MaNan FF ||Our Chance To Love:COMPLETED|| - Page 83

Originally posted by: tas456

Wow...awesome update dear 👏

Loved it thoroughly

You r truly an amazing writer dear

You penned their emotions to perfection

Tq so much for this fantabulous update

Will be waiting eagerly for your next update

Tqvm for the pm dear

Take care and always keep smiling😃

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

Beautiful !! Nd hawttt tooo..
Nd d wounded lil boy found his lonely lil grl.. I luvd dat..
Tatoo wala scene, dat ws lovly

Originally posted by: Danny92

Nice update

The tattoo part that was sooo nice nd the wounded boy meet his lonely girl that was super

They wer sooo close nd felng eachother the love they hav fr eachother has increased in the course of time nd nw finally they r one happily

Continue sooonnn

Originally posted by: siyaaali

it was beautiful dear...love it...u r amazing...

Thanksss

Originally posted by: Sudha14

Hey girl..the update was amazing. LOVED it..I've read all the chapters in one go n loved them to bits. Today's update has to b my favor one..it was sooo romantic. Loved manik n nandini's conversation about love. 😳
Keep up the good work.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey dear
Awsm updates...
I m sry for nt commenting regularly cz I was sooo busy with work...
Bt ya ur story is very different and beautiful
And I truly appreciate your work and tym u wer giving us...
And I love d character be it nandani or manik
And surprisingly be it harshad...
And jealous nandu is so cute... And quite expensive... :)

Originally posted by: uma88

Oh my!!! I have no words to explain how this update is.

Stunning

Speechless

Awesome.

U brought in so much feeling that we could feel we were witnessing this scene live.

Extraordinary penning.

Continue soon.

Thank you so muhc..Glad you loved it so much

Originally posted by: riya4smartgirl

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉😉😉

The update was just tooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Infact the whole story is just too amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

I just came across it and i loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Now i feel that when they have taken it all out now they are ready to start a fresh!!!!!!!!!!😊

You have shown it way tooo nicely!!!!!!!😳

And this update toh... no words to descibe!!!!!!

I loved the way manik told her actually since their first encounter he was attracted towards her and he loved her since the store room scene itsekf!!!!😳

Hahahah!!!!! the way now he asked if she will ever be able to fogive him!!!😆
And the nandini's reply on it is just tooo awesome!!!!!😆

Keep it up!!!!!👏

Can you plz PM me??????????😲

Waiting for next!!!!!🥱

Originally posted by: ZoyaMAsif

It's MARVELOUS,SUPERBB update... Had all emotions at one time...Their talks... Nandini's Pov is something i find amazing... Love to read further chapters... But I guess you should take it long from 20 chapters as may 25 chapters... Eagerly waiting for next...Thanks for PM & LOVELY update

Thanksss😳
Not update more than 20..
Short and sweet be good

Originally posted by: sahasimren

This was beautiful.

I wish the show had a scene like this.

It was very heartwarming.

Loved it so much.

Post the next update soon.

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow amazing update...

yaar im totally in love wth this ff...

manan r soo damn amazing...

it was soo passionate...

full of love.. manan jst can be happy with each other only..

Only both of thm can complete each other...

u know tht line the wounded boy one..iI soo liv tht vm...

its my fav manan vm...

luved it to the core...

amazing update...

thnx for pm...

update soon...

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008

shreyuuu...a big no...no...no...a very big hug from my side...

awesome

beautiful

emotional

and...everything...loved this chappy...

their romance to their talks...everything was mindblowind...

"Manik seriously you are asking this to a girl you are cuddling in the aftermath of making love to her? You are the biggest idiot I have ever met." I said laughing at his idiocy. He smiled, blushing in embarrassment..( hehe...he is so cute...)

continue soon

LOVE LOADS OF

SANJANA

Thanksss

Originally posted by: rajirock123

Hi dear the update was fab so romantic and the tatoo secret wow and his secret of fear o darkness and liking of stars so good pls next part soon

Originally posted by: kavyach

Awesome update...
U penned it sooo well...
Manan were sooo romantic...

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

It was the pure bless update..! Wow,loved it.. Nandini, in these whole years became lil admant hehe.. But yeah,flashback was blessfull.. Before confession's every manan moment are memorable.. That accidental kiss, store room kand all thanks to harsad..lol 😆 update was pleasurable and pure bless.. Thankyou for pm.. ⭐️

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

It was amazing dear 😊
They are sharing their pains with each other 😛
Update next part soon 😊

Thanksss

Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

IT WAS A COMBINATION OF HOT AND BEAUTIFUL ALTOGETHER... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... REALLY LOVED IT... LOVE YOU...

Originally posted by: vaastha31

Awesome
Dialogues were quite emotional but true
Finally everything is on track
Happy.. Cont soon

Originally posted by: maniamunia

Loved it !!! Felt it ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manan were just adorable...

after a long separation they became one again...

loved the way manik explained his tattoo and its significance of his past...

glad that they are stronger than ever and that their relationship has been polished...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Originally posted by: payal94

Awesome update

THANKSSS

res just coz

unres 😎
First of all, hah! I so knew that Manik wasn't going to leave her alone again. Like, duh, so obvious. But you still love to torture so I hate you for that.

But this chapter was so cute and light-hearted <3 Aww, he brought her chocolate and flowers, that's adorbs. I specially loved how Nandini was so overwhelmed by all of it. Her Manik loves her so much ^.^

ANSH IS PERFECT. I LOVE ANSH AND I LOVE HIM WITH MANIK <3 Seriously that scene was the cutest and I love how he's so comfortable with Manik. Oh and, this part >>

"Dada is busy helping around for weeding. Nandini is busy with Mukti. Dhruv and Alya are kissing each other. I am bored. Nobody has time for me."Ansh let loose at once, clearly frustrated with the elaborate festivities his guardians would rather participate in, leaving little time for him.

@Bold
He's the cutest kid ever okay 😆

The diary entry was so good. I always love it when they reminisce about their past, and you started it with a fireflies quote <3 Best. My favorite line is this: I just don't want to love him but rather make him feel loved. So in-character and Nandini-like. It was really sweet *swoon*

Request time: Try to put at least one Harshad-Ansh scene? I really didn't like how they made Harshad ignore Abeer completely in the show because he's not completely heartless. And yeah, he probably wasn't ever there for Ansh but I'd still like at least one nice scene? It's his child after all and I'm sure he cares at least a little.

To summarize, I loved this chapter <3 It's cute and nice and very light-hearted. Now go update the other story because I'm desperately waiting for it.

like the update...thanks fr the pm