express and he didn't say thanks...but suddenly he was like a total different person with a better attitude...he sees that she is lost...


Raman- kya hua yaar?...aise kyun dekh rahi ho?


[What happened dear? Why are looking at me like this?]


Ishu- ah...uhm...nothing...


Raman- acha...bahar jao!


[Okay... Go outside!]


Ishu- bahar kyon jau?


[Why to go outside?]


Raman- kyon ki tum itni sharmili ho ki tum mujhe shirt ke bina dekh nahi sakti...aur mein abh pure kapde badalne wala hoon!...ruk na hai toh ruk sakti ho!...mujhe koi problem nahi!


[Because you are so shy that you can't see me without shirt... And now I am going to change my all the clothes!... If you want to stay, you can stay!... I don't have any problem!]


Ishu scared- eh?


Raman- kya?...yahin rehna hai?...hmmm???


[What? Do you want to stay?... Hmmm???]


Ishu- nahi!!!...nahi!...i am leaving!...bye


[No!!!... No!... I am leaving!... Bye]


She runs away and goes down...


Raman just smirks- pagal[crazy] madrasan!!...


She is in the kitchen...Ruhi is having breakfast...getting ready for school...

Ruhi- Ishimaa !


Ishu- haan ruhi!


[Yes Ruhi!]


Ruhi- mera book nahi mil raha hai!


[I am unable to find my book!]


Ishu- kaunsa book beta?


[Which one daughter?]


Ruhi- English!


Ishu- woh?...woh toh mere kamre mein hai...abhi lekar aati hoon...you finish your breakfast...


[Oh that?... It is in my room... I will bring it just now... You finish your breakfast...]


She goes to the room...and knocks...


Raman in his room near the mirror- come in he yells...she slowly walks in...he was fixing his cuff links...a white shirt with a black pant...a perfect combination!...she searches for the book...and gets it...just then Neelu comes in for the same book...Ishita gives it to her to give it to Ruhi ...Neelu leaves...Raman turns to her...

Raman- toh kaisa laga?


[So how does it look?]


Ishu- eh?


Raman- my new shirt!...hows it?...I mean does it suit me?


Ishu - really nice...


Raman- sure?


Ishu- yeah...bahut hi acha hai!!...like really nice...


[Yeah... It's good!!... Like really nice...]


Raman- Thanks...I have a big presentation...I have to look really nice...


Ishu- well you look good!...


Raman- ok thanks...


He was in an excited yet scared mood...he was also in a comfort zone with his wife...her saying that he looked handsome was a confidence boost to him...he immediately wears his coat which was in the bed...he takes a brief case... he comes close to her in a rush and kisses her cheeks... wish me luck he says...and leaves ...it was a action of about 4 seconds!!...he had no idea he was gonna do that!!...


Ishita's eyes were wide open!!...he kissed her cheeks!!...and that too he was FINE with it!!...


Raman comes out of the house and stops!...he keeps his one hand on his lips...


He talks to himself- kya hua?...maine JKR ko kiss kiya?...what the hell!...maine yeh nahi kiya... kya maine kiya? ye duniya zaroor khatam hone ko aayi hai!!...maine JKR ko kiss kiya!!!


[What happened?... I kissed JKR?... What the hell!... I haven't done this... Have I done this? This world is going to finish soon!!... I have kissed JKR!!!]


(He was confused, excited, scared all at one moment... Still he was happy with the change of moments)


He leaves for the car...


Ishita in the room... She also talks to herself- yeh kaise?...Ravan Kumar ne mujhe kiss kiya???...OMG...so weird!...ho kya gaya hai inhe?...aaj 3 times thank you bola!...kahi Ruhi ke saath rehne ka asar toh nahi?...Murugan Raman ke dimag ko theek jagah rakhna!...


[How did it happen?... Ravan Kumar kissed me??? OMG... So weird!... What has happened to him?... Today he said 3 times thank you!... Are these antics because he is staying with Ruhi more?... Murugan please keep Raman's mind on safe zone!...]


(She was confused with the change of moments!!)



She leaves for her clinic...Raman too busy...she too jobless!!...she just checks her phone...she goes to type but stops ...again she tries and again controls herself...and at last she types... Raman was in the meeting...He gets a text...he slowly takes the phone under the table...


He says to himself- dekhte hain madrasan ne kya bheja hai!...


[Let's see what madrasan has sent!...]


Ishita's text- all the best Raman...ache se meeting karna ...I hope all goes well...mein pray karungi!...once again best of luck...


[All the best Raman... Give your best in the meeting... I hope all goes well... I will pray for you!... Once again best of luck...]


And what next?...our Ravan Kumar's confidence was on 7th sky!...he was really happy and confident...


After that they both got busy in their works... Neither she got time to call or text her nor he got the time...


At night when he came back... Ishita was in the room... Raman comes in and she was almost about to go out...he pulls her from the door to the dressing table...his hands tightly catching her arm...she trying to remove it...she didn't know what was going on!


Ishu- Raman kya hua?


[Raman what happened?]


Raman- pehle tum bolo ki yeh kya hai?...( he showed her msg)


[First you say what is this?... ()]


Ishu- kya?...aapne kaha na ki mein aapko luck wish karu toh meine kiya...


[ What?... You asked me to wish you luck, so I did...]


(She was looking down and Raman was in full teasing mood...he sat a little on the dressing table...they stood their with his one hand catching one of hers...he was looking at her straight)


Raman- "main pray karungi"?...yeh kya tha?


["I will pray"?... What was that?]


Ishu- haan... itna bada project tha...aap dare huye the toh meine aapke liye...


[Yes... It was big project... You were scared so I did for you...]


Raman- kya?


[What?]


Ishu- pray!...


Raman- mmm hmmm!...lekin aaj achanak tum alag dikh rahi ho!?


[_!... But suddenly you are looking different!?]


Ishu- actually aap zyada badle badle se dikh rahe ho!!


[Actually you are looking so changed!!]


Raman- yeah...kuch zyada hi you know...changes aaye hai!


[Yeah... Many you know... Changes have come!]


Ishu- yeah...


Raman- so how's everything...?


Ishu- sab theek hai clinic mein!...


[All is well at clinic!...]


Raman- good!


Ishu- ek baat aur thi!


[There is one more thing!]


Raman- kya?


[What?]


(He was excited to listen)


Ishu- aap...ahm... insensitive aur khadoos nahi ho!


[You... ahm... you are not insensitive and arrogant!]


Raman- yeah...lekin tum ho!!


[Yeah... But you are!!]


(He was in a teasing mood)


Ishita starts hitting him...he starts moving across the room and falls on the bed...he pulls her by her waist...she fell on him...( hasne laga sehra plays )...he moves her hairs from her face...

Raman- meine kabhi kaha nahi lekin...


[I haven't said it but...]


Ishu- lekin kya?


[But what?]


Raman- tumhara lambe baal tumhe bahut suit karte hai!


[Your long hairs really suit you a lot!]


Ishu- aaj achanak se ache hai?


[Suddenly today you are liking them?]


Raman- hamesha se the...lekin mujhe bolne ka mann nahi tha!


[They were always... But I was not interested in saying it!]


Ishu- aaj mann kahan se aa gaya?


[Today how are you interested in?]


Raman- idk...lekin aaj-kal kuch ajeeb cheezein hone lagi hai!!


[I don't know... But now a days some unusual things are happening!!]


Ishu- I know...abhi chodo mujhe...


[I know... Now leave me...]


Raman- aahhh...tumhe chodne ka mann nahi hai yaar!!!


[... I am not interested in leaving you dear!!!]


Ishu- bahut masti ho gayi... leave me...


[You had enough fun... Leave me...]


Raman leaves Ishita...she gets up and goes towards the door and stops and turns to him... He sits up...


Ishu- Raman!!


Raman- yeah?


Ishu- acha dance kar lete ho aap!!


[You dance very well!!]


Raman- thanx...tum bhi!


[Thanks... You also!]


Ishu- I know! ( winks)...


It was a flirtish day with all...they were behaving as teenagers...


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Sorry for the errors and mistakes... I have tried to edit as much as I could... Still there might be some errors...

Hope you all will read it...

Do like and give your valuable comments..

BUDDY ME FOR THE PMS.

Thanks,


TamannaSethi..
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Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Updated an OS above
Do have a look...

Pms in the morning..

Already it's 2am here...

Good night to all...!!!

Have a wonderful Sunday!!

Love you all :-*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Dear Ambreen and Guri thank you for put English translation in this OS too. Lovely OS full with lovely moment of Ishra remind me of the beginning of YHM rain scence when they dance and both have a cold Ishu shyness to apply balm for him and in your story they still not know their feeling yet something that make both of them happy it is new found feeling.😳 The way Raman come out shirtless 😳 remind me of Chee that Ishu always say that when she saw some kind of awkward from Raman. 😆 And when he dress up she feel he handsome and look at him. Now she feel the change in him and he not like the beginning not arogant anymore. The text Msg was cute to give him a pray for his success. That also side affect from the kiss he gave her In the morning in her cheek all are lovely moment in this story. Beautiful writing I know it doesn't match with present track who care now cause your own story make the reader more happy. I am very happy to read your story again.Thank you so much for writing lovely OS . Have awonderful Sunday my dear. 🤗🤗
Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
It was a nice OS..
Keep up the good work..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
lovely OS 😊
it was so sweet and cute...
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Lovely and sweet os..
The sudden kiss and her msg was good.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS
Lots of cute moments
Enjoyed it
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I absolutely loved this OS - thank you so much both of you - it was sooo beautiful!!!⭐️😳
I loved the way Raman was talking to Ruhi whilst she was asleep - "agar tum Ishima ki chamchi nahi hoti toh mein tumhe tab bolta jab tum jaag rahi hoti..." so cute!!!!😉😆

Lots of easy teasing and flirting - so sweet!! She likes him in his white shirt and that makes him feel so happy!!!

Aaj kal sab kuch badle badle se hai!?!?!??!?!😉😛😆

Ishra being flirty and behaving like teenagers - I love it!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for the pm I really loved!!! Please more sweet flirty OSs like please!!!!!!!!!!! and or continue this one in the same vain please!!!!!🤗

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